四級考試作文

1、                                        四級考試作文   一、概述在四級考試中，最難拿分的也許就是作文了。其原因大致有三：一是作文是一項(xiàng)綜合

2、考察的項(xiàng)目，既考察學(xué)生對詞匯、語法的掌握情況，也考察句型、篇章的能力；二是有的考生過分自信，認(rèn)為只要寫足字?jǐn)?shù)，大體寫一寫，就能得個八、九分；三是有的考生過于缺乏自信，覺得這個部分太綜合了，平時也懶得寫，考試時能寫到哪兒就寫到哪兒，結(jié)果造成了“活馬當(dāng)作死馬醫(yī)”，自然是“醫(yī)死”了。 誠然，在四級作文中想得高分是很難的，但無論如何也應(yīng)當(dāng)拿到6分。這是一個底線，否則就要被倒扣分了，那是大大劃不來的。（請見作文最低分的規(guī)定）。但是筆者認(rèn)為，要想拿到6分（或者更高一點(diǎn)）也并非難事，關(guān)鍵在于掌握正確的方法、多寫多練，再加上考試時的細(xì)心。我們先來了解一下四六級考試作文的一些常識。二、作文最低分的規(guī)定

3、：自1997年6月起，全國大學(xué)英語考試委員會正式實(shí)施了在計(jì)算成績時設(shè)“作文最低分”的規(guī)定，其目的是為了鼓勵各個院校扎扎實(shí)實(shí)地搞好課堂教學(xué)，提高學(xué)生的實(shí)際應(yīng)用能力。計(jì)算方法（1）根據(jù)學(xué)生目前的作文分均值，將作文的最低分定為6分；（2）作文分為0分，總分若高于60分，最后報(bào)導(dǎo)一律按59分不及格處理；若低于60分則報(bào)導(dǎo)時一律再減6分；（3）作文分大于0分，小于6分，則按下面的公式計(jì)算成績：最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=原計(jì)算總分-6分+實(shí)得作文分例1：原計(jì)算總分為63分，實(shí)得作文分為2分，最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=63-6+2=59分。例2：原計(jì)算總分為80分，實(shí)得作文分為4分，最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=80-6+4=78分。例3：原計(jì)算總分為

4、58分，實(shí)得作文分為2分，最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=58-6+2=54分。三、試卷要求試卷短文寫作部分，一般用英語給出題目，然后用以下三種形式之一說明內(nèi)容要求：1. 用英文列出寫作提綱；2. 用英文段首句給定每段的大意；3. 用英文說明圖表,給出信息范疇和要求?？荚嚂r間為30分鐘,要求學(xué)生寫出一篇不少于100詞的短文。要求切題,能正確表達(dá)思想，意義連貫，文理基本通順，無重大語言錯誤。寫作內(nèi)容為科技、社會、文化等方面的一般常識。四、評分原則1. 大學(xué)英語考試的目的是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級和六級教學(xué)要求，對作文的評分應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。2. 大學(xué)英語考試作文題采用總體評分(Global Sco

5、ring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分(Reward Scores),而不是按語言點(diǎn)的錯誤數(shù)目扣分。3. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方面對作文進(jìn)行綜合評判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個統(tǒng)一體。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容,而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題,是否充分表達(dá)思想,也要考慮是否用英語清楚而適切地表達(dá)思想,也就是要考慮語言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。4. 避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分,包括滿分;該給低分的給低分,包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。五、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1. 短文寫作部分滿分為15分。2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有參照卷

6、一至二份。3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn),對照參照卷評分,若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似,即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分)；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù),則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)，但不得加或減半分。l 給分檔14分 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性較好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤,僅有個別小錯。11分 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語言錯誤。8分 基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚, 文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多,其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。5分 基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚,連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯誤。2分 條理不清,思路紊亂,語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤,且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。六、作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)示例

7、請對照評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，研究一下2002年12月四級考試作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)示例，找出失分的原因，以避免在自己的作文中出現(xiàn)。括號中為作者的點(diǎn)評。Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: It pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1. 當(dāng)前社會上存在許多不誠實(shí)的現(xiàn)象。2. 誠實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠

8、實(shí)。It Pays to Be Honest14 pointsAlthough honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.（第一句點(diǎn)明話題，同時用although引導(dǎo)的從句指出誠實(shí)是美德，為后文作了鋪墊，再用例子闡釋第一句提綱。）Dishonest people are

9、 short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. （從反面論述不誠實(shí)的壞處，得出結(jié)論） Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise no

10、t only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally sp

11、eaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. （從其它方面認(rèn)述誠實(shí)的好處）In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest. （這兩句分別進(jìn)行了總結(jié)和點(diǎn)題）11 pointsNowadays, many people choose not be honest in

12、 our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to mak

13、e money, sometimes damaged the patients health, even their life.Seeing this situation, I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely,

14、 which helps to solve it. And the last, honesty surely helps to make the society more harmony.So, I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.這篇文章全部采取正面論述的方法，略顯蒼白和單調(diào)，但文章尚連貫。8 pointsIn our modern social life, there are many

15、examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in th

16、e kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourseives, but to others as well. If we are honest to others, we will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, fri

17、ends will not believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again!So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social.僅在第一段就有那么多的錯誤和不規(guī)范的表達(dá)，其余的就不用說了。好在還能扣題，連貫性也過得去。 5 pointsWith the development of modern economic and in

18、dustry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them awa

19、y, the revised the preservation date, and saled them again after several day. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest do

20、es not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realize the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest from now on and be honest on our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest then our country will be beautiful and wealthy.2 pointsNow in our soc

21、iety, many people are not honest in doing soming. we often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people

22、put the other things instead the cents. For another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others.I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our society develop. In doin

23、g everything we should be honest all, study, work, life and so on. If you re honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you good people. But if you dont be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first. 四級考試作文

24、作文題型  載自 雙博士網(wǎng)站     縱覽歷年的作文試題，我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)論說文占絕大多數(shù)，但近年應(yīng)用文有上升的勢頭（01.6、02.1是書信體，91.6、02.6是圖表作文）。就話題而言，主要有三大類：社會熱鬧話題、校園話題和日常生活話題。以下是歷年作文題的匯總與統(tǒng)計(jì)，建議大家研究一下它的出題規(guī)律并寫寫看。 一、 歷年四級考試作文題統(tǒng)計(jì)社會熱門話題(87.9) Women in Modern World(90.6) Make Our Cities Greener(91.1) Bicycle An Important

25、Means of Transport in China(91.6) Changes in Peoples Diet(94.1) The world Is Getting Smaller and Smaller.(96.1) The Two-day Weekend(96.6) Global Shortage of Fresh Water(98.1) Harmfulness of Fake Commodities.校園話題(88.6) An Early Morning Walk (記敘文)(92.6) How I overcome My Difficulties in Learning Engli

26、sh(94.6) My Ideal Job(95.6) Advantage of Job Interview.(97.6) Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus.(99.6) Reading Selectively Or Extensively?(00.1) How I Finance My College Education.(00.6) Is A Test of Spoken English Necessary?(01.1) How to Succeed in a Job Interview?(01.6) A letter to a Sc

27、hoolmate(02.1) A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.(02.6) Student Use of Computers.日常生活話題(89. 1) The Tape Recorder(90. 1) What Would Happen If There Were No Power(92.1) Is Failure a Bad Thing?(93.1)Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport.(95.1)Can Money Buy Happin

28、ess?(97.1) Practice Makes Perfect .(98.6) Do "Lucky Numbers" Really Bring Good Luck?(99.1)Don ' t Hesitate to Say "NO".(03.1) It Pays to Be Honest二、歷年考題匯總(注：    1. 每題前面的數(shù)字表示其考試年、月份，如：87.9表示這是87年9月的考題；2. 點(diǎn)擊這個數(shù)字可以查看該篇作文的范文；2. 題目后如有括號，其中的數(shù)字為字?jǐn)?shù)要求，如無特別說明，通常為100字)87.

29、9 Women in the Modern World  1. Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. _2. With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. _3. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. _88.

