讀后續(xù)寫親情類 爸爸的生日 講義 高考英語專題復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。ItwasacoldyetsunnysaturdaymorninginFebruary.Dad’sNewYear’sresolutionhadbeentogetfit.Mumpushedhimoutofbedandtoldhimtogojoggingbytheriver.Later,afteranicelie-in,shewentdownstairsinherdressinggownandfoundthekidswatchingTV.SheturneditoffandsaidshewasgoingtodosomethingreallyspecialforDad’sbirthday.Iftheyoverheardanything,justpromisedtokeepitsecret.

二月的一個寒冷但陽光明媚的星期六上午。父親的新年決心是要健身。媽媽把他推下床，告訴他去河邊慢跑。后來，在睡了個好覺后，她穿著晨衣下樓，發(fā)現(xiàn)孩子們在看電視。她關(guān)掉了它，說她要為爸爸的生日做些特別的事。如果他們無意中聽到什么，就答應(yīng)保守秘密。

JennylookedatMumwithapuzzledexpressiononherforeheadandpromisedtheywouldn’tsayanythingwhateverhappened.ButJennyremindedDad’sbirthdaywasinJuneanditmightbealittletooearlytogetallsteamedupaboutit.Silentforamoment,Mumsaidshewasnotgettingeverythingreadybutjustwantedtospareenoughtimeforpreparationasthisyearit’sabiggerdealthanusual.Dadwasgoingtobe50.“50!Gosh,that’shalfacentury,”splutteredGerry.“Iknewhewasold,butIdidn’trealizehewasancient!”

珍妮看著媽媽，額頭上帶著困惑的表情，答應(yīng)他們不管發(fā)生什么事都不會說。但詹妮提醒說，爸爸的生日是在六月，現(xiàn)在要對這件事大做準(zhǔn)備可能還為時過早。沉默了一會兒，媽媽說她并沒有把一切都準(zhǔn)備好，只是想抽出足夠的時間來準(zhǔn)備，因?yàn)榻衲瓯韧旮匾?。爸爸?0歲了。

“50！天哪，那是半個世紀(jì)，”格里說?！拔抑浪狭?，但我不知道他這么老了！”

Indeed,thatwaswhyMumstartedplanningaspecialpartyforhim.Mumtalkedwithgrandmaabouttheplanbecauseherhousewastheonlyoneinthefamilythatisspaciousenoughforallfriendsandrelatives.Grandmaquiteagreedandalsostartedpreparing.

事實(shí)上，這就是為什么媽媽開始為他策劃一個特別的派對。媽媽和奶奶討論了這個計劃，因?yàn)樗姆孔邮羌依镂ㄒ灰粋€能容納所有親朋好友的寬敞房子。奶奶非常同意，也開始準(zhǔn)備。

“ButyouknowhowDadfeelsguiltytobotherothers.You’vegottoadmit,”remindedJenny.Thinkingoverthespecialoccasion,Mumwascontinuingwithhersecretwhenoneevening,Dadwassittingatthedinnertableandhesuddenlyslappedhisforehead,“IjustrealizedthatIamgoingtobe50inJune.Let’sjustquietlyforgetaboutit.Iwanttomourn(哀悼)thepassingofmyyouthinprivate.”

珍妮提醒道：“但你知道爸爸不好意思打擾他人。你必須承認(rèn)?！薄Ｏ氲竭@個特殊的時刻，媽媽在繼續(xù)她的秘密。一天晚上，爸爸坐在餐桌旁，突然拍了拍他的額頭，“我剛意識到我6月就要50歲了。讓我們安靜地忘掉它。我想私下哀悼我青春的逝去?！?/p>

“Oh,comeonDad,don’tbesuchaspoil-sport!”beggedthekids,hopingtogivemumahand.Realizingnomorechancetohidethesecret,Mumcarefullywordedherthoughtandsharedherplanofhavingalittlepartyatgrandma’shouse.Dadwasstunned(震驚的)tonoreply.

“噢，得了吧，爸爸，別這么掃興！”孩子們乞求著，站在媽媽一邊。媽媽意識到再也沒有機(jī)會隱藏這個秘密了，她仔細(xì)地表達(dá)了自己的想法，并分享了在奶奶家開一個小派對的計劃。爸爸驚呆了，沒有回復(fù)。

注意1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

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Grandmasighed:“l(fā)etthedonkeygoorcouldwemakethepartysimplerbutstillunique?”Mum’seyeslitupinstantly,settingabouthersecretplanagain,nolongeronhowgrand,butthroughcollectivededicationtoshowtheirheart,tocreateanexclusivenichefordad.Jennywasalsoupliftedandeventhoughtittoolatetoshowtheirwholeloveassomanywonderfulmomentsinvolved:theappreciationsfordad’scontributionoveryears,thecareforthishalfacenturyoldmanandsoon.Endlesslovetosay,theyonlyplungedthemselvesintoaction.

媽媽沮喪地給奶奶打了個電話。奶奶嘆氣道：“隨這個倔驢去吧，或者我們能讓聚會更簡單但仍然極致？”媽媽的眼睛立刻亮了起來，再次開始了她的秘密計劃，這次不再是如何宏大，而是通過集體奉獻(xiàn)來展現(xiàn)她們的用心，為爸爸創(chuàng)造一個專屬的小空間。珍妮也感到振奮，甚至認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在要表達(dá)他們的全部愛已經(jīng)太晚了，因?yàn)橛羞@么多美好的時刻要表達(dá)，如感謝父親多年來的貢獻(xiàn)，關(guān)心這位半個世紀(jì)的老人等等。無窮無盡的愛要去表達(dá)，他們只能投入行動。

Paragraph2:TheygoteverythingreadyasplannedwhenJunefinallycame.

Followingthechildren,likewalkingonstarlitredcarpet,dadenteredthehall,definitelybeingthebrighteststarinthesky.Wall-to-wallphotos,whichpicturedhiseverymarvelousmoment,alongthelifeway,happyorsad,totallydefeatedhim,wethiseyes,andtouchedhisheart.Dadfondledtheexquisitedecoration;Leapingtotheeyeswasdelicacy,butengravingonhisheartwasthelovefromfamily.Thismoment,allhispasthardworkandeffortseemedsorewarding