廣州市中考英語作文專題復習三體育與校園活動

1、2018年廣州市中考英語作文專題復習（三）體育與校園活動一、與專題相關的話題項目         學校 (school), 文娛與體育 (Entertainment and sports) 二、與專題相關的知識準備1、相關單元  7A Unit 1 Making friends            7A Unit 2 Daily lif

2、e                    7A Unit 7 School clubs                           

3、8A Unit 5 Educational exchanges     8A Unit 7 Memory                       8A Unit 8 English Week             

4、              9A Unit 4 Problems and advice2、相關詞匯  *高頻詞    (n.) hobby, country, age, dream, flat, world, mountain, engineer, sound, table tennis, break, band, guitar, market, practice, fair, rocket, p

5、ower, skill, information, headline, ant, butterfly, bee, culture, host, weekday, success, guest, corner, trouble, step, cycle, note, wallet, basket, manager, list, mile, letter, speech, notice, competition, text, chance, topic, winner, opinion, model, diet, situation, advantage, mess, exam, comment&

6、#160;   (v.) complete, ride, ring, end, attend, teach, tour, introduce, respect, lose, improve, mention, spell, advise, communicate, hide, choose, regret, hate, suggest, fail,      (adj.) daily, friendly, elder, surprised, amazing, boring, recent, glad, fantas

7、tic, local, silly, worth, whole, rich, poor, shy, awful, ashamed, embarrassed, mad, annoying, careless, polite,       (adv.) never, seldom, usually, together, already, yet, confidently, else,    (pron.)everyone, yourself,     

8、0;(conj.) though          *高頻短語     be good at, go to school, make friends with, take part in, have a good time,  d like to, all over, on foot, go to bed, get up, learn about, all the way, look up, so far, introduceto, t

9、ake  out, pour out, treasure hunt, in public, put on, in my opinion, look out, be on a diet, laugh at, feel ashamed of, drive sb, mad. Make a mess, out of place, none of ones business, hear from       *拓展詞匯        experi

10、ence, disappear, attack, exchange, tai chi, chopstick, reference,   application, treasure, several, suggestion, unless, whenever, request, keep in touch with, apply for,  make sth. A big success, advise sb. to do, give sb. a chance to do sth, be worried about, regret doing,  have

11、 a habit of, make up ones mind, pay attention to, *句式句型1. My favourite subjects are.2. I am good at .3. I like/ enjoy.4. I always have a good time at school.5. be so adj. that +從句6. Im glad to do.7. Spend.(in) doing.8. Its been a fantastic experience so far.9. Weve tried to .10. I cant wait!11.

12、 I havent had much success, but Ill keep trying.    12. If you., you will.13. It is adj. to do sth.14. Some students. Other students.15. What should I do in this situation?16. Its none of my business. 三、經(jīng)典例題v    體育（1）2007年天津市書面表達考題 

13、60;  日前,由教育部,國家體育總局,共青團中央聯(lián)合舉辦“全國億萬少年陽光體育運動” 啟動儀式,其影響巨大,意義深遠.你在本校參加了此項活動,請根據(jù)表格中所給信息寫一篇英語短文.內(nèi)容感想1.學校師生收看了啟動儀式(launching ceremony);2.開展了一個小時的集體體育活動,如;跑步,做操,打籃球等;1.鍛煉有利于強健身體;2.運動使大腦休息,學習效率更高.3.每天鍛煉一小時,幸福生活一輩子. 注意：1.詞數(shù)80 個左右.2.短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù).3.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,但不要逐句翻譯,可適當加入細節(jié),可適度發(fā)揮

14、,使短文通順,連貫.4. 文中不得使用真實姓名,校名.“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to_（2）、解題思路示范1、審題：本文共有  5  個要點時態(tài)主要采用 一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時 人稱是_第一人稱_段落 第一段落寫活動情況；第二段落寫感想; 

15、0;2、可能用到的短語和句型詞匯the launching ceremony 啟動儀式；build up ones body strength 強身健體；more effective  效果更好; take part in; different kinds of;   enjoy oneself be good for; have a rest; an hour a day; in ones opinion; have a happy life連

16、接詞 after that;  besides;  also; whats more;句型somesomeothers; sothat; I think; Doing sth. is adj.; Why not do?; If you; Im sure內(nèi)容感想1.學校師生收看了啟動儀式(launching ceremony);2.開展了一個小時的集體體育活動,如;跑步,做操,打籃球等;（短語：do different kinds of sports for an hour）1. 鍛煉有利于強健身體;( 短語：build up our body

17、strength.)2. 運動使大腦休息,學習效率更高.(短語：have a rest; more effective)3. 每天鍛煉一小時,幸福生活一輩子. (短語：do sports an hour a day; have a happy life) 3、 學生成文：      “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007. The teach

18、ers and students in our school were organized to see a launching ceremony. After that, we did different kinds of sports for an hour. For example, running, taking exercise, playing basketball and so on.      In my opinion, do sports can help

