初中英語九年級主題作文【知識框架+佳作賞析+能力提升】情感問題

主題：情感問題導讀本單元的主題是用英語探討情感問題,談論日常生活中身邊的人或事給自己帶來的情緒變化和影響.寫此類文章時,可以通過描述一件發(fā)生過的具體事情來表達自己的喜、怒、哀、樂,尤其包括描述生活或學習中的煩惱.寫作過程中,可以先介紹具體事情,再寫出它對人的影響以及人的感受.同學們在把握教材主題基礎上,要認真體會這類主題作文的寫作思路和方法,以及有關句式和用詞.可適用于本單元的關聯(lián)主題有很多,如Anunforgettableexperience,Anunforgettableday等.題目回放網絡的出現(xiàn)改變著人們傳統(tǒng)的生活方式,也不同程度地影響著同學們的學習和生活.坐在家中即可瀏覽眾多網上圖書館豐富的圖書；幾秒鐘內,便可收到相隔萬里的來信,或者在最短時間內獲得各地詳細的信息,等等.但網絡也非常復雜,其中包括不健康內容.由于同學們辨別能力有限,有時難以辨別網絡內容的好壞.請以HowtheInternetaffectsourschoollife為題,寫一篇英語短文,談談你對網絡的看法.寫作要求：1.要表明自己的觀點；2.語句通順,流暢；3.90詞左右；4.可根據提示內容適當發(fā)揮,但不能出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和校名.審題指引1審體裁：該寫作要求討論網絡怎樣影響學生的學校生活,并表明自己的觀點,屬于議論文.2審內容：可從利弊兩方面論述,并表明自己的觀點.3審時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主.4審人稱：以第一人稱和第三人稱為主.框架設計開頭：開篇概括說明網絡對學生的學校生活的影響.中間：主體段落詳細分析網絡給學生的學校生活帶來的影響,可以分為好的影響和不好的影響.結尾：最后用總結性語言表明自己的觀點.段落素描1.Firstparagraph:ThedevelopmentoftheInternethaschangedpeople'slife.Asfaraswestudentsareconcerned,itbringsus...(Atpresent,theInternethasasignificantimpactonthelifeofpeople,especiallythelifeofjuniorhighschoolstudents.)(...)2.Thebody:Honestlyspeaking,theInternetmakesitconvenientforusstudentstoseekinformationonline.Forexample...However,theInternethasanegativeeffectonusifwe...(Indeed,itisconvenientforusto...However,theInternetislikelytohaveabadeffectonusifwe...)(...)3.Lastparagraph:Inmymind,weshouldlearntousetheInternetrationally.Specifically,wecan...(Therefore,wearesupposedtomakerationaluseoftheInternet,and...)(...)范本淬煉AHowtheInternetaffectsourschoollifeThedevelopmentoftheInternethaschangedpeople'slife.①Asfaraswestudentsareconcerned,itbringsusbothconvenienceandtrouble.Honestlyspeaking,theInternetmakesit②convenientforusstudentstoseekinformationonline.Forexample,wecaneasilyfindreadingmaterials,and③exploretheanswerstothequestionsinourstudies.However,theInternethasanegativeeffectonusifwecannot④makerationaluseofit.Forinstance,somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingonlinegames,⑤chattingwiththeirfriends,seeingfilms,orevenvisitingunhealthywebsites.Allthishasabadeffectontheirstudies.Inmymind,weshouldlearntousetheInternetrationally.⑥Specifically,wecanmainlyuseitinoursearchforinformationaboutourstudiesinsteadofinformationaboutour⑦recreations.①asfaraswestudentsareconcerned,就我們學生而言.②convenient,方便的.③explore,探索.④makerationaluseofit,合理利用它.⑤chatwithsb.,和某人聊天.⑥specifically,具體說來.⑦recreations,娛樂.亮點點評1.本文圍繞網絡對學校生活的影響這一主題展開論述,段落設計合理,條理清晰.2.文中用honestlyspeaking和inmymind自然地銜接不同段落；第二段在舉例時還用了forexample和forinstance這類銜接語.這些都令文章銜接自然,過渡順暢.3.文中使用了asfaras,concerned,convenience,seekinformationonline,readingmaterials,anegativeeffect,makerationaluseof,unhealthy,specifically等出彩的短語,提升了文章檔次.BHowtheInternetaffectsourschoollifeAtpresent,theInternethas①asignificantimpactonthelifeofpeople,especiallythelifeofjuniorhighschoolstudents.Indeed,②itisconvenientforustosearchtheInternetfortheinformationthatweneedinourstudies,③includingplentyoflearningresourcesandtheanswerstothequestionsinourstudies.However,theInternet④islikelytohaveabadeffectonusifwecannotmakeproperuseofit.Forexample,ifwe⑤spendtoomuchtimeplayingonlinegames,chattingwithourfriends,orwatching⑥unhealthyvideos,ourstudieswillbeaffectedbadly.Therefore,we⑦aresupposedtomakerationaluseoftheInternet,andwecannotspendtoomuchtimeononlinerecreations.①asignificantimpact,重要影響.