英語短文改錯30篇

第16頁共16頁英語短文改錯30篇Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisourmonitorandoneoftheecellentstudentinourclass.Althoughsheisclever,butsheworksveryhard.Wehavealotoncommonandhavealottotalkabout.Oneeveningshetoldmethatsomethinghenedwhenherparentswasout.ShewasdoingherhomeworksoneSundaymorningwhenshesmeltsomethingburning.Shespedlookoutofthedowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbour’shouse.Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.Herneighbourwasverythankfulforherhelp.改錯二Iwenttoseethefilmaftersupper.Onmywaythecinema,ImetanEnglishwoman,wholostherway.Igaveupthechanceseethefilmandtookhertoherhotel.Whilegothere,Itoldheraboutgreatchangesthathadbeentakenplaceinthepastfewyearsandshehadtoldmeanythingabouthercountry.AlthoughImissedthefilm,Istillfeltveryhy,forIhadnotonlyhelpedheroutoftroublebutpractisemyspokenEnglish.IfIhadnotworkedhardonEnglish,Iwouldhavebeenabletohelphim.改錯三DearRalph,I"maseniorstudent.I"mgettingwellwithaboyinmyclass.ButIhavefalleninlovewithhimforalmosthalfayear.Heisshyboy,soIwrotehimaletterfirsttoepressmyfeeling.Hewroteback.Inhisletterhesaid,"Wearestudents.Ourtaskisstudyhard.Letustowaitandseewhetherwehavesomechanceaftergraduation."SoaftergraduationItelephonedtohim,askhimaboutgoingout.Buthesaidhedidn"twantto.HejustwantedtosleepandwatchedTV.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?DoyouthinkIshouldcontinuetolovehimandveup?改錯四DearBob,Hello.IlearnaboutyoufrommyEnglishteacher,MissFang.I’dliketoyourpenfriend,andgettoknowmoreaboutyourcountry.First,letmetellyousomethingmoreaboutmyself.MynameisLiHua.IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.IgotoHongqiMiddleSchool.Westudyquiteafewsubject,suchasmaths,Chinese,Englishandphyss.Iusetoplayping-pongalotonmysparetime,butnowIaminterestinginfootball.Doyouplayanyballgames?Whatyourfavoritesport?Ilookforwardtohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHuaTwomonthsago,Iwenttoabroadforfurtherstudy.BeforeIleft,Iwasvenalotpresent.Amongthem，thereweretwopresentswhhwerereallyinterestedme.Mysisterbuysmeabookwithcolorpturesaboutbodylanguageandwithwordsaboutcustomsofdifferentcountryinthem.Mybrothergavemeanotewhhread,“Mypresenthasputinyourbedroom.”WhenIhurriedintomybedroom,Ifoundabo,inthattherewasanelectrondtionary.Iwasverygladbutafewsurprisedtoreceivethesetwopresents.改錯六DearLiMing,Ihavereceivedyourletteryesterday.Don’tworryaboutyou.I’mgettingalongwellwithmyresearchworksinthelab.But,tomysurprising,yousayyouwillveuplearnEnglish.Thereasonisthatyouhavenotdonewellinitrecentlyandyouhavelostinteresting.I’mafraidIcan’tagreewithyou.IknowitisnoteasytolearnEnglish,andEnglishiswidelyusedintheworldtodayanditwillbeimportanttoolinyourfuturework.Besides,itisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantatourdailylife.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillsucceed.Dorememberwhereisawill,thereisaway.改錯七DearSally,NowI’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmypart-timejob,initIworklikeaguideinatravelagency.ThisisthefirsttimewhenIhaveearnedmoney.I’verealizedwhathardmyparentsworktosupportforthefamily.Iwasusedtoaskthemformoney,butnowI’llneverwastemoneyorlearntoshareworrywithmyparents.I’velearnthowtogetalongwellwithother.What’smore,IhavegainedsomesocialeperienceandIhavelearntsomethingcan’tbelearntfromtetbooks.Intheword,Ihadawonderfullyandvaluablesummervacation.改錯八Sportsisfunandmostpeopleintheworld,whethermenorwoman,boysorrlsenjoythem.Sincelongago,manyadultsandchildrencalledtheirfriendstogethertospendmanyhoursplaygames.Why?Oneofthereasonsisthatsportshelpmakethemlivehy.Intheotherwords,theyhelptokeeppeoplestrongandfeelinggood.Whentheywereplayinggames,theymovealot.Thatiswhysportsaregoodactivitiesfortheirhealthy.Havingfunwiththeirfriendsmakethemhy.Manypeopleenjoysportswithwatchingothersplay.No.9IwenttotheSummerPalaceonlastweek.AtthegateIhenedtomeetsomeAmeratourists.IgreetedhiminEnglishandthenwebegantochat.IgottoknowthattheywerecollegestudentstravelinChina.Theywerebusywithtakingpturesandweremuchimpressedwiththechangeshadtakenplaceinthepastfewyears.Afterwhh,wewentboatingonalakeandhadagoodtime.Weechangedouremailaddresssothatwecouldwritetoeachotheronthefuture.Theythankedmeagainandagain.IwasverygladtohaveachancetopractisingmyoralEnglishNo.10Myclassmateeceptmewereinhighspirits.AtthecomingpartyIwouldhavetodosomecleanings,forIwasn’tabletodanceandsing.Duringtheparty,Itriedtokeeptheroombeingclean.AfterthepartyIgotridtherubbish.Enjoyingmyclassmates’smilingfaces,Ifelttheirjobworthwhile.WhentoldtheroomwillhavebeenadustbinwithoutmeIthoughtofasaying,"Theremusthaveauseformytalent."Youmayhavenospecialtalent,soaslongasyoutrytodogoodineverythinguseful,you’llfindeverythingisbeautifulateverycornerofyourlife.No.11Recently,wehavehadadiscussingaboutifweshouldstudybydiscussinginfreeclass.Viewsvaryfrompersonstoperson.Mostofthestudentsconsiderthatitisofgreatlyhelpstudyingbydiscussinginfreeclass,that,theythink,canhelptofindbetterwaystosolveproblems.Whatismuch,theybelievethattheylearnbydiscussingcanlastlongerintheirmemories.However,thereare35percentsofthestudentsholdingtheoppositeviewitisnotgood.Theyinsistthatdiscussingmeanlackingthinkingandtheloudnoisesiscausedbyitwilldisturbothers.No.12Ourschoolliesonthefootofamountainwithasmallriverpassesby.Itusedtobeaquiet,cleanandbeautifulplaceforaschool.Itisapitywhhthingshavechangedafterachemalfactorywasbuiltnearourschooloneyearago.Everydaythefactoryproducesmanywastewaterandsomeharmfulgases.Theterriblypollutionisharmfultoourhealth.What’sbad,thegreatnoisefromthefactoryhadabadeffectonouractivities.Asaresult,ourschoolisnolongerwhatitusedto.Ourteachersandstudentsaremiserablebeyondthedescription.No.13NowI’dliketotellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.Intheafternoonweareallheldtogetherforour18-years-oldbirthday.Atthefirstwepromisedthatlikegrown-upsweshouldberesponsibleforoursociety.Thenweepressedthanktoourparentswhoeperiencedhardshipstobringusupandourteacherswhoeducatedusheartorsoul.Andourteachersalsogavetouscardsepressingourgoodcongratulationsandwishestous.Finally,weputonwonderfullyperformances.No.14Inthecountrynow,therearemanychildrendonotattendtheschool.Ithinkoneofthereasonsisthattheirfamiliesareverypoortosendthemtoschool.Theyhadtostayathometomakemoneytosupporttheirfamilies.Otherreasonisthatmanyparentsthinkituselessoftherlstostudyandtheydonotlikethemtogotoschool.Athirdreasoniswhatsomechildrenarenotinterestingintheirlessons.Inmyopinion,allchildren,includedrls,havethechancetoreceiveeducation.Everybodyshouldpayattentionfortheeducationofthechildren.No.15Itisknowntous,aseveretusnamioccurredintheIndianOceaninDecember26,204.It’sreportedthatmorethan10countriesweresufferedfromthedisaster.Butitcausedmorethan20,000deathsandleftmillionofpeoplehomeless.Countlesshousesandschoolshavedestroyed.Justimanehowthestudentshereneedhelp.Schoolsshouldberebuiltsothattheycouldreturntoclassessoon.HeretheStudentUnioncallsforeveryonetodosomethingforthem.We’llhaveavoluntarycontributionthisweek.Let’sveawayourpocket’smoney.No.16TheGuangmingMiddleSchoolisinwestofthecity,withtheChengiRiverrunnearby.Whenyouentertheschool,youcanseeabigflowerbedinthefrontofyou,andtwolargebuildingsonbothside:thelibraryonyourrightandtheteachbuildingonyourleft.Walkonfurther,andyouwillfindthesportsbuilding.Behindwhh,therearetwobasketballcourts.Onthenorthofthemisthesportsground.Onit’seastsidestandtwobuildings:thedininghall,orthedormitory.Allthebuildingsoftheschoolissurroundedbybushesandflowers.No.17Onemorning,Mrs.Smith’sdogwashunger.Shetookoutapieceofpaper,thatread,“veithalfapoundofmeat.”Thenshegaveittothedogsaying“Bringittothebutcher’s.”Thedogranhereandgavethepapertothebutcher.Hereaditanddid.Soon,thedogcameagainandgavehimotherpieceofpaper.Withoutlooking,hedidsooncemore.Twohourslateitcameagain.HewanderedwhyMrs.Smithgaveitsomuchmeat.Hereadthepaperandfoundouttherewasnotasinglewordonit.Whatacleverdogitwas!No.18Mr.Chenhasahabitofdrink.Thebestpresenttohim,ofcourse,ise.HistheeldestsonbroughthimabottleofMaoTai.Hewasgladanddrankthemup.Thenhewrote“105”onthetrademarkwithapencil,meanthehadalreadydrunk105bottlesthee.Twodayslate,astrangercameandofferedtopaying5Yuanfortheemptybottle.Mr.Chenwasverypleasntandsoldit.Severaldayslater,hissecondsonbroughthimotherbottleofMaoTai.Whileenjoyingit,hesuddenlyfoundout“105”theverymarkonit.No.19Onedayalawyerhenedtoseeamanbeatadonkeywithastk.“Whywereyoudoingthat?”askedthelawyer.“Tomakethedonkeytogo.”answeredtheman.“Haveyourighttobeattheanimallikethat?”askedthelawyeronceagain.“CertainIhave.”saidtheman.“ItismydonkeyandIcandothatI’dliketowithwhatismy”.Thelawyerthoughtforaminuteandtookhisownstkandbeattheman.“Sping!”criedtheman,“Areyoumad?”“Oh,yes.ThisismystkandIcandowhatIlikewithwhatwasmine.”No.20Anoldmanwasseatinginanarmchairathome,readinghisnewspaper.Besidehimlayadogsleepsoundly.Theoldmandecidedtoleavinghomeforawhile,andhecouldn’tgooutwithhisslipperson.Sohewokeupthedogandletitfetchedtheshoesforhim.Outofitsepectation,thedogdidn’tevenstand,butjustbarkedwithtwoeyesclosedagain.Hewascompletepuzzled.Ashewaswonderingwhatwashening,acatearedinthefrontofhim.Whydoyouthinkacatcamethere?No.21ShowrespecttoparentsisoneoftheChinesetraditionalmoralvalue.Asmostofthestudentstodayare“theonlychild”intheirfamily,theyoftenregardthemasthe“centre”ofthefamily,withoutcaringmanyabouttheirparents.Ourschoolstartaprogrammewhenthenewyearcame.Itis“Respectingparentsprogramme”.Ten“Do’s”haveworkedoutforthestudentstofollowclearlyandeasily.Theyinclud:“Rememberyourparents”birthdaysandepressyou"rethebestwishestothem;tell“hello”toyourparentsseethemreturninghome;andtellyourparentswhereyougowhenyouleavehome.”Theprogrammehasbeensuccessfully.No.22WelcometoHolland!Ihopeyouallenjoyyourstayinghere.I’mgladyouhavecomeonApril,forspringiscertainlyabestseasontogettoknowHolland.I’msureyouwillamazedbythecolorandvarietyofalltheflowers.Youwon’tbeabletostakingphotograph!Wehavemanybeautifultowns.IsuggestyoustartbytakingaboatstripontheCanals.It’sarelaedwayofvisitingtheoldcanalhouses.Thenyoucanvisittoourmuseumsandchurches.Youdon’thavetoworryaboutlanguageproblemsthere.Justhaveapleasedtripandcomeagainnetyear.No.23ThisissaidthatGreatbiolostDarwasamanwithasenseofhumor.Onceheisinvitedtodinner.Atthedinner,hehenedtositnetayounggood-lookingwoman.“Mr.Dar,”thewomanaskedabiolost,“Iheardofyouhavemadeasurprisingconclusionwhhtheperson"sancestoristhemonkey.Iamsuitableforyourowofjudgment?”“Certainly.”Darwell-manneredreplied.“Iamlikethemonkey?”"Yes,youaren’t.Andyouwerechangednotfromtheordinarymonkey,butfromtheetremeattractivemonkey.”No.24Iamshywhenatschool.Iwasafraidofspeakinginfrontoftheclass.WhenIhadtofacesuchmanyclassmates,Ifeltnervousbutmyvoeandlegsshook.Myteachershelpedmealotof.Theyoftenencouragedmetoanswerquestioninclassandtogototheteachers’desktoreadlessons.SometimeIfeltIdidn’tdosowellbuttheyspokehighofme.Meanwhile,myclassmateskindlyaskedmetojointhemallkindsofactivities.Allthesehelpedmewithmyconfidence.SincethenonIdaredtodothatIwantedto.No.25WhenteaandcoffeewasfirstintroducedtoEuropeinthe18thcentury,peoplethoughttheywereharm.SothekingofSwededecidedtofindwhetherthiswastrueornot.Itwashenedthatthereweretwobrotherswhomwereinprisonthen.Thekingorderedoneofthemtodrinkteaeverydayandtheotherscoffee.Allofthemlivedformanyyearswithoutanyproblem.Theonewhohadtodrinkteadiedintheageof83andtheotherlivedevenlong.Therefore,Swedeisoneofthecountriestheremuchteaandcoffeearedrunk.No.26MywifeandmespenttwoweeksinLondonlastyear.Wewenthereinautumn.WestayedinasmallhotelintheWestEnd.Itwasconvenientaswedomostofoursightseeingonfoot.Taiswasquitetooepensive.Wecouldn’tunderstandthebusroutes,butmywifedidn’tliketravelingbytheunderground.Shesaiditmadehertofeelsk.Wewenttolookattheplaceswhhalltouristssee.WesawtheBuckinghamPalace.WecameshoppinginOfordStreetandspenttoomanymoney.Whatwelikedmost,though,wasgoingtotheatre.No.27OnedayIhenedtofindoutachattingroominmy,therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish.Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem.Tomysurprise,IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme.Iaskedthemforadvesandtheytoldmetopractisemoreon.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishon.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandepression.Withtimegoingby,IfoundIcouldevencommunatesomecollegestudentsfreely.No.28TheInternetisacomputernetworkusethetelephonesystemtolinktogethermillionofcomputersaroundtheworld.Onceyou’reconnectedtotheInternet,andtherearelotsofdifferencethingsyoucando.Youcansend“e-mail”toyourfriendsaslongastheywereontheInternet,orlookingthroughallsortsofinformationontheWorldWideWeb.Youdon’tneedknowhowtheInternetworksinordertousethem.ButifyouunderstandthebasswhhmayhelpyousolvemanyproblemsyouhaveandyoucanimpressyourfriendsbyyourNetknowledge!No.29Mr.Huangissityyearsoldandhadretired.HetaughtourchemistrywhenwewereinGradeOne.Hetaughtverywell.Hetriedhisbesttomakehisclasseslive.Heusuallymadewellpreparationsforthelessonsandwasstrtwithus.Eachtimewhenwemademistakesinourhomework,hewouldaskustocorrectit.Iwaspoorinchemistry.Heoftenhelpsmewithmystudypatiently.WithhishelpImadegreatprogresses.Hewasverykindtohisstudents.Aseperiencedteacherhewasrespectedorlovedbyallthestudents.No.30LastweekIwenttoamovie,whhwasverytouched.Itwasasadmovieaboutamotherandhersons.Whenthechildwasalittleboy,hismotherwasverypoorthatshehadtosendhimforarhfamilywhohadnochild.Theboyreceivedaverygoodeducationandtwentyyearslatehebecameadoctor.Inhishospital,hehadapatient,anoldlady.Hedoesn’tcaretoomuchabouther,forshecouldhardlyaffordforthemedalcare.Oneevening,theladydiedquietlyandonherbedthedoctorfoundaletter,inwhhhediscoveredtruthandfelttheloveofagreatmother.Hewantedtocallhismother,anditwastoolate.Everybodyinthetheatrewasmovedtotears.答案：改錯一：who"s改為whose2.正確3.