高考短文改錯專題訓(xùn)練(含高考題、模擬題及答案解析)

.PAGE.>A組2016～2014年各省市高考題Passage1(2016·全國Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig，buttheRestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.SomePeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead，hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.Passage2(2016·全國Ⅱ)Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.Passage3(2016·全國Ⅲ)Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However，myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime，Ieverfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.Passage4(2016·)ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull－timejob，soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritest.Atdinner，wesaidtoher，"HappyMother’sDay！〞Momwasgratefulandmoving.Passage5(2016·)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday，we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothe*citedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.Passage6(2015·新課標(biāo)全國Ⅰ)WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately，onthedevelopmentofindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso，we'lllivetoregretit.Passage7(2015·新課標(biāo)全國Ⅱ)Oneday，littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater，Tonysawparents.Momsaid，"Hownicetoseeyouagain！DadandIwereterribleworried.〞Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.Passage8(2015·)Hi,Janice，It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeene*periencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact，Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo"Ifyouareme，wouldyoutalktohim"Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.GracePassage9(2015·)Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld，soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty，mycoach，withabiscuitinhismouth，askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked，"Imighthavetoretireagainne*tyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.〞Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!Passage10(2015·)Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass，Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings，itwasfullofstudentse*ercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance，Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom，Iwillneverforgetit.Passage11(2014·新課標(biāo)全國Ⅰ)Nearlyfiveyearsbefore，andwiththehelpbyourfather，mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen－foralltheseyear－wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult，theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize，butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear，butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!Passage12(2014·)IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong，atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket，whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed，theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.Passage13(2014·)Hello，boysandgirls！Today，Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm，standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don'tpanicorgetoutofline，andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit'safalsealarmandthereisnofire，yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt，tellyourteacherimmediately.Passage14(2014·)MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals，insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.Oneeveningatsunset，wesatbythefire，haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky－theywerelookedlikerain！Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.ThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals，insectsortrees，butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!Passage15(2014·)DearJeremyandAlice，Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors，we'rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword，yourdog—Cleo.We'vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside，Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsi*hoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o'clock.Thatistoomuchforus，consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill，butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely，JackandRoseB組2016～2015模擬精選題Passage1(2016·山西重點中學(xué)協(xié)作體模擬)HavingagoodteacherdomeanalottousstudentsandIamluckyenoughtohavetheone—MissBrown,myEnglishteacher.MissBrownisacharmingladyalwayswornabigsmileonherface.InthefirstclasssheintroducedherandthenaskedustosaysomethingaboutourselveswithEnglish.Whenitwasmyturn,IfelttooshyandfearfulthatIdidn’tdaretosayaword.Shecameuptomeandsaid,"Don’tafraid.Youcanmakeit.Justhaveatry.〞Atlast,Ididitquitegood.ShepraisedmeforthatIhaddone.NevershallIforgotmyfirstEnglishclassinseniorhighschool.Passage2(2016·漢中市二次質(zhì)檢)Smilingisauniversallanguagebutcangiveuscourage,confidenceandcomfort.IstillrememberhowupsetIamwhenitwasmyturntoreciteapoembeforeclass.Feelnervousandshy,Iforgotalmosteverything.Idecidedtogiveup,butallmyclassmates,especialmyteacherkeptsmilingatmeencouragingly.TheirsmilewarmedmesomuchthatIgotoverthedifficultyandeventuallymadeitup.Ithinksmilingnotonlymakesushappybutalsohelpbuildupourconfidence.Furthermore,theywillimprovetherelationshipbetweenus.Itissmilingthatbringsharmonyus.Onlywhenyousmileattheworlddoestheworldsmileatyou.Therefore,keepsmilingandshowyourbesttotheworld.Passage3(2016·臨沂一模)ThismorningIsawoffmyauntatrailwaystation.Thereweremanypassengerinthewaitingroom.Isawanoldladycryingsadbecauseshehadlostherticketandnotabletoaffordanotherone.Iwasthinkingabouthelpingherwhenamancomeuptocomforther.Thenheboughtheraticketwithhisownmoney.TheoldLadywassomovingthatshecouldhardlysayaword.Shegraspedhishandandaskedforhisnameoraddress.Butheonlysmileandsaid，"It’smypleasure.〞Thenheleftawayquickly.Iwasgreatlymovedbysuchamanhewarmedotherswithhislove.Passage4(2016·株洲市質(zhì)檢)HiLana，Iam61yearsoldandIamfromNewZealand.IstartteachinginChinalastFebruary.IdecidedthatIreached60yearsIwouldliketodosomethingdifferent.IwasluckytohavegotadegreeinEnglish,thathelpedmefindajobasateacherinChina.NowIworkwithtwoCanadianteacher.One,57,hasbeenhereforfouryears,andtheother,63,havebeenteachingherefor6years.HemarriedwithalovelyChineselady.TheChinesepeoplearehard－workingbutthestudentsaresowillingtolearn.Howaninterestingcountrytolivein!IfeelsaferherethananywhereIlived.Ihavefoundhertipsonteachingsousefully.Thankyou!DavePassage5(2016·寧夏六盤山二模)DearJoe，Thanksforyoumail.I’mgladtoknowyouwereinterestedinthe2017FloridaWinterCamp.ItwillbeheldfromJanuary27toFebruary13,duringthattimeyouwillgetawonderfule*perience.YouwillhavechancestoimproveyourspeakingEnglishinthecoursesprovided.Also,activityarearrangedforyoutospendweekendstogetherwithyourhostfamily,butyoucanlearnAmericanEnglishinauthenticsituations.However,atriptothelocalDisneylandwillcertainaddupthefunofthecamp.JoininthecampandyouwillhavetheknowledgeofAmericancultureandlife.Youaresuretobenefitfromit.Yourstruly，LiHuaPassage6(2016·漳州八校聯(lián)考)DearPeter，Iamwritingtoaskthatyouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenfriend，hopefully，agirlinherearlytwenties，andwithinterestssimilarlytomine.Inmymind，heissomeoneinterestingintraveling，swimming，andplayingtabletennis.However，itwouldbebetterforhertohaveapetdogasIhavebeenkeptoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchapenfriend，IhopeIcansharewithheroure*periencesintraveling，takingcarepets，orwhateverwehaveincommon.IbelievedIwillimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountries.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.Bestregards，LiHuaPassage7(2015·濰坊3月)DearJack，Welcometomyschool！Uponyourarrival，therewillbeapartyforyouorganizingbymyclassmates.YoumayattendtoEnglishclassestofeeladifferentlylearningstyle.Afterthat，youcangotoyourhostfamilythatyoucane*periencetheChinesewayoflife.Youcanhavemealstogetherchattingaboutwhateverinterestyou.Thehostfamilywillalsoshowyouoffsomefamousscenicspots.Youcanseepeoplesellingkiteseverywherebecauseourcitywashometokites.Therearevarietiesofkitestochoose.Soisn’tthatagoodideatobuysomeforyourfriends？Writetomeunlessyouhaveanyquestionsabouttheschedule.Yours，LiHuaPassage8(2015·大連一模)Inthesummerholiday，wetravelledtoQingdaoandpaidvisittomyunclethere.It’salongandboredjourney.ButthemomentIarrived，Ifallinlovewiththecity.It’ssuchbeautifulacitythatIcanhardlyfindanywordtodescribeit.Thestreetsarecleaningandtheskyisblue.Ifyouwalkalongthecoast，youcanfeelthewindtoblowingonyourface.Theseaisvastandsometimesyoucanfindaboatoraship.Youmayalsodosomefishingasfarasitispermitted.Moreover，Ithinkthedrivertheredrivetoofastinthestreet.Youcanneverbetoocarelesswhencrossingthestreet.Passage9(2015·山東省實驗中學(xué)模擬)Asweallknow，everyonehaveadream.IhavedreamedofbeingadoctorsinceIenteredintotheprimaryschool.Nowadayswithmodernlifegorapidly，manypeoplesufferfromdifferentkindofdiseases，bothmentallyandphysically.Asaresult，doctorsareingreatneedathomeandabroad.Mydreamistobecomesuccessfuldoctor，helpingtosavepeople’slives.Althoughtobeagooddoctorwasverydifficult，IwilldowhateverIcantokeepeveryonehealth.Tomakemydreamcometrue，IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI’llconcentratemoretostudies.Afterall，onlybyworkinghardlycanonesucceed.Passage10(2015·泰安期末)I’dliketogiveyousomeadvicesonhowtolearnChinesewell.First，itwasimportanttotakeaChinesecourse，asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpractisingwithyourfellowstudents.Then，italsohelptowatchTVandreadbooks，newspapersandmagazinesintheChinesewheneverpossible.ItwillmakeyoufamiliartoChinesecharactersandenlargeyourvocabularyevenbeforeyounoticeit!Besides，itisagoodidealearnandsingChinesesongs，becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasy.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends，theywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrytospeakChineseasmanyaspossible.參考答案A組2016～2014年各省市高考題〔改編〕Passage1Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetoeq\f(that,where)Ilive.Thoughnotverybig，eq\a\vs4\al(but)theRestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleeveneq\f(had,have)towaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessiseq\f(honest,honesty).Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetableseq\f(or,and)highqualityoilareeq\f(using,used)forcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichineq\f(the,a)shortperiodoftime.Instead，hehopesthateq\f(our,his)businesswillgroweq\f(steady,steadily).1．that→where[考察賓語從句的連詞用法。由句子構(gòu)造可知，介詞to之后為賓語從句。從句謂語是不及物動詞live。故用where引導(dǎo)。]2．去掉but[考察附屬連詞與并列連詞。附屬連詞though不可與并列連詞but連用。]3．had→have[考察語境中的時態(tài)運用。根據(jù)上下文語境可知此處要用一般現(xiàn)在時。]4．honest→honesty[考察名詞作表語。由句意"他成功的關(guān)鍵是誠信〞可知應(yīng)當(dāng)用名詞形式。]5．or→and[考察并列連詞的用法。根據(jù)句意可知二者之間為并列關(guān)系而非選擇關(guān)系。]6．using→used[考察固定短語的用法。beusedfor"用來做〞，為固定短語。]7．在dreams之后加上of或about[考察短語動詞。固定短語dreamof/about(doing)sth.的意思是"夢想做*事〞。]8．the→a[考察代詞的用法。inashortperiodoftime為固定詞組，意思是"短時間內(nèi)〞。]9．our→his[考察冠詞的用法。短文介紹了myuncle誠信經(jīng)營餐館的事情，故將our改為his。]10．steady→steadily[考察副詞的用法。修飾謂語動詞用副詞。]