十一屆全國英語優(yōu)質(zhì)課Thank-you-notes-post-writing-modification課件

1、Thank-You NotesPost-Writing ModificationThank-You NotesPost-Writing M十一屆全國英語優(yōu)質(zhì)課Thank-you-notes-post-writing-modificationMr. Yang won the first placeWhat shouldMr. Yang say to the peoplewho helped him?Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!PreparationMr. Yang won the first placeWhNOPreparationNOPreparationOly

2、mpic WinnersPreparationOlympic WinnersPreparationthe story of the winnersPreparationthe story of the winnersPreparJenny the Olympic winnerPreparationJenny the Olympic winnerPrepar Dear Mom, When I was four, I started to learn skating. At first, it was difficult. I fell down again and again. Sometime

3、s I wanted to give up. But you cheered me up and taught me, “Falling only makes us stronger.” Your words were good for me. Finally, I became the winner. With your love, I could be successful. Yours,JennyJennys thank-you notePreparation Dear Mom,Jennys thank-you When I was four, I started to learn sk

4、ating. At first, it was difficult. I fell down again and again. Sometimes I wanted to give up. But you cheered me up and taught me, “Falling only makes us stronger.” Your words were good for me. Finally, I became the winner. With your love, I could be successful. Pay attention to the content.content

5、(內(nèi)容)Dear Mom,Yours,JennyPreparation Pay attention to the cont When I was four, I started to learn skating. At first, it was difficult. I fell down again and again. Sometimes I wanted to give up. But you cheered me up and taught me, “Falling only makes us stronger.” Your words were good for me. Final

6、ly, I became the winner. With your love, I could be successful. Thanksgiving Day is coming soon. Thank you. Thanks again. I love you. I wish you all the best. I want to tell the world Im so happy now. Better the layoutConstruction When I was four, I Body: StoryBeginning: ThanksEnding: Thanks & Wishe

7、sConstructionBetter the layout.More logical!Easier to understand.Body: StoryBeginning: ThanksEnMake feelings stronger ConstructionMake feelings stronger Constr Thanksgiving Day is coming soon. Thank you so much. When I was four, I started to learn skating. At first, it was quite difficult. I fell do

8、wn again and again. Sometimes I even wanted to give up. But you cheered me up and taught me, “Falling only makes us stronger.” Your words were like the brightest stars in the dark sky. Finally, I became the winner. Without your love, I could not be successful. Thanks again. I love you. I wish you al

9、l the best.Find out the differences Thanksgiving Day is coming soon. Thank you. When I was four, I started to learn skating. At first, it was difficult. I fell down again and again. Sometimes I wanted to give up. But you cheered me up and taught me, “Falling only makes us stronger.” Your words were

10、good for me. Finally, I became the winner. With your love, I could be successful. Thanks again. I love you. I wish you all the best. Passage 1Underlinedifferent sentencesin 1 minute. Passage 2Construction Thanksgiving Day is cominWhich has stronger feelings? Thank you.Thank you so much.It was diffic

11、ult.It was quite difficult.Passage 1Passage 2Sometimes I wantedto give up.Sometimes I even wanted to give up.Your words were good for me. Your words were like the brightest stars in the dark sky.With your love, I could be successful. Without your love, I couldnt be successful.ConstructionWhich has s

12、tronger feelings? T 1.Discuss what makes the feeling stronger? 2.Replace(替換) the underlined words.Group WorkConstruction 1.Discuss what makes the fWhat makes the feeling stronger?Thank you.Thank you so much.+ adv.PKConstructionWhat makes the feeling strongeIt was difficult.It was quite difficult.Wha

13、t makes the feeling stronger?PK+ adv.ConstructionIt was difficult.It was quite Sometimes I wantedto give up.Sometimes I even wanted to give up.What makes the feeling stronger?PK+ adv.ConstructionSometimes I wantedSometimes I Your words were good for me. Your words were like the brightest stars in th

14、e dark sky.Simile(比喻)What makes the feeling stronger?PKConstructionYour words were good for me. YWith your love, I could be successful. Without your love, I couldnt be successful.Doublenegative(雙重否定)What makes the feeling stronger?PKConstructionWith your love, I could be sucEverything is possible.No

15、thing is impossible.Doublenegative(雙重否定)PKConstructionEverything is possible.NothingSummaryHow to make feelings stronger?adverb (加副詞)simile (用比喻)double negative (用雙重否定)ConstructionSummaryadverb (加副詞)Constructio1.Write a beginning and an ending.2.Modify the note to make feelings stronger.simileadverb

16、doublenegativeDear English teacher, _ In Grade Seven, my English was bad. I was afraid to speak English and got bad grades. I was upset. You told me, “Be brave and active in class.” But it was difficult for me to do that. And you said, “Everybody can learn English well with hard work. Just smile to

17、difficulties!” Your love was great. Then, I spent much time on English study. At last, I improved. _ Yours,LeeProduction1.Write a beginning and an end1.Share your ideas.2.Choose the best to show.simileadverbdouble negativeDear English teacher, _ In Grade Seven, my English was bad. I was afraid to sp

18、eak English and got bad grades. I was upset. You told me, “Be brave and active in class.” But it was difficult for me to do that. And you said, “Everybody can learn English well with hard work. Just smile to difficulties!” Your love was great. Then, I spent much time on English study. At last, I improved. _ Yours,LeeProduction1.Share your ideas.simileadverShow TimeBe br