去掉but4.on改為in5.parents后加were6.homeworks改為homework7.sped后加to8.find改為found9.immediate改為immediately10.fire前加the改錯二：the改為a2.正確3.see前加to4.go改為going5.去掉been6.去掉had7.去掉but8.去掉had9.on改為at10.him改為her改錯三：1.getting后加on或along2.fallen改為been3.shy前加a4.feeling改為feelings當(dāng)情感講時feeling常用單數(shù)5.study前加to或study改為studying6.去掉to7.去掉to8.watched改為watch9正確10.and改為or改錯四：1.learn改為learnt或learned。2.to后加be或become。3.刪去more。第一次告訴Bob關(guān)于自己的一些事情，此處用more不合邏輯。4.where改為whh。在此非限定性定語從句中，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，故用whh。5.此行無錯。6.subject改為subjects。quitsafew意為“相當(dāng)多”，修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。7.use改為used。據(jù)下文butnow可知，此處應(yīng)用usedtodo表示“過去常常做某事”。8.interesting改為interested。beinterestedin…為固定短語，“對……感興趣”。9.What后加is。此句無謂語。10.hear改為hearing。lookforwardtodoingsth.為固定短語。改錯五：答案：76．去掉to短語錯誤。goabroad“出國”。77．present→presents名詞的數(shù)錯誤。present“禮物”，是可數(shù)名詞。78．去掉第二個were動詞錯誤。interest在此是及物動詞用法，意為“使……感興趣”。beinterestedin“對……感興趣”。79．buys→bought時態(tài)錯誤。由全文可知，用一般過去時態(tài)。80．√81．them→it代詞錯誤。在這本書里有關(guān)于肢體語言的圖片和不同國家的語言習(xí)俗。用it指代這本書。82．put前加been語態(tài)錯誤。我的禮物被放在了你的臥室里了。禮物是被放在臥室里，所以用被動語態(tài)。83．that→whh定語從句關(guān)系詞錯誤。介詞后用whh，不用that。84．but→and連接邏輯錯誤。前后是并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。85．few→little混淆錯誤。alittle與little可以用作副詞，表示“有點”“稍稍”，修飾動詞、副詞、形容詞或介詞短語。如：Heisalittletired.他有點累了。而afew不可用作副詞。改錯六1.have去掉2.about后的you改為me3.works→work4.learn→learning5.recent→eresting→interest7.English后的and改為but8.be后加an9.at→in10.where后加there改錯六41.about→with/to根據(jù)句意，可知此處是表達“和父母交談”，而不是“談?wù)摳改浮薄?2.as→evenif意為“好像”，與句意不符；根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)是表達讓步關(guān)系。故用evenif,意為“即使”。43.going→gettinggetalongwellwith是固定短語，意為“和…相片融洽”。44.√45.way→wayssome在此處修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。46.walk前加agooutforawalk意為“出去散步”47.and→or此處表選擇關(guān)系。48.are→were“他們年輕時候”應(yīng)用動詞的過去式。49.our→their和they保持一致。50.honesty→honest形容詞honest作表語。改錯七1.it—whh2.like—as3.when—that4.what—how5.wasused去掉was6.or—and7.other—others8.something后加that9.theword→a10.wonderfully—wonderful改錯八1.Sportsis→are2.woman→women3.called前加have4.playgames→playing5.hy→hily6.theother去掉the7.theywere→are8.healthy→health9.make→makes10.with→byNo.91.onlast去掉on2.Ameratourists→Ameran3.greetedhim→them4.studentstravel→travelling5.busywith去掉with6.changes后加that7.Afterwhh→that8.emailaddress→addresses9.onthe→in10.topractising→practiseNo.101.Myclassmate→classmates2.somecleanings→cleaning3.andsing→or4.beingclean去掉being5.rid后加of6.theirjob→my7.willhave→would8.musthave→be9.soas→but10.dogoodin→wellNo.111.adisscussing→discussion2.frompersons→person3.greatly→great4.that→whh5.much→more6.believethat→what7.percents→percent8.view后加that9.mean→means10.去掉isNo.121.on→at2.passes→passing3.whh→that4.after→since5.many→much6.terribly→terrible7.bad→worse8.had→hasdoc/c71a84196e1aff00bed5b9f3f90f76c661374c9a.htmledto后加be10.去掉theNo.131.took前加that2.are→were3.18-years-old→18-year-old4.去掉first前面的the5.like→as6.thank→thanks7.or→and8.去掉gave后面的to9.epressingour→their10.wonderfully→wonderfulNo.141.children前加who/that2.去掉attend后面的the3.very→too4.had→have5.other→another6.of→for7.what→eresting→interested9.included→including10.for→toNo.151.Itis→As2.inDecember→on3.weresuffered去掉were4.But→Alion→millions6.destroyed前加been7.studentshere→there8.theycould→can9.callsfor→on10.pocket’s→pocketNo.161.west前加the2.run→running3.thefront去掉the4.bothside→sides5.teachbuilding→teaching6.further→farther7.Behindwhh→it8.Onit’s→