高中英語作文-建議信

建議信(1)-----闡釋緣由；提出建議類請你代表你班同學(xué)給校長寫一封信，反映一下你校食堂的幾點問題，以引起學(xué)校重視，并針對問題提出兩條合理建議。問題包括：1.菜價昂貴，菜市單一；2.排隊時間長，奢侈午休時間；3.味道不佳，奢侈現(xiàn)象嚴峻。留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當(dāng)增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:食堂canteenDearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua作文范文：DearPrincipal,Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasI’mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,it’sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!需留意的詞匯、表達：deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.廚師)cooker(n.炊具)price價格lower/bringdowntheprice降低價格atalower/reasonableprice以較低的價格varietiesofdishes種類多樣的菜品Foronething,…….Foranother,……makesb(not)dosthwait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtimeThekindsoffoodarefew.表達食堂出現(xiàn)的問題：Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyourneeds.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood./nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.ThefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwastedIt’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表達提出的建議：Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit’shightimeforustotakemeasuresTosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建議模板：Dear….,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….(引出話題).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.建議句型積累：Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.It’snecessaryforsbtodosthItwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….Itcontributes/helpsalotif………Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…It’ssuggested/advised/recommendedthat……You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosthIt’sbettertodosthMeasuresaresupposedtobetakentodosthWearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosthIt’shightimethatsbdidsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth建議信(2)-----闡釋緣由；提出建議類假定你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫SadMother的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請你依據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點和要求，用英語給這位家長回復(fù)。I’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo寫作要點：1.表明白解她的問題；2.幫她分析孩子撒謊的緣由；3.提出至少兩條建議要求：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。2.短文詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）。3.內(nèi)容充溢，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。4.書寫需清楚、工整。Hi，SadMother，Ihavelearnedthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________作文范文：Hi,SadMother,Ihavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,Ithinkthereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shehasnochoicebuttolie.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterhaveaheart-to–hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldallowhertomakesomeminor(微小的)mistakes.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.須要留意積累的詞匯、短語、和句子：主格賓格形容性物主代詞名詞性物主代詞反身代詞第一人稱Imemyminemyselfweusouroursourselves其次人稱youyouyouryoursyourselfyouyouyouryoursyourselves第三人稱hehimhishishimselfsheherherhersherselfitititsitsitselftheythemtheirtheirsthemselvesdaughter女兒expectation期望beworried/concernedabout擔(dān)憂calmdown冷靜下來ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持聯(lián)系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面對某人要求嚴格heart-to-heart開誠布公的idea留意想法test測試text文本cheat欺瞞wantsbtodosth想讓某人做某事1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.2.Sheisn’tawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.3.Beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.Andit’syouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.6.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.9.Toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.11.Confrontedwith(面對)theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.12.AsfarasI’mconcerned,it’sbettertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.Moreover,it’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改錯：1.Therearesomeadvice.2.Don’tsad.3.Youshouldgivehermoreencourage.4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.7.Pleasenottobesoworried.8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheisn’tdaretotellyouthetruth.9.Becausesheafraidparents.10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.14.I’mveryunderstandyourcondition.15.Shemaydoesn’twantyoutobeangry.建議信(3)為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報開拓了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日簡單發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點如下：1．表示理解并賜予勸慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。留意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern.脾氣，心情HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.Yours,JamieHiWorried,I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonbecomecalmerandbetter.Yours,JamieHighlights:First,youaresupposedtofigureoutwhatmakesyouupset,andthenkeepawayfromit.What’smore,youaresupposedtotakeanactivepartinoutdooractivitiestorelax.Tosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible,youcanopenyourhearttoagoodfriend,talkingaboutyourtrouble.Carriedbytwo,burdensarelighter.It’shightimethatyoushouldrelieveyourpressure.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentocontrolyourtemper.Thereisnodenyingthateveryonewilllosehistemperwhensomethingunexpectedhappens.Insteadofbeingangry,whatisimportantforyouistolearntocontrolyourtemperfromnowon.It’scommonforteenagerslikeyoutoloseyourtemper,whichofcoursewillhaveabadeffectonyournormalstudyandlife.建議信(4)高二下期已經(jīng)過去半學(xué)期，高三已經(jīng)在向同學(xué)們招手。隨著學(xué)習(xí)和心理壓力日益加大，一些同學(xué)的正常生活受到影響，如睡眠不好，身體也起先亮起了紅燈。請你依據(jù)以下要點，給學(xué)校的英語刊物寫一篇稿子，向同學(xué)們提出建議，并簡述理由或舉例說明:1、勞逸結(jié)合；2、健康飲食；

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4、寫成一篇完整的短文，不要逐條列舉。作文范文：WiththeapproachofSenior3,studentsareunderincreasinglygreatpressure,whichhasaffectedsomestudents’life,preventingthemsleepingwellandcausingproblemswiththeirhealth.Inordertoimprovethecondition,I’dliketooffersomeadvice.First,Combineworkwithrest.KeepinmindthatallworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Second,itisimportanttokeepahealthyandbalanceddiet.Stayingawayfromjunkfoodandeatinghealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfishwillbenefityou.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeregularexercise,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofpressure.Lastbutnotleast,goodhealthmeansbeingbothphysicallyandmentallyhealthy.Keepinganoptimisticstateofmindwillcontributetoagoodphysicalstate.Isincerelyhopethatthesuggestionsabovewillbeofgreathelptoyou.句型與短語積累：1.Myadviceisasfollows.2.Thefollowingismyadvice.3.Finally,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.4.Thenitalsohelpstotakeproperexercise.Notonlycanitstrengthenyourhealth,butalsoitcanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.5.Gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasitisaneffectivewaytokeephealthy.6.Second,youmayaswelltakesomeexercise,whichisagoodwaytokeephealthy.7.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeexercise.Notonlycanithelpstudentskeephealthy,butalsoitisagoodwaytoreducepressure.8.Firstofall,Ithinkitisagoodideatocombinestudyandagoodrest,whichcanhelpuskeepenergeticandactive.9.Second,youaresupposedtoeathealthyfoodasitwillofferstudentsenoughenergy.Inaddition,youmusteathealthyfoodsoastokeepfit,whichisofgreatimportancetoyourstudy.Asanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”.Gonearethedayswhenwewereatsenior2andthesenior3issayinghello