2013屆高考英語書面表達專題指導(dǎo)、練講及習(xí)作評析（第二部分） 專題四 開放式專題練評1

1、第二部分 2013屆高考英語書面表達專題練評專題四 開放式作文練評練評一請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.講 評該題借助一幅漫畫，讓學(xué)生表達自己對畫面中內(nèi)容的理解。在觀察、理解試題的前提下，從不同角度，展開想象，表達自己的觀點。一、描圖仔細看圖，搞清漫畫所給我們的主要信息：兩只烏鴉取水喝的不同

2、方式：一只烏鴉直接通過管子喝水，而另一只則向瓶中投擲石塊以抬高水面進而喝到水。在描述漫畫內(nèi)容時，考生要注意用自己比較熟悉的詞匯、句型對畫面內(nèi)容進行簡明、清楚地敘述。1. In the picture, there are two bottles with a little water in them. A bird is working hard to drop the stones into a bottle in order to raise the level of the water. She flies around for many times, sweating a lot, w

3、hile the other bird just standing on the edge of the other bottle uses a straw to drink the water inside.2. As you can see in the picture, there are two bottles containing some water and two birds are finding ways to drink the water. One bird uses a pipe and drinks the water easily, while the other

4、puts small stones into the water and cant have access to drinking water right now.3.As can be seen in the picture, one thirsty crow is busying himself throwing stones into a jar from its own jar with the help of a long straw.二、解(議)圖解(議)圖就是解讀：漫畫折射出什么生活現(xiàn)象， 給人以 什么啟示。從不同角度去看，對漫畫就有不同的解讀。但是只要我們聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實生活，找到與畫

5、面主旨相對應(yīng)的現(xiàn)實素材展開聯(lián)想來解讀這幅漫畫的意義及其寓意（即漫畫折射出的生活現(xiàn)象以及給人們的啟示）。從畫面與現(xiàn)實的“鏈接”中，確定話題及立意的方向。確定好立意之后，先寫出主題句，再展開議論。議論要聯(lián)系實際，擺事實，講道理。只要是邏輯合理，立意可以是多樣的。比如：解讀一：我們應(yīng)該打破傳統(tǒng)，創(chuàng)造性地去解決問題(完成任務(wù))The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only the traditional way of making it come true, forget

6、ting that there may be creative ways. As is shown in the picture, the crow using the straw gets water far earlier than the one following the traditional way of throwing stones. That is to say, some people tend to solve a problem with the same solution once it turns out to be effective, just like the

7、 crow on the right. Accustomed to the conventional way, they fail to take other alternatives into consideration, let alone trying to be innovative.解讀二：我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會使用更高效的方法或工具去解決問題(完成任務(wù))The picture conveys us a message that we should use more effective and easier way to achieve our goals, and we should not

8、 always use the old ways. Although we can also achieve our goals by using difficult ways, like the bird puts stones into the bottle, it is a waste of time and energy. 解讀三：我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會使用恰當?shù)姆椒ㄈソ鉀Q問題(完成任務(wù))The picture conveys a message that we should choose the proper measure when finishing tasks. The bird dro

9、pping stones is hard-working indeed, and it is true that she can get the water in her way. However, why does she work so hard if there are straws? 解讀四：我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會使用不同的方法去解決問題(完成任務(wù))When we do the same work, there are various ways. The bird using a straw gets a quick way to drink, while the other bird can

10、also get its water when there are enough stones in the bottle. Though the bird with stones may be slower in getting the drinking water, his way is still good.三、圓圖所謂圓圖就是結(jié)尾：要求考生結(jié)合描圖、解（議）圖的內(nèi)容，再申主旨，力求使文章完整、有力。最終使結(jié)尾起到升華觀點，畫龍點睛的作用。1.To come to a conclusion, we should make full use of ways at hand with cre

11、ative mind which means we are supposed to focus on approaches which are more efficient and let our brains take colors from new things. No matter how “thirsty” we are, we should always try to find a “straw” first. 2.Why not make things easier just by changing an easy method? With the rapidly developm

12、ent of the society, we are requested to do things fast and effective, so we dont have time to waste. We should always remember to search for a more effective and easier way before we start to achieve our goals. 3.In my opinion, it is wise for us to choose the most suitable measure and make the full

13、use of tools we can get when finishing tasks. Only in this way can we do our work successfully and achieve perfection. 4.In real life, we are sometimes too stubborn and just refuse to try out other ways of doing things. We should know clearly that a lot of ways are there for us to discover. Only whe

14、n we accept various methods of doing things and living like the clever birds can we live an easier life. 參考答案1As can be seen in the picture, one thirsty crow is busying himself throwing stones into a jar in order to raise the water level for drinking. The other crow, however, has already started dri

15、nking from its own jar with the help of a long straw.The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only the traditional way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be creative ways. As indicated in the picture, the crow using the straw gets water far

16、earlier than the one following the traditional way of throwing stones. The latter may not be able to even get any water at all before the former empties the whole jar. No matter how “thirsty” we are, we should always try to find a “straw” first.參考答案2 once it turns out to be effective, just like the

17、crow on the right. Accustomed to the conventional way, they fail to take other alternatives into consideration, let alone trying to be innovative. However, as time goes by, ideas that used to be creative may go out of date and should be replaced with fresh ones. Therefore, by no means should we be c

18、onfined by conventions or routines. Instead, we should all learn from the crow on the left, which is more open-minded and makes the most of a “modern device”a straw. So stay creative. Stay hungry for changes. Only when we “think outside the box” and try out some new approaches can we keep up to date

19、 with the ever-changing world and will a new realm of possibilities open up to us. 附：學(xué)生考場作文點評As is shown in the picture, a crow has been flying back and forth, picking stones and throwing them into a half-filled jar. However, on the edge of the other jar stands another crow, drinking the water at ea

20、se with a straw, which proves to be more efficient and less time-consuming. The cartoon, directly and humorously, tries to convey that we should keep a creative and open mind at all times in our lives. As is often the case, people tend to tackle a problem with the same solution once it turns out to be effective, just like the crow on the right