【寫作公開課】英語建議信作文專項指導

建議信作文專項指導

建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關問題。建議信不是投訴信，觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。通常包括：1.說明寫信目的。2.提出建議與改進措施并給予忠告。3.表達希望采納建議并期盼回復。文體概述常用語塊

1.給某人提建議________________________2.如下________________________3.在做某事時遇到困難

__________________________4.利用________________________5.向某人征求意見________________________asksb.foradvicegivesb.someadvice(on)asfollowshavedifficulty/troubleindoingsth.makeuseof6.制訂計劃_______________________7.認為……有用

_______________________8.參加_______________________9.聽從某人的建議_______________________10.把……考慮在內(nèi)

_______________________oaccount/considerationmakeaplanfind…h(huán)elpful/useful/beneficialtakepartin/participateinfollowone’sadvice11.得到改善________________________12.有所好轉(zhuǎn)________________________13.依我看來________________________14.我已收到你的來信，得知你……________________________15.我建議……________________________Iwouldliketosuggestthat…/Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…/Iamwritingtoadviseyouof…/IfIwereyou,Iwould…/MayIsuggestthat…/Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat…getimprovedchangeforthebetterinmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofviewIhavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou…套用句式

1.你就……向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設性的建議。

2.我覺得如果能夠……將會很有幫助的。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.2.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…3.我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。4.我相信你會考慮我的建議的。5.如能看到……我會非常開心的。3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee…4.Itrustyou‘lltakemysuggestionintoaccount./Itrustyou’lltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.1．寫作步驟建議信的正文一般可采用“三段式”行文。首段：表明寫作意圖，陳述事由(如果不認識對方，必要的情況下可以先簡單介紹自己)。主體段：針對具體情況提出具體建議或忠告(有時可以先肯定對方的優(yōu)點)。末段：希望對方采納你的建議。2．常用時態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時或?qū)頃r，用第一人稱，且多用will，should等情態(tài)動詞和虛擬語氣。如：youshould,youwill，ifIwereyou…3．常用表達首句常用語：①I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…②Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.③I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…表達“建議”常用語：①Iwouldliketosuggestthat…②You'dbetter…/It'sbetterto…③AsfarasIamconcerned…/Inmyopinion,…④IfIwereyou,Iwould…⑤Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…⑥Haveyouconsidereddoing…？⑦Itshouldbeagoodideatodo…⑧Isuggestthatoneimportantthingtorememberis…⑨AnotherthingIwanttoremindyouisthat…⑩Myadviceisthatyoushould(not)do…結束常用語：①Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadvice/suggestionsintoaccount/consideration.②Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.③Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.④Thankyouforyourattention.⑤Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thankyou.⑥Iwouldbereadytodiscussaboutthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.⑦Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work!習作修改(做短文改錯，背經(jīng)典范文)DearRoy,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskformyadvicetohowtolearnChinesewell.Herearefewsuggestions.First,thisisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspaperandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.askingon∧aitnewspapersBeside,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasier.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.HewilltellyoualotaboutChinaorhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesethenexttime.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHuaBesideseasilyTheyand1.ask→asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動關系。2.to→onadvice后常搭配介詞on。3.在few前加a根據(jù)句意，此處為提一些建議，表示肯定意義，用afew。4.this→it考查句型itis+adj.+todosth.意為“做……是……的”。5.newspaper→newspapers因為newspaper為可數(shù)名詞，而且與前后的books,magazines屬于并列關系，故用復數(shù)形式。6.Beside→Besides此處表示補充說明關系“此外/而且”，beside意為“在……旁邊”。7.easier→easily修飾謂語動詞用副詞形式。8.He→They根據(jù)前一句話中的moreChinesefriends可知用They。9.or→and此處兩個動作為“順承”關系，而非“選擇”關系。10.去掉nexttime前的the相對于現(xiàn)在的“下一……”，next前不用the。課堂練習假定你是李華，請根據(jù)所給材料，給Lora寫一封回信。要點如下：1.Lora打算利用暑假打工。2.Lora父母不同意的理由。3.你給Lora的具體建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。DearLora,Ihavejustreadyourletterinthemagazine.Iknowthatyouwanttoworkpart-timethissummer.Butyourparentsdon’tallowyoutodoso.Iunderstandyoursituation.Ithinkyourparentsmayhavetheirreasons.Theymayregardlearningasthemostimportanttaskforyou.Perhapsthey’dlikeyoutomakeuseofthissummerholidaytostudy.Besides,theymaythinkyouaretooyoungtowork.Ithinkyouhadbetterhaveatalkwithyourparents.Iftheyagree,youshouldmakeadetailedplanforyourstudyandwork,askyourfriendstoworktogetherwithyou,andtellyourparentsnottoworryaboutyoubecauseyouareoldenoughtomanagethingsproperly.Anyway,Iwouldbemorethanhappytowishyouapleasantsummer.Yourstruly,LiHua課外作業(yè)假定你是李華，最近你們班從英國轉(zhuǎn)來了一名新生Jenny。這是她第一次遠離家鄉(xiāng)，她很想念父母及家人，有時候思念至深，常常獨自一個人深夜哭泣。對此，請你給Jenny寫一封建議信，要點如下：1.鼓勵Jenny堅定求學信念，志存高遠，四海為家。2.就Jenny的目前狀況，提兩到三個建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。DearJenny,Iamsogladtohaveatalkwithyou.IunderstandyourpresentsituationforIhavehadasimilarexperiencebefore.Peopleoftenmisstheirparentsth