Unit1單元話題寫作指導(dǎo)課件2021-2022學(xué)年人教版八年級英語上冊

1、Unit1 Writing -talk about festival activities 本單元以談?wù)摴?jié)假日活動為話題展開，要求學(xué)生們會運用一般過去時態(tài)寫一篇自己的旅行日記。日記屬于典型的記敘文，首先要注意其格式，其次在寫作時要注意時間、地點、人物、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果等。同時要注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，在結(jié)尾處最好表達出自己的感受。寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：1.I arrived in Penang in Maleysia this morning with my family.今天早上我和我的家人抵達了馬來西業(yè)。2.It was sunny and hot.天氣晴朗而炎熱。3.I felt li

2、ke Iwas a bird.我感覺自己就像一只鳥。（比喻句）4.For lunch，we had something very special.午餐我們吃了一些特別的東西。5.I like this place because I learned something important.我喜歡這個地方因為我學(xué)到了一些重要的東西。6.We/I had a good time there.我們/我在那里玩得很開心。7.I went to Guizhou with my family.我和我家人去了貴州。8.We took quite a few photos there.我們在那里拍了不少照片。

3、9.It was my first time there，so everything was really interesting.這是我第一次到那兒，所以一切都真的很有趣。10.I bought something for my parents.我給我父母買了一些東西。11.It was sunny and hot.天氣晴朗并且炎熱。12.It was so wonderful/exciting.那太精彩了/太激動人心了。13.The food there was delicious and the people there were very friendly. 那里的食物很美味，那里的人

4、很友好。題目：本周一是端午節(jié)，你校外教Tony對中國文化很感興趣，你陪他去槐蔭公園觀看了龍舟裹。請根據(jù)下提示寫一篇日記.寫作要點1.現(xiàn)場情況。人多擁擠，16支龍舟隊競爭激烈人們歡呼，隊員們閉隊合作，最終勇氣隊獲勝。2.賽后活動我給Tony介紹端午節(jié)，下午帶他參加有關(guān)端午節(jié)的其它活動，如3.感想 Tony.，我.寫作要求1.短文內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點、語句通順，條理清晰;2.省略號處須作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（1-2句即可;)3.100詞左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。第一步：仔細(xì)審題1、格式-2、時態(tài)-3、人稱-4、體裁-日記一般過去時態(tài)第一人稱題目：本周一是端午節(jié)，你校外教Tony對中國文化很感興趣，

5、你陪他去槐蔭公園觀看了龍舟裹。請根據(jù)下提示寫一篇日記.記述文第二步：謀篇布局第一段 Today is the Dragon Boat Festival 。For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture.I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 c

6、olorful dragon boats floating in the river.During the race,the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.介紹端午節(jié)現(xiàn)場的情況題目：本周一是端午節(jié)，你校外教Tony對中國文化很感興趣，你陪他去槐蔭公園觀看了龍舟裹。請根據(jù)下提示寫一篇日記.第二步：謀篇布局第二段 A

7、fter the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival.We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.介紹賽后活動第二步：謀篇布局第三段 At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional

8、 Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.賽后感想。Sample Writing Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture.I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning W

9、hen we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river.During the race,the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won. After the competition, I introd

10、uced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival.We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition. At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud

11、of my great motherland.現(xiàn)場寫作1 假如你是李華，今年五一節(jié)你和你的父母一起去岳陽游玩了。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇日記，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。日期5月1日天氣晴朗行程上午游覽洞庭湖（Dongting Lake）、參觀君山公園中午在一家餐館吃牛肉面，下午參觀名勝古跡岳陽樓（Yueyang Tower）感受雖然有點累，但是很開心。Sample Writing Sunny May 1st I had a school trip to Yueyang with my parents on On May 1.It was sunny.We visited the Dongt

12、ing Lake and Junshan Park in the morning. There were lots of people.At noon, we had beef noodles at a restaurant.In the afternoon, we visited Yueyang Tower and took some photos there.Yueyang is a beautiful city. When I came back,I felt a little tried but very happy. All in all, it was an exciting da

13、y. 寫作指導(dǎo)：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文日記的寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)根據(jù)題目提示的內(nèi)容，敘述五一節(jié)和父母一起去岳陽游玩的過程，內(nèi)容包括日期、天氣、行程、感受。本文應(yīng)用第一人稱來敘述內(nèi)容，時態(tài)采用一般過去時。在敘述內(nèi)容時，力求語句通順、語法正確、敘述完整，保證條理清晰，行文連貫?，F(xiàn)場寫作2今天是周日，天氣晴朗，你和朋友去心湖公園游玩。請根據(jù)下面所給提示寫一篇日記，記錄本次活動并簡要談?wù)勀愕母惺芎蛯敉饣顒拥目捶?。?nèi)容提示1、到達上午9點，返回下午5點;2.活動乘船、搭帳篷、放風(fēng)箏、騎行、野餐. 3.你對本次活動的感受和對戶外運動的看法。寫作要求1.詞數(shù)80左右，已給出的句子不計入總詞數(shù);2.內(nèi)容完整并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

14、;全文連貫、通順;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名。Sample WritingDear diary, Its Sunny today.My friends and I went to Xinhu Park. When we arrived at nine, we first took a boat to visit the Birds Island.Then we put up a tent,some were flying the kites and others were riding freely. It was cool and comfortable.Finally,we went for a picnic by the lake. When lunch was over, we sang so