19、 build up our body strength. Whats more, it also can let our brains have a rest, then our study will more effective. I am enjoy running every day. I think running can make me relax. So why not take part in some exercise with me every day? As the saying goes, d

20、o sports an hour a day, have a happy face every day! 點評：   整篇文章對要點的把握基本到位，沒有什么單詞拼寫錯誤，而且文章最后一句寫得相當漂亮，但是全文還是存在不少語法小錯誤和用詞不當，部分句子的表達過于中式。分項分檔評分表項目要素給分表內(nèi)容6分切合題意，體現(xiàn)要點6-55  654.5  4-3.5  3-2.521.510有所發(fā)揮準確性6分語  法6-5.554.54-3.5    

21、60;3.53-2.521.510詞  匯機械性：大小寫，拼寫和格式等錯誤流暢性3分結構3-2.52-1.5  210.50000自評總分： 11.5  4、檢查思路：完成作文自查表：1) 如果沒有問題的，請在項目后打。2) 如果有問題，請在項目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改。項目 第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點  人稱 時態(tài)、主謂一致  動詞搭配、介詞搭配   拼寫錯誤   好詞好句  

22、;  5、參考例文：     “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony. After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sp

23、orts for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and others did some exercise. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. What a good time we had! I think doing sports is very good for us. It helps to build up our

24、body strength. Besides, our brains can have a good rest after doing sports so that our study can be more effective. So why not join us? If you can do sports an hour a day, Im sure you can have a healthier and better life. v 校園生活（1）2007年廣州市初中畢業(yè)生學業(yè)考試真題

25、通  知活動：學生音樂會時間：星期五下午2:30地點：玫瑰音樂廳集合時間及地點：下午1:30；學校門口出發(fā)時間：下午1:45；過時不候注意事項：1.廳內(nèi)不準喝飲料、不準吃食物；2.看表演過程中不得拍照、不得喧嘩；3.看完表演后一起坐校車回校。注意：1、 詞數(shù)80左右，電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，但不計人總詞數(shù)；2、 不能透露個人的任何信息（例如：具體的學校和姓名等），否則答案作廢。Hi BenOur class is planning to go to a student concert. As you werent at school today, Im s

26、ending you the information.Cheers,Li Ping（2）解題思路：1. 審題：a. 本文共有  6  個要點(1)時間：星期五下午2:30  (at half past two on Friday afternoon)(2)地點：玫瑰音樂廳 (Rose Music Hal)(3)集合時間及地點：下午1:30；學校門口  (school gate at half past one)出發(fā)時間：下午1:45；過時不候(4-6)注意事項：1.廳內(nèi)不準喝飲料、不準吃食物；(No drinks

27、or foods, be allowed )2.看表演過程中不得拍照、不得喧嘩；(take photos, during )3.看完表演后一起坐校車回校。(return to school, by bus)b. 時態(tài)主要采用 一般將來時c. 人稱是_2. 可能用到的短語和句型1).主要連接詞 If， so, also,2). 主要句型We are going to  We will  You can   I think   &

28、#160;         You should/ shouldnt    Remember to 3. 成文： In Friday afternoon, we have a students music concert .This music concert is start half past two p.m. And the concert will be held in

29、 The Rose Concert Hall.We will meet at the gate of school at half past one p.m. and the go off at a quarter to two.In the concert we must in attention: First dont drinking and eating in the hall. Second we neednt take photos and make noise in the show. Last, we will come back to

30、school by school bus when we will be watched the concert. 點評：整篇文章對要點的把握基本到位，但是拼寫和簡單的語法錯誤較多。部分句子的表達過于中式分項分檔評分表項目要素給分表內(nèi)容6分切合題意，體現(xiàn)要點6-5554.5 44-3.5  3-2.521.510有所發(fā)揮準確性6分語  法6-5.554.54-3.5     3-2.5    2  21.510詞  

31、匯機械性：大小寫，拼寫和格式等錯誤流暢性3分結構3-2.52-1.5  210.50000自評總分：8   4. 檢查思路：完成作文自查表：   如果沒有問題的，請在項目后打。   如果有問題，請在項目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改。項目 第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點  人稱 時態(tài)、主謂一致  動詞搭配、介詞搭配   拼寫錯誤   好詞好句  &

32、#160; 5. 參考例文：Hi Ben,Our class is planning to go to a student concert. As you werent at school today, Im sending you the information.The concert will be held in the Rose Music Hall at half past two on Friday afternoon. You must be at the school gate at half past one. We will

33、 leave at a quarter to two. Dont be late. If you are late, we wont wait for you. No drinks or foods are allowed inside the hall. Photos may not be taken during the concert. Also, we are not allowed to talk loudly during the show. Well return to the school by bus after the co

34、ncert.Cheers,Li Ping 四、練習    你校正在舉行英語藝術節(jié)，請你根據(jù)下面的海報，寫一個通知，告訴你班同學關于藝術節(jié)讀書活動的情況。                            注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；Att

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