2023年江蘇小升初題型專項(xiàng)突破-書面表達(dá)-真題20篇（Ⅰ）（含答案詳解）

2023年江蘇小升初題型專項(xiàng)突破書面表達(dá)-真題20篇（Ⅰ）學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________一、命題作文1．（2022·江蘇淮安）你喜歡自己的家鄉(xiāng)嗎?你的家鄉(xiāng)一年四季氣候怎么樣呢?在不同的季節(jié)你會(huì)和朋友及家人做哪些事情呢?請以Seasons為題，寫一篇短文。要求：1.條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，不少于5句。2.不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校、班級以及自己的真實(shí)姓名。Seasons___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2022·江蘇宿遷）泗陽曾被評為全國十大宜居城市之一，請你以“Welcometoourcity”為題，寫一篇不少于40詞短文，介紹一下美麗的泗陽吧。要求：1.圍繞泗陽天氣、美食、風(fēng)景名勝等方面展開，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)人名或者校名。3.語句通順，書寫工整。Welcometoourcity__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2021·江蘇連云港）每個(gè)人都有自己的夢想，夢想或大或小，但我們都在為實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想而不斷努力。請你以Mydream為題，用英文寫一段話。要求：1.條理清晰，語句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，書寫規(guī)范；2.短文不少于5句話。Mydream__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2021·江蘇·鹽城市亭湖小學(xué)小升初模擬）我們的國家在日益強(qiáng)大。作為一名中國人，我們?nèi)f分自豪，請以“WelcometoChina”為題，向大家介紹中國。要求：1.條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順。2.單詞拼寫正確，書寫清晰規(guī)范，不少于50個(gè)單詞。提示：可以從weather,cities,sport,animals,places...等方面介紹。WelcometoChina___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2021·江蘇·南京市光華東街小學(xué)小升初真題）金陵中學(xué)(JinlingHighSchool)校文學(xué)社推出了新海報(bào)，標(biāo)題為“TogetherForTheFuture”(一起向未來)。文學(xué)社社長劉方邀請你寫一篇文章，作為文學(xué)社征文范本。[要求]1.文章不少于80詞，不少于6句話。2.涵蓋海報(bào)所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，全文準(zhǔn)確通暢。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。“TogetherForTheFuture”2022isanewstart,whatmakesyouunforgettablein2021?Itcanbeactivities,TVprograms,news,greatpeopleandsoon.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Whenweenjoyourselves,dangerissometimesaroundus.Whatshouldweremembertodoandnottodotoavoidit?In2022,whatdoyouwanttosaytoothers?Writedownyourpassageandgiveittous!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2021·江蘇南通）隨著生活水平的提高，人們的健康意識越來越強(qiáng)。如何擁有健康的飲食呢？請你結(jié)合所學(xué)知識做介紹。注：請做到書寫規(guī)范、語句通順，不少于5句話。AhealthydietInahealthydiet,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2021·江蘇南通）怎樣做一名好學(xué)生呢？請以“Beingagoodstudent”為題，運(yùn)用你所學(xué)的知識，從生活和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣等方面寫一段話。要求：1.以第一人稱來寫。2.條理清晰，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書寫規(guī)范。3.不少于6句話。Beingagoodstudent__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2021·江蘇·淮安市黃集九年制學(xué)校小升初真題）以Aparty為題寫一篇不少于5句話的短文，要求書寫工整，語句通順。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2019·江蘇蘇州）學(xué)期即將結(jié)束，歡樂的暑假悄然而至。暑假你有什么計(jì)劃？請以“Mysummerholiday”為題寫一篇英語短文，至少5句。Mysummerholiday___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2019·江蘇南通）同學(xué)們，你們一定有絢爛多彩的夢想。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想，你們將如何做呢？請以“Mydream”為題，寫一篇小短文與我們分享吧！要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容不少于六句話，不少于45個(gè)單詞；2.語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2019·江蘇南京）Whatmustyoudotocrosstheroadsafely?Whatmustyounotdoontheroad?要求：1.根據(jù)提示及圖意完成短文，信息不要缺漏。2.語句通順，條理清楚，30~50詞。RoadsafetyTocrossabusyroadsafely,wemust_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wemustnot__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2020·江蘇南京）以“Beingagoodstudent”為題，寫一篇短文。要求：1.必須包含圖示中至少三個(gè)方面的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，語法正確；3.