高二范文(上學(xué)期)

范文一：給哥白尼的一封勸說信DearNicolausCopernicus,IamastudentstudyingastronomyandIwouldverymuchliketoreadyournewtheoryaboutthesolarsystem.Ihopeyouwillpublishitforseveralreasons.Firstandforemost,thereareobviouslyproblemswiththepresenttheoryasitfailstoexplainwhystarsmoveinsuchawayintheuniverse.Furthermore,youhavedonemanyyearsofcarefulobservationstoproveyournewtheory.Whynotshowtheworldthefruitofyourhardwork?Lastbutbynomeanstheleast,sciencecanneveradvanceunlesspeoplehavethecouragetoairtheirbeliefs.IknowyouworryaboutthepossiblepunishmentfromtheChristianChurchifyoupublishyournewtheory.Butnomatterhowpeopleopposeit,timewillshowyourideasareright.SoIhopeyouwillfeelyoucanpublishyournewtheorynow.議論文中，Discoursemarkers（話語標(biāo)記）占20%內(nèi)容，句式，措辭，文采，占70%工整的書寫占10%《雙語報(bào)》第一期B3版——談如何寫勸說信表建議和勸告的常用句型有：1.Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialforyoutoconsiderthefollowingsuggestions.2.Inthefirstplace,…Iwouldalsorecommend（推薦；建議）/suggest…Lastbutnottheleast,…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…用于結(jié)尾的時(shí)候：6.Iwouldbemorethanhappyifmyproposalscouldbeconsideredandpositivechangestakeplaceintheseregards.如果您能考慮我的建議，而且我的建議能帶來一些好的改變的話，我將非常高興。7.Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.8.Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.我希望我的建議能對您的決策有幫助。范文二：去倫敦旅游閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。Therearemanywaysofspendingfreetime.Oneofthemistraveling.Certainly,ithasprosandcons.Thefirstadvantageoftravelingisvisitinginterestingplacesandmeetingnewpeople.Itisconnectedwithgettingtoknowotherculturesandtraditions,whichissurelyvaluable.Secondly,itisusuallysaidthatjourneyseducate,sowhiletravelingaswellasexplorationwecanexperiencedandbereadytodealwithsurroundingworldifwelearnsomethingwhilebeinginjourney.Furthermore,travelingisthebestsolutionforthoseofuswhosufferfromboredomorwanttogetawayfromthereality.Onetheotherhand,travelinghassomedisadvantages.Firstly,costsoftravelingareoftenquitehigh,forexample,travelingbyplane.What’smore,journeysespeciallyforeignonesexposeustodangerofdiseaseorevendeath.Thenextdisadvantageistirednessthatoccurswhiletraveling.Mostjourneyslastverylonganditcanmakeusfeeltired.Tosumup,travelinghasadvantagesanddisadvantages.However,inmyopinion,travelingisagreatwaytorelaxourselvesandgainknowledge.Ifwecanmakeplansandworkoutawaytopreventthedisadvantagesfromhappening,it’llbegreattotravelafteralongtimeofwork.【寫作要求】你們家近期決定出國旅行，將于今晚召開家庭小會，商量去哪里?？赐暾n本這篇文章后，你有了去英國的打算。1.以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.然后以約120詞就“TravelingtoLondon”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法，主要包括：1）你的決定：去倫敦旅游；2）如此決定的原因；3）要去哪幾個(gè)地方。參考范文：Inthepassage,thewriterliststheadvantagesanddisadvantagesthattravelinghas.Inthewriter’sopinion,it’senjoyableandofgreatbenefittotravelifwecanmanagetoavoidthedisadvantage.IdecidedthatIshallgoonatriptoLondonwithmyfamily.Thereasonsarelistedasfollows.Firstofall,sinceIamgreatlycuriousabouttheroyalfamilyandhowpeoplethinkofthem,atriptoLondoncansatisfymycuriosity.Then,Iamdeeplyinterestedinthebuildingsthere,especiallythepalacesandcastles.What’smore,experiencingthelifethereinperson（親自）canenrichmyknowledgeofBritishcultureandtheEnglishatmosphereissurelyhelpfultomyoralexpression.

