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考官版本：Itisquitecommonthesedaysforyoungpeopleinmanycountriestohaveabreakfromstudyingaftergraduatingfromhighschool.Thetrendisnotrestrictedtorichstudentswhohavethemoneytotravel,butisalsoevidentamongpoorerstudentswhochoosetoworkand economicallyindependentforaperiodoftime.foroneyearaftergraduatingfromhighschool.Richstudentswouldhavethemoneytotravel,andpoorerstudentsmaychoosetoworkand economicallyindependentforaperiodoftime.foroneyearaftergraduatingfromhighschool.Thistrendhassomebenefitsforstudents,althoughitmayleadtosomeproblems.foroneyearaftergraduatingfromhighschool.Thiscangivestudentsanopportunitytoseetheworld,eventhoughitmayaffecttheirstudyinsomecases. DiscussadvantagesandTowhatextentdoyouagreeorDiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownWhatarereasons,effectsandWhat？題1：Somepeoplebelievethatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms(forexampleworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighborhoodorteachingsportstoyoungerchildren).Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? (劍9-2)題2：Somepeoplethinksendingcriminalstoprisonisnotaneffectivemethodtodealwiththemandeducationandjobtrainingshouldbeusedinstead.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? 題3：Thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepoweroftheadvertisingbutnottherealneedofthewholesocietyinwhichtheysell.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement? （劍6-1）Somepeoplebelievethatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms(forexampleworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighborhoodorteachingsportstoyoungerchildren)Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(9-2)文章結構第二段：同意（好處1）培養(yǎng)責任心：ngunpaidworkiscommonamonghighschoolstudentsinsomecountries,whichhas eacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Inmyopinion,thiscanprovidethemwithmanyvaluableskills,althoughitmayaffecttheirstudysometimes.Inmanyhighschools,studentsarerequiredtodounpaidworkafterclassasacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Whilethismayoccupytheirtimetosomeextent,itisbeneficialforstudents’growthinvariousngunpaidworkiscommonamonghighschoolstudentsinsomecountriesandsomepeoplebelievethisshouldbeacompulsorypartinhighschooleducation.Inmyopinion,thiscanprovidestudentswithmanyvaluableskills,althoughitmayaffecttheirstudysometimes.ngunpaidworkiscommonamonghighschoolstudentsinsomecountriesandsomepeoplebelievethisshouldbeacompulsorypartinhighschooleducation.Iagreewiththisopiniontosomeextent.Iagreewiththisopiniontosomeextent.Ithinkthisviewpointisreasonable.Inmypointofview,thispracticehasbenefitsaswellasdrawbacks.Thisargumentmaybetrue.Itissuggestedthatallhighschoolstudentsshouldbeinvolvedinunpaidcommunityservices.Inmyopinion,thiscanprovidethemwithmanyvaluableskills,althoughitmayaffecttheirstudysometimes.考生范文開頭段版本（8分Ithasbeensuggestedthathighschoolstudentsshouldbeinvolvedinunpaidcommunityservicesasacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Mostofthecollegesarealreadyprovidingopportunitiestogainworkexperience,howeverthesearenotcompulsory.Inmyopinion,sendingstudentstoworkincommunityservicesisagoodideaasitcanprovidethemwithmanylotsofvaluableskills.范文全文：Inmanyhighschools,studentsarerequiredtodounpaidworkafterclassasacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms.Whilethismayoccupytheirtimetosomeextent,itisbeneficialforstudents’growthinvariousFirstofall,ngunpaidworkcanenhancestudents’senseofresponsibility.Whenservingasvolunteers,studentswouldconsiderotherpeople'sneedsandunderstandwhatkindofroletheycanyinthecommunity.Theyaremorelikelyto eusefuladultswhentheygrowup.Forexample,insomecommunities,teenagersneedtolookafteroldpeopleinnursinghomesorreadtochildreninkindergartens.Theseyoungpeoplelearnhowtocommunicatewithothersandhowtocontributetothecommunity.Bycontrast,thosewhoneverparticipateinvoluntaryworkmay self-centeredandinconsiderate.Moreover,ngunpaidworkenablesstudentstoputtheoryintopractice.Inthisprocess,theywouldgainworkexperienceandpracticalskills,whichwouldbeanassetontheirCVsandincreasetheiremployability.Manycompanieswouldconsiderwhetherthejobapplicantshavetheexperience ngvoluntaryworkwhentheyrecruitnewstaff.However,ngvoluntaryworkwillconsumestudents’timeanddistractthemfromstudy.Somestudents’academicperformancemaydeclineandtheirparentswouldcominthatthiskindofworkhasaffectedtheirstudy.Ifthefamilyandstudentsthemselveshaveanantipathytovoluntarywork,itgoesagainsttheoriginalintentionoftheorganizer.Myviewisthatallstudentsinhighschoolsshouldbeencouragedtotakepartinunpaidwork,whichcanhelpthem ematureandresponsible.However,theyshouldalsobeguidedtoarrangetheirtimereasonablyandstrikeabalancebetweentheirstudyandextra-curricularwork. 文章結第二段：同意（好處1）培養(yǎng)責任心：題2：Somepeoplethinksendingcriminalstoprisonisnotaneffectivemethodtodealwiththemandeducationandjobtrainingshouldbeusedinstead.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree? 1：Topunishcriminalsandreducecrimesthecommonpracticeistosendcriminalstoprison.Ithink,apartfromthis,educationandjobtraininginprisonarealsoneededforcriminals’rehabilitation.2：Topunishcriminalsandreducecrimesthecommonpracticeistosendcriminalstoprison.Somepeoplethinkthatwhattheselawviolatorsneediseducationinsteadofpenalty.Inmypointofviewbothareessentialintheprocessofrehabilitation.題3：Thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepoweroftheadvertisingbutnottherealneedofthewholesocietyinwhichtheysell.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement? 文章結構：主體段1（同意）：承認的力量主體段2（不同意）：也有社會需求開頭段：背景+題目觀點+我的觀點（書上考生版本7.5分Nowadays,therearelotsofadvertisementsonevisionoronthestreets.Somepeoplethinkthattheadvertisingbooststhesalesanditencouragespeopletobuythingsunnecessarily.Thisargumentsmaybetrue.開頭段：背景+我的觀點（版本Consumergoodsfromclothestohomeappliancesaresoldverywellintoday’scommercialsociety.Ithinkadvertisingysanimportantroleinboostingthesales,butthisphenomenonalsoindicatesthedemandofthesocietyisincreasing.主體段第1段：（書上的考生版本，7.5分Inmycountry,manyadvertisingcompaniesproduceadvertisementswithfamousandpopularactorsorsingers.Peopleespeciallyyoungsters,buygoodsthattheirfavoritesingeradvertise,althoughtheydonotreallyneedtheproducts.Also,ontheevisionscreenaproductmaylookgorgeousandgoodquality.Asaresultofit,peopleoftenbuygoodswithoutenoughconsideration.Consumersmaynotactuallyneeditbuttheybuygoodsimpulsivelysoonaftertheywatchtheadvertising.Furthermore,asmanycustomersbuyaparticularproductduetoitsadvertisingn,theotherpeoplemaybeaffectedbythetrend,eveniftheproductisnotoftherealneedsofthesociety.主體段第2段：（版本However,manypeoplehavetheirownspendinghabits,whichcannotbechangedbytheadvertisement.Inadditiontoadvertisements,therearesomeotherfactorsthatleadtotheincreaseinthesalesofconsumergoods.Inthemodernsociety,thelivingstandardhasimprovedandpeopledesirebettermateriallife.Theyhavemoredisposable etobuywhattheylike,whileinthepast,theycouldnotaffordtodoso.Also,manufacturersupdatetheirproductsconstantlytomeetincreasing結尾段：Inconclusion,itistruethatadvertisingtemptspeopletobuymorethantheyneedinsomecases.However,itisdifficulttosaythateveryoneisinfluencedbyadvertisementsinmakingtheirbuyingdecisions.People’sincreasingdemandand ealsocontributetothehighsales.作業(yè)：Livinginbigcitiesisbadforpeople’shealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor (2014年3月1號考題文章結構主體段第1段：作業(yè)范文 版本主體作業(yè)范文 版本Despitetheacceleratingurbanizationandgrowingurbanpopulation,somepeoplethinkthatlivinginbigcitiesisharmfultopeople’shealth.Thisistruetosomeextent,ifweconsidertheenvironmentoflargecitiesandlifestylesofcitydwellers.Inrecentyears,duetoincreasingtrafficandsomeotherfactors,theenvironmentofmanycitieshas eworse.Theexhaustfumesemittedbycarscontainpoisonouschemicalsthataredetrimentaltopeople’shealth.Accordingtosomeresearches,airpollutionmaycauseaseriesofdiseasesorevenlungcancer.Moreover,peoplelivinginbigcitiestendtoleadunhealthyli