五步十句作文法

1、 五步十句作文法 l 考試目標高考英語作文屬于控制性寫作，第一篇采用情景作文的方式，主要是以敘事或議論為主的一般性短文寫作。其主要形式為兩種：一是看圖作文，二是圖表作文，三是文字提綱式作文，短文字數要求是60以上，一般寫80100最佳。l 考生常犯的錯誤:1. 不能正確理解題意。2. 要點遺漏或不準確。3. 譴詞造句錯誤。4. 書寫潦草。針對高考要求和學生常范的錯誤，我們創(chuàng)造了專門應對高考的高分的作文法，即l 五步十句作文法：審，列，造，連，抄第一步：審題 分兩步走:一審時態(tài)(when);二審人稱（who）第二步：列要點 把所給情景和要求中的重要信息一條條的列出來，湊足十個（或以上）要點。列要

2、點時就用漢語或者英語短語寫出來即可。第三步：套句型造句子 用地道的英語句型（萬金油句型）把以上所列的十個要點轉換成英文。第四步:連句成文用連接詞或其他語法手段把所譯成的十個句子連成通順的文章。第五步:謄抄到考卷上先檢查：動詞形式，名詞的變化，拼寫的錯誤，然后用工整美觀的字體把寫好的文章抄到答卷上。l 優(yōu)點： 用五步十句作文法考生既不用擔心跑題也不用害怕漏要點，而且字數的多少和行文語言的地道切題是絕對有保障的。題型示例一 假定你寒假回老家，發(fā)現老家有了很大的變化，你根據變化的情況，用英文寫一篇報道，投給CHINA DAILY。提示：1 五年前，村子里有不少茅草屋（thatched collage

3、），道路狹窄而彎曲（winding），村后的山光禿禿的，喝水要到山谷里去挑水，主要以種稻為生。2 現在，村里有一半以上的農戶蓋起了三層的小樓房，有一條又寬又直的主要街道，舊的茅草房看不見了，家家戶戶都有自來水（tapwater），光禿禿的山變成了果林山，有桃樹，梨樹，龍眼樹和板栗樹等。3 今后你想學農，為農村服務。 注意：1 報道須包括以上各點，但不要逐條翻譯。2 詞數為80120?，F在我們用五步十句作文法來解答這道題：第一步：審題1 時態(tài)：有兩個時間（過去和現在），五年前用過去時，現在用現在時。2 人稱：村民（第三人稱）；我（第一人稱）（注意：要求不要逐句翻譯可以這樣理解：沒必要將每句都按中

4、文翻譯成復雜的句子，只用比較簡單的句子表達出這個意思就行了。而這種理解是寫好英文作文的基礎，也是應對高考的唯一法寶。）第二步：列要點1 五年前，村里有許多茅草房。2 道路狹窄而彎曲。3 村后的山光禿禿的。4 村里沒水喝，喝水要到山谷里去跳水。5 主要以種水稻為生。6 寒假，你回家.7 現在村子發(fā)生了巨大的變化。8 村子有一半以上的 農戶蓋起了三層的小樓房。9 有一條又寬又直的主街道。10 家家戶戶都有自來水。11 光禿禿的山變成了到處是果林的山。12 山上又桃樹，梨樹，龍眼樹和板栗樹。13 今后你想學農，為農村服務。第三步：套句型造句（不套句型不造句）1 Five years ago ,the

5、re were a lot of thatched collages in my home village.(套there be句型)2 Paths were narrow and winding（套主系表句型）3 Behind the village were bare hills. （倒裝句）4 There was no water in the village ,so the villagers had to go and fetch water in the valley far away.（there be句型，及主謂賓狀）5 They grew rice only .（主謂賓）6

6、During the winter vacation, I came back.（主謂）7 Now great changes have taken place in the village.(主謂)8 Many three storey buildings have stood up in the village.（主謂）9 The streets are wide straight.（there be句型）10. Tap water is running to each home.（主謂狀）11.The bare hills are covered with fruit trees.（be