Asfor（至于）theattractions,I’dliketogototheBuckinghamPalacetoappreciatethegreatbeautyofthepalaceandfeeltheatmosphereofsoldiersguardingtheQueen.Besides,itwouldbethrillingtovisittheLondonTower,whichhasstoodthereforaboutathousandyears.AndsurelyIcannevermissthefamousRiverThamesandthecathedral.范文三：吸煙的危害閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。NewYorkCityMayorMichaelBloombergrecentlydonated$220millionsofhisownmoneytoreducesmokingaroundtheworld.Theeffortwillfocusinparticularoncountrieswheretobaccouseismostpopular.NewYorkisbecomingahealth-consciouscity.Thereisnosmokinginrestaurants,inbarsoreveninpublicparks.That’salltheresultofthemayor’saggressiveanti-tobaccohealthpoliciesoverthepastyears.Bloombergsayshisdonationswillbeaimedat

convincingoverseasgovernmentstoraisecigarettetaxes.Hesayssuchtaxesarethesinglemostimportantfactorthatcandiscouragesmoking.BloombergnotesthatapackofcigarettesinNewYorkcostsabout$12.“Only7%ofourkidsand14%ofadultsinNewYorkreporttheysmoke.Thoseareamazingnumbers,whichhavedecreasedgreatlycomparedto10yearsago,andthat’swhylifeexpectancyinNewYorkCityisthreeyearslongerthantheaveragelevelinAmericaasawhole,”Bloombergsays.Bloombergsaysfivecountriesaccountforhalfofthesmokingintheworld:China,India,Indonesia,RussiaandBangladesh.Hesayshisdonationwillbeusedtohelpstopsometypesoftobaccoadvertisingandtomakesmokingunattractive.【寫作要求】1.以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對“吸煙”的看法，內(nèi)容包括：1）你如何看待紐約市長的做法？2）吸煙的危害性；3）如果有人請你去吸煙，你會如何做？為什么？ThepassageismainlyaboutNewYorkCityMayorBloomberg’seffortstofightsmoking.Hedonated$220milliontoreducesmokinggloballyandunderhisinfluence,NewYorknowhaslowersmokingrateandlongerlifeexpectancy.(35words)（你如何看待紐約市長的做法？）IthinkhighlyofBloomberg’sendeavortostoppeoplefromsmoking.Becauseofhisadmirableefforts,nowpeopleinNewYorkliveahealthierandlongerlife.（26words兩句。第一句：我很贊賞；第二句：我贊賞他的原因。）（吸煙的危害性）Asweknow,smokinghasmanynegativeeffects,First,itdoesharmtoourhealth.Everyyearalargenumberofpeoplediefromsmoking.Additionally,itisawasteofmoneysincethecigarettesareusuallyexpensive.Worsestill,smokingaffectsone‘sphysicalappearance.Youcanseethatsmokersusuallygetyellowskinandteeth.（56words注意觀察每一個(gè)論據(jù)都是由“主題句+拓展句”構(gòu)成的，拓展句可以是原因、結(jié)果、簡單的例子等。）議論文中，Discoursemarkers（話語標(biāo)記）占20%內(nèi)容，句式，措辭，文采，占70%工整的書寫占10%（如果有人請你去吸煙，你會如何做？為什么？）Ifsomeoneasksmetosmoke,Iwillcertainlyrefusetodosobecausetheharmofsmokingisjusttoomanytocount.Asateenagerwholovestoenjoyahealthylife,Iwillnotonlysay‘no’tocigarettesmyselfbutalsocallformorefriendstofightsmokingtogether!（53words第一句開門見山地說明你要怎么做；最后一句是提升——不但自己要拒絕吸煙，而且還要號召朋友一起與吸煙作斗爭。）范文四：熄燈一小時(shí)活動閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。ThisweekendinSydney,Australia“l(fā)ightsout”activitywillbestaged.Sydneypeoplewillkeeplightsoffforanhour,sothattheAustralia’slargestcitywillbethrownintodarknessinthenight.InSydney,alargenumberofbusinessmenhavebeenaddedtothisactionplan.Thegovernmentofficialsandtensofthousandsofpeoplehavealsoansweredthecallenthusiastically.ThelandscapesofSydneysuchasSydneyOperaHouse,SydneyHarborBridgeanddozensofskyscraperswillkeeplightsoffforonehourfrom7:30,andevenMcDonald’sbig“M”logowillbeswitchedoff.Butitssignificantlighting,suchastheflyinglightsandthetrafficlightswillbeonasusual.Thiseventiscalled“EarthHour”.OneoftheorganizerssaysthisactionwillencourageAustralianstoswitchoffunnecessarylightsintheirdailylife.“Ouraimtodothisisverysimple.Wedonotwantpeopletoreturntoliveincavetime.Wejustwanttoreducegreenhousegasesintotheatmosphereasmuchaspossible.”Healsosaid;“One–hourblackoutisonlythebeginning,andthenextstepistoimprovepeople’sawarenessoffenergysaving.”1．以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2．以約120個(gè)詞就“熄燈一小時(shí)”活動發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你是否贊成這種做法并說明其理由。（2）你是否動員你的家人或你周圍的人參加此活動？（3）日常生活中為了保護(hù)環(huán)境我們還可以做些什么？Duringthe“EarthHour”,peopleinSydneywillhaveaone-hourblackoutactivitythroughoutthecity,thepurposeofwhichistomakepeoplebebetterawareofenergysaving.（你是否贊成這種做法并說明其理由。）Iamstronglyforthisactivity,whichisreallymeaningfulandhelpfulforpreventingourearthfromgettingwarmer.Besides,itcanimprovepeople’sawarenessofenvironmentprotection（增強(qiáng)人們的環(huán)保意識）(30words).（你是否動員你的家人或你周圍的人參加此活動？必須說明理由）Asforme,IwilltellmyfamilyandpeoplearoundaboutEarthHourandtrytoaskthemtoparticipateinit.Justonehour’sblackoutmaynotaffectourlifemuch,butitwillhelpthemknowmoreaboutlowcarbonlifeandenergysaving.(50words)（日常生活中為了保護(hù)環(huán)境我們還可以做些什么？）Apartfromtheblackoutactivity,weshouldalsostartoutsmalltohelpprotectourenvironment.Forinstance（所說的措施要具體，不要過泛）,Iwilltakeabustoschoolinsteadofaskingmydadtodriveme.Whendoingshopping,Iwilluserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticones.(45words)（結(jié)尾句，不可少。不要出錯(cuò)，要對應(yīng)主題，不要泛泛而談，最好能用好的句型，鏗鏘有力。）Everylittlecounts!whynotjoinus!

