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1、如何進行圖表式作文寫作 第1頁圖表式作文幾個形式:一是以表格形式,將統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)或被說明事物直接用表格形式表達出來,即統(tǒng)計表。二是以圖形形式 A 表示數(shù)據(jù)改變曲線圖; B 表示數(shù)據(jù)大小或數(shù)量之間差異 柱狀圖; C 表示總體內(nèi)部結構改變扇形圖Warming up第2頁Graph表示兩組數(shù)關系-通常為函數(shù)關系圖第3頁Pie Chart餅狀圖第4頁Table矩形豎行和橫行進行排列表格 Item19941995199619971998Food65%60%48%42%35%Clothing8%9%12%15%17%Recreation3%5%7%8%10%Others24%26%33%35%38%Total

2、100%100%100%100%100%第5頁Bar Chart / Graph 柱狀圖第6頁圖表式作文寫作分三步:第一步：開門見山地點明本圖表所反應主題常使用詞匯有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe/ tell, show, represent等慣用句型：1.The graph/chart/table above shows 2. The result shows that3. As is shown in the graph, .4.The chart/table shows the differences between第7頁第二步：分析數(shù)據(jù)間主

3、要差異及趨勢，然后描寫（在描寫數(shù)據(jù)間改變及總趨勢特征時，可采取分類式或對比式以支持主題，并說明必要理由）。注意層次。 即 facts and reasons第8頁慣用轉折，對比及比較詞匯：While, but, on the contrary, however, compare withasas, the same as, be similar to, difference between, more than, less than第9頁慣用描寫趨勢改變詞匯： Increase from to, rise, go up, reduce, drop, go down, fall, reach,

4、remain, slowly, slightly, gradually, rapidly, 及比較級，倍數(shù)句型等。第10頁慣用句型：Facts:1.There was a great /slight increase /rise in2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in3.It is 20% lower/higher than4.The number is times as much as that of.5.By comparison with,it decreased/increased/fell fromto第11頁Reaso

5、ns:1.The reason for/whyis that2. Sb thinks is caused by3. The other parts of sb. consider as the major causes.4.There are several causes for this significant growth inFirst,Second,5.This brings out the important fact that第12頁第三步：歸納總結或發(fā)表評論。1.in a word,/ in short, /generally speaking2.Its clear from t

6、he chart that3.In summary, it is important4.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that5.There is no doubt that attention must be paid第13頁審題：（格式/人稱/時態(tài)/關鍵點/篇章結構）summary: 對象、內(nèi)容、時間 tense facts : 描述抓關鍵；對比寫法 tense reasons：出現(xiàn)某種現(xiàn)象原因 tense-your own opinion/suggestions : tense-普通過去時有明

7、確過去時間狀語 用過去時；無明確年份，反應一個普遍現(xiàn)象或介紹情況 用現(xiàn)在時普通現(xiàn)在時、普通過去時普通現(xiàn)在時、普通未來時Conclusion:第14頁第一節(jié) 情景作文（20分） 某英文報紙正在開展題為“中學生課堂注意力”專欄討論，你校準備參加，并請你代表學校寫一篇文章給該英文報紙投稿。下面圖表為你校調查結果，請你依據(jù)所提供信息做簡明說明，并依據(jù)提醒給出改進提議。注意：圖中數(shù)據(jù)為學生人數(shù)百分比。改進注意力提議：教室通風、明亮課堂主動參加課堂活動課間適量活動或適當休息第15頁第一節(jié) 情景作文（20分） 某英文報紙正在開展題為“中學生課堂注意力”專欄討論，你校準備參加，并請你代表學校寫一篇文章給該英文

8、報紙投稿。下面圖表為你校調查結果，請你依據(jù)所提供信息做簡明說明，并依據(jù)提醒給出改進提議。注意：圖中數(shù)據(jù)為學生人數(shù)百分比。第16頁第17頁改進注意力提議：教室通風、明亮課堂主動參加課堂活動課間適量活動或適當休息第18頁文章開頭 Our school has made/ made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period. The result shows that第19頁The result shows that only 40% of th

9、e students can draw their attention to the class while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson.30% think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom.The other part of the students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major reason.第20頁Therefore, we advise /sugg

10、est that the classroom should be bright and the air inside should keep fresh.As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others and they can take some exercises outdoors or have a little rest in the classroom during the breaks,.第21頁 上周，我們以“誰是你偶像”

11、為題，在2600名學生中進行了一次調查(survey)。以下是調查數(shù)據(jù)：寫作內(nèi)容 依據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇短文，包含以下內(nèi)容： 1調查時間、調查問題以及調查對象；2男女生在以明星為偶像方面差異；3“父母”在男女生偶像中排序差異；4男女生在以偉人為偶像方面異同；5你偶像及理由。偶像女生男生偉人18%18%父母25%11%影視明星50%14%體育明星6%48%沒有偶像1%9%廣東省英語高考題基礎寫作第22頁 Last week, we had a survey among 2600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that 50% of

12、 the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols, while 48% of the boys favor sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the fourth for the boys. However, 18% of the girls choose “great figures”, that is, the percentage of the boys is the same as that of the gir

13、ls. My mother is my idol, because she not only gave birth to me, has brought me up and loves me but also supports our poor family. 第23頁非常喜歡：圖片漂亮， 激發(fā)興趣；課文有趣、 話題新奇；文化知識豐富、 幫助了解世界。不喜歡：生詞多、句子復雜、 影響了解；未發(fā)表意見廣州二模 基礎寫作結論：新教材幫助大部分學生提升了英語水平。80%喜歡5%未發(fā)表意見15%不喜歡第24頁I recently surveyed my classmates about their v

14、iews on the new English textbook. According to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it, while 15% disliked it and 5% had no opinion. Students who liked it said the texts with beautiful pictures were very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots of cultural knowledge to learn about the world. However, students who disl