高考速成寫作：超級簡便實用高效課件

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超級實用高效寫作部分

我是高考生我是文章加工大師假如你是高考閱卷老師，下面這篇作文，你能給打他多少分？

Ontheweekend

TodayisSunday.Igotupearlythismorning.Icleanedmyroom.Iopenedthewindowandsweptthefloor.Imadethebed.IhadmilkandbreadforbreakfastAfterbreakfast,Myfamilywentshoppingtogether.Weboughtmanythings,suchaslollipops,icecreams,oranges,milkandbread.Ilikethemverymuch.Afterthatwewenttothezoo.Isawmanyanimals.Themonkeysareveryinteresting.Theelephantareverybig.Thepandaareverycute.then.Ataboutnineo’clock,WegothomeWehadagoodtime.這篇其實就是上篇，僅僅是做了點修改，你能給打他多少分呢？

Ontheweekend

TodayisSunday.Igotupearlythismorning.Then,Icleanedmyroom.Inotonlyopenedthewindow,,butalsomadethebed.Later,Ihadmilkandbreadforbreakfast.It’safterbreakfastthatMyfamilywentshoppingtogether.ThereasonwhytheytookmetothesupermarketisthatIlikesomekindsoffood.Weboughtmanythings,suchaslollipops,icecreams,oranges,milkandbreadwhicharemyfavourites.Besides,onourwaybackhome,wealsowenttothezoowhereIsawmanyanimals.ASweknow,wecanwriteagoodarticlebywatchingtheanimals.Isawsomeveryinterestingmonkeys,bigelephantsaswell.Onfindingsomecutepandas,Iwasveryexcited.Wedidn’tgothomeuntilnineo’clock.Thankstomyfamily,Ihadagoodtimetoday.最高效寫作

高考寫作必背高分必背，背必高分一．過渡詞

1)…首先，......其次，......第三..............開始Firstly,Secondly,thirdly,Atthebeginning,tostartwith2)..................接著,后來......此外.......另外；除此之外.....再者，另外......更糟糕的是......然而

next,then,…later接著,后來besides此外inaddition.另外；除此之外what’smore再者tomakethings/mattersworse.更糟糕的是.however然而3)............最后........最后但同樣重要............簡而言之a(chǎn)tlast.finally.最后lastbutnotleast.最后但同樣重要.Inaword,.inshort.簡而言之

高分必背，背必高分二、其他過渡詞...............................我認為___________事實上______________坦白地InmyopinionasfarasIamconcernedasamatteroffactfranklyspeaking三、高級或者增分點的詞句1.Weshouldgetupearly_________________________________________大家都知道________眾所周知_________________俗話說_______________正如一則諺語所說，“有志者，事競成.It’swellknowntousthat…..asweknow.......Asthesayinggoes....Asaproverbsays,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”Wearesupposedtogetupearly

2.Shedanceswell,andshesingswelltoo.Shenotonlydanceswellbutalsosingswell3.Theyworkedverylong,theywenthomeat113.Theydidn’tgohomeuntil11o’clockafterwork.4.Wetakeexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.

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高分必背，背必高分8.Becauseheencouragedme，Ifinallyrealizedmydream.Owingto/Thankstohisencouragement，Ifinallyrealizedmydream.

9.Youworkharder，youmakemoreprogressTheharderyouwork，themoreprogressyoumake10.wehavetogrowtrees,sotheycansupplyfreshairforus.Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycansupplyfreshairforus

高分必背，背必高分

四．必用、好用的增分從句和句型1.定語從句必用Ihaveagoodfriend,sheisgoodatEnglish2強調(diào)句型It’s+被強調(diào)部分+who/that.......Shebroketheglass.

3.only+狀語，主句部分倒裝例如：只有用那種方法，我們才能成功。

Wecansucceedonlyinthatway.4.with結(jié)構(gòu)手里拿本書，她進來了。5.doing、done做壯語被老師表揚，他高興回家了。

IhaveagoodfriendwhoisgoodatEnglishIt’sshewhobroketheglassOnlyinthatway,canwesucceed.Withabookinhand,shecamein.Praisedbyhisteacher,shereturnedhomehappily高分必背，背必高分