受寵的應(yīng)用文高考英語(yǔ)作文課件

命題形式寫(xiě)作形式書(shū)信類(lèi)型多為文字提示；半開(kāi)放性和提綱式書(shū)信、電子郵件、日記、通知、海報(bào)、演講稿、歡迎辭等求職信、投訴信、慰問(wèn)信、建議信、感謝信、道歉信、咨詢(xún)信等1命題形式寫(xiě)作形式書(shū)信類(lèi)型多為文字提示；半開(kāi)放性和提綱式書(shū)信、2011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫(xiě)作主題具體內(nèi)容要求2011請(qǐng)求學(xué)生會(huì)幫助（求助信）咨詢(xún)預(yù)約2012競(jìng)爭(zhēng)參加夏令營(yíng)（推薦信）自我推薦：參加意圖2013請(qǐng)求他人接機(jī)（求助信）人物描寫(xiě)2014詢(xún)問(wèn)暑假學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃（咨詢(xún)信）活動(dòng)信息說(shuō)明2015向外國(guó)朋友約稿（邀請(qǐng)信）介紹欄目和寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容22011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫(xiě)作主題具體內(nèi)記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語(yǔ)喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~3記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語(yǔ)喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~3一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”Thetalentshow,whosethemeis“InnovationsonCampus”(主題)，willtakeplaceinourschoolgym(地點(diǎn))from8:30to11:30amonApril30th(時(shí)間).2.WearescheduledtoattendtheexamonJune7thand8th.3.Recently,inordertoimprovestudents’writingskills,ourschoolwebsitesetupanewcolumncalledEnglishWriting.4.LastFriday,ourclassinvitedanoldcraftsmantoteachushowtomakedoughfigurines,whichwasaimedat/withthepurposeofadvocatingandpromotingtheChineseculture.

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上周五，我們班邀請(qǐng)了一位年老的工藝師來(lái)教我們?nèi)绾?/p>

做面人，這旨在倡導(dǎo)和弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化。

4一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”4二、表達(dá)“情緒”1.Hearingthatsomeforeignstudentswillcometoourschoolforculturalexchange,we’reoverjoyed/more

than

happy/extremely

excited.2.Youcan’timaginehowexcitedIwastohearthemusicaliscomingtotown.3.SoanxiousamIthatIcan’tfallasleepeverynight.4.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’twaittoopenmygift.

5二、表達(dá)“情緒”5三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”1.Nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.2.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbehelpfultoyou.3.IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,I’lltrytoapplyallI’velearnttomywork.

4.Aslongaswetryourbest,there'snoneedtofeelregretforthesefailures.四、表達(dá)“自信”I’mconfidentthatI’msuitableforthiskindofjob.2.I’msure/convincedthatIcanperfectlyliveupto(不辜負(fù),符合)yourexpectation.

6三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”6五、聯(lián)系方式：

Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasecontactmeat12345678910.六、最后期限：

You’resupposedtopostyourarticletousbefore

May1.七、報(bào)名方式：1)AnyonewhoisinterestedinthisactivityshouldsignupforitbeforeMay1.2)Thosewho

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incancometoStudents’UnionorcontactusbeforeMay1.

7五、聯(lián)系方式：7其它寫(xiě)作形式8其它寫(xiě)作形式8Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫(xiě)作假定你是中學(xué)生李華。美國(guó)一個(gè)中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)代表團(tuán)即將訪問(wèn)你校并出席英語(yǔ)周的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎詞。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；

3.表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿。

寫(xiě)作要求：

1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.稱(chēng)呼已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)歡迎詞正文；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)9Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫(xiě)作假定你是中DearAmericanGuests,

Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmwelcometoyou.WeareluckyenoughtohaveyouhereinthemiddleofourEnglishWeekActivities.

Asscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.ThepurposeofthisprogramistodevelopourinterestinEnglishlearningandpracticalabilitiesinlisteningandspeaking.Theprogramconsistsofthefollowingactivities:recitation,singing,wordspelling,storytellingandsoon.Theshowwillbeginattwoo’clockthisafternoonattheStudentCentre,lastingthreehours.Dearguests,youarewelcometotakepartinsomeactivities.Ihopewestudentswillbenefitfromyourpresence.Isincerelywishyouapleasanttimewithus.That’sall!

