中考英語作文專題復(fù)習(xí)課件

1、英語書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 2016.6.21書面表達(dá): 是中考英語中的必考題，約占卷面總分的20 分 。 中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一檔18-20分 包含所有要點，應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯， 用詞準(zhǔn)確、語法正確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強的語言運用能力。 二檔15-17 分 基本包含所有要點，應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，句子較通順，表達(dá)較清楚，但有少量錯誤。三檔10-14分 內(nèi)容包含了多數(shù)要點，語言表達(dá)過于簡單，句子不夠通順，有部分語言錯誤，基本上不影響總體理解。四檔5-9分 只包含了少數(shù)要點，語言不規(guī)范，句子無條理，行文不連貫，語言錯誤嚴(yán)重，影響理解。五檔0-5分 只寫出與要求的內(nèi)容相關(guān)

2、的一些信息詞語，語言錯誤多。大病指： 句子結(jié)構(gòu)、謂語構(gòu)成、詞序、 語態(tài)、時態(tài)等方面；小病指： 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、第三人稱單數(shù)、 拼寫、標(biāo)點符號、大小寫方面。 1.句型、結(jié)構(gòu) - 避免出現(xiàn)Chinglish 現(xiàn)象。 We all very like her.We all like her very much.He by bike to school. He goes to school by bike. 避免方法：多記短語和句型3 注意語法項目人稱一致: Alice is my best friend, he likes sports. 時態(tài): He went to Guilin yesterday.

3、主謂一致: This pair of shoes is mine. The shoes are new.習(xí)慣用法: He helps me with my English. 2.注意中文與英文標(biāo)點符號差異 、5、注意：重短輕長, 就易避難。 以寫正確、通順為最基本要求。 2. Mr Tang is the teacher that I like best. =Mr Tang is a teacher, I like him best.1.I have a friend is called Li Ming. 去掉 =I have a friend，he is called Li Ming.Let

4、s practice! 常見錯誤改正：1.He very much like action films.2.We are go to school from monday to friday.3. My family all likes dogs.4. We go to the Dalian by ship.5.One cant learns something at school.6.There is not a lot of trees besides the road.7.Lu Xun is a famous person I have ever met.8. I think go to

5、 school by bus is the best way.9. I think it is the best way to go to school take a bus.10. They dont know how to do.11. They dont know what to do it.11.They worked as teachers for 30 years. They have been teachers 30 years ago.12 I am used to read books before fall asleep.13.I without finished my h

6、omework because the electricity go off last night.14.There are million of people smoking in China.15.There are millions of money in the bank.16.We should help each others.17.Im student of No.3 Middle School.18.I dont like eat meat at all.19.He teach our English.20.I will go to there by bus .It is a

7、best way.How can we write a good composition?文章的形成過程：單詞 短語，結(jié)構(gòu) 句子 文章可見： 句子在書面表達(dá)中起著舉足輕重的作用，因此，句子的訓(xùn)練成為寫文章的必要手段之一。分析文章的形成過程 方法一：用以前所記憶的短語和結(jié)構(gòu)造句。他總是鼓勵我們努力學(xué)習(xí)。她的父母不允許她 晚上一個人出去。方法二:多記同義句和同義詞。他還沒到上學(xué)的年齡。He is so young that he cant go to school.He is such a young boy that he cant go to school.He is too young to

8、 go to school.He isnt old enough to go to school.He always encourages us to work hard. encourage sb to do sthsothat-such-that-tooto-enough-to do sth訓(xùn)練句子的方法： Her parents dont allow her to go out by herself at night. allow sb to do sth方法四：遇到難以表達(dá)的句子，可另辟蹊徑，化難為易，化繁為簡。1.我們應(yīng)該守時2.我們不應(yīng)該闖紅燈(traffic lights)我們應(yīng)

9、該按時做每件事.當(dāng)交通燈是紅燈時,我們不應(yīng)該過馬路.We should do everything on timeWe shouldnt go across the road when the traffic lights are red.審列擴連查謄書面表達(dá)七步法 列：用簡單的句子和短語列出文章的要點.書面表達(dá)第二步：列g(shù)o to school on foot every day. walk to school every day.2. remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans 3. turn off the tap， reus

10、e water. 4. make full use of paper.5. Dont use plastic bags I go to school on foot every day./ I walk to school every day.2. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.3. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water. for exam

11、ple, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers. 4. I think saving paper is necessary, so I make full use of paper.5. I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when I go shopping.為了銜接緊密和避免逐條翻譯的嫌疑，可以在適當(dāng)?shù)牡胤教砑邮吕蚓o密相連的話,然后連成句。擴：加首尾，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整。可以采用總分總，分總結(jié)構(gòu)。開頭和結(jié)尾應(yīng)注

12、意簡潔，漂亮，最好采用開門見山的形式，結(jié)尾應(yīng)注意與題目或開頭相呼應(yīng)，并且要扣題有力。書面表達(dá)第三步：擴 My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like having a low-carbon life.結(jié)尾：Its important for us to protect the environment. Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment. 開頭：（比較）連：恰當(dāng)運用連接詞，使文章層次清晰，各部分銜接自然。書面表達(dá)第四

13、步：連1.When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water. for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers。2.I think saving paper is necessary, so I make full use of paper恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 時間順序 first, second, then, finally/at last, soon,

14、 suddenly空間順序here, there, next to, in front of, at the back of對稱順序on one hand, on the other hand轉(zhuǎn)折順序but, however, though因果順序because, as, thanks to, as a result (of)條件if, unless遞進(jìn)順序whats more, besides,插入語I think, Im afraid, you know, as we all know書面表達(dá)第五步：美 美：寫好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。1.I think sav

15、ing paper is necessary, so I make full use of paper. I make full use of paper because I think saving paper is necessary .2.She can swim, so can I. She can swim, I can swim, too3. He helped an old man who was lost yesterday.He helped an old man yesterday, the old man was lost.betterbetter但要注意：一般的同學(xué)一定

16、要以寫正確/通順的簡單句為最基本要求，切勿一味地追求高水平，反而弄巧成拙。特別是第三句，我們班能正確運用定語從句寫句子的人不多。 謄：謄寫。將檢查后的作文整潔 地抄寫在橫線上 注意：橫線就是我們英語作業(yè)本的第三條線（基準(zhǔn)線），小寫字母 都要穿過這條線。 卷面整潔不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分。書面表達(dá)第七步：謄f /g /j /p /q /y My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like having a low-carbon life which is good to our world. I go to school o

17、n foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use pla

18、stic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. In my eyes, its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment. a nice head(總) a nice body（分）a nice tail（總）范文一 how to write a goodcomposition開頭:開門見山中間結(jié)尾:與主題相呼應(yīng) 強勁有力書面表達(dá) 七步法（審-列-擴-連-美-查-謄）抓要點找連接詞造好句連句成段假設(shè)你們班正在開展“爭當(dāng)文明學(xué)生”為主題班會的活動，同學(xué)們在討論會上都踴躍發(fā)言。請根據(jù)下列詞匯，以“To be polite students”為題用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。字?jǐn)?shù)80作左右.要點：1.在校對老師有禮貌； 2.按時