2023屆新高考英語寫作精講和模板-2求助信-(解析)

專題01?02求助信2023屆新高考英語寫作精講+寫作模板1.（改編自2021?河北武強(qiáng)中學(xué)高一階段練）假定你是高一⑴班的李華，剛升入一所新的學(xué)校，你在生活和學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了一些困難和挑戰(zhàn)，請給EnglishWeekly的編輯寫一封求助信。內(nèi)容如下：1.自我介紹；.遇到的困難；.希望得到的建議和幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)120詞左右；.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearEditor,Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,IamLiHua,anewstudentofseniorhighschool.IhaveencounteredsomedifficultiesandchallengesinmylifeandstudysoI'mwritingtoyoutoaskforyourhelp.TheproblemsIamfacingnowareasfollows.Ihaveplentyofnewknowledgetolearn,soIhavenotimetodosports.Besies,Idon'tknowhowtomakegoodplansfbrmystudyandhowtomakeuseoftimereasonably.IbecomeworriedandafraidthatIwillfallbehindintheclass,whichwilleventuallypreventmefromgoingtocollege.Whafsworse,Ifinditdifficulttogetonwellwithnewclassmates.HowcanImakefriendsinthecampus?Couldyougivemesomeusefuladvice?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【簡要分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之求助信寫作。要求考生就自己剛升入一所新的學(xué)校在生活和學(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了一些困難和挑戰(zhàn)，給EnglishWeekly的編輯寫一封求助信。內(nèi)容包括自我介紹、遇到的困難、希望得到的建議和幫助。此題寫作的關(guān)鍵基于“考生自己剛升入一所新的學(xué)?！睂Α翱忌约涸谏詈蛯W(xué)習(xí)方面遇到了一些困難和挑戰(zhàn)”進(jìn)行合理的拓展（比方：要學(xué)習(xí)的新知識多、制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃、時(shí)間的合理利用、與新同學(xué)相處、交朋友等等）?！揪涫酵卣埂吭洌篒amLiHua,anewstudentofseniorhighschool.拓展：IamLiHua,whoisanewstudentofseniorhighschool.原句：TheproblemsIamfacingnowareasfollows.拓展：TherearesomeproblemsIamfacewithnow.原句：Whafsworse,Ifinditdifficulttogetonwellwithnewclassmates.拓展：WhatIamworriedaboutmostishowtogetonwellwithnewclassmates.【亮點(diǎn)句型】don'tknowhowtomakegoodplansformystudyandhowtomakeuseoftimereasonably.（運(yùn)用了疑問詞+不定式作賓語）2.1becomeworriedandafraidthatIwillfallbehindintheclass,whichwilleventuallypreventmefromgoingtocollege.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）2.（改編自2022.山東青島二中高三期末）假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華，美國哥倫比亞大學(xué)（ColumbiaUniversity）正在你校組織招生活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給你在美國的筆友Russ寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：,通過校內(nèi)選拔考試（selectivetest）的同學(xué)將參加該大學(xué)于1月份組織的英語筆試、口試和面試；.你本人對此很感興趣，正在積極備考；.希望Russ給出一些有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加一些細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【答案】DearRuss,Howiseverythinggoing?Youknow,IaminGradeThreenow.Tmwritingtoaskforyourhelp.OurschoolhasgotanopportunitytohelpusapplyforColumbiaUniversity.ThosewhocanpasstheselectivetesttobeheldbyourschoolnextweekwillhavethechancetotakepartintheoralandwrittenexamsinEnglishaswellastheinterviewbytheCUteachersinJanuary.Ithaslongbeenmydreamtostudyabroad.Now,Iamtryingmybesttogetreadyforthecomingexams.Timeislimited,socouldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtogetwellequippedwithEnglishknowledgebeforeexams?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【簡要分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之求助信寫作。要求考生信的內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹；寫信的目的（哥倫比亞大學(xué)正在學(xué)校組織招生活動(dòng)）。求助背景介紹（通過校內(nèi)選拔考試的同學(xué)將參加該大學(xué)于1月份組織的英語筆試、口試和面試；你本人對此很感興趣，正在積極備考）；求助內(nèi)容（希望Russ給出一些有關(guān)英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議）；期盼給予答復(fù)?！揪涫酵卣埂吭洌篢imeislimited,socouldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtogetwellequippedwithEnglishknowledgebeforeexams?拓展：Sincetimeislimited,couldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtogetwellequippedwithEnglishknowledgebeforeexams?【亮點(diǎn)句型】.ThosewhocanpasstheselectivetesttobeheldbyourschoolnextweekwillhavethechancetotakepartintheoralandwrittenexamsinEnglishaswellastheinterviewbytheCUteachersinJanuary.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)定語從句）.Timeislimited,socouldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtogetwellequippedwithEnglishknowledgebeforeexams?（運(yùn)用了“疑問詞+todo”結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語）.（改編自2022.全國?高三專題練）假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個(gè)月來北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加一次英語演講比賽，你在對演講的資料收集、文字語言運(yùn)用和演講方法等方面遇到了困難。