Passage2答案Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouteq\f(how,what)tododuringtheholiday.Wecaneq\f(chose,choose)betweenstayingathomeandeq\f(take,taking)atrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortableeq\f(but,and)thereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadeneq\f(your,our)viewandgaineq\f(knowledges,knowledge)wecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestweeq\f(can,\a\vs4\al(can)/或should)gotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ieq\f(thought,think)thatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcosteq\f(many,much)，yetwecanstilllearnalot.1．how→what[考察疑問詞的用法。我和同學(xué)正在談?wù)摷倨诶镒鍪裁?。固定表達(dá)whattodo，如果用how構(gòu)造為howtodosth.]2．chose→choose[考察動詞形式。根據(jù)語法知識可知，情態(tài)動詞can后要用動詞原形。]3．take→taking[考察非謂語動詞的用法。此處為between...and...構(gòu)造，根據(jù)前面的stayingathome可知，此處也要用動名詞形式，與前面保持一致。]4．but→and[考察連詞的用法。如果呆在家里，感覺舒適，還不花錢。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。]5．world前加the[考察定冠詞的用法。此處特指我們所生活的這個世界。]6．your→our[考察形容詞性物主代詞的用法。根據(jù)前面的主語we可知，此處要用our，表示"我們能夠開闊我們的視野〞。]7．knowledges→knowledge[考察不可數(shù)名詞的用法。knowledge為不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。]8．去掉can或can→should[考察虛擬語氣。suggest表示"建議〞，后面的賓語從句要用shoulddo形式，should可以省略，故答案有兩種改法。]9．thought→think[考察一般現(xiàn)在時的用法。我認(rèn)為這是一個好主意。根據(jù)上下文可知，此處并不是過去的看法，而是現(xiàn)在的看法。]10．many→much[考察代詞的用法。這樣不會花很多錢。costmuch花費很多。此處也可理解為muchmoney的省略。]Passage3答案Theteenageeq\f(year,years)from13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandeq\f(worse,worst)yearsinmylife.Ateq\a\vs4\al(the)first，IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyeq\f(yourself,myself).However，myparentsdidn’tseemtothinkeq\f(such,so).Theyalwayseq\f(tell,told)mewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime，Ieverfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbeeq\f(freely,free)fromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbyeq\f(wear,wearing)strangeclothes.NowIamleavinghomeeq\f(to,for)college.Atlast，Iwillbeonmyown，butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.【語篇導(dǎo)讀】本文主要講述了青少與父母之間的關(guān)系。1．year→years[此處指13～19歲的年齡，故用復(fù)數(shù)。]2．worse→worst[與前面的best并列，此處應(yīng)用最高級。]3．去掉the[atfirst固定短語。]4．yourself→myself[根據(jù)句意，此處指"我自己〞。]5．such→so[so指已經(jīng)提到的事。]6．tell→told[此處應(yīng)用過去時態(tài)。]7．freely→free[此處應(yīng)用形容詞作表語。]8．wear→wearing[此處用動名詞作介詞的賓語。]9．to→for[固定搭配leavefor去……。]10．whenever后加I[whenever引導(dǎo)狀語從句，從句缺少主語I。]Passage4答案ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull－timejob，eq\f(so,but)shehastodomostoftheeq\f(houseworks,housework).Sheisagreatmother.BothDadeq\f(or,and)IplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Weeq\f(get,got)upearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse，andthenwenteq\a\vs4\al(on)shopping.Whenhecameback，Ifoundabunchofflowersineq\f(her,his)hand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.Thedisheseq\f(what,which/that/\a\vs4\al(what))IcookedwereMom’seq\f(favoritest,favorite).Atdinner，wesaidtoher，"HappyMother’sDay！〞Momwasgratefulandeq\f(moving,moved).1．so→but[前后句之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。]2．houseworks→housework[housework是不可數(shù)名詞。]3．or→and[both...and是固定搭配。]4．get→got[這里說的是發(fā)生在過去的事情，因此用一般過去時。]5．去掉on[goshopping去買東西。]6．her→his[爸爸去購物，從句主語是he，因此物主代詞形式用his。]7．kitchen前加the[上文雖未提及kitchen，但聽話者一定知其所指，因此，kitchen前加定冠詞。]8．what→which/that或去掉what[引導(dǎo)定語從句，并在從句中作賓語，指物，用關(guān)系代詞that/which，也可省略。]9．favoritiest→favorite[favorite為無等級形容詞。]10．moving→moved[moving多用來修飾事物，moved用來指人。]Passage5答案WhenIwasaveryyoungeq\f(children,child)，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearseq\f(late,later).Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday，we’dgreeteq\f(her,him)atthedoor.Hewouldaskwhoweeq\f(was,were)andpretendnottoeq\f(knowing,know)us.Thenheandmymotherwouldhaveeq\a\vs4\al(had)adrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheyeq\f(chat,chatted)，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositeq\f(in,on)thetopofthefridge.Itwasbotheq\f(e*cited,e*citing)andfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.1．children→child[因為前面有不定冠詞a，所以這里用單數(shù)。故children改成child。]2．late→later[late是形容詞"遲的〞，或副詞"遲地〞，但是"一段時間后面應(yīng)該接later〞，表示"……時間以后〞。故late改成later。]3．a(chǎn)t后面加the[attheendof為固定搭配。]4．her→him[根據(jù)上文可知我們每天在門口迎接爸爸。用him指代myfather，作greet的賓語。故her改成him。]5．was→were[這句話的主語是we，謂語用復(fù)數(shù)，而且這篇文章是作者回憶小時候的事情，用一般過去時。故was改成were。]6．knowing→know[pretend后面接不定式作賓語，這里是否認(rèn)式pretendnottodo。故knowing改成know。]7．去掉had[woulddo表示"過去常常做〞。]8．chat→chatted[根據(jù)主句內(nèi)容myfatherwouldliftmysister可知while引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句用一般過去時。故chat改成chatted。]9．in→on[onthetopof...為固定搭配，意為"在……頂部〞。故in改成on。]10．e*cited→e*citing[這句話的主語是形式主語it，真正的主語是tobeupthere，主語是物的時候，表語應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在分詞形式的形容詞。故e*cited改成e*citing。]Passage6答案WhenIwasachild，Ihopedtoliveinthecity.Ieq\f(think,thought)Iwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity，butImissmyhomein∧thecountryside.Theretheairiscleaneq\f(or,and)themountainsaregreen.Unfortunately，eq\f(on,with)thedevelopmentofindustrialization，theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshaveeq\a\vs4\al(been)shownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryeq\f(seriously,serious)problem.Theeq\f(airs,air)webreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.eq\f(Much,Many)rareanimalsaredyingout.Wemusteq\f(found,find)waystoprotecteq\f(your,our/the)environment.Ifwefailtodoso，we'lllivetoregretit.1．think→thought[考察動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)前面一句可知，這是發(fā)生在小時候的事情，故用一般過去時態(tài)。]2．countryside前加the[考察冠詞的用法。inthecountryside(在鄉(xiāng)村)為固定短語。]3．or→and[考察并列詞的用法。那兒的空氣干凈，群山蔥綠。由句意可知兩個分句之間顯然為并列關(guān)系，而非選擇關(guān)系。]4．on→with[考察介詞的用法。withthedevelopmentof...為一固定短語，意思是"隨著……的開展〞。]5．去掉been[考察被動語態(tài)的用法。眾多研究說明，全球變暖已經(jīng)成為一個十分嚴(yán)重的問題。由句意可知，studies和謂語show之間為主動關(guān)系，故要用主動語態(tài)。]6．seriously→serious[考察形容詞的用法。修飾名詞problem應(yīng)當(dāng)用形容詞。]7．a(chǎn)irs→air[考察不可數(shù)名詞的用法。air作"空氣〞講時為不可數(shù)名詞。]8．Much→Many[考察代詞的用法。Animals為可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故用many。]9．found→find[考察情態(tài)動詞的用法。情態(tài)動詞后面要接動詞原形。]10．your→our[考察語境中代詞的用法。依據(jù)前后句的語境及邏輯關(guān)系可知your與上下文相悖，結(jié)合句意應(yīng)當(dāng)改為our/the才能使句意通順。]Passage7答案Oneday，littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhiseq\f(parent,parents).Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyeq\f(on,in)ashopwindow.Helikeditsoeq\a\vs4\al(very)muchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Aftereq\f(looks,looking)atthetoyforsometime，heturnedaroundandfoundeq\f(where,that或where)hisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandeq\f(begun,began)tocry.Awomansawhimcryingandeq\f(telling,told)himtowaitoutsideeq\f(a,the)shop.Fiveminuteslater，Tonysaweq\o(\s\up7(∧,his)parents.Momsaid，"Hownicetoseeyouagain！DadandIwereeq\f(terrible,terribly)worried.〞Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.1．parent→parents[考察名詞復(fù)數(shù)。由第五句中的"hisparentsweremissing.〞可知此處應(yīng)當(dāng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。]2．on→in[考察介詞的用法。玩具是擺放在商店的櫥窗里面的，故用介詞in。]3．去掉very[考察固定句型的用法。由語境可知，托尼非常喜歡這個玩具，于是快速走進商店。so...that...為固定句型，意思是"如此……以致于……〞，故去掉very。]4．looks→looking[考察省略的用法。After之后省去了主語he，he與lookat之間為邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，故應(yīng)當(dāng)用現(xiàn)在分詞。]5．去掉where或where→that[考察賓語從句連接詞的用法。