2021中考英語作文：現(xiàn)代生活.doc

1、2021中考英語作文：現(xiàn)代生活05 現(xiàn)代生活篇（一）根據(jù)相關(guān)研究預(yù)測，如果缺乏有效干預(yù)措施，到 2025 年，中國將有 5000 萬超重兒童，居世界首位。假如你是校園網(wǎng)的一名小記者，針對(duì)這一問題，請根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語短文。提示：1.我國青少年肥胖問題日益嚴(yán)重； 2.吃太多的高脂肪食品和不運(yùn)動(dòng)”是導(dǎo)致青 少年肥胖的主要原因； 3.建議青少年健康飲食，多運(yùn)動(dòng)，養(yǎng)成良好的 生活習(xí)慣。要求：寫作內(nèi)容必須包含以上提示的所有內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 80 詞左右，文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞 數(shù)。A study has predted that over 50 million children w

2、ill be overweight in China by 2025 if any thing isnrs;t done.【滿分 范文】A study has predted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn"t done.In China, the problem is being more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they

3、hardly eercise.How should we solve the problem? Firstly, children must have healthy eating habits.They should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat and junk food.Secondly, they should eercise often.It"ll make them healthy and feel good.Finally, keep some good living habits such as getting

4、 up early and going to bed early.In a word, healthy eating, proper eercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter.【寫作指導(dǎo)】健康是與我們息息相關(guān)的話題，同學(xué)們可以選擇自身作為切入點(diǎn)，詳細(xì)講述為自己制定的運(yùn)動(dòng)計(jì)劃。（二）假如你是李華,給你在英國朋友 Jack 寫一封電子郵件, 告知其目前新型冠狀病毒肺炎的形勢, 并告訴他一些防御措施，請他注意防護(hù)。要點(diǎn)如下: 1 我們的城市對(duì)于控制疫情已經(jīng)取得較大的成功。2 注意防護(hù)，如減少外出，帶口罩外

5、出，勤洗手等。3 表達(dá)戰(zhàn)勝疫情的信心。注意:1、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 使行文連貫; 2、80-100 詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：novel coronavirus（新型冠狀病毒）口罩：mask.【滿分 范文】Dear Jack, How is everything going? Novel coronavirus has spread throughout the world .Our city has achieved great success in controlling it.I have some adve for you on how to prevent it.T

6、he most important thing is to stay at home, try not to get together with your family and friends.Second, wash your hands often with soap and water.It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus.Third, when you have to go out, you must wear a mask to cover your mouth and nose, and learn how to pu

7、t it on, take it off and throw it away correctly .Remember, if you have a fever or a cough, you had better go to a hospital , and let a doctor ve you further eamination.All of these are helpful to keep you safe.We believe ter will finally pass, and spring is sure to e.We will go back to school as so

8、on as possible.Hope everything goes well with you.Yours, Li Hua 【解析】1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求以李華的身份，用第一人稱給在英國朋友 Jack 寫一封電子郵件，告知其目前新型冠狀病毒肺炎的形勢，并告訴他一些防御措施，書寫時(shí)要注意用全題干所給提示要點(diǎn)，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文層次分明，第一層講述新型冠狀病毒已經(jīng)傳遍全球，第二層講述防范措施，第三層展望戰(zhàn)勝疫情的信心；短文陳述的中心突出，層次之間有機(jī)聯(lián)系。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：本篇例文運(yùn)用的短語 spread throughout the world；achieve gr

9、eat success in； have some adve for you on ；keep you away from；文中用不定式的不同句式 The most important thing is to stay at home；It is a useful way to keep you away from the virus；try not to get together with your family and friends；All of these are helpful to keep you safe；多種復(fù)合句條件狀語從句 if you have a fever or a

10、 cough, you had better go to a hospital ；賓語從句 We believe ter will finally pass, and spring is sure to e.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇是材料作文，書寫前要認(rèn)真閱讀題干，了解題干的要求，確定中心話題，依據(jù)題干要求，分好短文的層次，確定層次的內(nèi)容，使短文看起來邏輯清晰；建議使用表順序的副詞或短語表達(dá)有關(guān)防御措施，使短文更有條理。（三）假如你是陽光中學(xué)的李華，即將要畢業(yè)的你，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)和生活了三年的母校充滿了眷戀和感恩，想在當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)刊上發(fā)表一篇英語文章描述自己的母校。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文。學(xué)校 優(yōu)美的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境?，F(xiàn)代