Thankyou.10DearAmericanGuests,10記敘文寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)：用過(guò)去時(shí)，以時(shí)間為線索展開(kāi)。常用atfirst,afterwards,atthesametime或meanwhile,afterthat,immediately,soon,eventually等。2.避免啰嗦或?qū)懗闪魉~。對(duì)中心事件和最能表現(xiàn)中心思想的地方要詳細(xì)敘述。3.描寫(xiě)故事的常用句型：Iwasdoing...when...Iwasabouttodo...when...TiredasIfelt,Istillkeptdoing...Amazedat...,I...Notuntil...didIleavethehospital.ThemomentIheardthenews,I...

Onhearingthenews,I...7)Without

hesitation,Irusheduptohimand...8)Heleftwithout

saying

aword.9)Itoccurredtomethat...10)Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.11)Hearing

this,thewholeclassburstintolaughter.12)Twohourshadpassedbeforewerealizedit.13)Eventuallymyhardworkpaid

off.11記敘文寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)：114.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：1)TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.2)FromthisexperienceIhavelearntthatquestioningcanserveasabridgethathelpsustoseekthetruth.3)Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,it

alsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.4)NotuntilthendidIrealizethatwordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegative.5)OnlythendidIcometorealizethatitwashissuggestionsthathelpedmeovercomethesetbacksandachievemygoal.124.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：12

[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'mproudof”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情。要求如下：1.記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)；2.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。OnethingI'mproudofOnepossibleversion：OnethingI'mproudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskilfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpractisinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfilourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”13[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'm

近期某網(wǎng)站就校車(chē)安全問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見(jiàn)下圖。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖示向你的美國(guó)朋友David介紹介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)2.對(duì)校車(chē)的擔(dān)憂3.你的看法Recently,asurveyonschoolbuseshasbeenconductedonawebsite.圖表題寫(xiě)作14近期某網(wǎng)站就校車(chē)安全問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見(jiàn)下圖。請(qǐng)Recently,asurveyonschoolbuses(主題)hasbeenconductedonawebsite(范圍/對(duì)象).Now,I’mwritingtotellyousomerelevantinformationaboutit.Ascanbeseenfromthechart,only36.13%oftheintervieweestrustschoolbuses,while40.34%ofthemshowtheirdistrust.Andstill,23.53%ofthemarenotclearaboutit.Therearesomegoodreasonsaccountingfortheirdisbelief.Firstly,theyareafraidofabandonedvehiclesbeingused.

Theyalsoworrythatschoolbuseswillbeoverloaded,sayingthatitmayleadtoserioustrafficaccidents.Inaddition,intheireyes,someschoolbusesarenotequippedwithsafetyequipmentlikesafetybelts.Frommyperspective,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoensurethesafetyofstudents.Yours,LiHuaDearDavid,15Recently,asurveyonscho怎樣使文章更精彩？16怎樣使文章更精彩？16失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面語(yǔ)法使用不準(zhǔn)確英語(yǔ)表述不得體詞匯句式不豐富表達(dá)啰嗦不簡(jiǎn)潔行文邏輯不連貫卷面馬虎不整潔,書(shū)寫(xiě)不規(guī)范寫(xiě)作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)確、連貫17失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面寫(xiě)作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)具體做法：1.高級(jí)詞匯2.帶情感的副詞3.短語(yǔ)代替單詞4.高級(jí)句式5.連詞6.連貫詞18具體做法：181.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語(yǔ)代替單詞)lookatmewatch—2)agood/niceman—3)can’tfindany

way

to

solve

theproblem

fail

tofindasolutiontotheproblem4)Ourschoollifewillbedifficult.--5)Ifwenevergiveup,wemaysucceedfinally.Aslongas...,wearemorelikelytoachievesuccessintheend.6)Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant....isalsoofimportance.7)Moreandmorestudentstaketheirphonetoschool.Anincreasingnumberofstudents...8)AsthenumberofEnglishlearnersisincreasing，it’snotdifficultforthemtounderstandthesewordsinChinesecontexts.ontheriseglance

