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1、如何進(jìn)行圖表式作文寫作 第1頁(yè)圖表式作文幾個(gè)形式:一是以表格形式,將統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)或被說(shuō)明事物直接用表格形式表達(dá)出來(lái),即統(tǒng)計(jì)表。二是以圖形形式 A 表示數(shù)據(jù)改變曲線圖; B 表示數(shù)據(jù)大小或數(shù)量之間差異 柱狀圖; C 表示總體內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)改變扇形圖Warming up第2頁(yè)Graph表示兩組數(shù)關(guān)系-通常為函數(shù)關(guān)系圖第3頁(yè)P(yáng)ie Chart餅狀圖第4頁(yè)Table矩形豎行和橫行進(jìn)行排列表格 Item19941995199619971998Food65%60%48%42%35%Clothing8%9%12%15%17%Recreation3%5%7%8%10%Others24%26%33%35%38%Total

2、100%100%100%100%100%第5頁(yè)Bar Chart / Graph 柱狀圖第6頁(yè)圖表式作文寫作分三步:第一步：開門見山地點(diǎn)明本圖表所反應(yīng)主題常使用詞匯有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe/ tell, show, represent等慣用句型：1.The graph/chart/table above shows 2. The result shows that3. As is shown in the graph, .4.The chart/table shows the differences between第7頁(yè)第二步：分析數(shù)據(jù)間主

3、要差異及趨勢(shì)，然后描寫（在描寫數(shù)據(jù)間改變及總趨勢(shì)特征時(shí)，可采取分類式或?qū)Ρ仁揭灾С种黝}，并說(shuō)明必要理由）。注意層次。 即 facts and reasons第8頁(yè)慣用轉(zhuǎn)折，對(duì)比及比較詞匯：While, but, on the contrary, however, compare withasas, the same as, be similar to, difference between, more than, less than第9頁(yè)慣用描寫趨勢(shì)改變?cè)~匯： Increase from to, rise, go up, reduce, drop, go down, fall, reach,

4、remain, slowly, slightly, gradually, rapidly, 及比較級(jí)，倍數(shù)句型等。第10頁(yè)慣用句型：Facts:1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in3.It is 20% lower/higher than4.The number is times as much as that of.5.By comparison with,it decreased/increased/fell fromto第11頁(yè)Reaso

5、ns:1.The reason for/whyis that2. Sb thinks is caused by3. The other parts of sb. consider as the major causes.4.There are several causes for this significant growth inFirst,Second,5.This brings out the important fact that第12頁(yè)第三步：歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評(píng)論。1.in a word,/ in short, /generally speaking2.Its clear from t

6、he chart that3.In summary, it is important4.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that5.There is no doubt that attention must be paid第13頁(yè)審題：（格式/人稱/時(shí)態(tài)/關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)/篇章結(jié)構(gòu)）summary: 對(duì)象、內(nèi)容、時(shí)間 tense facts : 描述抓關(guān)鍵；對(duì)比寫法 tense reasons：出現(xiàn)某種現(xiàn)象原因 tense-your own opinion/suggestions : tense-普通過(guò)去時(shí)有明

7、確過(guò)去時(shí)間狀語(yǔ) 用過(guò)去時(shí)；無(wú)明確年份，反應(yīng)一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象或介紹情況 用現(xiàn)在時(shí)普通現(xiàn)在時(shí)、普通過(guò)去時(shí)普通現(xiàn)在時(shí)、普通未來(lái)時(shí)Conclusion:第14頁(yè)第一節(jié) 情景作文（20分） 某英文報(bào)紙正在開展題為“中學(xué)生課堂注意力”專欄討論，你校準(zhǔn)備參加，并請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校寫一篇文章給該英文報(bào)紙投稿。下面圖表為你校調(diào)查結(jié)果，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)所提供信息做簡(jiǎn)明說(shuō)明，并依據(jù)提醒給出改進(jìn)提議。注意：圖中數(shù)據(jù)為學(xué)生人數(shù)百分比。改進(jìn)注意力提議：教室通風(fēng)、明亮課堂主動(dòng)參加課堂活動(dòng)課間適量活動(dòng)或適當(dāng)休息第15頁(yè)第一節(jié) 情景作文（20分） 某英文報(bào)紙正在開展題為“中學(xué)生課堂注意力”專欄討論，你校準(zhǔn)備參加，并請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校寫一篇文章給該英文

8、報(bào)紙投稿。下面圖表為你校調(diào)查結(jié)果，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)所提供信息做簡(jiǎn)明說(shuō)明，并依據(jù)提醒給出改進(jìn)提議。注意：圖中數(shù)據(jù)為學(xué)生人數(shù)百分比。第16頁(yè)第17頁(yè)改進(jìn)注意力提議：教室通風(fēng)、明亮課堂主動(dòng)參加課堂活動(dòng)課間適量活動(dòng)或適當(dāng)休息第18頁(yè)文章開頭 Our school has made/ made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. The result shows that第19頁(yè)The result shows that only 40% of th

9、e students can draw their attention to the class while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson.30% think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom.The other part of the students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major reason.第20頁(yè)Therefore, we advise /sugg

10、est that the classroom should be bright and the air inside should keep fresh.As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others and they can take some exercises outdoors or have a little rest in the classroom during the breaks,.第21頁(yè) 上周，我們以“誰(shuí)是你偶像”

11、為題，在2600名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查(survey)。以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)：寫作內(nèi)容 依據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇短文，包含以下內(nèi)容： 1調(diào)查時(shí)間、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對(duì)象；2男女生在以明星為偶像方面差異；3“父母”在男女生偶像中排序差異；4男女生在以偉人為偶像方面異同；5你偶像及理由。偶像女生男生偉人18%18%父母25%11%影視明星50%14%體育明星6%48%沒有偶像1%9%廣東省英語(yǔ)高考題基礎(chǔ)寫作第22頁(yè) Last week, we had a survey among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that 50% of

12、 the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, 18% of the girls choose “great figures”, that is, the percentage of the boys is the same as that of the gir

13、ls. My mother is my idol, because she not only gave birth to me, has brought me up and loves me but also supports our poor family. 第23頁(yè)非常喜歡：圖片漂亮， 激發(fā)興趣；課文有趣、 話題新奇；文化知識(shí)豐富、 幫助了解世界。不喜歡：生詞多、句子復(fù)雜、 影響了解；未發(fā)表意見廣州二模 基礎(chǔ)寫作結(jié)論：新教材幫助大部分學(xué)生提升了英語(yǔ)水平。80%喜歡5%未發(fā)表意見15%不喜歡第24頁(yè)I recently surveyed my classmates about their v

14、iews on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it, while 15% disliked it and 5% had no opinion. Students who liked it said the texts with beautiful pictures were very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots of cultural knowledge to learn about the world. However, students who disl