高中英語讀后續(xù)寫方法指導(dǎo)課件

1、讀后續(xù)寫1讀后續(xù)寫1評(píng)分原則：1）內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容的豐富性、故事發(fā)展的合理性，續(xù)寫的完整性2）詞匯語法：使用語言的多樣性、準(zhǔn)確性和恰當(dāng)性；（語言為交際服務(wù)，不可一味使用所謂“高級(jí)”語言，要與原文語言特點(diǎn)保持一致。）3）篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：上下文的銜接（包括續(xù)寫段落之間的銜接）連貫性；4）寫作規(guī)范： 詞數(shù)少于130的，扣2分； 拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤多將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次； 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次；2評(píng)分原則：2寫作步驟：“四步答題法”。 閱讀擬稿潤(rùn)色成稿。Step1 閱讀，理清故事情節(jié)，找出5W+1How。畫出關(guān)鍵詞，預(yù)測(cè)后續(xù)故事1. make sense of the main plots

2、of the passange.2. Analyze the two given sentences&underine key words to predict what is to follow.3寫作步驟：3Step2 擬稿Draft work out an outline Step 3 Polish 潤(rùn)色 1.Use the key words and phrases in the passange. 2.use different sentense structures.441句式要有變化 復(fù)合句 (主語賓語表語同謂語定語狀語從句) 倒裝句（1 ）否定詞置于句首（2）only+狀語置于

3、句首 強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It is that (who)固定句子結(jié)構(gòu)tooto sothat not untilnot onlybut also neithernor 51句式要有變化52要使用高級(jí)詞匯及短語 使用高等級(jí)詞匯 He is a good student. excellentextraordinary 使用短語 I like music. be fond ofbe interested in 使用諺語 As the saying goes,“”It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （適用于自編名言）62要使用高級(jí)詞匯及

4、短語 使用高等級(jí)詞匯 6并列選擇原因結(jié)果比較轉(zhuǎn)折遞進(jìn)舉例 3. 使用連接詞，過渡自然，連貫通順，and; as well as ; also; too, or; eitheror; because (of) ;owing to; due to ; thanks toso ; therefore ; thus ; as a resulton the contrary ; compared to , but ; yet; however ; besides ; moreover ; in addition for example; such as ; that is ; ;take for exa

5、mple 7并列 3. 使用連接詞，過渡自然，連貫通順，and; as check whether the verb forms and words spelling is correct.step4 Present (成稿）Produce the final work.8check whether the verb forms a 讀后續(xù)寫講評(píng)9 讀后續(xù)寫講評(píng)9讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel (爭(zhēng)吵) with her mother

6、 that afternoon and ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help crying when she thought of the scolding(責(zé)罵) from her mother. Getting around aimlessly in the street for hours，she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand(貨攤) for a while, watching the middle-age

7、d man busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she had to leave. The man behind the stand noticed Jenny and asked, “Hey, do you want to have the noodles？” “Oh, yes, but I dont have money.” she replied.10讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）10“Ill treat you today,” said the man. He brought her a bowl of noodle

8、s, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.“What is it?”asked the man kindly. “Actually I was just touched by your kindness!”said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a stranger will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house.” Hearing the words, the

9、 man smiled, “I only gave you a bowl of noodles. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your thankfulness to her？”11“Ill treat you today,” said tJenny sat there, speechless；she remembered her mothers familiar fa

10、ce. “A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful(感激的). Why havent I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology(道歉) to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.Paragraph 1：Approachingthedoorway, Jennytookadeepbre

11、ath._Paragraph 2：Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback. _How did she feel?what did she do?What did Jenny do before her mother came back? What would she do?12Jenny sat there, speechless；sh第一步，迅速獲取故事情節(jié)（5W+1H)1.who: Jenny, mother,stranger2.when: one afternoon3. where:3. What: quarrel with her mother,a

12、 stranger gave her a bowl of noodels when she was hungry.4.Why:the strangers word reminded jenny of what her mother had done. 5.How: Jenny felt regretful and decided to make an apology.第二步，理清人物情感變化。13第一步，迅速獲取故事情節(jié)（5W+1H)13第二步，理清人物情感變化Storylinehow did Jenny feel about her mother?Beginning: quarrelled,