30、 6 An Early Morning Walk 1. One morning I got up very early, and everything around was very quiet. _2. When I arrived at the park, I found, to my surprise, that there were so many people there. _3. _Taking early morning walks makes a man healthy and wise.89. 1 The Tape Recorder1. The tape recor

31、der is one of the most welcome and popular electronic devices ever invented. _2. This device is useful in many ways. _3. However, it can also become a nuisance. _90. 1 What Would Happen If There Were No Power1. Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern lif

32、e. _2. If there were no electric power, _3. Therefore, _90.6 Make Our Cities Greener1. 城市綠化的現(xiàn)狀2. 綠化的好處（如：清潔空氣，美化城市，改善氣候等等）3. 怎樣才能實(shí)現(xiàn)綠化91.1 Bicycle An Important Means of Transport in China1. 為什么自行車在中國這樣普及2. 和汽車的比較3. 自行車在中國的前途91.6 Changes in Peoples DietStudy the following table carefully and your comp

33、osition must be based on the information in the table. Write three paragraphs to:(1) state the changes in peoples diet（飲食）in the past five years;(2) give possible reasons for the changes;(3) draw your own conclusions.You should quote as few figures as possible.      

34、60;                          YearFood 1986 1987 1988 1989 1990 Grain 49% 47% 46.5% 45% 45% Milk 10% 11%&#

35、160;11% 12% 13% Meat 17% 20% 22.5% 23% 21% Fruit and Vegetables 24% 22% 20% 20% 21% Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100% 92.1 Is Failure a Bad Thing1. 失敗是常有的事2. 人們對失敗有各種不同的態(tài)度3. 我對失敗的態(tài)度92.6 How I overco

36、me My Difficulties in Learning English1. 你在英語學(xué)習(xí)中有哪些困難？2. 我是如何克服這些困難的？93.1 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport.1. 體育運(yùn)動的好處;2. 體育運(yùn)動可能帶來的副作用;3. 我參加體育運(yùn)動的體會93.6 My Most Favorite Programm1.我最喜愛的電視（或無線電）節(jié)目是.2.這類節(jié)目的內(nèi)容和特點(diǎn)3.我喜歡它的原因 You can write the composition in one. or more paragraphs. Remember to w

37、rite it neatly.94.1 The world Is Getting Smaller and Smaller 1. 現(xiàn)代化的交通工具越來越發(fā)達(dá)2. 人與人之間的交往越來越頻繁3. 結(jié)論94.6 My Ideal Job1. 人們對職業(yè)各有不同的理想2. 我理想的職業(yè)是什么3. 我怎樣為我理想的職業(yè)作準(zhǔn)備95. 1 Can Money Buy Happiness? 1.有人認(rèn)為金錢是幸福之本(source of happiness)        2.也有人認(rèn)為金錢是萬惡之源(root

38、 of all evil)      3.我的看法95. 6 Advantage of Job Interview 1. 現(xiàn)在找工作一般都要面試，通過面試，面試者（interviewer）和應(yīng)試者（interviewee）可以相互了解情況。2.面試者可以向應(yīng)試者介紹情況如工作性質(zhì)、條件、待遇等。3.應(yīng)試者也有機(jī)會給對方留下一個好印象，如可以表現(xiàn)出自信心，可以介紹教育背景，工作能力等。96. 1 The Two-day Weekend 1. 雙休日給大學(xué)生帶來的好處。2雙休日可能給大學(xué)生帶來的問題。3我應(yīng)當(dāng)怎樣過發(fā)了

39、雙休日96. 6 Global Shortage of Fresh Water 1人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水）2.實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（ 提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加， 污染）3.我們應(yīng)該怎么辦。97.1 Practice Makes Perfect 1怎樣理解“熟能生巧”？2例如：在英語學(xué)習(xí)中3又如97.6 Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus 1大學(xué)生了解社會的必要性2了解社會的途徑(大眾媒介，社會服務(wù)等)3我打算怎么做98. 1 Harmfulness of Fake Commodi

40、ties 1.目前社會上有不少假冒偽劣商品(fake commodities)。為什么會有這種現(xiàn)象？2.舉例說明假冒偽劣商品對消費(fèi)者個人，社會等的危害。98.6 Do "Lucky Numbers" Really Bring Good Luck?1.有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運(yùn)2.我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無關(guān).99. 1 Don ' t Hesitate to Say "NO" 1. 別人請求幫助時，在什么情況下我們說"不"2. 為什么有些人在該說"不"的時候不說"不"3.

