英語考試CET4寫作技巧講練課件

CET4WritingCET4Writing1關(guān)于CET4作文作文分?jǐn)?shù)為142分，占總分的15%。要求在30分鐘之內(nèi)寫出一篇120詞左右的短文。作文體裁包括：議論文、說明文、應(yīng)用文等。關(guān)于CET4作文作文分?jǐn)?shù)為142分，占總分的15%。2CET4作文樣題PartI.Writing(30minutes)Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時尚2.

網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題3.

我的建議CET4作文樣題PartI.Writing(30mi3CET4作文結(jié)構(gòu)示意圖

題目：××××××段落I.主題句。推展句1.（論據(jù)或例證，下同）。推展句2.。推展句3。段落II.主題句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.結(jié)尾句1.（根據(jù)需要而定，可有可無）段落III.主題句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.結(jié)尾句1.（統(tǒng)攬全文，呼應(yīng)中心）CET4作文結(jié)構(gòu)示意圖4WritingSkillsLectureSeriesWritingSkillsLectureSeries5第一步：審題（1-2分鐘）1.

題目：aboutonlineshopping2.

三個段首句：A段.提出現(xiàn)象B段.分析現(xiàn)象C段.表明個人觀點(diǎn)，建議

第一步：審題（1-2分鐘）6第二步：布局（5分鐘）（用英語思維）段落I.主題句+推展句1.（對現(xiàn)象的具體闡述)+推展句2（結(jié)果）.段落II.主題句(好處)+推展句1（原因1-convenient,time-saving）+推展句2（原因2-diversityofproductstochoosefrom）+主題句（問題）+推展句1（原因1-beaddicted,becheated）.段落III.推展句1(budget)+推展句2(choosecertainonlineshopsorsalers)+結(jié)尾句1.（統(tǒng)攬全文，呼應(yīng)中心）第二步：布局（5分鐘）（用英語思維）段落I.主題句+推7第三步：行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）A段：第一句-完全翻譯提示：CurrentlyNowadaysWiththedevelopmentofeconomyandscience

/theinternet,onlineshoppingbecomesmoreandmorecommonandithasbecomeafashion.近義表達(dá)法：受歡迎-onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityeveronlineshoppingiswelcomed第三步：行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）8行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）句子太簡單，擴(kuò)展-同位語，定語從句，狀語：同位語：網(wǎng)上購物是什么：在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上購買商品與服務(wù)的行為OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet定語從句：網(wǎng)上購物的影響：大大地震動了/影響了我們的生活方式Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）句子太簡單，擴(kuò)展-同位語9合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityever.OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet.Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowi10合并：Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,isgrowinginpopularityever,whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles.合并：Onlineshopping,asanact11行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）狀語：onlineshoppingiswelcomedby?onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeople,especiallyyoungpeople由于？becauseof/duetodiversereasons.合并：Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.

Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,iswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）狀語：onlinesh12行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句：Who?what?Who:Manyofficeemployees/universitystudentsWhat:havethehabitofonlineshopping/showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket

Itisestimatedthathalfoftheofficeemployeesorthreefourthsuniversitystudentshavethehabitofonlineshoppingandmorethan12%showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket.第三句：resultWhatispredictableisthatthetrendlikethiswillundoubtedlycontinueintheyearstocome.增加句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜性行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句：Who?what13行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段第一句翻譯提示Admittedly,shoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages,amongwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.第二句原因一：time-savingwho?what?why?Who:Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhours行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段14行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）What:nothaveadequatetimetoshopduringregulartradinghours合并：Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhoursdonothaveadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours,whileonlineretailersalloworderstwenty-fourhoursaday.(表對比)行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）What:notha15行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhourshaving

inadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghourswillfeelgreatexcitementwhenjustsittinginfrontofthecomputer,kickingthekeyboardandlookingatthescreentochoosethethingtheywanttobuywithoutsteppingoutoftheroom.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）Somepeople,16行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句原因二：diversityofproductsFurthermore/What’smore/Aswell,onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesofadiversityofproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription.第三句原因三：lessexpensive,conventionalstoresInmostoccasions,theitemsarelessexpensiveonlinethanintheconventionalstores,makingitanappealtomostpeople.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句原因二：diver17行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段：主題句（壞處）Whilethereare/Despitenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping,therearealsothreatsandfearsregarding/concerning/respectingthiswayofshopping.原因：（不用順序詞，簡要些）beaddicted,becheatedBecauseofvarietiesof/avarietyofchoicesandgreatconvenience,peoplearelikelytobeaddictedtoonlineshopping,whichwillresult/resultinginoverspending.Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段：主題句（壞處）18行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第三段：不需要主題句(建議要針對問題)Budget,choosereputedonlineshopsFrommyperspective/Inmyviewpoint/InmyopinionIsuggestthatonlineshoppers(should)restrictthemselvestoreasonablepurchasesbysettingabudget./Andbuyingonreputed/reputableonlinestores/onlymakingordersfromreputedonlineshopsisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第三段：不需要主題句(建19CET4作文常用詞匯或套語一.

轉(zhuǎn)承語：Besides,inaddition,moreover,however,nevertheless,despiteof+noun(thefactthat…),inspiteof….二.

列舉要點(diǎn)：foronething,…foranother,…Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…Firstly,…Secondly,…Thirdly,…Finally,…CET4作文常用詞匯或套語一.

轉(zhuǎn)承語：20CET4作文常用詞匯或套語三.

羅列觀點(diǎn)用詞：argue,insistthat,consider,think,maintainthat,recommendthat,suggestthat.四.描述趨勢、動態(tài)用詞（主要用于圖表作文）：increase,decrease,drop,fall,rise,decline,fluctuate,sharply,dramatically,slightly,greatly,moderately.CET4作文常用詞匯或套語三.

羅列觀點(diǎn)用詞：21CET4作文常用詞匯或套語五.

時間詞：inrecentyears,inthepastfewdecades,nowadays,today,inmoderntimes,inourtimes(age).六.

引述個人觀點(diǎn)用詞：AsfarasIamconcerned,Asforme,Inmypart,speakingfrommyownexperience.七.

引述原因用詞：Whyisthat?It’sprobablybecause…,Whathascausedtheproblem?Thereasonwhy…isthat…CET4作文常用詞匯或套語五.

時間詞：22CET4作文常用詞匯或套語八.總結(jié)論點(diǎn)用詞：Tosumup,Inconclusion,Allinall.九.

表述明確觀點(diǎn)用詞：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Undoubtedly;Nodoubt…十.

引述結(jié)果用詞：Asaresult,Asaconsequence,Asamatterofthefact.CET4作文常用詞匯或套語八.總結(jié)論點(diǎn)用詞：233.怎樣寫好英語段落主題句的位置

主題句通常放在段落的開端，其特點(diǎn)是開門見山地擺出問題，然后加以詳細(xì)說明。其作用是使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰，更具說服力，便于讀者迅速地把握主題和想象全段的內(nèi)容。主題句可以放在段中起到承上啟下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初學(xué)者比較難于掌握，因而在四級考試中，考生應(yīng)盡量采用將主題句放在段落開頭的寫作手法。3.怎樣寫好英語段落主題句的位置

主題句通常放在段落的開24寫作中常用的經(jīng)典句型寫作中常用的經(jīng)典句型251.~~~the+~est+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard,etc)Ofallthefactorsthatcontributetoone’ssuccess,hardworkandopportunityarethemostimportantonesthatmostpeoplehaveacknowledged.1.~~~the+~est+名詞+(tha262.Nothingis+~~~erthanto+V

or:Nothingis+more+形容詞+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceivegoodeducation.Nothingismoredifficultthantobesuccessfulbothinfamilylifeandpersonalcareerinone’slife.2.Nothingis+~~~erthanto273.Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...