11、化的操場。同學(xué) 相互學(xué)習(xí)，相互幫助。積極參加課外活動(dòng)，提高能力。老師 對(duì)我們的一切要求嚴(yán)格。(自擬一點(diǎn)）感想 (自擬兩點(diǎn)）要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。2.不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！啊辈糠中枳詳M。3.詞數(shù) 90 個(gè)左右。My Mother School I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School.I have enjoyed a lot during the past three years.【滿分 范文】I will graduate from Yang Guang Middle School.I have enjoyed a lot

12、 during the past three years.Itrs;s a very beautiful school whh provides us with a good environment to study.There is a modern playground in our school and we often play basketball there.Besides that, we often learn from each other and help each other in our daily life.We take an active part in afte

13、r-school activities and it improves our abilities.The teachers are strt with us, but they are patient enough to eplain everything to us.When something worries me, I often ask my teacher for help.Irs;m proud I can study in this school, and Irs;ll remember my mother school forever.【解析】試題分析p ：這是一篇該材料作文

14、，寫一寫自己對(duì)三年來母校的感想。本題所給材料較為詳細(xì)。寫作中注意從學(xué)校，老師和同學(xué)們?nèi)齻€(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，并表達(dá)自己的感想。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)人稱問題比較復(fù)雜，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文 點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。（四）根據(jù)文字提示,請你以“ How to Keep Safe in Schoo

15、l”為話題,寫一篇80-100 詞的英語短文,談?wù)勀愕目捶?要點(diǎn):1.描述一件發(fā)生在你身上或你看到的發(fā)生在校園的意外事件(經(jīng)過與結(jié)果 2.提出避免這種校園意外的建議(至少兩條); 3.呼吁同學(xué)們注意校園安全 要求:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名;2.短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 提示詞匯: not run in the hall ways, sfrom doing, pay attention to How to Keep Safe in School Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not care

16、ful enough? For ele【滿分 范文】How to Keep Safe in School Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough?For ele, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway.Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor.Therefore, he had to stay

17、 inhospital for several days.So I think students should walk and do not run in the hallways.And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and s them from running.At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.【解析】題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文。主要寫三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：描述一件發(fā)

18、生在校園里的意外事件，要寫明經(jīng)過和結(jié)果，用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)；提出至少兩條避免意外發(fā)生的建議，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；最后要呼吁同學(xué)們注意校園安全。同時(shí)要注意提示詞匯的使用。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇短文內(nèi)容清晰完整語言簡潔正確。首先舉例描述發(fā)生在校園里的意外事件，有過程有結(jié)果，接著用 I think 引入自己的建議，最后用 I hope+從句的方式呼吁學(xué)生們要注意校園安全。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：ran after each other ；because of；fell down；keep one eye on；s them from running；pay attention to。句型：had better do sth

19、最好做某事；I hope +從句。（五）昨天你班召開了一次“告別陋習(xí)，走上文明”的主題班會(huì)。會(huì)上老師讓你們談?wù)勆磉呁瑢W(xué)的變化。請你根據(jù)表格里的內(nèi)容寫一篇有關(guān)王明同學(xué)的文章。過去的表現(xiàn) 現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn) 經(jīng)常和同學(xué)打架(fight) 和同學(xué)相處融洽( be good with) 花很多時(shí)間玩電腦游戲(spend time doing) 積極 (active)參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng) (activity) 經(jīng)常吃垃圾食品( junk food) 健康的生活習(xí)慣( living habits) 在課堂上吃東西，睡覺(eitheror) 認(rèn)真聽課，按時(shí)完成(finish)作業(yè) 考試不及格(fail) 各門學(xué)科取得好成績

20、，尤其 ( especially)數(shù)學(xué) 注意:1 文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使短文的意思連貫語句通順。2 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名和地名。字?jǐn)?shù) 80 左右，(文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)) Wang Ming is my classmate.He had made great progress this term.In the past, 【滿分 范文】Wang Ming is my classmate.He had made great progress this term.In the past, he always fought with others.He used to

21、spend much time playing puter games.And he often ate junk food.In class he either ate or slept.He always failed the eam.But now he changed a lot.He can be good with other students.He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and bees very outgoing .He has healthy eating habits.Also he listens