7、 covered with句型）12.There are peach, pearand chestnut trees.（there be句型）13.I want to study agriculture and serve the country in the future.（主謂賓）第四步；連句成文（用連接詞或非謂語介詞短語等語法手段把以上十三個句子連成文章）第五步；抄到答題卷上 Five years ago , there were a lot of thatched collages in my home village with narrow and winding paths. Be

8、hind the village were bare hills. Without water in the village, the villagers had to go and fetch water in the valley far away. They grew rice only for food . During the winter vacation ,I went back .I have found great changes have taken place in the village. Many threestorey building have stood up

9、instead of old thatched collages. The streets ate wide and straight. Tap water is running to each home. Whats more ,the bare hills are covered with different kinds of fruit tree, such as peach, pear,longan and chestnut trees. They look green and beautiful. I want to study agriculture and serve the c

10、ountry in the future.l 萬金油句型書面表達常用重點句型 God helps those who help themselves !以形式主語it引導的句型。 句型1. It (so) happened that +clause. = sb. happened to do sth. 如： It happened that he was out when I got there. 當我到那兒時，碰巧他不在。He happened to be out when I got there. 句型2.It seems that。It seemed that he had been t

11、o Beijing before.他好象以前去過北京。He seemed to have been to Beijing before. 句型3. It is / was被強調的部分that(who)+剩余的部分.如： It wasnt until he came back that I went to bed.直到他回來我才睡覺。(一定要注意被強調句型中的謂語動詞否定的轉移)。 It was because he was ill that he didnt come to school today.只因為他有病了今天沒有來上學。（只能用because而不能用for, as 或since） I

12、t is I who am a student. 我確實是個學生。（句中am不能用are來代替。） 句型4.It is / was said ( reported)that+從句. 如： It was said that he had read this novel.據說他讀過這篇小說。He was said to have read this novel. 句型5.It is + a pity/ a shamethat clause.(注意從句中的謂語動詞用should do或should have done的形式，但should可以省略。)如： He didnt come back unt

13、il the film ended. It was a pity that he should have missed this film. 他直到電影結束才回來。他沒有看到這部電影真可惜。 句型6.It is suggested / ordered/that +clause.(從句的謂語動詞用should do, 但should可以省略。)如： It is suggested that the meeting should be put off.有人建議推遲會議。 句型7.It is well-known that從句。如： It is well-known that she is a le

14、arned woman.眾所周知，她是個知識淵博的婦女。 句型8.It is +段時間since+主語did. 如： It is five years since he left here.他已經離開這兒五年了。 It was five years since he left here.（同上）注意下列句型的翻譯:It is five years since he lived here.他從這兒搬走已經有五年了。 句型9.It +謂語段時間before+主語謂語.（ before引導的是時間狀語從句。）如： It wasnt long before the people in that cou

15、ntry rose up.沒有多久那個國家的人民就起義了。 It will be three hours before he comes back.三個小時之后他才能回來。 句型 10.It is +形容詞(possible, impossible, necessary等) for+ sb.+ to do. 如： It is impossible for me to finish this work before tomorrow.我明天之前完成此工作是不可能的。 句型11.It is +（心理品質方面的）形容詞of + sb. +to do.= 主語+ be +形容詞to do.(常用的形容

16、詞有：kind, stupid; foolish, good, wise等。)如： It is kind of you to help me.You are kind to help me.你真好給我提供了幫助。 定語從句 句型12.由as引導的非限定性的定語從句。如： As we have known, he is a most good student.眾所周知，他是個很好的學生。請比較：It is well-known that he is a most good student.（前一個是定語從句，而后者是個主語從句。） 句型13.由which引導的非限定性的定語從句。如： He is

17、 a professor, which I have been looking forward to becoming. 他是個教授，那是我一直盼望的職業(yè)。（因為先行詞professor是表示職業(yè)的名詞，因此引導詞用which，而不用who。句型14.由where, when引導的定語從句（其中包括限定性的或非限定性的。）如： This is the house where I used to come.請比較：This is the house which / that I used to come to. This is the day when I joined the Party.請比

18、較：This is the day which / that I joined the Party on. （說明：關于that與which之間的區(qū)別，請看關系代詞that和which的區(qū)別。） 句型15.No matter what / which / who / where / when / whose從句，主句.(注意從句中的時態(tài)一般情況下用一般現在時態(tài)。)如： No matter what you do, you must do it well.請比較：Whatever you do, you must do it well. 無論你做什么，一定要做好。 No matter where