議論文中，Discoursemarkers（話語標(biāo)記）占20%內(nèi)容，句式，措辭，文采，占70%工整的書寫占10%來自同學(xué)們好詞好句：Asaresponsiblecitizen,I’llnotonlyplayanactiveroleinit,butalsoencouragemyfamilyandfriendsto…Tobemorespecific,wecanbeginwithsomethingeasytoachieve...aswecanneveroveremphasizetheimportanceofsmallactions.（巫嘉樂）Icastavoteof‘yes’forthissignificantactivity.Firstofall,itturnsavagueslogantoapracticalaction.Thoughonehourisquiteshort,it’smeaningfulas“onepennysavedisonepennyearned”.（陳修言）來自同學(xué)們好詞好句：Theactivityisnotonlyaone-hourblackout,butalsoavoicetowakeuppeopleignoringdetailsofenergysaving.（池浩前）Icastavoteof‘yes’forthissignificant.Firstofall,itturnsavagueslogantoapracticalaction.Thoughonehourisquiteshort,it’smeaningfulas“onepennysavedisonepennyearned”.（陳修言）Facedwithsevereshortageofenergy,weareboundtotakeactionsimmediately.SoIaminfavorof“l(fā)ightsout”.activity.（夏梓琳）來自同學(xué)們好詞好句：Asaqualifiedcitizen,Iamtotallyinfavorofthisactivity.Nowadays,theworldisbeingpollutedbecauseofhumans’deliberatedamage.Facedwiththissituation,Ifeelobligedtotakepartinthisworldwideeventinordertowakeuppeople’sawareness.（勞詩雅）Ifpossible,Iwillcertainlytrytopersuademyfamilyandfriendstojoininthisactivity…sothatwewilllearnhowimportantenergysavingis.Withthisunforgettableexperience,wewillfocusmoreattentiononenergysavingandenvironmentalprotection.（葉鈺穎）范文五：《雙語報(bào)》第六期基礎(chǔ)寫作某網(wǎng)站近期進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)在線調(diào)查，具體情況如下：主題：人們對急救知識的掌握調(diào)查人數(shù)：17553人結(jié)果：1）燙傷后，74.2%的人知道先用冷水沖洗2）發(fā)生火災(zāi)時(shí)，25%的人知道應(yīng)迅速低頭逃生3）遇到突發(fā)情況事件時(shí)，12%的成年人能夠采取急救措施啟示：需進(jìn)一步提高公眾對急救知識的了解向公眾普及急救知識的措施：定期進(jìn)行急救培訓(xùn)審題：調(diào)查報(bào)告的時(shí)態(tài)？——第一句交代有這樣一個(gè)調(diào)查時(shí)，可用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)或一般過去時(shí)；——敘述觀點(diǎn)或數(shù)據(jù)時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)調(diào)查經(jīng)常用的開頭：Anonlinesurveyhasbeenconductedbyawebsiterecentlytolearnhowmuchknowledge…Recently,asurveywascarriedoutaboutpeople’sopinionon…Recently,awebsitesurveyedXXXpeoplefortheiropinionon…Lately,asurveyconcerningXXXwasconductedby…amongXXXstudents.如何表達(dá)：“調(diào)查顯示”Resultsshowthat…Accordingtothesurvey,…“知道要先用冷水沖洗”——……knowtocooltheirburntpartwithcoldwater——錯(cuò)！因?yàn)闆]有Knowtodosth這種結(jié)構(gòu)！——……knowthattheyshouldcooltheirburntpartwithcoldwater…“燒傷后”——Afterburnt錯(cuò)——Afterbeing/gettingburnt對——whenburnt對低頭：Lowerone’shead;benddownHangone’shead——耷拉著腦袋發(fā)生火災(zāi)時(shí)：——Incaseoffire——whenafirebreaksout——whenthereisafireOnlyifwehaveregulartrainingcoursesoffirstaidcanpeopleknowmoreaboutfirstaid.對緊急情況的應(yīng)變能力加強(qiáng)——people’sabilitytodealwithanemergencybeimproved.Anonlinesurveyhasbeenconductedbyawebsiterecentlytolearnhowmuchknowledgepeoplehaveaboutfirstaid.Theresultsshowthat74.2%ofthe17,553peoplesurveyedknowthattheyshouldcooltheburntareaimmediatelywithcoldwaterwhentheyareburnt.However,only25%ofthemareawarethattheyshouldbenddowntoescapefromthefireassoonasafirebreaksout.Worsestill,only12%ofadultsareabletogivefirstaidinanemergency.