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給Tom寫一封求助信。.詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；.談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請Tom幫助；.告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【答案】DearTom,Howtimeflies!YouhavebeenstudyinginBeijingfornearlyamonth,duringwhichyoumusthaveachievedalot.Well,how'severythinggoing?IamgladtotellyouthatIwillattendtheEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldinBeijinginJuly,whichisabsolutelyagreatopportunityformetoimprovemyself.AndnowIamtryingmybesttomakepreparationsforit.However,IhavesomedifficultyincollectingrelevantinformationandputtingwhatIhavelearnedintopractice,whichbothersmealot.Inaddition,themostdifficultthingisthatIhavenoideahowtoattracttheaudience'sattention.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bytheway,afterthecontest,Iamtodropinonyou.Hopetomeetyoutheresoon.Yourstruly,LiHua【簡要分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之求助信寫作。要求考生就根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給Tom寫一封求助信：詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況、談?wù)勛约旱睦щy并請Tom幫助并告訴Tom打算賽后去看他。請考生不要忘記題干中的這段文字“七月份你將去北京參加一次英語演講比賽，你在對演講的資料收集、文字語言運(yùn)用和演講方法等方面遇到了困難”也是需要表達(dá)出來的?！揪涫酵卣埂吭洌篒amgladtotellyouthatIwillattendtheEnglishspeechcontesttobeheldinBeijinginJuly,whichisabsolutelyagreatopportunityformetoimprovemyself.拓展：IampleasedtotellyouthatIwilltakepartintheEnglishspeechcontestthatistobeheldinBeijinginJuly,whichisabsolutelyagreatopportunityformetoimprovemyself.【亮點(diǎn)句型】.However,IhavesomedifficultyincollectingrelevantinformationandputtingwhatIhavelearnedintopractice,whichbothersmealot.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）.Inaddition,themostdifficultthingisthatIhavenoideahowtoattracttheaudience'sattention.（that弓|導(dǎo)的表語從句）4.（改編自2021.廣西.南寧三中高二階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，本期你校開設(shè)了英語口語課，由于你不太適應(yīng)外教Chris的授課，你決定給她寫一封求助信。內(nèi)容包括：1.告訴她你的困難；.求助的內(nèi)容；.希望得到幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChris,Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinOralEnglishclass.Iamwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Asyouknow,Icomefromamiddleschoolinthecountiyside,whereteachersdon'tspeakmuchEnglishinclass.ThatisthereasonwhyIamnotgoodatlisteningorspeaking.Atpresent,Ifinditreallydifficulttoadaptmyselftoyourclass.Facedwiththeaboveproblem,IwonderifyoucanrecommendsomelisteningmaterialstomesothatIcanimprovemylisteningafterclass.Besides,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendsatyourconvenienttime?IthinkitcanhelpmeimprovemyspokenEnglish.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsparetimetodomeafavour.Yours,LiHua【簡要分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文之求助信寫作。要求考生針對自己不太適應(yīng)外教Chris的英語口語課，給她寫一封求助信。信的內(nèi)容包括：告訴她自己所遇到的困難、求助的內(nèi)容以及希望得到幫助。本篇寫作的困難之處是如何把自己所遇到的困難（甚至造成困難的原因）表達(dá)清楚。這就需要考生圍繞“自己不太適應(yīng)外教Chris的英語口語課”的話題對困難和原因展開合理的推測?！揪涫酵卣埂吭洌築esides,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendsatyourconvenienttime?拓展：Besides,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendswhenitisconvenientforyou?【亮點(diǎn)句型】.Asyouknow,Icomefromamiddleschoolinthecountryside,whereteachersdon'tspeakmuchEnglishinclass.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）.ThatisthereasonwhyIamnotgoodatlisteningorspeaking.（運(yùn)用了why引導(dǎo)的定語從句）.Facedwiththeaboveproblem,IwonderifyoucanrecommendsomelisteningmaterialstomesothatIcanimprovemylisteningafterclass.（運(yùn)用了過去分詞作狀語，if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）5.（改編自2021?貴州省思南中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測）假定你是李華，你正在為高考緊張復(fù)習(xí)，但最近你遇到了一些問題導(dǎo)致無法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師Kate寫一封求助信尋求幫助。內(nèi)容如下：1.你所遇到的問題或者困惑；2.希望得到Kate的幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫【答案】DearKate,IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelpbecause1havebeenbusypreparingformycollegeentranceexamrecently,butunfortunatelyIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.Iamencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First,IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlvhavetimetotakesports.Moreover,thehighexpectation