高中英語(yǔ)討論型作文 完整版課件

1、書面表達(dá)(滿分30分)1.暑假即將來(lái)臨，你班同學(xué)討論了假期計(jì)劃，提出了不同看法，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇關(guān)于討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?2006年陜西卷）優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)待在家中花費(fèi)少，舒適方便不能親身了解外界外出旅游增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，開(kāi)闊眼界（horizon/view）花費(fèi)多，旅途不便注意：1.詞數(shù)100-120 2.短文必須包括表中所列要點(diǎn)。 3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.convenient and com

2、fortablecost less / save money lose the chance of getting to know the outside world2. increase ones knowledge and broaden ones horizons/views1.(待在家中)花費(fèi)少，舒適方便 不能親身了解外界2.(外出旅游)增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，開(kāi)闊眼界花費(fèi)多，旅途不便 spend more money and meet some difficultiesbeginninghave different views on sth /react to sth in different w

3、ays.differ in their attitudes towards sth.conclusion my opinion(待在家中)(外出旅游)The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.someothersThe summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. People react to th

4、is problem in different ways. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more,they can save money for other purposes. But They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can incre

5、ase their knowledge and broaden their views. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home,I can do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping

6、my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel.詞匯,句型 , 語(yǔ)法多樣化 1.覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊要點(diǎn)全連接詞如何算是一篇好文章？1.(因?yàn)?_ his help, I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因?yàn)锽ecause of /with2.More roads will have to be bu

7、ilt with more cars, _（所以）well have less field to grow rice. thereforeso as a result/consequence thus 結(jié)果3.The rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。whats moremoreover/furthermorein addition besides 另外(遞進(jìn)）4. The young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反 ) he finds the new job ve

8、ry interesting. On the contrary,However,轉(zhuǎn)折But/yet/while5. _(總之), we should make good use of computer.In generalIn a word/all in all總結(jié)In short/briefGenerally speaking6._(我認(rèn)為) , students had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.As far as Im concerned

9、In my opinion/its my opinion that個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)I think/believe遞進(jìn)型：besides，whats more, what was worse, moreover , even等；解釋型：that is（to say），in other words，or，in the same way，等； 轉(zhuǎn)折型：however，but，yet，although，otherwise, instead等； 列舉型：firstlysecondlyfinally，first，at first，at last，next,舉例型：for example/instance, suc

10、h as, that is, like,等； 因果型：because（of），since，as，therefore，so，as a result，thanks to，thus，owing to，seeing that等； 讓步型：though，although，in spite of, despite, regardless of等； 時(shí)序型：firstnextand thenfinally，at the same time，meanwhile，firstthenafter thatfinally等； 并列型：and，or，also，as well as等； 時(shí)間型：now，just now，

11、just then，afterwards，soon，five minutes later，before long，shortly after that，to this day，soon after supper等；強(qiáng)調(diào)型：above all，indeed，surely，certainly，of course，after all，at least，at most，first of all，等； 歸納總結(jié)型：in conclusion，in a word，in the end，at last，finally，to sum up, in short, in general, generally sp

12、eaking, in all, in a word等； 一、適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍﹩卧~、詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采，豐富語(yǔ)氣的表現(xiàn)力。1.A new building is being built in our school.2. He pretended not to see the pretty girl. hear what I said. He turned a blind eye to the pretty girl. a deaf ear to what I said. A new building is under construction in our school.Writ

13、ing beautiful sentences3. It is raining heavily.4. The PRC was founded in the year 1949. It is raining cats and dogs. The year 1949 saw the foundation of the PRC.二、盡量避免過(guò)多地重復(fù)使用某一單詞。 1.I like reading while he likes playing football. 2. When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the n

14、ight is getting shorter and shorter. I like reading while he enjoys playing football.When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night shorter and shorter.Hardworking and careful, the girl passed the test.Its I who hit him in the face.How glad Im that you have made so much progr

15、ess.三、可適當(dāng)?shù)卮蚱瞥Ｒ?guī)，用一些倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句或感嘆句,可以為文意的表達(dá)增添一點(diǎn)新意。1. The girl was hardworking and careful, and she passed the test.2. I hit him in the face.3. I am glad that you have made so much progress.四、使用主從復(fù)合句、分詞、不定式等來(lái)代替簡(jiǎn)單句，能使書面表達(dá)行文更加流暢有力。He being humorous, we all like to play with him.In order to pass the entrance

16、 examination, we are studying hard. He lay on the grass, counting the stars in the sky.3. He was very humorous. We all like to play with him.2. We are studying hard in order to pass the entrance examination.1. He lay on the grass and counted the stars in the sky.五、改變句子開(kāi)頭方式，適當(dāng)?shù)匕岩恍┏煞萏崆拔挥诰渥拥拈_(kāi)頭，使整個(gè)句子讀起來(lái)

17、跌宕起伏，增加書面表達(dá)的表現(xiàn)力。Between the two buildings stood a temple, in which an old monk lived.On the surface of the river is floating the remains of Tom.Deep in thought, he forgot his lunch.1. A temple stood between the two buildings , in which an old monk lived.2. The remains of Tom is floating on the surfa

18、ce of the river.3. As he was deep in thought, he forgot his lunch.書面表達(dá)(滿分30分)當(dāng)前越來(lái)越多的人們關(guān)注住房問(wèn)題。有人喜歡住在傳統(tǒng)的房子里，有人喜歡住在公寓里，請(qǐng)你以“Live in a traditional house or live in an apartment”為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。1.住在傳統(tǒng)的房子里：可以在院子里種花，樹(shù)，可以養(yǎng)寵物，可以在院子里鍛煉身體。2.住在公寓里：干凈，安全，離工作地方近3.我的看法及理由。注意：詞數(shù)100-120，文章題目和開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)） Live in a tr

19、aditional house or live in an apartmentNowadays, more and more people/ a growing number of people pay more attention to their lives. Live in a traditional house or live in an apartmentNowadays, more and more people/ a growing number of people pay more attention to their lives. But people differ in t

20、heir opinions on the matter. Some people prefer to live in a traditional house. There might be several reasons, I think. In the first place, you can grow flowers and tress in the yard if you live in a traditional house. Besides, you can keep pets if you like . Finally, people can take exercise in th

21、e yard. However,some people prefer to live in an apartment. On one hand, it is clean and safe. On the other hand, it is close to your work. As far as Im concerned, I prefer living in a traditional house. My reason is that I like enjoying sunlight, especially in winter. Moreover, my grandparents woul

22、dnt happy if they live in an apartment. As they argue that it is not convenient for them to have outdoor activities. So I think living in a traditional house is good and healthy lifestyle .Part 1: (beginning)have different opinions on sth. react to sth in different waysdiffer in their attitudes towa

23、rds sthPart 2: (body) some. others/ prefer to do A.rather than do B.Part3: (conclusion) in a word / in short / in my opinion /I am in favor of the idea that/for/againststructure2006高考浙江卷書面表達(dá)(滿分30分) 當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請(qǐng)你以 “Film or book, which do you prefer？” 為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文：看電影：省時(shí)、有趣、易懂

24、讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美我的看法及理由注意：1. 詞數(shù)100-120，文章題目和開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)） 2. 參考詞匯： original work 或 book in the original（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer？ Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. Film or book, which do you prefer？ Some of us think that it is better to

25、 see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from

26、 the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.經(jīng)過(guò)調(diào)查，人們對(duì)于學(xué)生上網(wǎng)交友持不同意見(jiàn)（見(jiàn)下表）。