高中英語寫作

1、WelcomeWriting tipsBeautify your Composition遇難心不慌，遇難心不慌，遇易心更細(xì)。遇易心更細(xì)。 1.所選題材及體裁都非常貼近考生生活所選題材及體裁都非常貼近考生生活 實際實際，具有時代特點具有時代特點，緊扣與學(xué)生相關(guān)的，緊扣與學(xué)生相關(guān)的 社會熱點及學(xué)生的生活與學(xué)習(xí)。社會熱點及學(xué)生的生活與學(xué)習(xí)。 2.詞數(shù)要求從詞數(shù)要求從100左右，既要求表左右，既要求表 達(dá)事實信息，又要陳述個人觀點，對考達(dá)事實信息，又要陳述個人觀點，對考 生生思維和表達(dá)能力思維和表達(dá)能力的要求提高了。的要求提高了。 3.開頭或結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)給出，無文體要開頭或結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)給出，無文體要 求，

2、求，主要考查考生的表達(dá)能力。主要考查考生的表達(dá)能力?，F(xiàn)在正是春暖花開的春游時節(jié)。你校學(xué)生以現(xiàn)在正是春暖花開的春游時節(jié)。你校學(xué)生以“高高三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動”展開了討論。請客展開了討論。請客觀的介紹以下討論結(jié)果。觀的介紹以下討論結(jié)果。的學(xué)生認(rèn)為的學(xué)生認(rèn)為的學(xué)生認(rèn)為的學(xué)生認(rèn)為應(yīng)該春游應(yīng)該春游不應(yīng)該春游不應(yīng)該春游接觸大自然，呼吸新接觸大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣，有利健康鮮空氣，有利健康高考臨近，沒有心情高考臨近，沒有心情玩玩活動是精神放松，大活動是精神放松，大腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí)腦休息，有利于學(xué)習(xí)春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí)春游耽誤學(xué)習(xí) Key words:1.introduction(topi

3、c):高三學(xué)生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）討論（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas): 接觸自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鮮空氣（ breathe some fresh air ）精神放松（relax themselves ）大腦休息（rest their brains ）3.高考臨近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）沒心情玩（dont feel like going ）耽誤學(xué)習(xí)(waste the time) Whethe

4、r or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselv

5、es for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think go

6、ing spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies. Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. The reasons can be listed as follow. _, most families are too poor to send their children to school

7、. _, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. as a result; In addition ; To begin with ; HoweverTo begin withAs a result使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 Use proper linking words _, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they dont let them go to school. _,

8、some children are not interested in their studies. _, some wouldnt like to go to school. In my opinion; Finally ; To make matters worse ; In additionIn additionFinallyTo make matters worse As far as Im concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _, the whole society should put gr

9、eat emphasis on childrens education _ theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day. besides; However ; because ; Therefore Besidesbecause詞匯使用的原則詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝 1、詞組優(yōu)先原則、詞組優(yōu)先原則2、地道原則。、地道原則。3、避免重復(fù)原則、避免重復(fù)原則4、后、后、高高、長原則長原則 后學(xué)到、較高級、較長詞匯。后學(xué)到、較高級、較長詞匯。四項原則四項原則1、詞組優(yōu)先原則、詞組優(yōu)先原則

10、原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2、地道原則、地道原則原文Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge.修正Through traveling, I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.4、后高長原則后學(xué)到、較高級、較長詞匯。原 詞 替換詞important be of importancevery rather extremelypay atten

11、tion to attach importance tohappy delighted enjoyablemore and more the increasing number of3、避免重復(fù)原則、避免重復(fù)原則原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式使用較豐富的句式1. When he arrived,

12、he gave me an e-mail immediately. (使用使用V-ing形式形式)2. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (省略主語和省略主語和 be動詞動詞) _, he gave me an e-mail immediately.When arriving/On his arrival,_,it can never be forgotten.Once seen3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句)4. Peopl

13、e suggest that the conference be put off. (改為改為it作形式主語作形式主語that做真正主語做真正主語)_the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that_the conference be put off.It is suggested that5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用使用notuntil的強調(diào)的強調(diào)句型句型)6. I pass

14、ed the physics exam because of your help. (用虛擬語氣）用虛擬語氣）_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened. _the physics exam _your help. It was not until thatI couldnt have passed but for without 7. I wont believe what he says. (使用狀語使用狀語 從句從句)8. The girl is spoken highly of. Her comp

15、osition was well written. (用定語從句用定語從句)_he says, I wont believe. The girl_is spoken highly of. No matter whatwhose composition was well writtenWhatever9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）（用并列句）10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句使用倒裝句)_he c

16、ome back from Beijing _he was sent abroad._make rapid progress.Study hard, and youllNo sooner had than Hardly . when.走近高考范文走近高考范文Fill in the blanks（2010 山東）山東）1._(眾所周知）眾所周知）that China is a country with a long history.2._ (隨著春隨著春節(jié)的臨近），節(jié)的臨近），people will hold all varieties of activities.3._(自從自從我見過史密斯先

17、生已經(jīng)好久了）我見過史密斯先生已經(jīng)好久了）and I miss him a lot.It is well knownWith the Spring Festival drawing nearIt has been a long time since I saw Mr. Smith（2011 北京北京）1.We bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,_ (一路上有說有笑）一路上有說有笑）.2._(一到達(dá)），一到達(dá)）， we began to work immediately.3._ (看到一排排的看到一排排的樹），樹），we all have a sens

18、e of achievement.talking and laughing all the wayUpon arrivalSeeing the lines of trees書寫潦草、字?jǐn)?shù)不夠書寫潦草、字?jǐn)?shù)不夠或未能傳達(dá)讀者任何信息，得或未能傳達(dá)讀者任何信息，得 分分 0 卷面不整潔卷面不整潔; ; 涂改較多涂改較多; ;語言語言 錯誤多錯誤多; ;層次不清層次不清; ;得得 分分5Not good!Worse!Neat! Practice 目前，許多學(xué)校對學(xué)生采取封閉式管理，學(xué)生對此看法不一。目前，許多學(xué)校對學(xué)生采取封閉式管理，學(xué)生對此看法不一。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。請根?jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 學(xué)校限制我們的自由；學(xué)學(xué)校限制我們的自由；學(xué)生和社會接觸少；學(xué)生的生和社會接觸少；學(xué)生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分興趣和愛好不