動詞found之后為賓語從句，從句為系表構(gòu)造，意思完整，故將where去掉或改為沒有詞義且不作成分的that。]6．begun→began[考察并列謂語的用法。由句子構(gòu)造可知，begin與wasscared并列，因此，要用一般過去時。]7．telling→told[考察并列謂語的用法。有一位婦女看到他哭泣就告訴他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell這一動作是這個婦女發(fā)出的，應(yīng)當(dāng)與saw構(gòu)成并列謂語。故改用told。]8．a(chǎn)→the[考察冠詞的用法。表示談話雙方共知的名詞前要用定冠詞。]9．saw后加his[考察物主代詞的用法。根據(jù)句意及英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，應(yīng)當(dāng)在parents前加上與主語相一致的物主代詞。]10．terrible→terribly[考察副詞的用法。形容詞worried之前要用副詞來修飾。]Passage8答案Hi,Janice，It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywant∧tosharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeene*periencing.AsIeq\f(tell,told)youlasttime,Imadethreeneweq\f(friend,friends)here.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimeeq\f(sing,singing)inkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmeeq\f(many,much).AndIstartedtoseethisasatime－wastingactivity!Infact，Idon'tliketogoanymore,eq\f(so,but)I'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.eq\f(How,What)doyouthinkIshoulddo"Ifyoueq\f(are,were)me，wouldyoutalktoeq\f(him,them)？Pleasehelpeq\a\vs4\al(with)meandgivemesomeadvice.Grace1．[考察動詞want的用法，want后用不定式作狀語，故加上to。]want后加to2．[考察時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語lasttime可知，此句需用一般過去時，故把tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告訴你的那樣。]tell→told3．[考察名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。名詞friend為可數(shù)名詞，其前有three修飾，需要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在這兒交了三個新朋友。]friend→friends4．[考察動名詞作賓語。本句考察句型spend...(in)doingsth構(gòu)造，故把sing改成singing。]sing→singing5．[考察代詞。根據(jù)句意，指的是花費很多錢，故用much而非many。句意：那真的花費很多。]many→much6．[考察連詞。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他們的友誼，兩個分句之間有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把so改成but。]so→but7．[考察疑問詞的選擇。本句中do之后缺少賓語，故用what。]How→What8．[考察虛擬語氣。根據(jù)句意可知，此處為虛擬語氣，與現(xiàn)在事實不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我，……。]are→were9．[考察代詞。根據(jù)上文可知，作者交了三個朋友，故用them。句意：你會和他們說嗎？]him→them10．[考察動詞。動詞help為及物動詞，其后接賓語時無需加介詞，故去掉with。句意：請幫幫我，給我一些建議。]去掉withPassage9答案Mysoccercoachretiredeq\a\vs4\al(in)lastweek.Iwantedtodoeq\f(anything,something)specialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakestheeq\f(better,best)biscuitsintheworld，soIeq\f(decide,decided)toaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasiceq\f(step,steps)ofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallyeq\f(well,good).MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeontheflooreq\f(after,when/while)Iwaspackingthemup.Ateq\f(a,the)party，mycoach，withabiscuitinhismouth，askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked，"Imighthavetoretireagainne*tyearjust∧,to)getsomemoreofthesebiscuits.〞Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeeq\f(enjoy,enjoying)thebiscuitswithhappylaughter!1．去掉in[lastweek上個星期，前面無需加冠詞。]2．a(chǎn)nything→something[something用在肯定句中，表示"一些事〞，anything"任何事〞。]3．better→best[我的媽媽做了世界上最好吃的餅干，此處不是比較含義，應(yīng)是最高級(best)。]4．decide→decided[全文的時態(tài)都是一般過去時，故把decide改為decided。]5．step→steps[根據(jù)前面的some，step應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)形式。]6．well→good[作表語的是形容詞good，well是副詞，作狀語。]7．a(chǎn)fter→when/while[我唯一所犯的錯誤就是當(dāng)我包裝餅干的時候，掉在地上一些。when/while當(dāng)……的時候，after在……之后。]8．a(chǎn)→the[此處表特指，attheparty在晚會上。]9．just后加to[動詞不定式表示目的，我也許得再退休一次，能吃到更多的餅干。]10．enjoy→enjoying[and連接兩個并列的(動)名詞，enjoy是動詞，所以改成enjoying。]Passage101．第一句：side→sides[考察名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。前面有three修飾，故要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。]2．第一句：from→of[考察固定表達(dá)。bemadeof是指不經(jīng)過加工，能直接看出原材料；bemadefrom是指經(jīng)過加工，不能直接看出原料。]3．第二句：sit→sitting[考察非謂語動詞。動詞enjoy后要接動名詞作賓語。]4．第三句：easy→easily[考