atkind-hearted/generous/easy-goingchallenging191.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語(yǔ)代替單詞)glanceat常見(jiàn)高級(jí)寫(xiě)作詞匯必備1．第一first→tobegin/startwith2．第二second→inaddition/what’smore3．第三，最后finally→lastbutnotleast4．總之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary5．但是but→however6．機(jī)會(huì)chance→opportunity7．選擇choice→alternative8．考慮consider→takeintoaccount/consideration9．充足enough→adequate10．影響effect→influence常見(jiàn)高級(jí)寫(xiě)作詞匯必備11．最終finally→eventually12．勤奮hardworking→diligent13．幫助help→assist14．后果result→consequence15．應(yīng)該should→besupposedto16．缺點(diǎn)shortcoming→drawback17．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout18．可用useful→available19．使用use→employ/makeuseof20．種類(lèi)繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof11．最終finally→eventually21．也；和aswellas→inadditionto/apartfrom22．反對(duì)beagainst→objectto23．厭煩beboredwith→befedupwith24．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with25．發(fā)生happen→occur/comeabout26．幾乎不hardly→barely27．提高improve→promote28．重要important→vital29．立即immediately→inaflash30．不可能impossible→outofthequestion21．也；和aswellas→inaddition31．有趣interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing32．參加join→participate33．幸運(yùn)lucky→fortunate34．巨大large→enormous35．許多many→alargequantityof36．明顯obvious→apparent37．豐富rich→abundant38．小心謹(jǐn)慎becareful→becautious39．與……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom40．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo31．有趣interesting→absorbing/st41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof42．聞名befamousfor→haveareputationfor43．正在建設(shè)beingbuilt→underconstruction44．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease45．在我看來(lái)inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned46．美化學(xué)校makeourschoolbeautiful→beautifyourschool47．故意onpurpose→deliberately/bydesign48．置若罔聞refusetolistento→turnadeafearto49．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit50．無(wú)法描述的美麗toobeautifultodescribe→beautybeyonddescription41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awell-behavedchild52．節(jié)能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergy→anenergy-savinghouse53．一位受到良好教育的婦女a(chǎn)womanwhohasreceivedgoodeducation→awell-educatedwoman54．精心組織的活動(dòng)anactivitythatisorganizedwell→awell-organizedactivity55．一個(gè)愛(ài)好和平的人apersonwholovespeace→apeace-lovingperson51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子2.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞Youpatientlytaughtmehowtowritearticles.2)Here,I’mwritingtothankyouforsendingme

suchawonderfulgiftandgiveyouaspecialgiftinreturn.3)Thankyouforyourgeneroushelp.4)Unfortunately,Ilostmywalletonmywayhome.262.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞263.使用狀語(yǔ)，with/by/despite/inspiteof/becauseof/asaresultof等介詞短語(yǔ),帶高級(jí)詞匯的目的狀語(yǔ)例：Igotothelibrary.Afterschool/Duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoborrowsomebooks.

Inordertomeetthedemandsofbroadeningmyhorizonandenrichingmyknowledge,afterschool/duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoreadbooks,newspapersandmagazines.

