2014屆高考英語一輪寫作綜合訓(xùn)練17

1、2014屆高考英語一輪寫作綜合訓(xùn)練17第一節(jié)：完成句子閱讀下列各小題，根據(jù)括號內(nèi)的漢語提示，用句末括號內(nèi)的英語單詞完成句子。1The 26 th Shenzhen Summer Universiade was grandly opened on August 12 th_ （最吸引我們的） was the door to the world formed by the 365 electronic giant LED screen（appeal）2Have you seen the film Under the Hawthorn Tree?Of course, I haveIt was in

2、our village that _（拍攝的）（make）3Not until I turned on TV _ （我知道） that the Chinese ship was rescued by the European Union Task Force4Advertisements have become part of everyday life so it is important that we educate ourselves about them _ （避免受愚弄）by them（avoid） 5I _ （多虧了我的父母） that I went through the ha

3、rd time after I lost my jobEverything couldnt have been going so smoothly without them（owe）6Its important for the figures （更新）regularly（update）7_ （全心投入）your job and finally you will succeed （devote）8The secretary forgot to type her business letter, _（集中注意力去閱讀）an interesting report（focus）9He mad

4、e a commitment that he would spend as much time as he could _（教這位調(diào)皮的孩子）（teach）10However, Australia has a federal government _（負(fù)責(zé)） matters that affect people all over the country such as defence, foreign policy and taxation（responsible）2013高考英語（書面表達(dá)）怎樣寫好單位介紹式書面表達(dá)二、寫好具有自我特色的開篇交待句和末尾總結(jié)句，提高文章的照應(yīng)性 為提高單位介

5、紹式書面表達(dá)的照應(yīng)性，我們應(yīng)寫好開篇交待句和末尾總結(jié)句。寫開篇交待句時，因單位詳情尚未交待，讀者對其沒有完整了解，可適當(dāng)寫得籠統(tǒng)一些，但寫末尾總結(jié)句時因單位詳情已作介紹，讀者對其已有完整了解，因此適宜寫得具體一些，針對性強(qiáng)一些。如本篇書面表達(dá)習(xí)作的開頭和結(jié)尾一句就有效增強(qiáng)了文章的照應(yīng)性。 （未完待續(xù)） 怎樣寫好單位介紹式書面表達(dá) -作者：郝昌明 轉(zhuǎn)貼自：本站原創(chuàng) 點(diǎn)擊數(shù)：44 更新時間：2004-12-31 文章錄入：admin 減小字體 增大字體三、用好過渡性詞匯，提高文章的連貫性 寫單位介紹式書面表達(dá)交待地點(diǎn)變換時可用：here, there, on the one side, on th

6、e other side；寫單位今昔對比、轉(zhuǎn)換時間時可用：in the past, at present, in the future；寫單位具有多種優(yōu)勢時可用：at the same time, both.and., not only.but also., as well (as), what's more；寫單位因人們的努力而更加輝煌時可用：as a result (of) , thanks to, so, therefore, as we can imagine；對單位前景表達(dá)自信時可用：I'm sure, I believe, I think 等過渡性插入語。當(dāng)然和寫其

7、它角度書面表達(dá)一樣，也要根據(jù)需要應(yīng)用好其它過渡性詞匯。 本篇書面表達(dá)習(xí)作實(shí)例參考答案成功運(yùn)用了As we all know, and, I'm sure等過渡性詞匯，有效增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性、邏輯性和可讀性。 四、采用具有自我特色的不同表達(dá)方式，提高文章的靈活性 寫單位介紹式書面表達(dá)時同學(xué)們會發(fā)現(xiàn)原材料中多次出現(xiàn)"有"，介紹單位不同時期的面積和人口時，也會多次出現(xiàn)"面積為."、"人口為."等文字。所有這些意義上重復(fù)的場合，語言上最好不要機(jī)械重復(fù)，否則文章便會顯得機(jī)械、呆板，毫無可讀性。同學(xué)們應(yīng)盡可能采用不同的表達(dá)方式，使文章顯得

