高考英語-【建議信】2020年6月上虞區(qū)二模應(yīng)用文講評(píng)：建議信課件

建議信LetterofAdvice建議信LetterofAdvice1目錄1模擬試題分析2建議信總結(jié)分類實(shí)例規(guī)范審題謀篇布局語言表達(dá)佳作欣賞參考范文目錄1模擬試題分析2建議信總結(jié)分類規(guī)范審題2假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)編輯李華，近期收到一封署名為Anxiety的求助信，在信中該同學(xué)表示由于考試臨近壓力劇增。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2020.6上虞二模試題呈現(xiàn)假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)編輯李華，近期收到一封署名為Anxie3

假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)編輯李華，近期收到一封署名為Anxiety的求助信，在信中該同學(xué)表示由于考試臨近壓力劇增。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。審題1.文體：書信2.主題：應(yīng)對(duì)考試壓力的建議3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)4.要點(diǎn)：安慰，建議，祝愿5.格式：稱呼—信頭—正文—信尾—署名假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)編輯李華，近期收到一封署名為Anxie4

假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)編輯李華，近期收到一封署名為Anxiety的求助信，在信中該同學(xué)表示由于考試臨近壓力劇增。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示安慰；2.提出建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。審題closelyrelatedTip1Whatyouwriteshouldbecloselyrelatedtothetopic.假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)編輯李華，近期收到一封署名為Anxie5謀篇布局Thebeginning(Para.1)Thebody(Para.2)

Theending(Para.3)目的+安慰建議希望+祝愿謀篇布局Thebeginning(Para.1)目的+6語言get/feelstressedstresssboutbeunderstress/pressuresufferfromstress/pressureease/relieve/reduce/lessen/releasestress/pressure/tensionNounAdjectivePhrasestress,pressure,tensionanxiety,worrystressed,anxious,worried話題詞匯語言get/feelstressedNounAdject7表達(dá)多樣性Para.1目的+安慰I’msorrytolearnthatyou’reburdenedwithgreatstressduetothecomingexam.Icouldcompletelyrelatetoyouasthisisfairlycommonforseniorthreestudents.Don’tworrytoomuchandI’llshareyousomeeffectivetips/advice.I’msorrytoknowthatyou’reunderintensepressureastheexamisdrawingnear.Actually,everyonewillfeelanxiouswhenfacedwithcrucialexams.Don’tworryandI’dliketoofferyousomeproposalstocopewithstress.FromyourletterIknowyou’resufferingfromgreatpressurewiththeexamapproaching.It’snormalforsenior3studentstogetstressedforthemoment.There’snoneedtoworryexcessivelyandI’llgiveyousomepracticalsuggestions.表達(dá)多樣性Para.1目的+安慰I’msorrytol8要點(diǎn)完整性Para.2建議dosports/takeexercise/takeawalkturntoteachersandparentsforhelptalkwithpeers/closefriendskeepadiarylistentomusic…要點(diǎn)完整性Para.2建議dosports/takee9要點(diǎn)完整性Para.2advice+supportingideaYou'dbettersparesometimetoexerciseregularly,whichwilldefinitelyhelpyoureleasestressandbuildupyourbody.Inmyopinion,doingsportsonaregularbasisisagoodwaytocheeryourselfupandmakeyoustress-free.It'sagoodideatocommunicatewithyourteachersandparentswhoarealwayswillingtosharetheirexperiencewithyou.Talkingwithyourclosefriendsorkeepingadiaryis

alsoagoodideatorelievepressure.Youcanalsolistentothemusicyouarefondof,whichwillsurelyputyouateaseandthusliftyourspirit.要點(diǎn)完整性Para.2advice+supportin10Para.2考場(chǎng)作文分析ComfortAdvice?orTip2Separatecomfortfromadvice.Para.2考場(chǎng)作文分析ComfortAdvice?orT11Para.2Morecomfortthanadvice!Tip2Separatecomfortfromadvice.考場(chǎng)作文分析Para.2Morecomfortthanadvic12交際得體性Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Para.3

希望+祝愿Ihopemysuggestonswillbebeneficial/helpful/practicaltoyouandyoucanovercomeyourstresssoon.Ihopemyadvicewillturnoutbeneficial.Mayyoubecomemoreconfidenceandlessstressedinthenearfuture.Tip3Expressyourwishesaccordingtothecontext.交際得體性Iwouldappreciateitif13佳作欣賞點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，使用了多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語作狀語、介詞短語作狀語、狀語從句、定語從句等，使用了豐富的詞匯和表達(dá)。全文銜接緊湊，達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的，但是若能將最后的祝愿進(jìn)行調(diào)整的話，文章會(huì)更完美。佳作欣賞點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，使用了多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語14佳作欣賞點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，使用了非謂語、介詞短語、名詞性從句等多種語法結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯及表達(dá)。全文銜接自然，基本完成了寫作任務(wù)，若能將最后的祝愿進(jìn)行調(diào)整，文章會(huì)更優(yōu)秀。佳作欣賞點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，使用了非謂語、介詞短語15參考范文DearAnxiety,I’msorrytoknowthatyouareexperiencingatoughtimenow.Actually,everyonewillencountersuchaperiodwhentheyareundergreatpressure,sothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuch.Inmyopinion,sharingyourfeelingswithyourfriendsisawisechoiceasyoucanremoveyournegativeemotions.Anothereffectivesuggestionisthatyoushouldtakemorephysicalexercise,whichcanliftyourspirit.Also,keepanoptimisticattitudetowardslifeaboutyourfuture.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofbenefittoyou.Mayyougetridofyourtroublesoon.

Yours,LiHua參考范文DearAnxiety,16分類Theletterofadviceis

writtento…個(gè)人領(lǐng)導(dǎo)學(xué)習(xí)考試壓力大難以適應(yīng)新環(huán)境過度使用朋友圈擔(dān)心疫區(qū)的朋友容易煩躁發(fā)脾氣（2014安徽卷）選擇旅游的路線（2017北京卷）外國(guó)朋友學(xué)中文（2008全國(guó)卷II，2015四川卷）…圖書館藏書問題校園不文明行為（2011浙江卷）…分類Theletterofadviceiswrit17

假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Chris剛到中國(guó)來留學(xué)，他對(duì)新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活環(huán)境不適應(yīng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回一封郵件，要點(diǎn)包括:

1.詢問近況；2.提供建議；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。例一難以適應(yīng)新環(huán)境假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Chris剛到中國(guó)來留學(xué)，18語言積累：適應(yīng)新環(huán)境的建議1.Mytoptipistoburyyourselfinstudy.Thereforetherewillbelesssparetimeavailableforyoutofeelhomesick.2.Ithinkyoumayneedtocommunicatewithyourclassmatesasmuchaspossible.Inthiswayyoucangettoknoweachotherbetterandthusbondwiththem/developfriendlyrelationshipswiththem.3.It’sagoodideaforyoutojoinsomeschoolclubsandgetyourselfinvolvedinsomesocialactivitiestomakenewfriends,whichwillpromoteyourChinselearning.4.Makingnewfriendsandhangingoutwiththemisaneffectivewaytoremove/getridofyournegativeemotions,likelonelinessandhomesickness.5.Youcanalsovisitsometouristattractionstomakeyourselfimmersedin/exposedtothelocalculture,whichisbeneficialtoyourstudyandwillhelpyoufitinmorequickly.語言積累：適應(yīng)新環(huán)境的建議1.Mytoptipis19參考范文DearChris,Howiseverything?Learningthatyouhavedifficultyadjusting/adaptingtothelifeinChina,Icouldcompletelyrelatetoyouasthisisfairlycommonduetothecultureshock.However,ifyouadoptappropriateapproaches,thingscouldturnoutbetterthanexpected.Istronglysuggestyoulistenwithattentioninclass,takenoteswhereyoucan'tcomprehendandturntoteachersafterwards.Besides,whynotmakemorefriendsandhangoutwithmemoreoften?Inthisway,notonlycanyoumasterspokenChinesemoreproficientlybutyoucanintegratemorequicklyintoChineselifestyle.

HopemyadvicehelpsandwishyouanenjoyablestayinChina.Yours,LiHuaTip3Expressyourwishesaccordingtothecontext.參考范文DearChris,Tip3Expressy20例二過度使用朋友圈假如你是李華，你的好友Jim在寒假期間癡迷于微信朋友圈，經(jīng)常發(fā)照片分享生活中的所有細(xì)節(jié)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給Jim寫一封信：

1.表示理解；2.闡述危害；3.提出建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：微信朋友圈WeChatMoments

過度分享oversharing例二過度使用朋友圈假如你是李華，你的好友Jim在寒假21參考范文DearJim,I’mworriedthatyou’vebeenaddictedtosharingallsortsofphotosinWeChatMomentsrecently.Undeniably,WeChatmakescommunicationconvenientandleisuretimecolorful.However,thereexistsomepotentialrisksifweovershare.Onesevereproblemisleakingprivacy,whichmaycauseeconomiclosses.Besides,oversharingcanmakeothersuncomfortable/jealous/envious,fortheythinkyouareshowingoff.Thus,don’talwayspostpersonalinformation.Norshouldwerashlyaddstrangerstothelistoffriends.It’swisetosetasidesometimetoaccompanyparentsordosomethingmoremeaningful.

Isincerelyhopeyoucantakemyadvice.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaTip3Expressyourwishesaccordingtothecontext.參考范文DearJim,Tip3Expressyo22例三擔(dān)心疫區(qū)的朋友假定你是李華，得知美國(guó)現(xiàn)在新型冠狀肺炎病毒肆虐，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)筆友Mark寫一電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)近況；

2.提出建議；

3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：新型冠狀肺炎

COVID-19

流行病epidemic/pandemic例三擔(dān)心疫區(qū)的朋友假定你是李華，得知美國(guó)現(xiàn)在新型冠狀23參考范文DearMark，How’severythinggoingwithyou?I’veheardfromthenewsthattheongoingworldwideepidemicofCOVID-19strikes/hitsAmericahard.Butproactive/preventivemeasuresstillcanbetakentofightagainstiteffectively.Mytoptipistowearmasksandmaintainthesocialdistance,becausethevirusescanspreadfrompersontopersonincloseproximity.Itisalsoimportanttowashhandsregularlyandthoroughlywithsoap,whichcankillviruses.Dostockyourcupboardswithsomeextrafoodtolower/reducethefrequencyofhangout.

Ihopethediseasecanbeundercontrolsoon.Staywell!Yours,LiHuaTip3Expressyourwishesaccordingtothecontext.參考范文DearMark，Tip3Expressyo24例四圖書館藏書問題假如你是李華，就讀于某國(guó)際學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你就本校圖書館英語藏書方面存在的問題給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：