(不可否認(rèn)，......)Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlifehavegonefrombadtogood.Thereisnodenyingthatourglobeisbeingthreatenedbyenvironmentalpollution.3.Thereisnodenyingthat+284.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~

(全世界都知道...)Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattheeconomicglobalizationishavingmoreandmoreinfluenceonourlives.4.Itisuniversallyacknowled295.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~

(毫無疑問,......)Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫無疑問，我們的教育制度令人不滿意。Thereisnodoubtthatpeaceanddevelopmenthavebecometheessentialaspectsinourmoderntimes.毫無疑問，和平與發(fā)展已經(jīng)成為當(dāng)今時代的主流。5.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子306.Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子

(...的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是...)Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon‘tcreate(produce)anypollution.Anadvantageofkeepingpetsisthatpetscanbecomepeople’sgoodcompanions.6.Anadvantageof~~~isthat317.Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子

(...的原因是...)Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.ThereasonwhypeoplechoosetomakefriendsonlineisprobablythattheywanttobroadentheirsocialcirclesthroughInternet.7.Thereasonwhy+句子~~~is328.So+形容詞+be+主詞+that+句子

(….是如此...以致于...)Sopreciousistimethatwecan‘taffordtowasteit.

時間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費(fèi)它。SorewardingiscollegelifethatthereisnothingthatIwilltradeforit.8.So+形容詞+be+主詞+that+339.Adj+as+Subject(主詞)+be,S+V~~~

(雖然...)Richasourcountryis,thequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一點(diǎn)也不}雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對令人不滿意。9.Adj+as+Subject(主詞)+be,3410.The+~er+S+V,~~~the+~er+S+V~~~越是……越是……Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.

越是努力，你就會越進(jìn)步。Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecome.

我們書讀越多，我們就越有學(xué)問。10.The+~er+S+V,~~~the3511.By+Ving,~~can~~

(憑借......，……能夠…..)Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthy.憑借運(yùn)動，我們能夠始終保持健康。Bybeingfriendlytoothers,wewillmakeallkindsoffriendswhereverwego.11.By+Ving,~~can~~

3612.~~~enable+Object(受詞)+to+V

(..使..能夠..)Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxed.聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。Readingextensivelywillenableustoacquireallkindsofknowledgefrombooks.12.~~~enable+Object(受詞)+t3713.Onnoaccountcanwe+V~~~

(我們絕對不能...)Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。Onnoaccountshallwedisregardtheexistenceanddignityofothers.13.Onnoaccountcanwe+V~3814.Itistime+S+過去式

(該是...的時候了)Itistimetheauthoritiesconcernedtookproperstepstosolvethetrafficproblems.該是有關(guān)當(dāng)局采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧﹣斫鉀Q交通問題的時候了。Itishightimethatwerealizedthenegativeeffectsofstudents’playingPCgamesinclasshours.14.Itistime+S+過去式

3915.Itisconceivablethat+句子(可想而知的)

Itisobviousthat+句子(明顯的)

Itisapparentthat+句子(顯然的)Itisconceivablethatknowledgeplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Itisobviousthatthedevelopmentofanationreliesmuchontalentsandthecultivationoftalentsdependsoneducation.15.Itisconceivablethat+句4016.Itpaysto+V~~~

(...是值得的。)Justasasayinggoes“givesomeonearoseandthefragranceremainsinyourhand.”Soitpaystohelpothers.有句話說得好“給人玫瑰，手有余香”。因此，幫助別人是值得的。Itpaystoinvestoneducationinthelongrun.16.Itpaysto+V~~~

4117.bebasedon(以...為基礎(chǔ)，建立在…之上)Theprogressofthesocietyisbasedonharmony.社會的進(jìn)步是以和諧為基礎(chǔ)的。Asisknowntoall,therelationshipbetweentwocountriesisbasedonequalityandmutualinterests.17.bebasedon(以...為基礎(chǔ)，建立在…之4218.Sparenoeffortto+V

(不遺余力地去……)Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.我們應(yīng)該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。Althoughitisstillalongwaytogo,wemustsparenoeffortstomakeoursocietymoreharmoniousanddeveloped.18.Sparenoeffortto+V

4319.Haveagreatinfluenceon~~~

(對...有很大的影響)Internetishavinggreaterinfluencesonourlives.Itcannotbeignoredthatourdietsarehavingmoresignificantinfluencesonourhealth.19.Haveagreatinfluenceon4420.dogoodto(對...有益)

doharmto(對...有害)Readingdoesgoodtoourmind.

讀書對心靈有益。Overworkdoesharmtohealth.工作過度對健康有害。20.dogoodto(對...有益)

4521.Poseagreatthreatto~~

(對...造成一大威脅)Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.污染對我們的生存造成一大威脅。Terrorismhasbeenposingagreatthreattothepeaceandstabilityoftheworld.21.Poseagreatthreatto~~4622.doone‘sutmostto+V=doone‘sbest

(盡全力去...)Weshoulddoourutmosttoachieveourgoalinlife.我們應(yīng)盡全力去實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的人生目標(biāo)。22.doone‘sutmostto+V=d47寫作中常用的句式寫作中常用的句式481.復(fù)合句：定語從句名詞性從句狀語從句1.復(fù)合句：定語從句492.非謂語動詞短語不定式短語現(xiàn)在分詞短語過去分詞短語2.非謂語動詞短語不定式短語503.虛擬句式If…Without/Butfor(that)…Itishightimethat…Suggest/advocate/propose…that…3.虛擬句式If…514.強(qiáng)調(diào)句式“Itbe…that…”用于表達(dá)對某種因素的強(qiáng)調(diào)。e.g.Itisoutofremarkablebenefitsthatmanymanufacturersproducefakeorpoor-qualityproducts.4.強(qiáng)調(diào)句式“Itbe…that…”用于表達(dá)對某種因素的525.倒裝句式Bynomeans/Onnoaccount/Never…引導(dǎo)的部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，用以加強(qiáng)觀點(diǎn)。e.g.Bynomeansshallweseelessofthenegativeeffectsthatchattingonlinemighthaveonourlives.5.倒裝句式Bynomeans/Onnoaccou536.并列句式常見由notonly…butalso,aswellas,inaddition,moreover,onthecontrary,therefore,asaresult等連接的并列句式。6.并列句式常見由notonly…butalso,547.對比或比照句式Justas…,…e.g.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,…h(huán)asitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Like/Unlike…,…Likemostcountriesintheworld,Chinaisalsofacedwiththesocialproblemsofagingpopulation.7.對比或比照句式Justas…,…55作文練習(xí)題作文練習(xí)題56CET作文練習(xí)題KeepingPets隨著生活水平的提高，越來越多的人喜歡養(yǎng)寵物。分析潛在的原因。養(yǎng)寵物對動物是禍?zhǔn)歉＃緾ET作文練習(xí)題KeepingPets57Model:Inrecentyears,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard,moreandmoreChinesepeoplechoosetokeepallkindsofpets,suchasdogs,cats,parrotsandthelike.Whydosomanypeoplelikekeepingpets?

Ontheonehand,somepeoplepursuementalsatisfactiononbasisofmaterialenjoymentbykeepingpets;ontheotherhand,peoplekeeppetsinhopeofrelievingtheirworkpressure.Inaddition,someoldorsinglepeoplekeepcompanywiththeirpetstoeasetheirloneliness.Lastbutnotleast,keepingpetsisalsoareflectionofpeople'sgrowingawarenessofanimalprotection.Model:Inrecentyears,withth58Iskeepingpetsablessingormisfortuneforanimals?

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,keepingpetshasitspositiveandnegativesenses.

Ontheonehand,keepingpetshelpstoenhancepeople’sawarenessofanimalprotectionandtodevelophumanaffectionsforanimals.Ontheotherhand,livinginhumancommunitieswilldepriveanimalsoftheirwildnaturetogetherwiththeirfreedomandabilitiestosurvive,whichwillturnouttobeamisfortuneforanimals.Ifwehumanbeingscantreatourpetsinmoreproperways,maybewecanbalancebetweenthegoodandbadsidesofkeepingpets.提示：勿提及傳播疾病、玩物喪志等，以免離題。Iskeepingpetsablessingor59CET作文練習(xí)題MakingFriendsOnline為什么許多人熱衷于網(wǎng)上交友？網(wǎng)上交友的利與弊。我的看法。CET作文練習(xí)題MakingFriendsOnline60Model:WiththerapiddevelopmentofITtechnology,Internethasbecomeamostadvancedmeansofcommunicationforpeople.Asaresult,moreandmorepeopleenjoymakingfriendsonline.