41、該說"不"時不說"不"的壞處99. 6 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 1.有人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書3.我的看法2000.1 How I Finance My College Education 1. 上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用(tuition and fees)可以通過多種途徑解決2. 哪種途徑適合于我( 說明理由)2000.6 Is A Test of Spoken English Necessary? 1. 很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是.2. 也有人持不同意見

42、.3. 我的看法和打算Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?A test of spoken English will be included as an optional (component of the College English Test (CET) _.2001.1 How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 1.面試在求職過程中的作用2.取得面試因素：儀表，舉止談吐，能力，專業(yè)知識，自信，實(shí)事求是.2001. 6 A letter to a Schoolmate Suppose you are

43、Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.1. 表示歡迎2. 提出對度假安排的建議3. 提醒應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)2002.1 A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus假設(shè)你是李明，請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表揚(yáng)，可以是批評建議，也可以兼而有之。Ja

44、nuary 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President,_                            Liming2002. 6 Student Use of Computers  1. 上圖所求為1990年、1995年、2000年某校大學(xué)生使用計(jì)算機(jī)的情況，請描述其變化；2. 請說

45、明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計(jì)算機(jī)的用途、價格或社會發(fā)展等方面加以說明；）3. 你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計(jì)算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題。2002.12 It pays to Be HonestYou should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1. 當(dāng)前社會上存在許多不誠實(shí)的現(xiàn)象。2. 誠實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實(shí)。三、參考范文87.9 Women in the Modern WorldWomen are playing an increasingly important part in s

46、ociety today. In many countries, more and more women are no longer housekeepers. They have their own jobs as workers, farmers or even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs that men can do are done equally well by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their soc

47、ial role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husbands and wives are now more equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together and share happiness with each other. Also, in todays families, it is more and more rare to find women busy with cooking while the men

48、 are sitting comfortably in armchairs, reading newspapers.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard against their rights and regard women as incapable creatures. Few women are allowed to attend important international m

49、eetings dominated by men. That is really the problem we should solve immediately.88. 6 An Early Morning Walk One morning I got up very early, and everything around was very quiet. As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a walk to the park. While I was walking, I found that there were only som

50、e young men running in the street. They looked healthy and happy.When I arrived at the park, I found, to my surprise, that there were so many people there. Some of them were doing morning exercise. Others were practicing kung fu. The rest, especially old people, were taking walks. They seemed to loo

51、k younger than their real ages.An early morning walk can help one to keep fit and work efficiently. It can change ones mood and make ones life happier. I think that everyone, young or old, female or male, should get up early and take morning walks. Taking early morning walks makes a man healthy and

52、wise.89. 1 The Tape RecorderThe tape recorder is one of the most welcome and popular electronic devices ever invented. Nowadays, almost every family has a tape recorder. It can record peoples voices or popular songs or some other things that people would like to listen to more than once. Tape record

53、ers have been warmly welcomed since the day they were invented.This device is useful in many ways. For example, a reporter can use it in interviews instead of the old, less accurate means of writing them in a notebook. Also, in studying foreign languages, students can use it to improve their listeni

54、ng ability. Moreover, they can record their own voice to improve their pronunciation in the foreign language.However, it can also become a nuisance. Your hearing can be seriously harmed if you listen to a recorder with the volume too high. And, if you cant control yourself, you can waste a lot of ti

55、me listening to a recorder. So, if used properly, the recorder will serve you well. If used improperly, it can do harm to you.90. 1 What Would Happen If There Were No Power1. Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. It plays an important role in man

56、y fields such as industry, agriculture and the daily life of men. Electricity is a source of energy that makes it possible for the factories to turn out products and for people to create comfortable living conditions, for example.2. If there were no electric power, things would be quite different. M

57、achines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what is essential for them to keep alive. Traffic would have to stop at night because there would be no lights in the street. A world in darkness would no longer be a pleasant one. In a word, things would be in a mess

58、.3. Therefore, we should realize the importance of electricity. As electricity is insufficient in our country, we should be frugal in using electricity. We should make great efforts to produce more electricity.90.6 Make Our Cities GreenerRecent efforts toward the greening of our cities have achieved much, although the results are still far from satisfactory. In recent years many trees have been planted in the cities and muc