273.使用狀語(yǔ)，with/by/despite/inspittobroadenone’shorizontoenrichone’knowledge/schoollifetomeetthedemandsoftogetclosetonaturetorelaxone’brainstobuildupconfidencetobeautifytheenvironmenttogetabetterunderstandingof2828(1)合并句子(豐富結(jié)構(gòu))●_________canIimprovemyoralEnglish__________Ilearnsomecustomsinwesterncountries.●_____________，theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons.______________，theycanenrichmylifeandprovidemewithgreatfun.(2)改變語(yǔ)態(tài)(避免單調(diào))●Besides，Iamabook-loverandthebooks______________thattheyareasgoodasnew.(3)使用省略(達(dá)到言簡(jiǎn)意賅的效果)●Ifso/possible，pleasekeepquietaboutitbecausewewanttogivehimasurprise.NotonlyForonethingbutalsoForanotheraresowellkept4.高級(jí)句式(1)合并句子(豐富結(jié)構(gòu))NotonlyForonet(4)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型(突出語(yǔ)意)●______________________________________affectthechildren’shealthydevelopment.(5)使用倒裝句(增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力)●__________________________________________________adifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.(6)使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣(提出建議，委婉表達(dá)，易于接受)●Shewouldhaveneverthoughtacompletesurprisewaswaitingforher.(7)使用with結(jié)構(gòu)(豐富句式)●Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring，_________________________________________．ItisoverprotectionandtoomuchcarethatOnlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakewiththesunshiningandbirdssinging(4)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型(突出語(yǔ)意)Itisoverprote(8)使用狀語(yǔ)從句(強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)或句子)●_______________________________，theywerealwaysavailable.

(9)使用定語(yǔ)從句(表意豐富)●However，Iwasbusypreparingformyfinalexamatthattime，__________________________________．(10)使用名詞性從句(體現(xiàn)扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底)●______________________________________childrenarethefocusoffamilies，shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.WheneverIhaddifficultieswhichwasofvitalimportanceformeItshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthat(8)使用狀語(yǔ)從句(強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)或句子)WheneverIh(11)使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞(不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞、過(guò)去分詞以及動(dòng)名詞的使用，可使句式多樣化)●What’sworse，theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake，___________________________________________________．●Thesedays，________________________________arenotuncommon，______________________lifeandtheenvironment.totallyignoringthenoticeablesignNoLitteringnearbybreakingtrafficrulesandlitteringcausingseriousharmto(11)使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞(不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞、過(guò)去分詞以及動(dòng)名詞多種表達(dá)明天在會(huì)上要討論的問(wèn)題很重要。

(簡(jiǎn)單句)Theproblemisveryimportant.Itwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrow.（并列句）Theproblemisveryimportantand/soitwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrow.（定語(yǔ)從句）Theproblemwhichwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrowisveryimportant.（非謂語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)）Theproblemtobediscussedatthemeetingtomorrowisveryimportant.（句型：結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)）Theproblemissoimportantthatitwillbediscussedatthemeetingtomorrow.33多種表達(dá)335.常用的過(guò)渡句式(黑體部分)：Firstly,...What’smore/Moreover,...Mostimportantly,...Obviously,agoodlearninghabitcanhelpustospeeduptoreachourdestinations.4)Tomakemattersworse/what’sworse/Worsestill，it

becamedark.

5)Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.6)TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.7)Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon’tcherishwildlife.8)Frommyperspective,theystandforlove，friendshipandunity.

9)However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.5.常用的過(guò)渡句式(黑體部分)：英語(yǔ)演講比賽英語(yǔ)辯論賽英語(yǔ)才藝表演英語(yǔ)話劇表演英語(yǔ)歌唱英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌朗誦