Therefore,regularfirstaidtrainingshouldbeprovidedforthepublictoimprovetheirknowledgeoffirstaid.17553個(gè)接受調(diào)查的人燒傷的部位連貫詞？代替？低頭連貫詞？在緊急情況下采取緊急措施連貫詞？范文六：導(dǎo)學(xué)稿18：根據(jù)下列表格，用規(guī)范的英語句子為學(xué)校的英語畫報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于“FirstAid”的小短文。文章的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，請用5個(gè)句子將短文補(bǔ)充完整。FirstAid的目的避免受傷情況惡化救助者需要做的重要事情檢查這個(gè)人能不能呼吸，是否有食物堵住口腔。(choke)如果這個(gè)人呼吸停止了，必須立即進(jìn)行人工呼吸。將這個(gè)人平放，用手指捏住他的鼻子，再向他嘴里吹氣。盡量多次重復(fù)這個(gè)動作。(lay…onone’sback)如果這個(gè)人在大量流血，你就必須設(shè)法給他止血。立即打999，等待支援。ThepurposeofFirstAidistopreventinjuriesfromgettingworse.Ifyouseeapersonwhohasanaccident,followthesebasicsteps.Checkwhetherthepersoncanbreatheorishechokedbyanyfood.Ifthepersonisnotbreathing,youmustgivehimmouth-to-mouthbreathingatonce.Laythepersononhisback,squeezehisnoseandbreatheintohismouth.Trytorepeatitoverandoveragain.Ifthepersonisbleedingheavily,youmusttrytostopthebleeding.Ifyouarenotaqualifiedrescuer,pleasecall999andwaitforhelp.人工呼吸捏住他的鼻子Findoutthemistakesinthetext,ifany.Theobjectoftheexperimentsistofindouttheconnections,ifany,betweenthetwophenomena.Heisagreatmusicianifevertherewasone.

如果曾經(jīng)有過偉大的音樂家，那他就是一個(gè)。Theislandisseldom,ifever,visitedbyships.

這個(gè)島難得有船?？?。Sheseldom,ifever,goestothecinema.

她難得看電影。*Idon'tliketohaveyougoboatinginsuchweather．Whatifastormshouldcomeup？我不想讓你在這樣的天氣里去劃船，要是刮起了大風(fēng)暴怎么辦？*Whatifhedoesn'tcome？Wecannotdowithouthim．如果他不來怎么辦？沒有他，我們就無法干。

