2023屆高三英語寫作專項 讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習（夫妻倆森林迷路）課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習1——夫妻倆森林迷路題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.4續(xù)寫原文Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.5續(xù)寫段首語Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫建議第1段：但是沒有更多的直升機來了，天又黑了。1.簡再一次被扔進了一個黑暗的世界，陷入了絕望。2.那一刻，她只想坐下來好好哭泣。3.但轉(zhuǎn)念一想，她決定找個安全的地方過夜。4.雖然簡完全疲憊不堪，但她能夠在離空曠的地方不遠的地方找到一個地方。5.之后，除了天空中幾顆星星發(fā)出的微弱光芒外，天完全黑暗了。6.抬起頭，她想到了她和湯姆在一起的幸福時光，為吵架感到遺憾。7.不知不覺中，她睡著了，甚至夢見和丈夫一起在湖邊散步。9續(xù)寫建議第2段：簡醒來時已是黎明。1.慢慢地，她站起來，蹣跚地走到溪邊，在那里她喝了一些水，給自己塞了一些漿果。2.但她并沒有在那里呆太久。3.當她走回空曠的地方時，奇怪的想法和擔憂又開始涌上心頭。4.“如果直升機不回來怎么辦？”她喃喃自語，感到沮喪。5.突然，她聽到遠處傳來直升機的聲音，令她非常高興的是，它向她飛來。6.看到這一幕，簡瘋狂地標記她的黃色襯衫，直到直升機降落在空曠的地方。7.她親愛的丈夫沖了出來，知道她很安全，她只是癱倒在地上。10Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.1.Onceagain,Janewasthrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.2.Atthatmoment,allshewantedwastositdownandhaveagoodweep.3.Butonsecondthoughts,shedecidedtofindasafeplacetostayforthenight.4.ThoughJanewasabsolutelywornout,shewasabletofindaplacenotfarfromanopenarea.5.Afterthat,itwascompletelydarkexceptforthefaintlightfromafewstarsinthesky.6.Lookingup,shethoughtofthehappymomentssheandTomhadtogether,regretfulforthequarrel.7.Beforesheknewit,shefellasleepandevendreamedaboutwalkingwithherhusbandalongthelake.12范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.1.Slowly,shegotupandhobbledtothestream,whereshedranksomewaterandstuffedherselfwithsomeberries.2.Butshedidn’tstaytherelong.3.Asshewalkedbacktotheopenarea,strangethoughtsandworriesbegantocrowdinagain.4.“Whatifthehelicopterdoesn’tcomeback?”shemurmured,feelingfrustrated.5.Suddenly,sheheardthesoundofahelicopteratadistanceandtohergreatjoy,itflewtowardsher.6.Seeingthis,Janewildlyflaggedheryellowblouseuntilthehelicopterlandedontheopenarea.7.Outrushedherdearhu