22、to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time.So he gets good grades in all subjects, especially math.Now we all like him.【解析】題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，根據(jù)你班召的主題班會(huì)“告別陋習(xí)，走上文明”的主題班會(huì)。談?wù)勀闵磉呁瑢W(xué)的變化。這篇文中涉及到了過去和現(xiàn)在的不同變化。文中需要用到一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。本文是兩段式，第一段介紹了過去的情況，第二段是現(xiàn)在的變化。語

23、言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：make great progress；in the past；fight with；either or；take an active part in；healthy eating habits。句型：He used to spend much time playing puter games（used to do 的句型）；He take an active part in all kinds of activities, and bees v

24、ery outgoing （六）初三學(xué)生 Sandy 面臨中考，面對(duì)父母和老師的期望及每天堆成山的作業(yè)感到非?？鄲溃蛱煲?yàn)榭戳艘恍r(shí)的電視和媽媽吵架，最后摔門而去。于是她寫信給老師傾訴煩惱，請你根據(jù)下列提示以老師 Nancy 的身份用英語給她寫一封回信。提示：1如何舒緩目前的壓力； 2如何安排好每天的學(xué)習(xí)和休息； 3如何處理與父母的關(guān)系。注意：1必須包括要點(diǎn)中所有提示內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 3表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范； 4詞數(shù)不少于 90 詞（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dear Sandy， Irs;m really glad that

25、you can share your problems and feelings with me Here is my adveYours， Nancy 【滿分 范文】Dear Sandy， Irs;m really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me Here is my adve（點(diǎn)題）First， itrs;s a good choe to take up a hobby to help you rela and reduce your pressure【高分句型一】Second， you can make

26、 plans for your everyday life After you study for about two hours， you can take a walk outside and try to rela Besides， donrs;t stay up late Itrs;s not good for your healthThird， never argue with your parents You should learn to understand them and spend some time munating with them Discuss your pro

27、blems with them and tell them your ideas They will help you find better ways to solve them（建議）In a word， you will have a hier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents【高分句型二】（總結(jié)全文）Yours， Nancy （七）九年級(jí)的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進(jìn)步、喜悅請根據(jù)下面提示，以“Our School Life in Grade Nin

28、e 為題寫一篇詞數(shù)為 80 左右的短文，介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建議 提示：1 在學(xué)校：老師認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，充滿愛心；學(xué)生：（至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn)）2 周末作業(yè)：作業(yè)多，舍棄愛好；周末活動(dòng)：鍛煉、電視 愿望：（發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)）要求：1 短文須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2 短文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名； 3 詞數(shù) 80 個(gè)左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 參考詞匯：patient， carefully， actively， stressed 緊張的 【滿分 范文】Our School Life in Grade Nine It is more than half a year since

29、 we became a Grade Nine student【高分句型一】Here is what our school life is like now（點(diǎn)題）At school, all of our teachers work very hardMost of them are kindhearted and patient enough to help us with all kinds of problemsAs for students， in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively After cl

30、ass，we are busy doing our homework We all work hard to improve ourselves On weekends, we spend much time doing homework， so we canrs;t spare time for our hobbies any moreI feel a little stressed，so I try to play basketball or watch TV to get relaedI hope to work hard to make my dream e true I also w

31、ish my classmates healthy and hy every day（介紹學(xué)校生活）No pains， no gainsThe more carefully we plan our day， the more colorful our school life will be【高分句型二】（總結(jié)全文）（ 八）近年來，我國校園欺凌事件屢有發(fā)生，而遭受校園欺凌的學(xué)生容易情緒抑郁、焦慮，不敢去學(xué)校，甚至?xí)霈F(xiàn)心理問題等嚴(yán)重后果請以”My opinions about school bullying 為題“，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?提示：1What do you think of

32、school bullying？ 2What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied？ 要求：1所給提示信息應(yīng)全部包括，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫； 2.80 詞以上 參考詞匯：心理問題 mental health problems My opinions about school bullying 【滿分 范文】My opinions about school bullying School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more

33、 attention in society Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset Some students are afraid of going to school School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems So how should we s school bullying？（我對(duì)校園欺凌的看法）If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied， I will tell the t