Justaseverycoinhastwosides,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeadouble-edgedswordforpeople.

Ontheonehand,Internetprovidesuswithwidersocialcirclesinwhichwecanmeetandmakefriendswithpeopleinallpartsoftheworld,andwecanbroadenourhorizonbymakingfriendsofdifferentraces,sexes,culturesandprofessions.Ontheotherhand,sinceInternetisavirtualworld,wecaneasilyfallintothetrapshiddenbehindit.Model:Withtherapiddevelopme61Moreover,addictionstothevirtualspacemay,inthelongrun,depriveusofthenormalsocialabilitiesandfurtherisolateusfromtherealsociety.AsfarasIamconcerned,sincemenaretheholdersofthedouble-edgedsword,it’salluptoustomakegooduseofthisnewwayofmakingfriends.Foronething,weshouldstayalertwhenmakingfriendsonline.Neverbereadilydependentonothersbeforeconfirmation.Foranother,weshouldneverrelytoomuchonmakingfriendsonline,instead,weshouldkeeptouchwithpeoplearoundintherealsocietyincaseweendnowhereinthevirtualworldofInternet.whetherlikeitornot,makingfriendsonlineisandwillstillbeanimportantpartofourlife.Moreover,addictionstoth62CET作文練習(xí)題WhoShouldTakeCareoftheOld?老年人應(yīng)該由子女還是政府來贍養(yǎng)？各自的利與弊。我的看法。CET作文練習(xí)題WhoShouldTakeCareo63CET作文練習(xí)題IsNewsReliable?如今，新聞炒作(publicityhype)屢見不鮮。新聞的可信度(reliability)是否值得懷疑？如何才能提高新聞的可信度？CET作文練習(xí)題IsNewsReliable?64CET作文練習(xí)題ProblemsWithTravelingAbroad隨著生活水平的不斷提高，越來越多的人熱衷于出國旅游。出國旅游有利也有弊。就我個人而言，……CET作文練習(xí)題ProblemsWithTravelin65CET作文練習(xí)題PeasantWorkers近年來，許多民工涌入大城市。民工為城市建設(shè)作出了很大貢獻(xiàn)。然而，他們也帶來了不少問題。CET作文練習(xí)題PeasantWorkers66OntheOpeningoftheUniversityCampustoTourists

近來一段時間，有些名校如清華和北大的校園紛紛向外界開放。人們對這一做法看法不一。談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)。作文練習(xí)題OntheOpeningoftheUniversi67CET作文練習(xí)題Youareauniversitystudentlivingonthecampus.Onedayyoufindsomethingwrongwithyouraccommodation.SoyouwritealettertotheAccommodationServicesCenterandtellthemwhathappened,whatyouexpectthemtodo.CET作文練習(xí)題Youareauniversitys68CET作文練習(xí)題Yourfriendwritestoyouandtellsyouthatheishesitatinginchoosingcomputerorhistoryashismajorinuniversity.Writetohimandtellhimyouropinion.CET作文練習(xí)題Yourfriendwritesto69CET作文練習(xí)題Youhavebrokenyourlegandhavetostayinhospital.Youreceivedmanycardsandlettersfromyourclassmates.Writealettertotellthemyourpresentconditionandthankthemfortheirkindness.CET作文練習(xí)題Youhavebrokenyourl70CET4WritingCET4Writing71關(guān)于CET4作文作文分?jǐn)?shù)為142分，占總分的15%。要求在30分鐘之內(nèi)寫出一篇120詞左右的短文。作文體裁包括：議論文、說明文、應(yīng)用文等。關(guān)于CET4作文作文分?jǐn)?shù)為142分，占總分的15%。72CET4作文樣題PartI.Writing(30minutes)Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.1.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時尚2.

網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題3.

我的建議CET4作文樣題PartI.Writing(30mi73CET4作文結(jié)構(gòu)示意圖

題目：××××××段落I.主題句。推展句1.（論據(jù)或例證，下同）。推展句2.。推展句3。段落II.主題句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.結(jié)尾句1.（根據(jù)需要而定，可有可無）段落III.主題句。推展句1.。推展句2.。推展句3.結(jié)尾句1.（統(tǒng)攬全文，呼應(yīng)中心）CET4作文結(jié)構(gòu)示意圖74WritingSkillsLectureSeriesWritingSkillsLectureSeries75第一步：審題（1-2分鐘）1.