不少于6句話。Beingagoodstudent__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．（2019·江蘇南通）暑假即將到來，你對假期活動(dòng)有什么計(jì)劃和安排嗎？請以Mysummerholidayplan為題寫一篇短文，要求語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，不少于35詞（不包括首句）。MysummerholidayplanSummerholidayiscomingsoon.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、提綱作文14．（2022·江蘇徐州）即將告別小學(xué)生活了，想一想，在你的成長道路上，誰對你的幫助最大？請根據(jù)思維圖提示，寫一篇英文短文。注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。2.所寫內(nèi)容需覆蓋思維導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息，可作適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.正確使用大小寫字母和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號，書寫規(guī)范。4.短文不少于5句話。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．（2021·江蘇宿遷）畢業(yè)啦！現(xiàn)在的你已養(yǎng)成了哪些好習(xí)慣？（比如：生活習(xí)慣，飲食習(xí)慣，規(guī)則意識等），還有不足的地方嗎？你又打算如何改進(jìn)呢？請結(jié)合以上內(nèi)容談?wù)勛约骸Ｒ?1.內(nèi)容要涉及以上三個(gè)問題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，語法正確；3.不少于80字。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．（2022·江蘇·南京致遠(yuǎn)外國語小學(xué)小升初模擬）我們每個(gè)人都會(huì)有夢想。即將畢業(yè)的你長大后想做什么呢?給你的朋友Jim寫一封電子郵件，介紹你的夢想，并簡單說一下原因以及如何努力實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想。（不少于5句）To:JimSubject:MydreamDearJim,I’mexcitedtowritethisemailtoyou.NowI’mgoingtotellyouaboutmydream.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Love,Youre-friend17．（2021·江蘇淮安）請介紹一下你最喜歡城市的天氣、風(fēng)景、美食及相關(guān)活動(dòng)等。要求：1.條理清晰，意思連貫，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，不少于5句。2.不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校、班級以及自己的真實(shí)姓名。______ismyfavouritecity.It’sin______.Theweatheris______________________________You’ll______________________________You’ll______________________________You’ll______________________________18．（2021·江蘇鹽城）下面的表格介紹了劉濤的基本情況，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容以“MyfriendLiuTao”為題寫一篇短文，介紹一下劉濤。個(gè)人信息姓名：劉濤上學(xué)方式：乘校車夢想：將來當(dāng)醫(yī)生年齡：13最喜愛的食物：水果、肉類(對健康有利)學(xué)校：太陽小學(xué)愛好：旅游(今年暑假將去北京)MyfriendLiuTaoIhaveafriend.HisnameisLiuTao.I’mtwelveyearsold.Heisoneyear_______thanme.He_______atSunPrimarySchool.He_______toschool_______schoolbus.Hisfavouritefoodarefruitand_______,becausetheyaregoodfor_______.Helikes_______._______summerholiday,he_______gotoBeijingwithhisparents._______adoctorinthefutureishisdream.19．（2019·江蘇南京）Tom是一位英國男孩。下個(gè)月，他將來南京的一所中學(xué)交流學(xué)習(xí)。請根據(jù)下方的提示信息幫助他寫一篇自我介紹吧！Age15SchoolMillHillSchoolLanguage（語言）English,ChineseHobbiesDreamjobSummerholidayplan要求：1.介紹的內(nèi)容要包含上圖中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)?shù)靥砑觾?nèi)容；2.語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)40左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hi,I'mTom._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、圖畫作文20．（2019·江蘇蘇州）同學(xué)們，我們即將迎來小學(xué)階段的最后一個(gè)暑假。你準(zhǔn)備怎樣安排呢？要求：1.根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖的提示內(nèi)容，寫自己的暑期出行計(jì)劃。(不少于6句話，不包括已給的開頭)2.語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法正確，書寫工整。3.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。MyholidayplansThesummerholidayiscomingsoon.Iwill_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．范文：SeasonsTherearefourseasonsinmyhometown.Theyarespring,summer,autumnandwinter.Springiswarm,wecangoonapicnic.Summerishot,wecangoswimminginthesea.Autumniscoolwindy,wecanflykites.Winteriscold.Ilikewinterbest,becauseIcanplayinthesnow.Icanmakeasnowman.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求用第一人稱介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的四季。然后再闡述每個(gè)季節(jié)的天氣情況即可以做的事情。注意文章為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)并要符合句子數(shù)量要求。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：spring春天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，winter冬天，goonapicnic野餐，goswimming去游泳，flykites放風(fēng)箏，makeasnowman堆雪人參考句型：Thereare...；Theyare...；Spring/Summer/Autumn/Winteris...,wecan...2．范文：WelcometoourcitySiyangisabeautifulcityinJiangsuProvince.It’snottoohotinsummerortoocoldinwinter.Soit’sagoodplacetotakeatrip.Therearemanydifferentkindsofdeliciousfoodhere.It’sfamousforsaltedduckandpears.Ithasalonghistoryandthereareplacesofinterestyoucanvisit.MacauCulturalParkisoneofthem.Ioftentakeawalkthere.Peoplehereareveryfriendly.Ifyouhavetime,youshouldreallytakeatriphere.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求以“Welcometoourcity”為題，寫文章街上泗陽，可以圍繞泗陽天氣、美食、風(fēng)景名勝等方面展開。注意文章為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)且滿足詞數(shù)要求。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：beautiful美麗的，province省，summer夏天，winter冬天，delicious美味的，saltedduck鹽水鴨，history歷史，placesofinterest名勝古跡，friendly友好的，takeatrip旅行參考句型：Siyangis…；It'snot…；Ithas...；Peopleherearevery...；Ifyouhavetime,youshould...3．范文：MydreamEveryonehashisorherdream.AndmydreamistobeanEnglishteacherbecauseIlikeEnglishsomuch.SoIneedtostudyhard.IoftenaskmyEnglishteacherforhelpwhenImeetdifficultquestions.Ialsohavemanyhobbies,likeplayingbasketballandplayingthepipa.SoIcanhavefunwithmystudentsinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求寫一寫自己的夢想，包括有這樣的夢想的原因和所付出的努力，句子主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：everyone每個(gè)人，because因?yàn)?，studyhard努力學(xué)習(xí)，ask...forhelp向……尋求幫助，difficult困難的，question問題，hobby愛好，playbasketball打籃球，playthepipa彈琵琶，havefun玩得開心，inthefuture在未來參考句型：Everyonehas...；Andmydreamis...because...；Ioften...；SoIneedto...；Icanhavefunwith...4．范文：WelcometoChinaHello,welcometoChina.Itisthethirdbiggestcountryintheworld.Ithasmanybigcities,suchasBeijing,Shanghai,Guangzhou....ThesportsinChinaarestrongerandstronger.Wegotgoodgradesineverycompetition.Therearemanykindsofanimalsinourcountry.Onlyourcountryhaspandas.Therearealsomanyplacesofgreatinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalace,thePalaceMuseum....Iamproudofourcountry.Ilovemycountry.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求用第三人稱和therebe句型描述自己的國家。然后再從城市，運(yùn)動(dòng)，名勝古跡等方面詳細(xì)闡述。注意文章為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)并要符合句子數(shù)量要求。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：welcome歡迎，biggest最大的，suchas例如，competition競賽，placesofgreatinterest名勝古跡，theSummerPalace頤和園，thePalaceMuseum故宮參考句型：Itis...；Ithas...；Thereare..；Iamproudof...5．例文：TogetherForTheFutureIn2022,Iwanttobeabettergirl.Iwillgotobedearly.Iwillputmybooksandtoysinorder.Iwanttobeahealthiergirl.Ilikeeatingsweetfood.Thatisbadforourteeth.SoIwilleatlesssweetfoodandmorefruiteverydayin2022.Ilikeplayingfootballandrunningontheroad.Thisisnotsafe.In2022,Iwillfollowtheroadrulesandstaysafeontheroad!Inaword,weshouldbreakourbadhabits,andbecomeabetterman.【詳解】1.該題目是涵蓋所給海報(bào)所有要點(diǎn)，寫一篇標(biāo)題為TogetherForTheFuture的文章，作為文學(xué)社征文范本。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求，文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。2.參考詞匯及參考句型：參考詞匯：gotobedearly早睡，putmybooksandtoysinorder把我的書和玩具整理好，healthier更健康的，eatsweetfood吃甜食，playfootball踢足球，followtheroadrules遵守交通規(guī)則，staysafe保持安全，breakourbadhabits改掉壞習(xí)慣參考句型：Iwantto…；Iwill…；Ilike…；Weshould…6．范文：AhealthydietInahealthydiet,thereismuchfruitandvegetables.Thereisalsoalotofriceandbread.Youcanhavesomemeatandfishinyourmeals.Youcanalsohaveafeweggseveryweek.Milkisgoodforyourbody.Youcanhavesomemilkeveryday.Sweetfoodisnice,butitisnotgoodforyourteeth.Eatonlyalittlesweetfoodeveryday.【詳解】題目解讀：該題目要求寫出健康的飲食對我們的身體很重要。具體要闡述在健康的飲食里，我們都需要吃哪些食物。哪些食物對身體有益處，哪些食物對身體有害處，注意文章為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)并滿足句子數(shù)量要求。參考詞匯與句型：參考詞匯：healthy健康的，vegetables蔬菜，isgoodfor對……有好處，Sweet甜的，參考句型：Thereis...；Youcan...；【點(diǎn)睛】7．范文：BeingagoodstudentTobeagoodstudent,Ishouldgotoschoolearly.Ishouldlistentomyteachersinclass.Ishouldkeepourclassroomcleanandtidy.WhenIcrosstheroad,Imustwaitforthegreenman.Imustn’trunorplayfootballontheroad.Ishouldfinishmyhomeworkontime.【詳解】題目解讀：該題目要求以第一人稱介紹成為一名好學(xué)生的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，文章時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，并滿足句子數(shù)量要求。參考詞匯與句型：參考詞匯：should應(yīng)該；cleanandtidy干凈和整潔，waitfor等，ontime準(zhǔn)時(shí)，參考句型：Ishould...；Imustn't...；【點(diǎn)睛】8．例文：Todayismybirthday.MynameisMike.Atmybirthdayparty,Motherusuallybuyssomeinterestingbooksformeandmyfatherusuallybuysapairofbeautifulshoesforme.Ilovemygifts.Myfriendsarecoming.Theboysandgirlsareenjoyingmybirthdayparty.They'relaughingandplayinggames.Whatanicebirthdayparty!【詳解】1.題干解讀：以Aparty為題寫一篇不少于5句話的短文，語句通順。第一人稱。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.參考詞匯：friends朋友，present禮物，buy買，happy開心的3.參考句型：Thereisaparty...9．范文：MysummerholidaySummerholidayiscoming.IamgoingtodomanythingsthatIwanttodo.Forexample,Iwilljoinasoccerclub,becauseIlikeplayingsoccer.Duringthesummerholiday,Iwanttogotomygrandma'shouse,becauseImissherverymuch.Iwillstaywithherforseveraldays.ThenIwillhelpmymotherdosomehousework.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求用第一人稱寫出自己的暑假。具體闡述自己的暑假計(jì)劃。注意文章為一般將來時(shí)并要符合句子數(shù)量要求。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：summerholiday暑假，F(xiàn)orexample比如，playsoccer踢足球，miss想念，dosomehousework做家務(wù)參考句型：Iamgoingto…；Iwill…,because…；10．范文：MydreamEveryonehasadream.Ihaveadreamtoo.Iwanttobepianist.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ishouldplaythepianoeveryday,Ishouldhavepianolessonseveryweek,Ishouldlistentosomesongs,Ishouldlintentomyteachercarefully.Whatisyourdream?【詳解】主要考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯、句型、語法等內(nèi)容進(jìn)行組句成文的能力，考查學(xué)生的綜合運(yùn)用英語能力。這篇作文考查學(xué)生一個(gè)將來時(shí)的用法，語句通順連貫。內(nèi)容表達(dá)先根據(jù)文章整體內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)確定檔次，然后在該檔次內(nèi)評出分?jǐn)?shù)。第一檔（5-6分）完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言通順，語意連貫，內(nèi)容豐富，句式有變化，字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)，基本或完全沒有語言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（3-4分）基本符合題目要求，表達(dá)基本清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)較完整，語言基本通順，語意基本連貫，句式較簡單，有少量語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。第三檔（1-2分）大部分內(nèi)容符合，但表達(dá)不清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，內(nèi)容前后連貫性不強(qiáng)。第四檔（1分以下）很少內(nèi)容符合題目要求，內(nèi)容凌亂，表達(dá)中滿是錯(cuò)誤，所寫內(nèi)容難以理解?！顣鴮懖灰?guī)范，卷面不整潔，酌情扣1分。11．范文：RoadsafetyTocrossabusyroadsafely,wemustlookatthetrafficlightsfirst.Whenthelightisred,wemustwait.Whenthelightisgreen,wecancrosstheroad.Wemustn’trunontheroad.Wemustn’tplayonthestreet,too.It’sdangerous.Tokeepsafeontheroad,wemustfollowtherules.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求用第一人稱描述如何保持馬路安全。然后再闡述在馬路上必須做和一定不能做的事情。注意文章為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)并要符合句子數(shù)量要求。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：safely安全地，dangerous危險(xiǎn)的，follow遵守參考句型：Tocrossabusyroadsafely,wemust…；.When…wecan…；Wemustn’t…12．范文：BeingagoodstudentAsastudent,itisveryimportantforustoknowwhattodoandwhatnottodo.Atschool,weshouldgotoschoolontime.Don'tbelateforclass.Inclass,weshouldlistentotheteachercarefully.Homeworkmustbedone.Don'tcopyother'shomework.Weshouldtakeanactivepartinsportsandkeephealthy.Whenwaitingforabus,wemuststandinlineandwaitforourturn.Don'tpushorjumpthequeue.Don'tlitterthingsabout.It'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironmentaroundus.【詳解】題干解讀：這是個(gè)命題作文，也是個(gè)提綱作文，根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn)，可以通過這幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)來說明做一名優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生的要求。用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)寫即可。不少于6句話。參考詞匯：ontime準(zhǔn)時(shí)，belatefor遲到，listento聽，copy抄寫參考句型：Itisveryimportantforusto...，Weshould...，Don't...，It'sourdutyto...【點(diǎn)睛】13．范文：MysummerholidayplanSummerholidayiscomingsoon.IwillgotoBeijing.Iwillgotherebyplane.Iwillstaythereforaweek.Iwillvisitmyauntanduncle.TherearemanyinterestingplacesinBeijing.Iwillvisitthemwithmyparents.Iwilltakesomephotos.IhopeIwillhaveagoodtime.【詳解】題干解讀：該題目要求以Mysummerholidayplan為題寫一篇短文，注意文章時(shí)態(tài)并要符合單詞數(shù)量要求。并要求語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：gotoBeijing去北京，staythere待在那里，visit拜訪，manyinterestingplaces很多有趣的地方，takesomephotos拍一些照片參考句型：Summerholidayis…；Iwill…；Thereare…；Ihope…；14．范文：Hello,I'mLingling.I'mgoingtoleavemyprimaryschoolsoon.Ihaveagoodfriend.SheisMissLi.Sheismymathsteacher.Sheistallandthin.Shehelpedmealotwithmaths.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇英文短文。然后再闡述在成長的道路上誰幫助你最多，他/她是做什么的，他/她的外貌特征，寫清楚為什么你認(rèn)為他/她幫助你最多。注意時(shí)態(tài)的用法并要符合句子數(shù)量要求。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考單詞：primaryschool小學(xué)，maths數(shù)學(xué)，tall高的，thin瘦的，helpsbwithsth在某事上幫助某人參考句型：I'mgoingto…；Ihave…；Sheis…；She…；15．范文：Ihavealotofgoodhabits.Igetupearlyandnevergotobedlate.Ioftenputthingsinorder.Iusuallyhelpmymumwithhousework.Whencrossingtheroad,Ialwayslookforazebracrossing.Ialsolookatthetrafficlightsandwaitforthegreenlight.ButIstillhavemanybadhabits.Ilikeeatingsweets,cakesandicecreams.Iofteneatalotofmeat.ButIdon'tlikevegetables.Idon’tliketoplaysports,either.SoI’mfatnow.Tokeephealthy,Iamgoingtoeatalotofvegetablesandfruit.I’mgoingtodoexerciseseveryday.IhopeIwillhaveahealthydietsoon.【詳解】1.題干分析：該題目要求用第一人稱寫出自己已經(jīng)養(yǎng)成的好習(xí)慣，還有哪些不足，以及打算怎樣改進(jìn)。注意文章時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)并要符合單詞數(shù)量要求，確保書寫規(guī)范。2.參考詞匯與句型：參考詞匯：habits習(xí)慣，getup起床，like喜歡，vegetable蔬菜，healthy健康的參考句型：Ihave...；Ioften...；Ilike...；Iamgoingto...16．例文：DearJim,I’mexcitedtowritethisemailtoyou.NowI’mgoingtotellyouaboutmydream.Iwanttobeasinger.Ilikesingingverymuch.IcansingChinesesongsandEnglishsongs.Iwillstudyhardtolearnsinging.EverydayIwillsingsongs.Ihopemydreamcancometrue.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目要求用第一人稱寫自己的夢想，首先要