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怎樣讓書面表達(dá)文采飛揚(yáng)05高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則4:評(píng)分時(shí),應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。第5檔(20——25分):②應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯
③語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力1.多實(shí)少虛:nice2.短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先:Icannotbearit.Iwantit.generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitalIcannotputupwithit.Iamlookingforwardtoit.3棄舊取新:Weallhavethesamechance.Therearemoreopponents.1.較高級(jí)詞匯possessopportunityexist學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。1.It’sverydangerousforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic.2.Studentsareriskingtheirliveswhenthreadingtheirwayamongcars.社會(huì)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)對(duì)學(xué)生的交通安全教育。1.Thestudentsshouldbetaughtmoreaboutthetrafficsafety.2.Andalsoitisofgreatusetostrengthenthesafetyeducationoverthestudents.較高級(jí)詞匯(Exercises1)較高級(jí)詞匯(Exercises2)1.Weallthinkheisagreatman.2.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.3.Shewentthereinordertostudymusic.4.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.Weallofhim.Theplantobeafailure.Shewentthere
studyingmusic.Ourschooltwenty–sixclassrooms.Thinkhighlyturnedoutforthepurposeofismadeupof較高級(jí)詞匯(Exercises3)5.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.6.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.7.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.You’llfindingmyhouse.Agoodideatome.thegoodweather,
ourjourneywascomfortable.havenotroubleAgoodideasuddenlyme.Thankstooccurredstruck非謂語(yǔ)各種從句with復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)倒裝獨(dú)立主格虛擬等等強(qiáng)調(diào)句型運(yùn)用多種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu),句式靈活多變,可以使文章增色不少。2.豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises1)1.Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.(使用V-ing形式).2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(使用名詞性從句)3.Hecameinandtherewasababyinhisarms.(用with結(jié)構(gòu)),pleasegivemeane-mail.isthat
thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.OnhisarrivingWhatsurpriseshimHecamein,
withababyinhisarms.4.(由于不知道他的電話,他沒法跟Mary聯(lián)系)(用非謂語(yǔ))5.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)
6.TomandMarylikesingingsongs.(使用倒裝)Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthat,hecan’tgetintouchwithTom
Notknowinghistelephonenumber
heknewwhathadhappened.豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises2)Tomlikessingingsongs,Mary.sodoes7.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞)8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(使用句型結(jié)構(gòu))9.Becausetheweatherisfine,manypeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternhill.(使用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))
bymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.hespoke,excitedhefelt.豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)(Exercises3)FollowedThemorethemoreTheweatherbeingfine一篇好的書面表達(dá),還應(yīng)該行文連貫流暢,具有“邏輯美”。使用恰當(dāng)連接詞,能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊,使文章更為地道,更具“英語(yǔ)味”。記得使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,如:soon,immediately,suddenly,infrontof,nextto,ononehand,ontheotherhand,however,
though,otherwise,thanksto,asaresult(of),solongas,onconditionthat,
evenif/though,
what’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse,I’mafraid,youknow,Asweallknow…3.恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞1.Thisvillageisverysmall.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.
However,ithaschangedalotsince1978.LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalace.Theysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.
LastSunday,twoYoungPioneerswereontheirwaytotheChildren’sPalacewhentheysawaboxfalloffapassingtruck.Withoutdelay,theyshouted“stop”tothedriveratthetopoftheirvoice.
3.Yesterday,therewasapolicemaninthestreet.Hestoppedacar.Thecarwasatthecorner.ItlookedlikeaHonda.Therewasaboyonthesidewalk.Hewasridinghisbicycle.Thebicyclewasatwo-wheeler.Thecarnearlyknockeddowntheboy.
Yesterday,apolicemanstoppedacar-Hondaatthecornerofthestreet,
because
itnearlyknockeddownaboywhowasridingatwo-wheelbicycleonthesidewalk.2.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.飛讓文采揚(yáng)達(dá)表面書語(yǔ)意要合情合理,過渡自然語(yǔ)句要有簡(jiǎn)有繁,隨“意”而安語(yǔ)法要結(jié)構(gòu)正確,無(wú)懈可擊語(yǔ)言要地道流暢,書寫規(guī)范聯(lián)考書面表達(dá)欣賞:MakingEveryDayEarthDayAscanbeseenfromthebriefdialogue,theearthsuffersalotfromman’sbehaviouratpresent.Therearemanyproblems.Forinstance,wehumanbeingsaredestroyingtoomanytrees,whichleadstoairpollution.Besides,pollutedwaterissentintoriversdirectlywithoutbeingdealtwith.Furthermore,fewpeopleareawareofsuchproblemswhilemostofustakethemforgranted.聯(lián)考書面表達(dá)欣賞:However,ontheEarthDay,somemeasuresaretakentocarefortheearth.Notonlydopeoplespreadtheideaofprotectingtheearth,butalsosomethingwillbedone,suchasdealingwithrubbish,recyclingusedbatteryandsoon.Butthatisfarfromenough.IstronglycalloneveryonetotreateverydayastheEarthDayandtakecareoftheeartheveryday.Onlyinthiswaycanwehopeforabetterhometolivein.
Homework:聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國(guó)某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況:
1)大?。航?00戶人家,約500口人。2)變化:過去很窮,78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?,F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。3)教育:原來(lái)的學(xué)校很小,現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層,是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。注意:1)要點(diǎn)齊全,前后連貫。2)詞數(shù):100-120之間。
聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在我國(guó)某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡(jiǎn)要介紹這個(gè)村的情況:
1)大?。航?00戶人家,約500口人。2)變化:過去很窮,78年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?,F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。3)教育:原來(lái)的學(xué)校很小,現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有4層,是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。注意:1)要點(diǎn)齊全,前后連貫。2)詞數(shù):100-120之間。Practice書面表達(dá):Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,
Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,
ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.書面表達(dá):Nowitistakingonanewlook.
Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.
Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥
Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,
theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.
Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallone
with/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②
However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③
andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.
④
Peoplehereliveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤
andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦
andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧
whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifulone
inthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨
What’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.
⑩
Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.
2001年春季高考作文給澳大利亞的朋友寫一封信,談?wù)劀p負(fù)給學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來(lái)的變化。
Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclassesev
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