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HowtoComposeaGoodPassageAGoodCompositionFixedphrasesEffectivelinkingwordsComplicatedgrammarpatternsdoharmto;fixone’sattentionon;preferAtoB;takeaction…Firstofall;Besides;However;Allinall,Apartfrom…非謂語動詞作狀語；名詞性從句；狀語從句；倒裝句；

…Followthesixsteps:1.認(rèn)真審題，把握主題2.抓準(zhǔn)要點(diǎn)，勾勒題綱3.緊扣要點(diǎn)，擴(kuò)寫成句4.添加過渡，確保連貫5.修飾文章，提升層次6.查錯補(bǔ)漏，工整抄寫

假定你是李華，你的筆友Mary想了解你所居住的城市（襄陽），請你寫一封信向她介紹，以下是寫作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。1.介紹你所居住的城市的地理位置2.介紹你所居住的城市的自然風(fēng)光，氣候等。3.邀請她來做客。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文流暢。1.認(rèn)真審題，把握主題Task1:person(人稱)tense（時態(tài)）Theme(主體）ThefirstpersonThepresenttensePerson:Tense:Theme:TheintroductionDearMary,Iam...tohear....___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaBodyTask2:DecidethestructureBeginningEnding2.抓準(zhǔn)要點(diǎn)，勾勒題綱Task2:DecidethestructureBeginning假定你是李華，你的筆友Mary想了解你所居住的城市（襄陽），請你寫一封信向她介紹，一下是寫作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。1.介紹你所居住的城市的地理位置2.介紹你所居住的城市的自然風(fēng)光，氣候等。3.邀請她來做客。Task2:DecidethestructureBody假定你是李華，你的筆友Mary想了解你所居住的城市（襄陽），請你寫一封信向她介紹，一下是寫作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。1.介紹你所居住的城市的地理位置2.介紹你所居住的城市的自然風(fēng)光，氣候等。3.邀請她來做客。Task2:DecidethestructureEnding假定你是李華，你的筆友Mary想了解你所居住的城市（襄陽），請你寫一封信向她介紹，一下是寫作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。1.介紹你所居住的城市的地理位置2.介紹你所居住的城市的自然風(fēng)光，氣候等。3.邀請她來做客。Task3:

writedownthekeywords

假定你是李華，你的筆友Mary想了解你所居住的城市（襄陽），請你寫一封信向她介紹，一下是寫作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。1.介紹你所居住的城市的地理位置2.介紹你所居住的城市的自然風(fēng)光，氣候等。3.邀請她來做客。

1.belocatedin2.northwest3.comfortable/suitable4.attract/attractive5.touristattractions6.livein7.suchas8.allinall9.bewellworthdoing…Task3:thekeywords

Step1:Finishthebegining寫作背景+寫作目的

IammorethandelightedtoknowthatyouwanttoknowthecityIlivein.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.

3.緊扣要點(diǎn)，擴(kuò)寫成句

Step2:FinishthebodyXiangyangisinthenorthwestofHubeiprovince.Ithasalonghistoryandrichnaturallandscape.TherearemanytouristattractionsinXiangyang,suchas...Theyarereallyworthvisiting.Itkeepsamoderateclimatethroughouttheyear.Itiscomfortableforpeopletolivein.地理位置，自然風(fēng)光，氣候特點(diǎn)

Step3:Finishtheending

Xiangyangisabeautifulcity.WelcometoXiangyangandhaveavisit.適當(dāng)總結(jié)+發(fā)出邀請4.添加過渡，確保連貫What’smore,besides,furthermoreAllinallAsfarasIamconcerned

1.單詞變短語XiangyangisinthenorthwestofHubeiprovince.XiangyangislocatedinthenorthwestofHubeiprovince.2.簡單句變復(fù)合句/非謂語動詞(1)XiangyangislocatedinthenorthwestofHubeiprovince.Ithasalonghistoryandrichnaturallandscape.LocatedinthenorthwestofHubeiprovince,Xiangyanghasalonghistoryandrichnaturallandscape.5.修飾文章，提升層次

(2)Therearemanytouristattractionshere,suchas...Theyarereallyworthvisiting.(定語從句)(3)Xiangyangkeepsamoderateclimatethroughouttheyear.Itiscomfortableforpeopletolivein.（分詞做狀語）Xiangyangkeepsamoderateclimatethroughouttheyear,makingitacomfortableplacetolivein.Therearemanytouristattractionshere,suchas...allofwhicharereallyworthvisiting.

4.副詞加強(qiáng)語氣3.肯定變否定Xiangyangisabeautifulcity..Wordscan’t/failtoexpressthebeautyofXiangyang.WelcometoXiangyangandhaveavisitIsincerelyinviteyoutocometoXiangyangandhaveavisit.6.查錯補(bǔ)漏，工整抄寫檢查：時態(tài)語態(tài)、單詞拼寫、大小寫、冠詞、句子結(jié)構(gòu)（句子無主語、主謂一致…)IammorethandelightedtohearthatyouwanttoknowthecityIlivein.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.LocatedinthenorthwestofHubeiprovince,Xiangyanghasalonghistoryandrichnaturallandscape.What’smore,therearemanytouristattractionshere,suchasGulongzhongTangchengandMigongci,allofwhicharereallyworthvisiting.Besides,Xiangyangkeepsamoderateclimatethroughouttheyear,makingitacomfortableplacetolivein.Allinall,wordscan’texpressit’sbeauty,IsincerelyinviteyoutocometoXiangyangandhaveavisit.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.

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