譯林英語必修3Unit3Narration-Writing-課堂課件(21張)

NarrationWriting學習目標1.了解寫作的重要性2.掌握記敘文寫作的要點3.實戰(zhàn)演練

高分英語的特性一、條理性：段落完整，層次分明。二、流暢性：文章層次清晰，行文連貫。常用關聯(lián)詞。三、間接性：語言簡潔，不重復，不啰嗦。四、多樣性：詞語豐富，句式結構多變。小詞語原則，狀語提前原則，短語優(yōu)先原則，并列句/特殊句式原則，長短句交替原則和整潔分段原則。五、準確性：語法正確，時態(tài)、語態(tài)、用詞和句法等。避免拼寫錯誤。六：思想性：文章立意要高。1.外在美觀2.結構明了3.用詞高級4.句式精彩5.過渡自然Whatisnarration?

Narrationisaboutaseriesofeventsrelatedtopersonalexperience.Elementsofnarrationwhatwhenwherewhowhyhow行文結構1.Thebeginning:開門見山地交代時間、地點、人物等

a.Theotherday,whenIwasonmywaytoschool,Imet...b.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhenmymotherwaswaitingformeintherain.

2.Thebody:

詳述故事經(jīng)過，包括起因、發(fā)展、高潮、結果等

a.Theybothlookedworried,andthenIwenttohelpthem.b.Atthatmoment,sheappearedatthedoor...3.Theending:

總結全文，發(fā)表感想。a.Hearingthis,allofusweremovedtotears.b.IwasverygladthatIhadhelpedtheminEnglish.c.Ittaughtmewhatrealloveis.記敘文的寫作要點：1.時態(tài)：過去時態(tài)，動詞富于變化。2.人稱：第一人稱：敘述者親眼所見的經(jīng)歷。第三人稱：不受“我”活動范圍以類的人或事物的限制3.順序：時間順序（順序和倒敘）4.敘述的過度：關聯(lián)詞5.敘述與對話：記敘文的基本要領1.頭緒分明，脈絡清楚：對六要素構思2.突出中心，詳略得當：分清主次，定好詳略3.用活語言，準確生動：Whatimpressedmemostisthat…令我印象最深刻的是Amongvariouskindsofexperiences/personsinmymind,…isthemostunforgettableone.在我腦海里的各種經(jīng)歷/人中，。。。是最令人難忘的。1.Mychildhoodmemorywascolorfulandeverythinginmychildhoodmemorywasfullofsmilesandencouragement.開頭常用語：2.Thereisasayingthat,’’Yesterdayisahistorywithplentyofbeautifulandunforgettablememories.’’我的童年多彩斑斕，我童年里的一切都充滿了微笑和鼓勵。Through

this

experience/Afterthat,I

understand

no

matter

what

we

face（無論我們面對什么）,

we

should

try

our

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to

deal

with

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long

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Tosumup,thoughI’mneverachildanymore,IstillmissmychildhoodandI’mwillingtokeepitinmymindforever.WhenIwasalone,Icouldn’thelpthinkingoftheexperience.Ilearnedalotfromit.結尾常用語譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件1、幾天前theotherday;severaldaysagotwohourslater2、使人感到意外toone’ssurprise3、就在這時atthatmoment;atthattime常用關聯(lián)詞譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件①副詞：suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediatelyasaresult……

Whatwasworse②so/such…that…譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件

根據(jù)下列圖畫中Tom騎自行車的經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇故事。短文要寫得連貫、完整。Sample1譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly

2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件Thedriver/frightened/runaway2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件KeywordssentencesAwomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.rideabike/runfasttoseetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaughtbefrightened/runawayhithim/falloffhisbikeWhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件

Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet

when

hesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.

Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwas

so

frightened

that

heranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.

Fortunately,awoman

happenedtoseeit

and

rememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman

andtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,

thedriverwascaught

andpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Passage2

譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件譯林英語必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁)-精品PPT課件精品習作1一對外發(fā)行的英文報紙有“人物剪影”欄目，請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文，介紹我國著名乒乓球運動員王楠。提示：1.王楠：1978年10月出生于遼寧。2.身高1.62米，體重54公斤。3.7歲開始打球，19