中考英語作文-句子美化課件

1、How to beautify your sentences?一、如何使用高級詞匯 1擇詞要準確、貼切。 He is a good man. He is good-looking.He is a kind-hearted man.He is handsome.2表達新穎、尋求亮點。It is more and more difficult to find jobs in China nowadays.Its really a difficult task for me.increasingly difficultchallenging選詞時適當選用別人使用較少的詞，可以使自己與眾不同，從而取得

2、出奇制勝的效果。3短語替詞、展示實力。(1)I have _ to study English better this term.(同義詞decided)(2)I _ how to enlarge my vocabulary. (同義詞dont know)(3)We will _ the matter _ (同義詞consider)(4) He _ music so much that he devotes much time to it.(同義詞likes）made up my mindhave no ideatake into account /consideration如果能用短語代替單

3、詞，一方面會使文章生動，另 一方面則會展示你的實力，這會使閱卷老師對你刮目相看，從而提高文章的檔次。is fond of 在寫作中，我們運用并列連詞合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列連詞有and， but， or， nor， so， yet， for， as well as， bothand，notbut， not onlybut (also)， eitheror， neithernor，(and) then， since等。4. 使用并列連詞【課堂練習】用并列連詞合并每一組句子。John wanted to settle down. His wife also wanted to settl

4、e down.2. He got a job as a manager in New York City. He was looking for a house to live in.John, as well as his wife, wanted to settle down. He got a job as a manager in New York City and he was looking for a house to live in. 3. He found a house not far from his office. The house was not far from

5、his childrens school.He found a house neither far from his office nor far from his childrens school. 4. The house was not big. The house had a beautiful garden. The house was not big, but had a beautiful garden. 5. His wife liked their new home. His children also like their new home very much.Not on

6、ly his wife but also his children liked their new home very much.5巧用習語、引人入勝。(1)He promised to show us around the city，but soon he ate his words.(2)Many families used to struggle to make ends meet.(3)He has been a laughing stock of the class.(4)Why did she turn a deaf ear to what I said?語言是文化的載體，習語又是

7、語言的精華。恰當?shù)厥褂盟?，會給文章增色，加強文章的感染力，從而引人入勝。收回前言使收支相抵笑柄置若罔聞、不理睬6引用諺語。和漢語一樣，英語中也有大量諺語。若能在寫作中恰當運用，會給文章增色不少。(1)Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.(2)Where there is a will, there is a way.(3)He who laughs last laughs best.(4)It is no use crying over spilt milk.(5)Practice makes perfect.(6) Every

8、 coin has two sides.【體驗寫作】.用更貼切的詞來代替畫線的詞1Terry is such a good boy that every student wants to get along with him. 2It is cold this winter. A drop of water will freeze in no time. 3He is a nice student. He often makes us laugh and we have much fun with him. 4Peter is good to others. He always gives a

9、way things to those in trouble.5The house is good .Look at the sofas，tables and so on.well-furnishedkind-heartedfreezinghumorousgenerous.用正確的固定短語替換畫線部分(不得改變句意) 1The club has twenty members.2The dog sensed danger and ran away. 3He said he would help me if necessary.4Surprisingly，the little girl knows

10、 so many things.5They advised me on how to solve the problem.6The man is jobless and he feels upset. 7When I saw the horse，I began to cheer up.is made up of/ consists ofwas aware ofgive me a hand/come to my aidTo our surprisegave me some adviceout of work/out of a jobcaught sight of二、如何使用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)1為了達

11、到簡潔的目的，我們常常用短語來代替句子。這其中包括：(1)不定式短語You are so kind that you help me.You are so kind as to help me.Its so kind of you to help me.(2)過去分詞短語The teacher walked out of the lab and some students followed him.The teacher walked out of the lab，followed by some students.(3)現(xiàn)在分詞和動名詞短語If you stand here, you can

12、 see it clearly.Standing here, you can see it clearly.(4)with復合結(jié)構(gòu)The teacher walked out of the lab and some students followed him.The teacher walked out of the lab, with some students following him.(5) 獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)If the weather permits，Ill come tomorrow.Weather permitting，Ill come tomorrow.2使用復合句把兩個以上的簡單

13、句連接起來，使句子變得簡潔、緊湊。（1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. The reason why the girl is spoken highly of is that her composition was well written.（2）I live in a small town. It is about 20 kilometers away from the

14、city. I live in a small town which is about 20 kilometers away from the city. （3）In the past，we planted many trees here. Now，no trees can be seen except heavy smoke and dark rivers.Although we planted many trees here, no trees can be seen now except heavy smoke and dark rivers.3選擇別人少用的句式或結(jié)構(gòu)將會使你的文章“不

15、同凡響”。(1)倒裝句They are so grateful to their partners that they dont know what to do.So grateful are they to their partners that they dont know what to do.(2)強調(diào)句What he said at the meeting surprised everybody.It was what he said at the meeting that surprised everybody.4為了使句子表達生動，可使用感嘆句和反問句He has made gr

16、eat progress in recent years.What great progress he has made in recent years!They believe what you said.Dont they believe what you said?5.我們也可以使用比喻、擬人等修辭手法。修辭手法能給讀者留下較深刻的印象，具有強大的感染力。(1)To finish the work ahead of time，they have been as busy as a bee recently.(2)August 8th,2008 saw Beijing holding th

17、e opening ceremony of the 29th Olympic Games.另外，句式也要精心選擇。如談到環(huán)境保護時，We must take measures to protect our environment 遠遠不如Measures must be taken to protect our environment.表達有力?！倔w驗寫作】.用正確的語法結(jié)構(gòu)來替換下列畫線的句子(注意不得改變句意)1. When you are trapped in the fire, keep calm.2. Because he has so many things to do, he f

18、eels stressful.3. As he has been sentenced to 15 years in prison, Jim is in a hopeless state.4. When he saw his mother, the boy ran up to her.5. As it has hosted the 29th Olympics success-fully, Beijing becomes a hit.(When )trapped in the fireWith/Having so many things to do(Having been)Sentenced to

19、 15years in prisonSeeing his motherHaving hosted 1.如果他聽了我的話，他就不會失去他的工作。(follow)_, he wouldnt have lost his job.2. 隨著考試的到來，學生們忙著他們的學業(yè)。(approach)With _, the students are busy with their studies.3.房價將要下跌的消息使得很多人以更低的價格出售了他們的房子。(fall)The news _ has caused many people to sell their houses at lower price.4. 受到老師的表揚，他又恢復了自信。(praise)_,he regained confidence.5.任何別的地方你不可能看到像武漢一樣多的橋(nowhere)_so many grand bridges as in Wuhan.If he had followed my advicethe exam approachingthat house prices will fallHaving been praised by the teacherNowhere else can you see修改下面2段話，使其簡潔、連貫、緊