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提高英語(yǔ)水平英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)書(shū)面英語(yǔ)1.Englishspeechcontest2.Englishdebate3.EnglishTalentShow4.Englishplay5.singingEnglishsongs6.Englishpoemrecitation7.storytelling8.stimulate/motivatetheirinterestinlearningEnglishimprovetheirEnglishlevelspoken/oralEnglishwrittenEnglish與英語(yǔ)有關(guān)的表達(dá)35英語(yǔ)演講比賽1.Englishspeechcontest命題形式寫(xiě)作形式書(shū)信類(lèi)型多為文字提示；半開(kāi)放性和提綱式書(shū)信、電子郵件、日記、通知、海報(bào)、演講稿、歡迎辭等求職信、投訴信、慰問(wèn)信、建議信、感謝信、道歉信、咨詢(xún)信等36命題形式寫(xiě)作形式書(shū)信類(lèi)型多為文字提示；半開(kāi)放性和提綱式書(shū)信、2011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫(xiě)作主題具體內(nèi)容要求2011請(qǐng)求學(xué)生會(huì)幫助（求助信）咨詢(xún)預(yù)約2012競(jìng)爭(zhēng)參加夏令營(yíng)（推薦信）自我推薦：參加意圖2013請(qǐng)求他人接機(jī)（求助信）人物描寫(xiě)2014詢(xún)問(wèn)暑假學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃（咨詢(xún)信）活動(dòng)信息說(shuō)明2015向外國(guó)朋友約稿（邀請(qǐng)信）介紹欄目和寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容372011-2015全國(guó)1卷高考作文年份寫(xiě)作主題具體內(nèi)記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語(yǔ)喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~38記住以下用于各種場(chǎng)合的套語(yǔ)喔，它們可以幫你提分噠~~3一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”Thetalentshow,whosethemeis“InnovationsonCampus”(主題)，willtakeplaceinourschoolgym(地點(diǎn))from8:30to11:30amonApril30th(時(shí)間).2.WearescheduledtoattendtheexamonJune7thand8th.3.Recently,inordertoimprovestudents’writingskills,ourschoolwebsitesetupanewcolumncalledEnglishWriting.4.LastFriday,ourclassinvitedanoldcraftsmantoteachushowtomakedoughfigurines,whichwasaimedat/withthepurposeofadvocatingandpromotingtheChineseculture.

或aimingto/hopingto/soasto/inordertodosth

上周五，我們班邀請(qǐng)了一位年老的工藝師來(lái)教我們?nèi)绾?/p>

做面人，這旨在倡導(dǎo)和弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化。

39一、表達(dá)“活動(dòng)安排與目的”4二、表達(dá)“情緒”1.Hearingthatsomeforeignstudentswillcometoourschoolforculturalexchange,we’reoverjoyed/more

than

happy/extremely

excited.2.Youcan’timaginehowexcitedIwastohearthemusicaliscomingtotown.3.SoanxiousamIthatIcan’tfallasleepeverynight.4.IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn’twaittoopenmygift.

40二、表達(dá)“情緒”5三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”1.Nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.2.Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbehelpfultoyou.3.IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,I’lltrytoapplyallI’velearnttomywork.

4.Aslongaswetryourbest,there'snoneedtofeelregretforthesefailures.四、表達(dá)“自信”I’mconfidentthatI’msuitableforthiskindofjob.2.I’msure/convincedthatIcanperfectlyliveupto(不辜負(fù),符合)yourexpectation.

41三、表達(dá)“個(gè)人決心與愿望”6五、聯(lián)系方式：

Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasecontactmeat12345678910.六、最后期限：

You’resupposedtopostyourarticletousbefore

May1.七、報(bào)名方式：1)AnyonewhoisinterestedinthisactivityshouldsignupforitbeforeMay1.2)Thosewho

wouldliketoroll

incancometoStudents’UnionorcontactusbeforeMay1.

42五、聯(lián)系方式：7其它寫(xiě)作形式43其它寫(xiě)作形式8Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫(xiě)作假定你是中學(xué)生李華。美國(guó)一個(gè)中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)代表團(tuán)即將訪問(wèn)你校并出席英語(yǔ)周的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎詞。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；

3.表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿。

寫(xiě)作要求：

1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.稱(chēng)呼已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)歡迎詞正文；3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)44Dear

American

Guest,歡迎詞寫(xiě)作假定你是中DearAmericanGuests,

Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoexpressourwarmwelcometoyou.WeareluckyenoughtohaveyouhereinthemiddleofourEnglishWeekActivities.

Asscheduled,wehaveEnglishTalentShowtoday.ThepurposeofthisprogramistodevelopourinterestinEnglishlearningandpracticalabilitiesinlisteningandspeaking.Theprogramconsistsofthefollowingactivities:recitation,singing,wordspelling,storytellingandsoon.Theshowwillbeginattwoo’clockthisafternoonattheStudentCentre,lastingthreehours.Dearguests,youarewelcometotakepartinsomeactivities.Ihopewestudentswillbenefitfromyourpresence.Isincerelywishyouapleasanttimewithus.That’sall!

