第三組議論文

第三組：議論文(一)Janice,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschool.IreallywantsharewithyousomeproblemsI’vebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.

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Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktothem?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace

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(一)這是一封求助信，表達了作者的困擾。作者交了三位新朋友，經常一起閑逛和K歌，實際上作者并不想出去，但又擔憂失去這份友誼，因此她想尋求一些建議。1.在want后加to

因want后用不定式作賓語。2.tell→told

由后面的時間狀語lasttime可知應用一般過去時。3.friend→friends

由前面的three可知要用復數。4.they→we前后都是第一人稱復數，應將they改為we，前后人稱才一致。5.sing→singing

由固定結構spend…(in)doingsth意為“花費……做某事”可知。6.many→much

根據句意“它真的花費了我很多錢”，故用much指代錢(不可數)。7.so→but

此處顯然存在轉折關系，故用并列連詞but。8.How→What

因作do的賓語，故要用what。9.are→were

此處是虛擬語氣。虛擬條件句中的系動詞是be(對現在事實的虛擬)時，要用were。10.去掉help后的with

因動詞help是及物動詞，可直接帶賓語，不需加介詞with。注意：helpsb.withsth.意為“幫助某人做某事”。wastingadj.

浪費的hangout閑逛karaokebar卡拉OK房sharewithsbsth與某人分享某事/物seethisas…把這看作……(二)

IhavelearnedthatyoueagertolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.Herearesomelearningresourcestosharetoyou.Newspapersaresuitableforthemtostudythelanguage.Theycontaincorrectwordsandgrammar,thatisofgreatbenefittoyourare

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readingandwriting.Inaddition,readingmagazinesisalsoagreatlychoice.ArticlesinmagazinesprovidesmoreinformationaboutChineseculture,enablingyoutounderstandthiscountryfarther.Besides,youcanlistentoChinesesongsaswellaschatwithnativespeakers.

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Ihopemyadvicescanhelp.Itisoutofthequestionthatyou’llknowChineseculturebetter,foryouaresosmartorhardworking.

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(二)本文是對外國友人學習中國文化的途徑給予一些建議。1.eager前面加are因eager是形容詞，不能充當謂語，因此eager前加be。2.share后的to→with因sharesthwithsb為固定搭配，意為“與某人分享某事/物”。3.them→you人稱與上下文的you保持一致。4.that→which引導非限制性定語從句并在從句中作主語，先行詞指物，用which。5.greatly→great在名詞前作定語用形容詞。6.provides→provide因為主語articles是復數形式，一般現在時，謂語動詞用原形。7.farther→further指具體的“更遠”可用farther或者further；但此處指抽象的“更深入的，更進一步”，通常用further。8.advices→advice因advice是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。9.去掉question前的the因outofquestion為固定搭配，意為“毫無疑問”。注意：outofthequestion意為“不可能的”。10.or→and因smart和hardworking是并列關系，應用and，而or表選擇關系。beeagertodosth渴望做某事beofgreatbenefittosb=beverybeneficialtosb對某人很有益inaddition此外providesthforsb=providesbwithsth給某人提供某物enablesbtodosth使某人能夠做某事outofquestion沒問題，毫無疑問outofthequestion不可能的，不允許的(三)SeaWorldisoneofthemostfamousparkintheworld.Thousandsofpeoplevisiteachyear.Mostofthemgotoseethedolphinsandwhalestoperformtricks,itissomethingtheycouldneverseeinthewild.

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SeaWorldhasbeenunderalotofpressurelate.Thousandsofpeoplehavebeenagainstthepark.Thesepeoplesaythatdolphinsandwhalesshouldnotbeforcetoliveinsuchsmallspace.

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(三)本文介紹了海洋世界公園面臨的困境，人們希望不要強迫海豚和鯨進行商業(yè)表演了。1.park→parks

在oneof后的可數名詞應當用復數形式。2.visit后面添加it

因visit是及物動詞，其后需增加替代SeaWorld的it作賓語。3.刪除perform前的to

由seesb.dosth.可知，用省略to的不定式作賓補。4.it→which或it前添加and

因兩個單句之間需要連詞，可以it前加and構成并列句，也可改it為which，引導非限制性定語從句，先行詞為前句中的thedophinsandwhaleperormtricks。5.late→lately

句中表示“最近”，故將late改為lately。比較兩個副詞：late遲，晚；lately最近。6.force→forced

用過去分詞構成被動語態(tài)。7.meaning→meaningless

由句意可知，是不應被迫表演“無意義的”把戲，故在meaning后加表示否定的后綴less。8.agreed→agree

由starttodo(開始做某事)可知，to后跟動詞原形。9.However→Therefore

前后兩個句子之間是因果關系而不是轉折關系。10.change前的the→a

短語makeachange表示“做出改變”。trickn.

詭計；花招；把戲pressuren.

壓力；壓迫agreewith同意protestern.

抗議者；提出異議者(四)I’vereceivedyouremailandknowyouaretopayfour-dayvisittoChina.I’mgladtotravelwithyouasyourguide.WecanstayedinBeijingfortwodayswhileinanotherdestinationforjustoneday.

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aOnthefirstday,wewillvisitsomeplacesofinterestsinBeijing,explorethecultureofthiscity.Thenextday,weweregoingtomakeatouroftheGreatWall.Inthethirdday,we’lltakethehigh-speedrailtoShanghai.

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Hainanisourlastdestination,whichwecanspendhourssunbathingonthebeach.Final,we’llgetpartedandreturntohomeseparately.Areyousatisfyingwiththesearrangements?

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(四)這是給外國朋友的一封回信，作者在信中談到將帶對方游覽中國的幾個城市的安排。1.在four-day前加a

由詞組payavisitto可知，four-day只是visit的定語，a不能少，故增加a。2.stayed→stay

情態(tài)動詞后用動詞原形,所以將stayed改為stay。3.interests→interest

因placeofinterest(名勝古跡)是固定詞組，其復數形式是placesofinterest，故把interests改成interest。4.explore→exploring

因本句已有謂語動詞willvisit，所以explore應為非謂語動詞；又因we與explore是主動關系，故用現在分詞形式作伴隨狀語。5.were→are

因這是計劃將來的事情，應為aregoingtodosth。6.In→On“第三天”是具體的某一天,用介詞On。7.which→where

這是一個定語從句，該從句中不缺主語和賓語，因此不用關系代詞，要用關系副詞。又因先行詞是表示地點的destination，故改用關系副詞where。9.Final→Finally

修飾整個句子要用副詞形式。9.去掉home前的to

因習慣上說returnhome，其中home作副詞，故去掉to。10.satisfying→satisfied

因besatisfiedwith(對……滿意)是固定搭配。destinationn.

目的地explorev.

探測；探險railn.

欄桿；扶手；鐵軌sunbathe

v.

沐日光浴arrangementn.

布置；安排；約定(五)DearMary,Iamsorrytohearthatyouaredeeplydepressedrecentlyduetofailintheinterviewofthebroadcaststationinyourschool.Icanunderstandthatyouarefeelingnow.Itisratherdisappointedtofailinanimportantfailinghowdisappointinginterview,whichyoudevotedalongtimetoit.Butonefailuredoesn'tmeantthatyouarenotexcellent.Actual,youareanintelligentgirl.Youaresupposedtohaveapositiveattitudeatthefailure,takingadvantageofthischancetolearnaboutsomeinterviewskill.meanActuallyto/towardsskillsBesides,you'dbetterreflectonyourmistakeaftertheinterviewsothatyouwillbemuchexperiencedthanbefore.Ihopeyouwillhappyagain.Yours,LiHuamorebe(五)為了參加學校廣播站的面試，Mary做了長時間的準備，但面試失敗，她現在心情沮喪。李華給Mary回復郵件安慰和鼓勵她，并提出一些建議。1.fail→failing因dueto中to為介詞，后接動名詞。2.understand后的that→how引導賓語從句，且在從句中作feel的表語，要用how。3.disappointed→disappointing表示“令人失望的”，故用-ing形式的形容詞。4.把to后的it去掉因which引導非限制性定語從句，并在從句中作to的賓語，指代先行詞animportantinterview，it是多余的，故應刪除。5.meant→mean在助動詞(doesn’t)后應接動詞原形。6.Actual→Actually修飾整個句子，應用副詞。7.at→to/towards因haveapositiveattitudeto/towards(對……持積極態(tài)度)是固定搭配。8.skill→skills前有some修飾，故用復數形式。9.much→more由thanbefore可知用比較級。10.在happy前加be情態(tài)動詞后要用動詞原形，而happy是形容詞，故加be。intelligentadj.聰明的，有智慧的bedeeplydepressed極度沮喪dueto因為；由于failintheinterview面試失敗devote...to把……投入到；致力于……besupposedtodo應該；理應haveapositiveattitude抱著積極的態(tài)度takeadvantageofthischance利用這個機會learnaboutinterviewskills了解面試技巧reflectonyourmistake反思你的錯誤(六)Doyoureadreviewsafteryouseeamovie?Iusetodothat,butIusuallyregretted.IreadsuchmuchaboutamovieinadvancethatIoftenendedupnotgotoseeitatall.

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Thewriterspointouteverythingthat’swrongwiththefilm,butseldommentionsanythinggoodaboutit.Theyalsotellmanythingandeventheendingofthemovie.LatelyIhavechangedwayIchoosemoviestowatch.the

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Ireadreviewsafterwards.What’simportancetomeisthatIdon’twatchthetalkshowsinthatpeoplediscussmovies.Idon’taskothershowtheylikeofit.Now,Ienjoyyourselfevenmore.

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(六)本文作者就“看電影評論的方式”談了自己的觀點。1.use→used由固定短語usedtodo意為“過去常常”可知。2.such→so表示“如此多/少”要用somany/much/little/few，根據后面的much可知要把such改為so。3.go→going由固定短語endupdoing意為“以……結束”可知。4.mentions→mention主語是復數名詞writers，故不用第三人稱單數。

5.thing→things前有many修飾，故用名詞的復數形式。6.在way前加the此處表特指，故要用定冠詞。7.importance→important作表語要用形容詞。8.people前的that→which如果先行詞指物，那么介詞后面的關系代詞只能用which，不能用that。9.去掉like后的of因like是及物動詞。10.yourself→myself由句子的主語I可知，是指我“享受自己”。reviewn.

評論regretvi.

后悔afterwardsadv.

事后pointout指出talkshow訪談節(jié)目evenmore更多地(七)Lastweek,studentsinourclasshelddebateonwhetherweshouldshoponline.Moststudentsareinfavorforit,thinkthatshoppingonlinecanhelppeoplesavetime.

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Moreimportant,theInternetisopenalldaylong,soitisofgreatconvenientforthosewhoarebusyinthedaytime.However,specialattentionmustbepaytothesafetyofonlineshopping.Peopleneedtomakesureofthattheygetthattheyhaveorderedbeforepayingforthebill.

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(七)本文論述了網絡購物的優(yōu)點和缺點。1.在debate前加a

因debate是可數名詞，故要加不定冠詞。2.for→of

由固定短語infavorof意為“贊同”可知。3.think→thinking

分析句子成分可知此處think作非謂語，且與邏輯主語students存在主動關系，故用現在分詞作伴隨狀語。4.allow→allows

本句主語是shoppingonline，謂語動詞要用第三人稱單數。5.us→them

由前面的people可知要用them。6.important→importantly

作狀語要用副詞形式。7.convenient→convenience

因beofgreat+抽象名詞=bevery+形容詞。8.pay→paid

此處是被動，故要用過去分詞。9.去掉makesure后的of

因makesurethat+從句是固定句型，此處of顯然是多余的。10.get后的that→what

引導賓語從句，同時在從句中作謂語動詞haveordered的賓語，要用what。debaten.

辯論browsevt.

瀏覽itemn.

物品comparevt.

對比goodsn.

商品ordervt.

訂購；訂(貨)savetime節(jié)省時間inashorttime在很短時間內inthedaytime在白天paythebill買單(八)Comparedwithcars,bicycleshavemuchadvantages.Firstly,theyarenotasexpensiveascarsandalmos