19、 you go, please let me know.請比較：Wherever you go, please let me know.你無論去哪兒，請通知我。 條件狀語從句 句型16.When / So long as / As long as / Once +從句，主句。（從句也可以放在主句之后。）如： As long as you give me any money, I will let you go.只要你給我一些錢，我就讓你走。 Once you have begun to learn English, you should learn it well. 一旦你開始學習英語，你應該

20、把它學好。 句型17.主句unless+從句.(注意：由于unless本身是否定詞，所引導的從句的謂語動詞用肯定而不用否定。)如： I will go there tomorrow unless it rains.我明天去那兒除非下雨。 句型23.祈使句，and/ and then+主句。（注意：祈使句也可用一個名詞短語。）如： Use your head, and you will find a good idea.動腦筋想一想，你就會想出一個好主意。 Another word, and I will beat you.你再說一句，我就揍你。 句型24.If +necessary / imp

21、ossible/ important等，主句.(注意：if與形容詞之間的it is被省略。)如： If necessary, I will do it. 如果有必要的話，我來做此事。 原因狀語從句 句型18.主句in case+從句.（in case表示以免）如： I will take my raincoat in case it rains.我要把雨衣帶上以免下雨。 時間狀語從句 句型19.When / While / As +從句，主句. When I was in the country, I used to carry some water for you.當我在農村時，我常常給你打

22、水。 句型20.主句after / before +從句. They hadnt been married four months before they were devoiced.他們結婚不到四個月就離婚了。 We went home after we had finished the work.我們做完此工作就回家了。 句型21.主語肯定謂語until從句.請比較：主語否定謂語until+從句.如： I worked until he came back.我一直工作到他回來。 I didnt worked until he came back.他回來我才開始工作。 句型22.As soo

23、n as / The moment / The instant / The minute +從句，主句. 如： My father went out immediately I got home.我一到家，我父親就出去了。 句型23.No sooner +had + 主語donethan +主語did. No sooner had I got to Beijing than I called you.我一到北京就給你打電話了。請比較：I had no sooner got to Beijing than I called you. 句型24.Hardly + had +主語donewhen /

24、 before + 主語did.Hardly had she had supper when she went out. 她一吃完晚飯就出去了。句型25.By the time+從句，主句.（注意時態(tài)的變化。）如： By the time you come back, I will have finished this book.到你回來時，我將寫完這本書了。 地點狀語從句 句型26.Where +從句，主句. 如： Where there is a will ,there is a way. 句型27、 Wherever+從句，主句. 如：Wherever you go ,I will go

25、 with you 目的狀語從句 句型28.主句in order that / so that +從句.如： I got up early in order that I could catch the first bus.我起得很早，以便能趕上早班車。 句型29.主句for +sb. +to do.（注意動詞不定式復合結構在這兒作目的狀語。）如： He came here for me to work out this problem.他來這兒叫我?guī)退獬鲞@道難題。 結果狀語從句 句型30.主句so that+從句. 如： It was very cold, so that the rive

26、r froze.天氣很泠，因此河水結冰了。 句型31.主語謂語such+名詞that+從句.如： He made such rapid progress that he was praised by the teacher.他進步很快，老師表揚了他。 句型32.Such was + 主語that +從句.(這是個完全倒裝句。)如： Such was the force of the explosion that all the windows were broken.爆炸力這么大，所有的窗戶都比較狀語從句 句型33.The +形容詞比較級，（主句）the +形容詞比較級如： The soone

27、r you do it, the better it will be.越早越好。 句型34.主語謂語as +形容詞原級as +被比較的對象. 如： He is as busy as a bee.他非常忙。 句型35.主語謂語倍數as形容詞原級as被比較的對象.如： This room is three times as large as that one.這個房間是那個房間的三倍大。（這個房間比那個房間大兩倍。） 句型36.主語謂語百分數/倍數形容詞比較級than被比較的對象.如： This city is twice larger than ours.這個城市比我們城市大兩倍。 The early rice output in that co