Thankyou.45DearAmericanGuests,10記敘文寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)：用過(guò)去時(shí)，以時(shí)間為線索展開(kāi)。常用atfirst,afterwards,atthesametime或meanwhile,afterthat,immediately,soon,eventually等。2.避免啰嗦或?qū)懗闪魉~。對(duì)中心事件和最能表現(xiàn)中心思想的地方要詳細(xì)敘述。3.描寫(xiě)故事的常用句型：Iwasdoing...when...Iwasabouttodo...when...TiredasIfelt,Istillkeptdoing...Amazedat...,I...Notuntil...didIleavethehospital.ThemomentIheardthenews,I...

Onhearingthenews,I...7)Without

hesitation,Irusheduptohimand...8)Heleftwithout

saying

aword.9)Itoccurredtomethat...10)Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.11)Hearing

this,thewholeclassburstintolaughter.12)Twohourshadpassedbeforewerealizedit.13)Eventuallymyhardworkpaid

off.46記敘文寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)：114.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：1)TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.2)FromthisexperienceIhavelearntthatquestioningcanserveasabridgethathelpsustoseekthetruth.3)Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,it

alsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.4)NotuntilthendidIrealizethatwordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegative.5)OnlythendidIcometorealizethatitwashissuggestionsthathelpedmeovercomethesetbacksandachievemygoal.474.用于故事升華的表達(dá)：12

[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'mproudof”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100～120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情。要求如下：1.記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)；2.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示。注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。OnethingI'mproudofOnepossibleversion：OnethingI'mproudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskilfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpractisinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfilourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”48[2013·浙江卷]請(qǐng)以“OnethingI'm

近期某網(wǎng)站就校車(chē)安全問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見(jiàn)下圖。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖示向你的美國(guó)朋友David介紹介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果，內(nèi)容包括：調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)2.對(duì)校車(chē)的擔(dān)憂3.你的看法Recently,asurveyonschoolbuseshasbeenconductedonawebsite.圖表題寫(xiě)作49近期某網(wǎng)站就校車(chē)安全問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了一次社會(huì)調(diào)查，結(jié)果見(jiàn)下圖。請(qǐng)Recently,asurveyonschoolbuses(主題)hasbeenconductedonawebsite(范圍/對(duì)象).Now,I’mwritingtotellyousomerelevantinformationaboutit.Ascanbeseenfromthechart,only36.13%oftheintervieweestrustschoolbuses,while40.34%ofthemshowtheirdistrust.Andstill,23.53%ofthemarenotclearaboutit.Therearesomegoodreasonsaccountingfortheirdisbelief.Firstly,theyareafraidofabandonedvehiclesbeingused.

Theyalsoworrythatschoolbuseswillbeoverloaded,sayingthatitmayleadtoserioustrafficaccidents.Inaddition,intheireyes,someschoolbusesarenotequippedwithsafetyequipmentlikesafetybelts.Frommyperspective,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoensurethesafetyofstudents.Yours,LiHuaDearDavid,50Recently,asurveyonscho怎樣使文章更精彩？51怎樣使文章更精彩？16失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面語(yǔ)法使用不準(zhǔn)確英語(yǔ)表述不得體詞匯句式不豐富表達(dá)啰嗦不簡(jiǎn)潔行文邏輯不連貫卷面馬虎不整潔,書(shū)寫(xiě)不規(guī)范寫(xiě)作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)確、連貫52失分追因要點(diǎn)缺失不全面寫(xiě)作的基本要求（四個(gè)詞）切題、完整、準(zhǔn)具體做法：1.高級(jí)詞匯2.帶情感的副詞3.短語(yǔ)代替單詞4.高級(jí)句式5.連詞6.連貫詞53具體做法：181.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語(yǔ)代替單詞)lookatmewatch—2)agood/niceman—3)can’tfindany

way

to

solve

theproblem

fail

tofindasolutiontotheproblem4)Ourschoollifewillbedifficult.--5)Ifwenevergiveup,wemaysucceedfinally.Aslongas...,wearemorelikelytoachievesuccessintheend.6)Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant....isalsoofimportance.7)Moreandmorestudentstaketheirphonetoschool.Anincreasingnumberofstudents...8)AsthenumberofEnglishlearnersisincreasing，it’snotdifficultforthemtounderstandthesewordsinChinesecontexts.ontheriseglance

