八年級寫作輔導課

如何寫好英語作文？主講人甄玉珍臺山市甄玉珍名教師工作室2018.9.26審好題，形成思路，形成寫作框架寫作演示廳假如你們學校將要舉辦一場演講比賽，請你以MyDream為題寫一篇演講稿。要求：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校；2．80詞左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。題型分析：本篇寫作是一篇演講稿。要求同學們談論自己的夢想。寫

作時應使用第一人稱，主要時態(tài)為一般將來時。行文見路：本文可分三個層次。首先可開門見山寫出自己的夢想是什

么，然后敘述自己為什么有這樣的夢想以及如何實現(xiàn)夢想。高分點撥：充分利用本話題所學的句型，如：I’mgoingtobe…whenIgrowup./Mydreamisto…／Iwanttobe…

等；然后用IthinkI’mgoingto／Iwill…結束全文；行

文中應注意運用恰當?shù)年P聯(lián)詞語，如:first,then…等。另

外，要注意演講稿的格式，開頭有稱謂語Hello／Hi，everyone,最后一般用That’sall！Thanks．作為結束

語。審題：文體、時態(tài)人稱、要點行文：開頭（引出話題）主題要點結尾（總結歸納與情感升華）措辭：可用語言（尤其是可畫龍點睛的高級表達方式）層次與流暢度注意事項思維導圖的“思”與“導”有利于謀篇布局，形成行文思路:WritingtipsMyDreamEndingBeginningBodyWhy?Whatisyourdream?I’mgoingto/wanttobe…whenIgrowup.Mydreamistobe…Howtomakeitcometrue?Ilike…Ithink…Because…That’sall!Thanks!

(注意演講稿的格式，開頭稱謂和結束語)studyhardreadmorebooks…….定稿MydreamistoaEnglishteacher.Ithinkthisworkveryinteresting.Iwillveryhappy.Ilikeverymuch.BecausebeateachercanhelpstudentslearningEnglish.Iwanttoreadsomeaboutanimal’sbooks.Ioftenwithmyfriendgototheplaygroundpalybasketball.It’sMydream.英語的五個基本句型：句型1：Subject(主語)＋Verb(謂語)1)LiMingworksveryhard.2)Theaccidenthappenedyesterdayafternoon.3)

Springiscoming.4)Welivedinthecitytenyearsago.句型2：Subject(主語)＋Link.V(系動詞)＋Predicate(表語)1)Thiskindoffoodtastesdelicious.

2)Helookedworriedjustnow.3)Springcomes.Itisgettingwarmerandwarmer.英語的基本句型：句型3：Subject(主語)＋Verb(謂語)＋Object(賓語)Hetookhisbagandleft.

2)LiLeialwayshelpsmewhenIhavedifficulties.3)SheplanstotravelinthecomingMayDay.4)Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddonext.(從句)句型4：Subject(主語)＋Verb(謂語)＋Indirectobject(間接賓語)＋

Directobject(直接賓語)Herfatherboughtheradictionaryasabirthdaypresent.

2)

Theoldmanalwaystellsthechildrenstoriesabouttheheroes

intheLongMarch.3)

Herfatherboughtadictionaryforherasabirthdaypresent.英語的基本句型：句型5：Subject(主語)＋Verb(動詞)＋Object(賓語)＋

Complement(補語)1)Youshouldkeeptheroomcleanandtidy.2)Wemadehimourmonitor.3)Hisfathertoldhimnottoplayinthestreet4)MyfatherlikestowatchtheboysplayingbasketballWritingtipsMyDreamEndingBeginningBodyWhy?Whatisyourdream?I’mgoingto/wanttobe…whenIgrowup.Mydreamistobe…Howtomakeitcometrue?Ilike…Ithink…Because…That’sall!Thanks!

(注意演講稿的格式，開頭稱謂和結束語)studyhardreadmorebooks…….Writing:MyDreamBeginningWhatisyourdream?I’mgoingtobe…whenIgrowup.Mydreamistobe…Hello!Everyone!Hello!Mydearteachersandclassmates!Everyonehasadream.Weallhaveadream.Iwantto/amgoingtobeateacherwhenIgrowup.Mydreamistobeateacher.Writing:MyDreamWhydoIwanttobeateacher?BecauseIthinkbeingateacherisagreatjob.Icanteachmany

students,andtheycanlearnalotfromme.

Iliketostaywithchildren,too.Itmakesmehappy.BodyWhy?Ilike…Ithink…Because…Writing:MyDreamNowI’mamiddleschoolstudent.Imuststudyveryhard.AndIhavetoreadmorebookssothatIcanknowmorethings.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.BodyHowtomakeitcometrue?studyhardreadmorebooks……IamsurethatIcanbeagreatteacherinthefuture.Writing:MyDreamHello!Mydearteachersandclassmates.Everyonehasadream.IwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.WhydoIwanttobeateacher?BecauseIthinkbeingateacherisagreatjob.Icanteachmanystudentsandtheycanlearnalotfromme.Iliketostaywithchildren,too.Itmakesmehappy.Now,I’mamiddleschoolstudent.Imuststudyveryhard.ThenIhavetoreadmorebookssothatIcanknowmorethings.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.IamsurethatIcanbeagreatteacherinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?That’sall!Thankyouforlistening!一篇好的英語作文應該是怎樣的？評價標準：（適用于寫作技能形成階段）定稿Beginning開門見山，引出話題（意簡言賅）★★★★★Body切合題意，要點齊全★★★★★語言準確★★★★★結構得體、流暢（層次分明，連接語使用得體）★★★★★適當發(fā)揮★★★★★Ending總結歸納，情感升華（意簡言賅）★★★★★定稿The

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