范文七：閱讀teens第七期第2版的“Interactingonline”這篇文章，依照以下寫作內(nèi)容寫一篇議論文：1、summary（30字）2、微博的利；3、微博的弊；4、你有微博嗎？你怎樣看待它？Goodexamplesfromourfellowstudents:Thereisnodoubtthatmicro-blogginghasmanyadvantages.First,itisausefultoolapplyingtomanyfields.Itismicro-bloggingthatensuresustogetvarietiesofinformationinnotime.What’smore,withmicro-blogging,wecancommunicatewithothersandentertainourselves.Lastbutnottheleast,it’salsoanimportantchannelforpeopletoexpressthemselves,especiallyaboutpublicissues.…Finally,micro-bloggingcanspreadpornography（色情）andviolence（暴力）,whichposesahugethreattothepublic,particularlyforchildren….Inviewofallthis,weshouldusethemicro-bloggingwithwisdom.Keepitatasafedistanceandneverloseourselves.（by黃倩瑩）Goodexamplesfromourfellowstudents:Thereisnodenyingthatmicro-blogsprovidesafunandeasywayforustosharefeelingswithfriendsandgetfreshnews.Wecangetavarietyofinformationthatwidensourhorizon.Also,ithasdugupsomecorruptionscandals（腐敗丑聞）withthelocalauthoritiespromisingstrictpunishmentifanyviolationwasfound.What’smore,itcancreateacommunicationbridgebetweenpeople.Asamicro-blogger,Ithinkmicro-blogisausefulwayforteenagerstocommunicatewitheachotherandshortenourdistance.Meanwhile,however,self-controlisessentialforamicro-blogger.Weshouldusemicro-blogsensibly（明智地）andallowonlyitspositiveeffecttohappenonus.（by2班李嘉賢）范文七：

Asusingmicro-blogginghasbeenatrendinChina,thepassageconcludesitsfunctioninpeople’sdailylife,meanwhile,itsadvantagesandpotentialdrawbackshasbeenpointedouttoo.(29words)True,asanew-borncommunicativeplatform,micro-blogginghasintenselyinfluencedpeople’slife.Itsadvantagesandconvenienceisnothardtofind.Firstandforemost,itoffersastageforeveryonetovoicetheirviewsfreely,makingcommunicationeasierandbetter.Besides,peoplecangetawidevarietyoffreshinformationonmicro-bloggingconveniently.Therefore,itcapturespeople’sheartimmediatelywhenborn.

However,behindtheconvenienceitbrings,itsshortcomingcan’tbeoverlooked.Leakingpeople’sprivacyeasilyisthefirstweneedtowatchoutfor.What’smore,itisdifficultforpeopletoidentifyfakeinformation,whicheasilyleadstothecaseoffraud（詐騙）.Finally,someaddictsespeciallytheteenagerswilltotallylosethemselvesinit,wastingtheirvaluabletime.Asamicro-bloggermyself,Iadmitthatitdoesbringourlifeintoabrilliantera（時(shí)代）,butIamawarethat“moderationisalwaysthebestpolicy”.I’lluseitproperlytoenjoyitsfuntothefull.范文八：閱讀teens第八期第2版的“Doyouwastetoomuchfood?”這篇文章，依照以下寫作內(nèi)容寫一篇議論文：1、summary（30字）2、請列舉你生活中碰到浪費(fèi)食物的例子。3、你對此現(xiàn)象的看法。4、在日常生活中采取什么措施能有效減少食物浪費(fèi)呢？審題框架提綱：1、summary——thephenomenon+thecallforfasting;2、請列舉你生活中碰到浪費(fèi)食物的例子（餐館、食堂、家庭……可穿插某些人浪費(fèi)時(shí)的心態(tài)和原因，如炫富等。）。3、你對此現(xiàn)象的看法（這里的“看法”更多的是指一種“感受”，從兩個(gè)方面講：1如何評價(jià)浪費(fèi)行為；2這種行為帶給你情感上的影響。）4、在日常生活中采取什么措施能有效減少食物浪費(fèi)呢？（宣揚(yáng)“節(jié)儉”的傳統(tǒng)美德、偶爾絕食體會饑餓）Goodexamplesfromourfellowstudents:Itisreallyaguiltthatsomewealthypeopleshouldwastesomuchfoodwithoutconsiderationofthoseinhunger.（by曹偉烽）Youcanseebarrelsoffoodthrownawayinschoolcanteens,restaurants,etc.…Ifeelresentfultoseethesephenomena.Foodcontainsthesweatandhardworkoffarmersandworkers.（by劉焯恩）Goodexamplesfromourfellowstudents:Thesedays,theactionofwastingfoodseemstohavebecomeincreasinglyseriousandunbearable…Aseriesofbehavioursofwastingfoodreallymakemeuneasyanduncomfortable.People’sindifferencetowardswastingfoodshocks

me…Additionally,althoughwearelivingadecent（體面的）life,therearestillalargepopulationintheworldlivingunderthepovertyline（生活在貧困線以下）ingreatneedoffood…（by郭鈺欣）文章寫得好的同學(xué)還有：葉鈺穎、劉子維、何浣、陶麗琳、鄭一諾、鄭瑩喬、無名氏、巫嘉樂、張潔妍、衛(wèi)子鎣、馮寶怡、郭凱生、程意范文八：Thepassageinformsusoftheterriblewasteoffoodeverydayaroundus.AndarecentcallforfastingfromtheStateAdministrationofGrainmakespeoplethinktwiceaboutbeingsowasteful.(35words)

Itisreallyashamethatfoodwastinghasbecomeaneverydayoccurrence.