題目：aboutonlineshopping2.

三個段首句：A段.提出現(xiàn)象B段.分析現(xiàn)象C段.表明個人觀點(diǎn)，建議

第一步：審題（1-2分鐘）76第二步：布局（5分鐘）（用英語思維）段落I.主題句+推展句1.（對現(xiàn)象的具體闡述)+推展句2（結(jié)果）.段落II.主題句(好處)+推展句1（原因1-convenient,time-saving）+推展句2（原因2-diversityofproductstochoosefrom）+主題句（問題）+推展句1（原因1-beaddicted,becheated）.段落III.推展句1(budget)+推展句2(choosecertainonlineshopsorsalers)+結(jié)尾句1.（統(tǒng)攬全文，呼應(yīng)中心）第二步：布局（5分鐘）（用英語思維）段落I.主題句+推77第三步：行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）A段：第一句-完全翻譯提示：CurrentlyNowadaysWiththedevelopmentofeconomyandscience

/theinternet,onlineshoppingbecomesmoreandmorecommonandithasbecomeafashion.近義表達(dá)法：受歡迎-onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityeveronlineshoppingiswelcomed第三步：行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）78行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）句子太簡單，擴(kuò)展-同位語，定語從句，狀語：同位語：網(wǎng)上購物是什么：在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上購買商品與服務(wù)的行為OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet定語從句：網(wǎng)上購物的影響：大大地震動了/影響了我們的生活方式Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）句子太簡單，擴(kuò)展-同位語79合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowinginpopularityever.OnlineshoppingisanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet.Onlineshoppinghasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles/hasmadeabigimpactonourlifestyles.合并下列三句Onlineshoppingisgrowi80合并：Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,isgrowinginpopularityever,whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles.合并：Onlineshopping,asanact81行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）狀語：onlineshoppingiswelcomedby?onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeople,especiallyyoungpeople由于？becauseof/duetodiversereasons.合并：Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.

Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,iswelcomedbymostpeopleduetodiversereasons.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）狀語：onlinesh82行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句：Who?what?Who:Manyofficeemployees/universitystudentsWhat:havethehabitofonlineshopping/showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket

Itisestimatedthathalfoftheofficeemployeesorthreefourthsuniversitystudentshavethehabitofonlineshoppingandmorethan12%showtheirinterestinitmorethanshoppinginthesupermarket.第三句：resultWhatispredictableisthatthetrendlikethiswillundoubtedlycontinueintheyearstocome.增加句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜性行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句：Who?what83行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段第一句翻譯提示Admittedly,shoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages,amongwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.第二句原因一：time-savingwho?what?why?Who:Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhours行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段84行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）What:nothaveadequatetimetoshopduringregulartradinghours合并：Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhoursdonothaveadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours,whileonlineretailersalloworderstwenty-fourhoursaday.(表對比)行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）What:notha85行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）Somepeople,particularlythosewhoworkforlengthyhourshaving

inadequatetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghourswillfeelgreatexcitementwhenjustsittinginfrontofthecomputer,kickingthekeyboardandlookingatthescreentochoosethethingtheywanttobuywithoutsteppingoutoftheroom.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）Somepeople,86行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句原因二：diversityofproductsFurthermore/What’smore/Aswell,onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesofadiversityofproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription.第三句原因三：lessexpensive,conventionalstoresInmostoccasions,theitemsarelessexpensiveonlinethanintheconventionalstores,makingitanappealtomostpeople.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二句原因二：diver87行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段：主題句（壞處）Whilethereare/Despitenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping,therearealsothreatsandfearsregarding/concerning/respectingthiswayofshopping.原因：（不用順序詞，簡要些）beaddicted,becheatedBecauseofvarietiesof/avarietyofchoicesandgreatconvenience,peoplearelikelytobeaddictedtoonlineshopping,whichwillresult/resultinginoverspending.Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第二段：主題句（壞處）88行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第三段：不需要主題句(建議要針對問題)Budget,choosereputedonlineshopsFrommyperspective/Inmyviewpoint/InmyopinionIsuggestthatonlineshoppers(should)restrictthemselvestoreasonablepurchasesbysettingabudget./Andbuyingonreputed/reputableonlinestores/onlymakingordersfromreputedonlineshopsisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping.行文（15-18分鐘）（用英語思維）第三段：不需要主題句(建89CET4作文常用詞匯或套語一.