8、形象生動，而具有較強(qiáng)的吸引性。如在介紹單位各方面情況的文章中，多次出現(xiàn)"有"，可用下列句式機(jī)動靈活地表達(dá)：There are many buildings in our school including. Our school is made up of three grades and thirty-six classes. You can see lots of flowers and green grass in our school.人口和面積可表達(dá)為：The population of our school is. Our school has a populat

9、ion of. The size of our school is. Our school has a size of.或Our school covers. 本篇書面表達(dá)習(xí)作實(shí)例參考答案分別用is made up of, covering和has來表達(dá)"有"，使得句式絢麗多姿、豐富多彩，大大提高了語言的靈活性。 五、熟悉具有自我特色的語言現(xiàn)象，提高文章的吸引性 單位介紹式書面表達(dá)有不少句型是有規(guī)律出現(xiàn)的，如列舉單位多個建筑物時可使用： There are many buildings in our school such as a teaching building, a

10、 library, a laboratory and a computer center.介紹單位綠化工作做得好時可使用：Our school is like a garden. Trees and flowers can be seen everywhere.介紹單位有關(guān)人員努力工作時可用：Both.and.work hard.表達(dá)主人公以單位為榮時可用：I'm proud of our school. 介紹單位地點(diǎn)時可用：Our school lies.介紹單位交通狀況時可用：It is very convenient for us to travel anywhere. 介紹單位

11、資源豐富時可用：Our country is rich in natural resources.介紹單位新氣象時可用：Our school has taken on a new look. 介紹單位前途時可用：Our school will have a wonderful future.本篇書面表達(dá)習(xí)作參考答案出現(xiàn)了Western China is rich in natural resources, Western China will take on a new look and have a bright future等具有自我特色的句型，有力地提高了文章的吸引性。 六、采用較復(fù)雜的

12、詞匯或句式，提升文章的表達(dá)檔次 寫單位介紹式書面表達(dá)時同學(xué)們應(yīng)盡可能使用一些較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，以降低文章的單調(diào)性、枯燥性和乏味性，增強(qiáng)文章的生動性、趣味性和醒目性，從而有效提升文章的表達(dá)檔次。如在單位介紹式書面表達(dá)中同學(xué)們可使用下列一些復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。 What a beautiful school it is! (運(yùn)用感嘆句) It is because of the hard work of all the teachers that our school has become very famous.(采用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) Our school is just like a beau

13、tiful garden with a lot of flowers and green grass in it.（采用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）I'm sure you'll be deeply impressed by our school after you visit it. (采用被動語態(tài)) 這些句型復(fù)現(xiàn)率高，使用效果好，同學(xué)們?nèi)缒苁煊洸⒃鰪?qiáng)表達(dá)意識，就一定能做到即學(xué)即用，即用即效。 以上就是有關(guān)寫好單位介紹式書面表達(dá)的幾點(diǎn)建議，希望同學(xué)們認(rèn)真積累、積極思考，寫好文章，以順利通過書面表達(dá)這一關(guān)。 *結(jié)束第二節(jié)：寫作如果有一場神奇的“價值拍賣會”，你可以拍下自己最想要的東西，你

14、會為什么而舉牌？請在以下的競拍內(nèi)容中，選出你最想得到的三樣?xùn)|西，并闡明你選擇的理由。1、競拍內(nèi)容：愛心、夢想、名牌大學(xué)錄取通知書、聰明、快樂、誠信、自由、權(quán)利、友情、金錢等；2、字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不含開頭語。Different people may bid for different things_*結(jié)束1What appealed to us most 2it was made devoted to3did I know reading4to avoid being fooled 5owe（d） it to my parents 6to be updated7Devote yourself t

15、o / Be8focusing her attention on9teaching this naughty child10（that/which is） responsible forOne possible version:Different people may bid for different thingsAs for me, I want dream, friendship and an admission notice to a famous university most Dreams would be on the top of my listOnly by pursuing

16、 our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled lifeMoney can buy a comfortable life, but without dreams, even a millionaire would find his life boringA person without friends can never be happyOur life is full of joys and sorrows, which we need people to share withFaced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and helpJust as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”Friendship can help us through ups and dow