②itisconvenientforsb.todosth.,某人做某事很方便；it是形式主語.③including,包括.④belikelytodosth.,可能會做某事.⑤spendtoomuchtimedoingsth.,花費太多時間做某事.⑥unhealthyvideos,不健康的視頻.⑦besupposedto,應該.亮點點評1.本文緊扣網絡對學校生活的影響這一主題,分三段展開論述,要點齊全,內容完整.2.文中用indeed,however,forexample,therefore等銜接語,使句子和段落前后銜接緊密.3.比起上面一篇二類文,本文句式更加多樣化,準確使用了定語從句、狀語從句等,展示了作者的語言運用功底.4.本文用詞較為豐富,如使用atpresent,especially,indeed,including,learningresources,likely,makeproperuseof,videos,affect等,使文章生動形象.佳作賞析AReadinghasbenefitedmealotAsisknowntoall,readingisanimportantwayto①enrichourmindsanddevelopourlifeskills.Inmymind,Ihavebenefitedalotfromreading.Firstofall,readinghashelpedmegainmuchknowledge②invariousfields,andhasbroadenedmyhorizons.Second,readinghashelpedmedevelopagoodstudyhabit,andhas③improvedmytestperformance.Finally,readinghastaughtmelifeskills,suchashowtogetalongwellwithothers,howto④liveindependently,andhowtobeausefulpersoninsociety.Inaword,Ihave⑤benefitedgreatlyfromreading.Iwillkeepthehabitofreading.①enrich,充實.②invariousfields,在各個領域.③improve,提高；改善.④liveindependently,獨立地生活.⑤benefit,受益.亮點點評1.本文緊扣閱讀的益處這一主題展開敘述,條理清晰,層次分明.2.文中用asisknowntoall,inmymind,firstofall,second,finally,inaword等銜接詞,使文章段落和句子銜接流暢.3.文中句式運用靈活,使用了as引導的定語從句和how+動詞不定式等句式,增強了文章的可讀性.4.文章用詞考究,使用了enrich,gain,various,improve,testperformance,lifeskills,liveindependently等豐富詞匯和短語.BBasketballhasmadeadifferencetomylifeNodoubt,playingbasketballhas①madeadifferencetomylife.I②usedtobeshortandthin,andIwasafraidofcommunicatingwithothers.However,thingshavechangedsinceIwatchedafilmaboutbasketball.I③fellinlovewithbasketball,which④builtupmybody,andhelpedmedevelopfriendshipwithothers.Whatismore,basketballnow⑤inspiresmetofacedifficultiesbravelyandreducethepressureonmystudies.Thankstobasketball,ithas⑥hadagreateffectonmylife.Iwillnevergiveupplayingbasketball.①makeadifferenceto...,對···..·影響很大.②usedto,過去常常.③fallinlovewith,愛上.④buildup,增進.⑤inspiresb.todosth.,激勵某人做某事.⑥haveagreateffecton,對······有很大影響.亮點點評1.文章段落分明,邏輯合理.圍繞籃球對作者生活的影響這一主題,開頭點題,中間主體段落展開敘述,結尾總結.2.文中恰當運用銜接語,如nodoubt,however,whatismore,thanksto等,使文章表達通順流暢.3.句式富于變化,使用了動名詞充當主語,since引導的時間狀語從句,which引導的非限制性定語從句等,顯示了作者的語言運用能力.4.文章用詞貼切,如使用了usedto,fallinlovewith,developfriendship,inspiresb.todosth.,reducethepressureon,haveagreateffecton等,增強了文章的語言表現(xiàn)力.CWhattheInternetbringsusAtpresent,theInternet①iscloselyrelatedtoalmostallpeople,andmakestheirlifeandworkmoreconvenientthanever.Undoubtedly,theInternet②makesiteasyforpeopletobuythingstheyneedwithoutleavinghome.Besides,itprovidespeoplewithmorewaysto③keepintouchwithothers.Moreover,itofferspeoplemore④opportunitiestolearnabouttheworldandgetinformationeasilyandwidely.However,everycoinhastwosides.⑤Obviously,spendingtoomuchtimeontheInternetdoesgreatharmtopeople'shealth,especiallyteenagers'eyesightandtestperformance.Therefore,weshouldmakerationaluseoftheInternet.①becloselyrelatedto....與··.·密切相關.②makeiteasyforpeopletobuythings,此處it是形式賓語,動詞不定式復合結構forpeopletobuythings充當真正的賓語.③keepintouchwith,與······保持聯(lián)系.④opportunity,機會.⑤obviously,顯然地.亮點點評1.開篇直接點題,接下來用兩個自然段從正反兩方面展開敘述.文章結構合理,邏輯性強.2.用atpresent,undoubtedly,besides,moreover,however,thereforebringsus等銜接上下文，使文章行文連貫，過渡自然。3.用詞準確，尤其是幾個副詞，如closely,almost,easilyandwidely,obviously,especially等，使文章富有感染力。素材寶庫1.好詞妙語neither...nor...既不。。?！ぁぁひ膊弧ぁぁ?··ratherthan而不是continuetodosth.繼續(xù)做某事makejointefforts齊心協(xié)力tosb.'srelief令某人欣慰的是undoubtedly無疑drivesb.crazy使某人發(fā)狂takesb'sposition取代某人的位置makeourfriendshipstronger使我們的友誼更加牢固remainhappyforever永遠保持快樂theworstdayofsb.'slife某人一生中最糟糕的一天behardonsb.對某人苛刻learnalessonfromyourmistake從你的錯誤中吸取教訓dosth.withcourage勇敢地做某事2.提分佳句TheInternethasasignificantimpactonmylife.互聯(lián)網對我的生活有重要影響。Itmakesmefeel...它使我感覺到·.....Ifinditveryimportanttodothat.我發(fā)現(xiàn)做那件事很重要.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑十年少.Tosavetimeistolengthenlife.節(jié)約時間就是延長生命.Timelostisneverfoundagain.時光一去不復返.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開端是成功的一半.Factsspeaklouderthanwords.事實勝于雄辯.Listeningtolightmusicmakesmehappy.聽輕音樂使我開心.Truefriendshipismorevaluablethanmoney.真正的友誼比金錢更寶貴.Abirdinthehandisworthtwointhebush.一鳥在手勝過雙鳥在林.Thoughitwasasmallthing,itmeantalottoher.盡管這是一件小事情,但對她來說意義很大.TheInternetmakesourlifeeasierandmoreconvenient.互聯(lián)網使我們的生活更便捷.Ithinkmymotherhasdonealotforme,soIshoulddosomethingforherinreturn.我認為媽媽已經為我做了很多,所以我應當為她做些事情來報答她.寫作預熱1.句子改錯1)Shareyourfeelingswiththosewhocareaboutyouhelpsyougetclosertothem.____________________________________________________________________________________________2)Althoughtheoldmanhasmuchmoney,buthedoesn'tfeelhappy.____________________________________________________________________________________________3)Thepurposeofthenewtechnologyismakelifeeasier.____________________________________________________________________________________________4)Heprefersbeingalonetomakefriendswiththatboy.____________________________________________________________________________________________5)I'msorrytokeepyouwaitingforsuchalongtime.____________________________________________________________________________________________答案：1)Share改為Sharing2)去掉but,或Althoughthe改為The3)make改為tomake4)make改為making5)keep改為havekept2.句式變換1)Idonotlikecarrots.Iknowtheyaregoodforme.(用eventhough改寫句子)____________________________________________________________________________________________2)Jennywasveryupset,soshedidnotwanttogotoschool.(改為復合句)Jennywas__________upset__________shedidn'twanttogotoschool.3)Theteacherraisedhisvoicetomakehimselfheard.(改為同義句)Theteacherraisedhisvoice________________________________makehimselfheard.4)Peterwasworriedthathiscoachmightkickhimofftheteam.(改為同義句)Peterwasworriedabout_______________________________theteambyhiscoach.5)ThequestionissodifficultthatIreallydonotknowhowIwillanswerit.(改為同義句)ThequestionissodifficultthatIreallydonotknow____________________________it.6)ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasthatonedaymyclassmatesandIlostourwayinaforest.(仿寫表語從句)Themostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasthat______________________________________.答案：1)IdonotlikecarrotseventhoughIknowtheyaregoodforme./EventhoughIknowcarrotsaregoodforme,Idonotlikethem.2)so;that3)in;order;to(或so;as;to)4)being;kicked;off5)how;to;answer6)Ibecameconfidentafterthefootballmatch(開放性答案)實戰(zhàn)練筆人非圣賢,孰能無過?作為一名學生,你在學習或生活中是否曾犯過錯誤?你認識到自己所犯錯誤后,又是如何改正的呢?請根據寫作要點提示,以Themistakehelpedmegrowup為題,用英語寫一篇短文.寫作要點：1.簡述你犯過的一次錯誤；2.談談你是如何在他人幫助下或在自己努力下改正的；3.談談你從中吸取了哪些教訓或收獲了哪些成長經驗.注意事項：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.使用所有寫作要點,可適當增加情節(jié),使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和校名；4.已給標題不計人總詞數(shù)._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________