轉(zhuǎn)承語：Besides,inaddition,moreover,however,nevertheless,despiteof+noun(thefactthat…),inspiteof….二.

列舉要點(diǎn)：foronething,…foranother,…Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…Firstly,…Secondly,…Thirdly,…Finally,…CET4作文常用詞匯或套語一.

轉(zhuǎn)承語：90CET4作文常用詞匯或套語三.

羅列觀點(diǎn)用詞：argue,insistthat,consider,think,maintainthat,recommendthat,suggestthat.四.描述趨勢、動態(tài)用詞（主要用于圖表作文）：increase,decrease,drop,fall,rise,decline,fluctuate,sharply,dramatically,slightly,greatly,moderately.CET4作文常用詞匯或套語三.

羅列觀點(diǎn)用詞：91CET4作文常用詞匯或套語五.

時間詞：inrecentyears,inthepastfewdecades,nowadays,today,inmoderntimes,inourtimes(age).六.

引述個人觀點(diǎn)用詞：AsfarasIamconcerned,Asforme,Inmypart,speakingfrommyownexperience.七.

引述原因用詞：Whyisthat?It’sprobablybecause…,Whathascausedtheproblem?Thereasonwhy…isthat…CET4作文常用詞匯或套語五.

時間詞：92CET4作文常用詞匯或套語八.總結(jié)論點(diǎn)用詞：Tosumup,Inconclusion,Allinall.九.

表述明確觀點(diǎn)用詞：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Undoubtedly;Nodoubt…十.

引述結(jié)果用詞：Asaresult,Asaconsequence,Asamatterofthefact.CET4作文常用詞匯或套語八.總結(jié)論點(diǎn)用詞：933.怎樣寫好英語段落主題句的位置

主題句通常放在段落的開端，其特點(diǎn)是開門見山地擺出問題，然后加以詳細(xì)說明。其作用是使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰，更具說服力，便于讀者迅速地把握主題和想象全段的內(nèi)容。主題句可以放在段中起到承上啟下的作用，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初學(xué)者比較難于掌握，因而在四級考試中，考生應(yīng)盡量采用將主題句放在段落開頭的寫作手法。3.怎樣寫好英語段落主題句的位置

主題句通常放在段落的開94寫作中常用的經(jīng)典句型寫作中常用的經(jīng)典句型951.~~~the+~est+名詞+(that)+主詞+haveever+seen(known/heard,etc)Ofallthefactorsthatcontributetoone’ssuccess,hardworkandopportunityarethemostimportantonesthatmostpeoplehaveacknowledged.1.~~~the+~est+名詞+(tha962.Nothingis+~~~erthanto+V

or:Nothingis+more+形容詞+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceivegoodeducation.Nothingismoredifficultthantobesuccessfulbothinfamilylifeandpersonalcareerinone’slife.2.Nothingis+~~~erthanto973.Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...

(不可否認(rèn)，......)Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlifehavegonefrombadtogood.Thereisnodenyingthatourglobeisbeingthreatenedbyenvironmentalpollution.3.Thereisnodenyingthat+984.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~

(全世界都知道...)Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattheeconomicglobalizationishavingmoreandmoreinfluenceonourlives.4.Itisuniversallyacknowled995.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~

(毫無疑問,......)Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫無疑問，我們的教育制度令人不滿意。Thereisnodoubtthatpeaceanddevelopmenthavebecometheessentialaspectsinourmoderntimes.毫無疑問，和平與發(fā)展已經(jīng)成為當(dāng)今時代的主流。5.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子1006.Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子

(...的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是...)Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon‘tcreate(produce)anypollution.Anadvantageofkeepingpetsisthatpetscanbecomepeople’sgoodcompanions.6.Anadvantageof~~~isthat1017.