Everywhereweturn,weseepeoplethrowingawaybarrelsofleftoverswithoutconsideringthehardworkofthefarmerswhogrowcrops.Inrestaurants,peopleordermuchmorethantheycaneatjusttoshowofftheirgenerosity（慷慨）andhospitality（好客）.Ireallyfeelit’sanunforgivableguilttowastefood.Itisnotonlyatremendouswasteofresourcebutalsoadisrespecttofarmerswhogrowthegrainswithsweatandblood.Also,weshouldneverforgettherearestilllotsofpeoplesufferingseverehungerintheworld,andsomeofthemevendieoffamine（饑荒）.Tosolvethisproblem,developingagoodhabitofsavingfoodmattersalot.Thegoodtraditionalvirtue（美德）ofthrift（節(jié)儉）shouldneverbethrownaway.Andmaybegoingfastingsometimesmayreallyremindusofthesenseofstarvation（饑餓感）andhelpusvaluefoodonceagain.范文九：閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150左右的英語短文。

Withthedevelopmentofinformationindustry，ourpersonalinformationhasbecomemoreeasilyexposedinpublic.Assomecelebrities（名人）areworriedabouttheirtelephonenumber，IDnumberandhomeaddressbeingputontheinternet，ordinarypeoplelikeuscan’tescapefromthedoomeither.ArecentreportfromXinhuareveals（披露）overtwentytelephone-salespeoplehavebeencaughtcheatingcustomersbyrevealingtheirprivateinformationtolocalcommunityofBeijing.Thereportsaysthesalespeoplewouldcalltheirpotential（潛在的）customerstryingtoearntheirtrustbycorrectlyrevealingtheirpersonalinformationsuchastheirname，telephonenumber，homeaddressandevenpreviouspurchases.Theywouldthentrytopersuadethecustomertobuyagoldcellphonebymail.Ifthecustomerbecamesuspicious，theywoulduseanotherperson’sidentitytoprovetheirauthenticity（真實(shí)性）.[寫作內(nèi)容]你在某英文報(bào)刊看到這則報(bào)導(dǎo)后，準(zhǔn)備就我們學(xué)生該如何在網(wǎng)絡(luò)保護(hù)私人信息、以“HowcanwekeepourpersonalinformationofftheInternet？”為題目寫一篇文章給該報(bào)編輯部（人稱？You？We？）[內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括]以約30詞簡要概括新聞內(nèi)容；然后以約120詞談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：1.在信息時(shí)代，想讓個(gè)人信息完全與世隔絕是不可能的，但可盡量減少；2.你為解決信息泄露所采取的一些措施：A.到有安全保障的網(wǎng)站買東西；B．只向能確保你個(gè)人信息安全的網(wǎng)站提供個(gè)人信息；C．其它一些你認(rèn)為有效的措施．范文九：Nowadays,itiseasierthaneverbeforeforourprivacytobeexposedinpublic.Accordingtoarecentreport,somepeoplewerecheatedintobuyingagoldcellphonebysalesmenwhocorrectlyrevealedtheirpersonalinformation.(37words)Inthisfast-developinginformationage,itisunavoidableforourpersonalinformationtobeexposedtothepublic,especiallyontheInternet.WhetherwearedoingonlineshoppingorjusthavingalessonontheNet,wehavetoprovideourpersonalinformation.Butfortunately,therearestillsomeeffectivemeasureswhichwecantaketominimizethetroubleanddangersthatweface.(65words)First,itisadvisabletomakesurethatthewebsiteissafeandhaveareliablereputationbeforewehaveanyconnectionwithit.Second,neverprovideourpersonalinformationtounsafewebsitesastheymaysellittothoseill-willedguysformoney.What’smore,itisagoodideatocleanourcomputerattimesassomevirusisabletostealourinformationwithouttheleastofourknowledge.結(jié)尾句寫作原則1、扣主題，不能太泛。2、句型、詞匯等要出彩。Allinall,wecanneverbetoocautiouswhenhandlingourpersonalinformationontheInternet.(95words)Findfaultsinthefollowingtext.InWednesdayafternoonthisweek,aspeechwillbeheldattheschoolhall,hostedbyfamousartist.Theartistwillintroduceagreatdealofknowledgeaboutartwhichincludedsomefamousartistandtheirpaintingstylesaswellastheirmasterpieces.Somebasicdawningskillswillalsobeteachedduringthespeech.Thespeechwillinspirestudentstomakegooduseoftheircreationandimaginary.Notonlywillthespeechdogoodusetostudentsstudy,especiallyreadingandmath,butalsoencourageustodevelopourhobbyofart.Theexpectancyoftheartististoencourageustoshowinterestofit.范文10（雙語報(bào)11期小作文）：下面是你校最近舉辦的一場講座的習(xí)慣信息：1.主講人：一位著名畫家2.時(shí)間：本周三下午3.地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂講座的具體內(nèi)容：1.有關(guān)藝術(shù)的基本知識a.一些著名的畫家及其風(fēng)格的作品b.基本的繪畫技巧2.藝術(shù)對學(xué)生的好處：a.鼓勵學(xué)生運(yùn)用創(chuàng)造力和想象力b.有助于學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)，尤其是閱讀和數(shù)學(xué)畫家的期望：鼓勵我們培養(yǎng)對藝術(shù)的興趣9分作文：AfamousartistgaveusalectureonWednesdayafternooninourschoolhall.