34、eachers or my parents at once【高分句型一】It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own【高分句型二】（如果被欺負(fù)，我會(huì)怎么做）（九）初中生活即將結(jié)束，這三年一定給你留下很多美好的回憶英語俱樂部征文要求寫篇110 詞左右文章描述你難忘的校園生活、師生情或同學(xué)情以及在臨別之際，對(duì)他們說的感激和祝福的話文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名【滿分 范文】How time flies!Our junior high school days are ing to an end ，andI&quo

35、t;d like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)題）Firstly，I"d like to thank my great teachersThey teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a manThough they look strt and serious，they are always kind to me（感謝老師）Secondly，I want to thank my friendly classmat

36、esAs long as I have trouble，they are always around meI miss the hy days when we stay with each otherI love all of you （感謝同學(xué)）Finally，I"m going to thank my parentsThey always look after me very well to keep me healthyAnd they often encourage me to work hard at school【高分句型二】（感謝父母）（十）親愛的同學(xué)，假如你是 Ale

37、， 初中生活即將結(jié)束，你所向往的高中生活即將來臨由于疫情（epidem situation）原因，你將代表（represent）初三畢業(yè)生，做一個(gè)網(wǎng)絡(luò)直播演講 請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇演講稿 （1）對(duì)初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活的總結(jié)（至少三個(gè)方面）（2）對(duì)老師、同學(xué)及父母的感謝，并簡要說明原因 （3）談?wù)勀銓?duì)未來的夢想和肩負(fù)的社會(huì)責(zé)任，以及你得如何去實(shí)現(xiàn) 要求：1文章語句通順，句式多樣可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫 2開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校和班級(jí) 4詞數(shù)：100 詞左右 Dear ladies and gentlemen，That"s all for

38、my speech Thank you for your attention! 【滿分 范文】Dear ladies and gentlemen， It"s my honor to make a speech at the graduating ceremony【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)題）It has been three years since we came to the beautiful schoolOur school is very beautifulWe have colourful activities every termOur teachers always try t

39、o make their lessons lively and interesting【高分句型二】We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years（對(duì)初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活的總結(jié)）We should thank our teachers，our parents and our classmatesThe first group is my classmatesWe"ve worked hard together and we"ve even shared some diffult

40、times togetherThe second group is our parentsI thank you for making a home where I feel both safe and relaedI also thank you for your help with my homeworkThe third group is our teachersWe can never pay you back for your kindness，your patience，and ft of knowledge whh you have offered us（對(duì)老師、同學(xué)、父母的感謝

41、以及原因）In the future， I want to be a teacher to help more people in needI will study hard and realize this dream as soon as possible（未來夢想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)）That"s all for my speech Thank you for your attention! （十一）”你養(yǎng)我長大，我陪你變老“父母親一直在為我們的成長默默付出，成長要學(xué)會(huì)感受愛、回報(bào)愛今天你即將畢業(yè)是向父母表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)請根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文 要點(diǎn)：（1）給我生命，一直照顧

42、我成長； （2）努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件； （3）擁有愛心，教我學(xué)會(huì)； （4）今天，我要為你們（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)） 注意事項(xiàng)：（1）詞數(shù) 80 左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息 You bring me up.I will be with you in your life.You are important persons in the process of my growth.【滿分 范文】You bring me up.I will be with you in your life.You are important pers

43、ons in the process of my growthYou ve me life and take care of me all the time（給我生命，一直照顧我成長）When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me 【高分句型一】In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from mornin

44、g till night （努力工作，為我提供良好的生活和教育條件）Everyone knows you are the persons full ofloveYou are ready to help people in needIt is you who teach me to be a kind person【高分句型二】（擁有愛心，教我做慈愛的人）Dad and mum，today I"ll cook dinner for youI"ll go for a walk with you after dinner（今天要為父母做的兩件事）I hope you will

45、be hy and healthy forever! 【 名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】【高分句型一】When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me當(dāng)我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活有問題時(shí)，你總是耐心地幫助我，鼓勵(lì)我 when當(dāng)時(shí)候，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，adj +enough +to do sth 足夠地可以做某事， 【高分句型二】It is you who teach me to be a kind person是你我做一個(gè)善良的人 本句使用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句It is +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+

46、that/who （十二）初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想 (請不要寫出真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱以及真實(shí)姓名)。提示詞語：three years；memories；one of；one day；think；hy / sorry 【滿分 范文】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my hiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years" life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn