高考業(yè)余應(yīng)用文寫作-勞動(dòng)主題講義

區(qū)二模的作文如下：五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)快到了，學(xué)校開展了“我?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校報(bào)英文專欄寫一篇短文，介紹該活動(dòng)的情況，要點(diǎn)包括：1.

活動(dòng)目的；2.

活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.

你的感受。注意：1.

詞數(shù)80字左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。HelpingMyParentsDoHousework

我的下水作文：HelpingMyParentsDoHouseworkMayDayis

aroundthecorner,andourschoolhasorganizedanactivitycalled“HelpingMyParentsDoHousework”,aimedat

heightening

our

awareness

of

labor.

Duringthisactivity,westudentswererequiredtodosomehousework,suchaswashingdishes,cleaningthefloorandmakingthebed.Meanwhile,

theschoolalso

encouraged

us

tohelpourparents

in

otherways.

Ithinkthisactivity

was

very

meaningful.

Itdidbenefitusalot.Notonly

didithelpus

perceive

theimportanceofhelpingourparents,

but

it

also

taught

ustobeindependentandresponsible.

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官方范文：HelpingMyParentsDoHouseworkWiththeapproachoftheMayDayInternationalLaborDay,ourschoollaunchedanactivityof“HelpingParentsDoHousework”,aimingtocultivateasenseofresponsibilityandgratitudeinstudents.Theactivityinvolvedstudents’

takingonvariouschoressuchascleaning,cooking,andlaundry,thusgivingparentssomewell-deservedrest.Throughouttheweek,studentswereencouragedtosharetheirexperiencesandinsightsinclass,promotingdiscussionandreflection.Personally,Ifindthisactivitybotheducationalandrewarding.Ithastaughtmetheimportanceofcontributingtothefamilyandhasdeepenedmyappreciationformyparents’

dailyefforts.

(99words)相關(guān)話題語料積累：1.對(duì)家務(wù)活的看法Ithinkhighschoolstudentsshoulddosomehousework.Foronething,bydoinghouseworkwelearntotakeresponsibilityathome,andinthelongerterm,insociety.Foranother,Ifindthetimespentdoinghouseworkwithmyparentsreallyfunandrewarding;wechatwitheachotherandsometimesevensingtogether.Doinghouseworkcanbeagreatbreakfrommybusyschoolwork.社會(huì)實(shí)踐內(nèi)容Avarietyofactivitieshavebeenorganized,suchasvisitingCapitalMuseum,takingafieldtriptoQufu,Shandong,homeofConfucius,plantingtreesinMangshanParkandlearningtobakeacakeinapastryshop,justtonameafew.

喜歡社會(huì)實(shí)踐的理由Thefieldtrips

offermeagoodchancetobroadenmyhorizons.AstheChinesesayinggoes:“Itisbettertotraveltenthousandmilesthantoreadtenthousandbooks.”NotonlycanIlearnfromlocalsandmyownexperiences,butalsoIcanseewithmyowneyesourbeautifulcountryandsplendidculture.Second,fieldtrips

improvemyresearchskills.

Beforewetakefieldtrips,wearealwaysaskedtopreparebysearchingonlineorinthelibraryforusefulinformation.Third,fieldtrips

helpstrengthenfriendships.Sincemanyofthefieldtripslastseveraldays,

itisagoodopportunityto

bondwithclassmatesbetteroutsidetheclassroom.

高考真題鏈接上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況；2.采摘過程；3.個(gè)人感受注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.題目已為你寫好。題目：MyWeekend首先是Pre-writing部分要完成三項(xiàng)任務(wù)：01審審題，確定體裁——記敘文；題材——人與社會(huì)。02定確定：人稱：第一和第三人稱；時(shí)態(tài)：過去式（采摘過程）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（農(nóng)場(chǎng)的情況和個(gè)人感受）然后在While-writing部分完成以下內(nèi)容：03列1.農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況（名稱和地理位置等）；2.采摘過程（選擇最感興趣的內(nèi)容進(jìn)

行描述）；3.個(gè)人感受（參與此次活動(dòng)的感受和

意義）。04連使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞和過渡句完成連詞成句，連句成文。最后在Post-writing部分實(shí)現(xiàn)：05美美化文章，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木涫胶驮~匯為文章潤色和優(yōu)化。06改改寫語法錯(cuò)誤，實(shí)現(xiàn)語言的準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。07抄用工整的字體把草稿謄寫在卷面上。范文展示MyWeekendInordertogivethestudentsatasteoffarmlife,ourschoolorganizedafruit-pickingactivityonafarmlastweekend.Wesangandlaughedallthewaytothefarm.Themomentwereachedthere,weweregreetedwiththetwitteringofbirdsandthefragranceofflowers.Bathedinwarmsunshine,westartedpickingfruits.Althoughourclothesweresoakedwithsweat,

wehadagreattime!Seeingourfruitsoflaborpackedandloadedontothetruck,wefeltagreatsenseofaccomplishment.Thisfruit-pickingexperienceimpressesonustheimportanceoflaborandthesaying“Nopains,nogains”.

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MyWeekendLastweekend,myclasswenttoXishanFarmtopickfruitsandexperiencethelaborlife.Thefarmislocatedinanaturereserve.Whenwereachedthere,weweredividedintodifferentteamsandhadapickingcontest.Accordingtotherule,thegrouptopickthemostfruitswiththebestqualitywillwin.Westartedthecontestwithexcitement.Sincethebestfruitswerealwayshighonthetree,weneededcooperationthroughoutthecontest.Thepickinglastedal