13分作文：AlectureconcerningthebasicknowledgeofartwasgivenbyanestablishedpainterthisWednesdayafternooninourschoolhall.

范文10（雙語報(bào)11期小作文）：下面是你校最近舉辦的一場講座的習(xí)慣信息：1.主講人：一位著名畫家2.時(shí)間：本周三下午3.地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂講座的具體內(nèi)容：1.有關(guān)藝術(shù)的基本知識a.一些著名的畫家及其風(fēng)格的作品b.基本的繪畫技巧2.藝術(shù)對學(xué)生的好處：a.鼓勵學(xué)生運(yùn)用創(chuàng)造力和想象力b.有助于學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)，尤其是閱讀和數(shù)學(xué)畫家的期望：鼓勵我們培養(yǎng)對藝術(shù)的興趣9分作文：Inthelecture,heintroducedsomefamousartistsandtheirpaintingstyleandworks.

13分作文：Inthelecture,somefamouspaintersandtheirpaintingstylesandmasterpieceswereintroducedtoexpandourhorizons.

范文10（雙語報(bào)11期小作文）：下面是你校最近舉辦的一場講座的習(xí)慣信息：1.主講人：一位著名畫家2.時(shí)間：本周三下午3.地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂講座的具體內(nèi)容：1.有關(guān)藝術(shù)的基本知識a.一些著名的畫家及其風(fēng)格的作品b.基本的繪畫技巧2.藝術(shù)對學(xué)生的好處：a.鼓勵學(xué)生運(yùn)用創(chuàng)造力和想象力b.有助于學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)，尤其是閱讀和數(shù)學(xué)畫家的期望：鼓勵我們培養(yǎng)對藝術(shù)的興趣Also,heshowedussomepaintingtechniques.范文10（雙語報(bào)11期小作文）：下面是你校最近舉辦的一場講座的習(xí)慣信息：1.主講人：一位著名畫家2.時(shí)間：本周三下午3.地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂講座的具體內(nèi)容：1.有關(guān)藝術(shù)的基本知識a.一些著名的畫家及其風(fēng)格的作品b.基本的繪畫技巧2.藝術(shù)對學(xué)生的好處：a.鼓勵學(xué)生運(yùn)用創(chuàng)造力和想象力b.有助于學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)，尤其是閱讀和數(shù)學(xué)畫家的期望：鼓勵我們培養(yǎng)對藝術(shù)的興趣9分（好處總起和期望）：Heencouragedustobeinterestedinartbecauseitcandogoodtous.

