中考英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo)課

Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)課2021/5/91basicstructure(基本結(jié)構(gòu)的安排)2021/5/92DearMr.Know，

I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用說(shuō))answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.

Let’sgoforit!

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）2021/5/93basicrules(寫(xiě)作考試規(guī)則)search（審）list（列）add(加:開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾)connect(連)beautifY(美：諺語(yǔ)/例子)2021/5/94健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫(xiě)一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。審(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork2021/5/95

如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用

簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)。2021/5/96

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)2021/5/97Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔、漂亮。2021/5/98Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)2021/5/99Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）方法一:善用高級(jí)詞匯2021/5/910Whichisbetter?

他們很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.2021/5/911

我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.2021/5/912方法二:活用多種句型Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）2021/5/913

她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…2021/5/914方法三:妙用關(guān)聯(lián)詞Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）2021/5/9151.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示選擇:or,either…or3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對(duì)比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort關(guān)聯(lián)詞(connectionwords)2021/5/916Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast2021/5/917Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.連(connect)美(beautify)2021/5/918Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)2021/5/919Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（諺語(yǔ)）/saying2021/5/920集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。2021/5/921加入英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部是學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。2021/5/922Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。早起的鳥(niǎo)兒有蟲(chóng)吃。失敗是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

2021/5/923Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水難收。一天一蘋(píng)果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。條條大路通羅馬。活到老，學(xué)到老。2021/5/924方法四:妙用諺語(yǔ)和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“寫(xiě)”的技巧）2021/5/925青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子2021/5/926加例子在家里，我經(jīng)常幫助父母親干家務(wù)活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.2021/5/927Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.

Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!結(jié)尾：提出倡議或號(hào)召2021/5/928

First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.

WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,

letalone(更不用說(shuō))answerthequestions

aboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.

Let’sgoforit!1234652021/5/929DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.Yourturntogoforit!（試填一填）2021/5/930DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYourturntogoforit!（check）1232021/5/931Let’spractise.2021/5/932Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so2021/5/933滿(mǎn)分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第一檔：（17~20分）完全符合題目要求，觀(guān)點(diǎn)正確,要點(diǎn)齊全，立意高。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，具有邏輯性。卷面書(shū)寫(xiě)干凈，整潔，無(wú)涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密合適，書(shū)寫(xiě)美觀(guān)。標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫(xiě)正確。最好能有一兩個(gè)亮點(diǎn)句。（主從，定從，表從，諺語(yǔ)）2021/5/934

規(guī)范三寫(xiě)：大小寫(xiě),拼寫(xiě),書(shū)寫(xiě)2021/5/9352021/5/9362021/5/937

隨著人口的增多，人類(lèi)不僅需要越來(lái)越多的地方居住，而且需要越來(lái)越多的食物。人類(lèi)把森林變成了耕地；新的城市和道路占據(jù)了動(dòng)物的棲息地；許多動(dòng)物遭到獵殺······所有這些都導(dǎo)致了越來(lái)越多的動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕。然而動(dòng)物是我們?nèi)祟?lèi)的朋友，我們有責(zé)任去保護(hù)他們，而不是傷害或獵殺它們。請(qǐng)根據(jù)上述內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文。

要求：

1.語(yǔ)言規(guī)范、意思連貫、表達(dá)完整；

2.提示的內(nèi)容要全部用上。It’syourturn!(練練筆)2021/5/938Let’sHelpOurFriends（滿(mǎn)分作文賞析）

Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimals’habitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Don’tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No”.Soit’sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Don’tputitoff！Let’stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!2021/5/939Thankyou!Goodbye!Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+

Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/end2021/5/940HOMEWORK:書(shū)面表達(dá)（共20分）根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語(yǔ)以及表格所提供的信息，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)60一80。

2．所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）

3．發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。（請(qǐng)不要抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上）假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開(kāi)營(yíng)式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。發(fā)言稿（介紹）2021/5/941name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology…InterestFreeTimeActivitiesFutureJobHopedrawinggocamping,drawpicturesofplants,enjoythesingingofbridsinnature.biologist,growupgoodfriends,doone'sbest,maketheearth…Dearfriends,I'mverygladtointroducemyselftoyou.

That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.

2021/5/942Dearfriends,I’mverygladtointroduce（介紹）myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.I’mfifteenyearsold.IliveinBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.I’minterestedindrawing.Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping（野營(yíng)）,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist（生物學(xué)家）whenIgrowup.Ifeelluckytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttomakeourearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.2021/5/943Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.ImakealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.

Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongertobe/Iwillbehappinessplayinggrow2021/5/944

TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybestto

doeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!

It’syourturn!（滿(mǎn)分作文賞析）2021/5/945Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼寫(xiě)）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthd