寫作中高級(jí)句式的使用

1、 The usage of highlighted patterns Binxian No.1 senior schoolYuan Xiuying1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 2. 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。 3. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。 4. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。 5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 6. 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)“最高檔”要求應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。How to write sentences liked by grading people?Advanced

2、 grammar(高級(jí)語法結(jié)構(gòu))獨(dú)立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu) (independent nominativeing /ed form)倒裝句(inverted sentences)強(qiáng)調(diào)句(It isthat)和it的使用各種從句(clauses)特殊句式(special patterns)_(在他的指導(dǎo)下), we have completed the experiment.He works in a factory_ (生產(chǎn)Toyota的)._(去年建造的橋)is the longest one here. _(解釋幾遍了), the problem is still troubling me.Dir

3、ected by himproducing ToyotaThe bridge built last yearHaving been explained many timesPattern1:獨(dú)立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)/He derecting us1._(在他的指導(dǎo)下)，we finished the work on time.2._(作業(yè)做了)，Tom began to watch TV.3. _(后很多工作要做)，I cant going shopping with him.With him directing usWith his homework finishedWith so much wo

4、rk to doPattern 2:with+complex object(復(fù)合賓語)On the top of the hill_(有座寺廟)._(她那樣聰明) that she got the answer easily.Only in this way_(你才能學(xué)好英語)._(她不僅聰明)but also she works hard at his lessons.stands a templeSo clever is shecan you learn English well Not only is she cleverPattern 3: Inversion (倒裝)It is th

5、at是中國的快速發(fā)展讓老外們驚訝。直到八點(diǎn)鐘他才就寢。It is the fast development of China that surprises the foreigners.It was not until eight oclock that he went to bed. Pattern 4: emphasis (強(qiáng)調(diào))I will appreciate it ifIt is obvious/ true/ positive thatIt is generally accepted that.It is said that he has finished his new book.

6、 As is said, he has finished his new book.It is the first time that I have seen the school. It happened that you were not at home. Pattern 5: the usage of it (it的使用)Binxian No. 1 Senior High is the school_ I am studying.I have made great progress, _ made my parents very happy._(他說的一番話) encouraged us

7、 greatly.Bob was a naughty boy, but_ _(他今非昔比了)whichWhat he said now he is not what he waswhere/ in whichPattern 6：Clauses（從句）First, I have to make myself known. 譯：Tom is working hard to_(使他的漢語更好).我認(rèn)為保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的責(zé)任。make his Chinese better I consider it our duty to protect the environment Pattern 7：Comple

8、x object 首先，我得讓別人明白我的意思。* Personalized expression(擬人化表達(dá)): He was seen playing football last Sunday. 試譯：最近三十年見證了中國的快速發(fā)展。* Adjective phrase(形容詞短語）: I am very happy to meet you here. _ (我再同意不過第一種觀點(diǎn))。Last Sunday saw him playing football.I cant be happier to meet you hereI cant agree more with the first

9、opinionPattern 8: special pattern (特殊句式) 假如你是張華， 住在哈爾濱市。你的加拿大筆友Bob 來信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)哈爾濱的情況。請(qǐng)你用英語給他回一封email。Email須包括下表中的內(nèi)容：自然情況位于松花江邊、風(fēng)景優(yōu)美、適合居住成就經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速、新建了不少工廠、住房、道路等存在問惡水、空氣污染 人們飽受其害交通擁擠 出行不便對(duì)哈爾濱發(fā)展的看法內(nèi)容由考生自定注意：詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：經(jīng)濟(jì)economyAn exampleThe city stands on the bank of Songh

10、ua River. It isa beautiful place to live and its economy has beendeveloping rapidly in the past ten years. Newfactories, houses and roads have been built. Moreschools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such aswater and air pollution and heavy traffic i

11、n rushhours. In my opinion, Harbin should develop itseconomy scientifically. I would also think that thegrowth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in life. What do you think of it ? Why ?The city stands on the bank of Songhua River. It isa beautiful

12、place to live and its economy has beendeveloping rapidly in the past ten years. Newfactories, houses and roads have been built. Moreschools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such aswater and air pollution and heavy traffic in rushhours. In my opinion,

13、 Harbin should develop itseconomy scientifically. I would also think that thegrowth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in life. Have a try!The city stands on the bank of Songhua River. It is a beautiful place to live and its economy has been develop

14、ing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built.Sentence 1：The city which stands on the Songhua River is Harbin. Sentence 2：It is The songhua River that the city stands on.Sentence 1: It is in the city that more and more schools , hospitals and roads are available for people.More schools and hospitals are available for its people.However, there are still some problems, such aswater and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.Sentence 1:In my opinion, Harbin should deve