13分（好處總起和期望）：Heinspiredustodevelopaninterestinartsinceitisoftremendousbenefittousstudents.范文10（雙語報(bào)11期小作文）：下面是你校最近舉辦的一場講座的習(xí)慣信息：1.主講人：一位著名畫家2.時(shí)間：本周三下午3.地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校禮堂講座的具體內(nèi)容：1.有關(guān)藝術(shù)的基本知識a.一些著名的畫家及其風(fēng)格的作品b.基本的繪畫技巧2.藝術(shù)對學(xué)生的好處：a.鼓勵學(xué)生運(yùn)用創(chuàng)造力和想象力b.有助于學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)，尤其是閱讀和數(shù)學(xué)畫家的期望：鼓勵我們培養(yǎng)對藝術(shù)的興趣9分作文：Itwillencourageustouseourcreativityandimaginationandcanhelpusdowellinourstudies,especiallyreadingandmath.13分作文：Accordingtothepainter,notonlycanartmotivateourcreativityandimagination,butitcanalsohelptoimproveouracademicperformance,particularlyinreadingandmathematics.范文10:5句話小作文如何得高分？好詞好句、長短結(jié)合、不拘泥于中文、能適當(dāng)拓展。AlectureconcerningthebasicknowledgeofartwasgivenbyanestablishedpainterthisWednesdayafternooninourschoolhall.Inthelecture,somefamouspaintersandtheirpaintingstylesandmasterpieceswereintroducedtoexpandourhorizons.Also,heshowedussomepaintingtechniques.Heinspiredustodevelopaninterestinartsinceitisoftremendousbenefittousstudents.Accordingtothepainter,artcanmotivateourcreativityandimagination.Accordingtothepainter,notonlycanartmotivateourcreativityandimagination,butitcanalsohelptoimproveouracademicperformance,particularlyinreadingandmathematics.(mostlyby陳佳怡)Inhisopinion,artcaninspirestudentstogivefullplaytotheircreativityandimagination.（by王俊鴻）Itisoftremendousbenefittostudents’studies,especiallytotheirreadingandmathematics.（by陳子?。〢lecture,deliveredbyafamouspainter,washeldintheschoolhallWednesdayafternoon.Aimedtoencouragethestudentstotakeaninterestinart,thelecturenotonlytalkedaboutsomefamouspainters’paintingstylesandmasterpieces,butalsointroducedthebasictechniquesofpainting.Studentscanbenefitalotfromartasitplaysanactiveroleinimprovingourimaginationandcreativity.Besides,artisofgreatbenefittousstudents’study,especiallyinreadingandmathematics.Thelecturewassofantasticandunforgettablethatitwonovertheheartsofallthestudents.(by李雪宜)expect;expectancy;expectationExpectancy1期待withalookof~以期待的表情該詞最常用的是這個(gè)詞組：lifeexpectancy=expectationoflife預(yù)期壽命Expectationaccordingto~如所預(yù)料against[contraryto](all)~(s)(事)與愿違beyond(all)~(s)料想不到地,出乎意料地Wephonedhiminthe~thathewillhelpus我們打電話給他，期待他會幫助我們。comeuptoone’s~s不辜負(fù)某人的期望fallshortofaperson‘s~s辜負(fù)某人的期望基本的(adj.)Basic基本上(adv.)Basically培養(yǎng)……方面的興趣Cultivateaninterestinsth盡可能地（……）As…aspossible=as…asonecan沒有aspossibleasonecan，這個(gè)表達(dá)是錯(cuò)的?。。。。》段?1（雙語報(bào)12期小作文）：下面是詩人李白的相關(guān)信息：地位：唐代最偉大詩人之一作品：1.流傳下來的有約1000首。2.27首詩歌被收錄在《唐詩三百首》中影響：1.在其所處的時(shí)代有很大的影響力2.對后世影響深遠(yuǎn)3.至今仍受到大家歡迎，甚至小孩子們都能背誦他的詩歌9分：LiBaiisregardedasoneofthegreatestpoetsintheTangDynasty.13分：HonoredasoneofthemostbrilliantpoetsduringtheTangDynasty,LiBaicanneverfailtosurprisepeoplewithhisincrediblecreativityandimagination.范文11（雙語報(bào)12期小作文）：下面是詩人李白的相關(guān)信息：地位：唐代最偉大詩人之一作品：1.流傳下來的有約1000首。2.27首詩歌被收錄在《唐詩三百首》中影響：1.在其所處的時(shí)代有很大的影響力2.對后世影響深遠(yuǎn)3.至今仍受到大家歡迎，甚至小孩子們都能背誦他的詩歌9分：About1000ofhispoemsremain.13分：HispoemswereregardedasthegeminChinesecultureandabout1000poemshavebeenhandeddowntothepresenttime.

范文11（雙語報(bào)12期小作文）：下面是詩人李白的相關(guān)信息：地位：唐代最偉大詩人之一作品：1.流傳下來的有約1000首。2.27首詩歌被收錄在《唐詩三百首》中影響：1.在其所處的時(shí)代有很大的影響力2.對后世影響深遠(yuǎn)3.至今仍受到大家歡迎，甚至小孩子們都能背誦他的詩歌TwentysevenofhispoemsareincludedinThreeHundredTang