atkind-hearted/generous/easy-goingchallenging541.使用高級(jí)詞匯(高中詞匯、短語(yǔ)代替單詞)glanceat常見(jiàn)高級(jí)寫(xiě)作詞匯必備1．第一first→tobegin/startwith2．第二second→inaddition/what’smore3．第三，最后finally→lastbutnotleast4．總之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary5．但是but→however6．機(jī)會(huì)chance→opportunity7．選擇choice→alternative8．考慮consider→takeintoaccount/consideration9．充足enough→adequate10．影響effect→influence常見(jiàn)高級(jí)寫(xiě)作詞匯必備11．最終finally→eventually12．勤奮hardworking→diligent13．幫助help→assist14．后果result→consequence15．應(yīng)該should→besupposedto16．缺點(diǎn)shortcoming→drawback17．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout18．可用useful→available19．使用use→employ/makeuseof20．種類(lèi)繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof11．最終finally→eventually21．也；和aswellas→inadditionto/apartfrom22．反對(duì)beagainst→objectto23．厭煩beboredwith→befedupwith24．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with25．發(fā)生happen→occur/comeabout26．幾乎不hardly→barely27．提高improve→promote28．重要important→vital29．立即immediately→inaflash30．不可能impossible→outofthequestion21．也；和aswellas→inaddition31．有趣interesting→absorbing/striking/appealing32．參加join→participate33．幸運(yùn)lucky→fortunate34．巨大large→enormous35．許多many→alargequantityof36．明顯obvious→apparent37．豐富rich→abundant38．小心謹(jǐn)慎becareful→becautious39．與……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom40．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo31．有趣interesting→absorbing/st41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof42．聞名befamousfor→haveareputationfor43．正在建設(shè)beingbuilt→underconstruction44．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease45．在我看來(lái)inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned46．美化學(xué)校makeourschoolbeautiful→beautifyourschool47．故意onpurpose→deliberately/bydesign48．置若罔聞refusetolistento→turnadeafearto49．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit50．無(wú)法描述的美麗toobeautifultodescribe→beautybeyonddescription41．因?yàn)閎ecauseof→onaccountof51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子achildwhobehavesinaproperway→awell-behavedchild52．節(jié)能的房子ahousewhichsavesenergy→anenergy-savinghouse53．一位受到良好教育的婦女a(chǎn)womanwhohasreceivedgoodeducation→awell-educatedwoman54．精心組織的活動(dòng)anactivitythatisorganizedwell→awell-organizedactivity55．一個(gè)愛(ài)好和平的人apersonwholovespeace→apeace-lovingperson51．一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子2.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞Youpatientlytaughtmehowtowritearticles.2)Here,I’mwritingtothankyouforsendingme

suchawonderfulgiftandgiveyouaspecialgiftinreturn.3)Thankyouforyourgeneroushelp.4)Unfortunately,Ilostmywalletonmywayhome.612.使用帶情感的形容詞、副詞263.使用狀語(yǔ)，with/by/despite/inspiteof/becauseof/asaresultof等介詞短語(yǔ),帶高級(jí)詞匯的目的狀語(yǔ)例：Igotothelibrary.Afterschool/Duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoborrowsomebooks.

Inordertomeetthedemandsofbroadeningmyhorizonandenrichingmyknowledge,afterschool/duringthesummervacation,Ioftengototheschoollibrarywithmybestfriendsbybiketoreadbooks,newspapersandmagazines.

623.使用狀語(yǔ)，with/by/despite/inspittobroadenone’shorizontoenrichone’knowledge/schoollifetomeetthedemandsoftogetclosetonaturetorelaxone’brainstobuildupconfidencetobeautifytheenvironmenttogetabetterunderstandingof6328(1)合并句子(豐富結(jié)構(gòu))●_________canIimprovemyoralEnglish__________Ilearnsomecustomsinwesterncountries.●_____________，theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons.__________