小升初英語第一次去海上游泳

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今天，我在書房拾掇東西。猛然，翻出了以前的相冊，看到一張在沙灘的照片，令我情不自禁的想起了第一次到海里游泳的情景。

Today,Iwaspackinginmystudy.Allofasudden,Iturnedoutmypreviousphotoalbumandsawapictureonthebeach,whichremindsmeofthefirsttimeIwentswimminginthesea.

那一年我7歲，在一個風和日麗的下午，我和爸爸媽媽去海上游泳。一下車，呈現(xiàn)在眼前的無邊無際蔚藍色的大海和金黃色的沙灘。即刻我感到心曠神怡，我迅速換上泳衣，從爸爸的手上奪過游泳圈，一邊跑向海邊，一邊想：我去翱游大海啰！

Iwassevenyearsoldthatyear.Onasunnyafternoon,myparentsandIwentswimmingatsea.Onceyougetoff,youcanseetheboundlessblueseaandgoldenbeachinfrontofyou.SuddenlyIfeltrelaxedandhappy.Iquicklychangedintoaswimsuit,grabbedtheswimmingcirclefrommyfather"shand,andrantothesea,thinking:I"mgoingtoswiminthesea!

下了水，水里涼快極了，爸爸游過來對我說：“全日抱著游泳圈不行的，來，爸爸教你游泳?！闭f完爸爸把我的游泳圈拿開了。他托著我的雙手，可我很畏縮嗆到水，就冒死地掙扎，兩條腿不停地蹬著水，逐漸地我感覺到我的身體往下沉。爸爸迅速托起我，笑著說：“你這樣怎么可以游進大海呢！”我心有余悸，迅速套住游泳圈，艱苦地漂到沙灘上。媽媽遞過來一個蘋果，撫慰我說：“別畏縮，爸爸會養(yǎng)護你的，吃完蘋果持續(xù)練?！蔽乙贿叧蕴O果，一邊想：是啊，好不輕易來一次，真理應學會游泳。不一會兒，蘋果吃完了，我又沖了下去，苦求爸爸教我，爸爸細心地說：“游泳時，你自己要放松，不要慌張。先學潛水吧！”于是我跟著爸爸學，可是我還是不敢，動作老是做不好。突然一個榔頭打過來，我嗆了一口又咸又苦的海水。爸爸一下就冒出了水面，把我嚇了一大跳。他看著我就哈哈大笑起來，我心里可真不服氣。

Underthewater,thewaterisverycool,Dadswamtomeandsaid,"it"snotgoodtoholdtheswimmingcircleallday,comeon,dadteachesyouhowtoswim."ThenDadtookmyswimmingcircleaway.Heheldmyhands,butIwasafraidofchokingthewater,soIstruggleddesperately.Mylegskeptpushingonthewater,andslowlyIfeltmybodysink.Dadquicklypickedmeupandsaidwithasmile,"howcanyouswimintothesealikethis!"IwassoscaredthatIcaughttheswimmingcircleanddriftedtothebeach.Momhandedmeanapple,comfortedmeandsaid,"don"tbeafraid,dadwillprotectyou.Aftereatingtheapple,keeppracticing."Ieatapplesandthink:Yes,it"snoteasytocomehere.Ireallyshouldlearntoswim.Afterawhile,whenIfinishedeatingtheapple,Irusheddownagainandaskedmyfathertoteachme.Myfatherpatientlysaid,"whenswimming,youshouldrelaxyourselfanddon"tbenervous.Learntodivefirst!"SoIfollowedmyfathertolearn,butIstilldarenot,theactionisalwaysbad.SuddenlyahammerhitmeandIchokedonthesaltyandbitterseawater.Dadjustpoppedoutofthewaterandscaredme.Helaughedatme,andIcouldn"tbelieveit.

爸爸游的真棒，可以在水里呆那么久，我再試一試。于是我憋足了氣，潛到水里，可是不到10秒鐘，我憋不住了，一下子露出了水面。爸爸看到我這狼狽的樣子又笑了起來。但我不灰心，模仿著爸爸的動作，一次，兩次終究能潛水了。

Dadswimssowellthathecanstayinthewaterforsolong.I"lltryagain.SoIheldmybreathanddivedintothewater,butinlessthan10seconds,Icouldn"tholdit,andsuddenlycameoutofthewater.Myfatherlaughedagainwhenhesawmeinsuchamess.ButIamnotdiscouraged.Iimitatemyfather"smovements.Once,twice...Icandive.

就這樣，一下午，我終究學會了游泳的“入門篇”——潛水，別提心里有多欣喜啦！

Inthisway,oneafternoon,Ifinallylearnedthe"Introduction"ofswimming-diving,don"tworryabouthowhappyitis!

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Comment:

1.在大海里游泳是一件很愜意的事，但是要學會游泳卻不那么輕易，小就向我們描述了他第一次在海上游泳的體驗，其中彌漫了學習的艱辛和告成的喜悅。內(nèi)容真是完整，情節(jié)生動，層次清晰。

1.Swimmingintheseaisaverypleasantthing,butitis()notsoeasytolearnhowtoswim.Theyoungauthordescribeshisfirstexperienceofswimmingintheseatous,whichisfulloflearningdifficultiesandjoyofsuccess.Thecontentisreallycomplete,theplotisvividandthelevelisclear.

2.文章中將“我”學習游泳時的動作、感受及心理活動描寫的特別細致生動，并通過爸爸的幾次“笑”，襯托出“我”當時的難堪情景。最終“我”憑借著堅持不懈的努力學會了潛水，告成后的喜悅不言而喻。

2.Inthearticle,themovements,feelingsandpsychologicalactivitiesof"I"learningswimmingaredescribedverycarefullyandvividly,andtheembarrassingsituationof"I"atthattimeissetoffbyDad"sseveral"smiles".Finally,"I"withunremittingeffortstol