13、 ran out(para1) angryDevelopment: astranger, a bowl of noodles(para2mean and cruelclimax :Strangers words,mothers love(para3&4) regretful &gratefullater development: went home(para5)?14第二步，理清人物情感變化Beginning: quarrversion1：Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.When she knocked

14、 at the door, she found the door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house.“Where could my mother be?” she wondered, “Was she still angry with me?” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing

15、 that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks. 15version1：15Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mot

16、her. “Here you come! Ive been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldnt help throwing herself into her mothers arms. “Mum, Im so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her

17、back gently.16Paragraph 216重點(diǎn)單詞和短語scene場(chǎng)景 quarrel 吵架rudeness粗魯 raise 抬起took a deep breath 深呼吸knock at 敲門 be angry with 對(duì).生氣due to 因?yàn)?cared a lot about 非常關(guān)心be /felt rather ashamed感到很羞愧roll down 滾下couldnt help dong 情不自禁做.throwing oneself into sbs arms 投入某人的懷抱 express great gratitude 表達(dá)感激17重點(diǎn)單詞和短語scene

18、場(chǎng)景 quar亮點(diǎn)句型1. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house.（形容詞短語作原因狀語）2.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks. （v-ing 作時(shí)間狀語，第一個(gè)that 引導(dǎo)賓語從句，第二個(gè)That引導(dǎo)定語從句）

19、4.“Here you come! Ive been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. (作伴隨狀語）5.Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently.（V-ing 作時(shí)間狀語，第二個(gè)V-ing 作伴隨狀語）18亮點(diǎn)句型1. Tired and sad, she sat Vesion2 Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. She felt a little nervous, b

20、ut she opened the door at last.“Mom, mom.”She said weakly. However, nobody answered. She couldnt find her mother anywhere at home. She thought：“ My mother had left me!” At that time, she couldnt help crying.She thought of the things her mother did for her. for example, her mother cooked for her, loo

21、ked after her, washed her clothes and so on. She regretted very much now.19Vesion2 19 Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.“Oh! My baby, you had come back. I went out to find you. Are you crying? What happened?” Her mother said. She looked at the familiar face and smiled. She

22、hugged her mother and said:“Mom, Im so sorry. I should make an apology for my rudeness to you. I shouldnt quarrel with you. Mom. I love you. Thanks for all the things you did for me.”“Im very happy that you can understand me. My dear, I love you forever.”Her mother said warmly. On that afternoon, sh

23、e grew up.20 Paragraph 220重點(diǎn)單詞和短語weaklyregrethugcouldnt helpmake an apology for grow up21重點(diǎn)單詞和短語weakly21亮點(diǎn)句型1. She felt a little nervous, but she opened the door at last.（but連接的并列句）2. She thought of the things her mother did for her.（省略that 的定語從句）3. Im very happy that you can understand me（Be+表情感的ad

24、j +that 賓語從句）22亮點(diǎn)句型1. She felt a little nerv課堂練習(xí)23課堂練習(xí)23第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。 My brother and I were alone at home because my parents had gone for a meeting and they had left me in charge. I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching TV. Suddenly t

25、he doorbell rang. My younger brother rushed to the door thinking that our parents had come home; he unlocked the door and opened it.Outside stood a tall man wearing a black raincoat and black rubber boots. He said he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home24第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫24 Wi

26、thout thinking, my brother said:“No.” He asked if we would like to buy some comic books which he was selling. I quickly explained that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parents permission. Then, as I was about to close the door,he forced his way into our house.He took out a knife and

27、forced me to tie up my brothers hands with some rope which he took out from his pocket. I tied up his hands but tied them in a special way so my brother could untie himself.The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen. 25 Without thinking, my bro Soon, he went upstairs to search the bedroom for valuables. I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on his hands.He then untied me. I rushed to the telephone to call the police, but the line was dead. 26 Soon, he went upstairs to seaOne possible version: The doors were all locked from the outside and what was worse, I