讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)之人與自我“失而復(fù)得”的貓 高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

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“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.01原文分析

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

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“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.IfoundmyCatInkSpotcleaninghimselfinMrs.Cleary’ssittingroomInkSpotcomfortedmeduringthelonelytoughtime.Iwasatalosswhattodo.annoyed,sorrowfulLonely,sadAtaloss,angryhappyReadforplotsBackgroundRisingactionClimaxFallingactionEndingSincemybabysister’sbirth,Ifeltlonelyandsad.ButInkspotwasbroughttocomfortedmeIfoundmyCatInkSpotcleaninghimselfinMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom???AnalyzethePlotandEmotionIwasatalosswhattodo.

Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.InkSpotwasspecialforme.Aftermybabysister’sbirth,“my”parents’timewastakenbyher.Itseemednooneinthefamilycaredaboutorevennoticedme.Worsestill,Iwaspackedofftoakindergarten.Ihatedbeingleftoutfromthebottomofmyheart.Itwaswhenmomnoticedmeweepinginacorneronenightthatthingsbegantochange.Afterthat,InkSpotcameintomylife.Everynight,hecurled(卷曲)upbesidemeinbedandhewasthereformeafterschoolwhenIracedhomejusttobewithhim.IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.ReadforCharactersI:Mrs.Cleary:sensitive,lonely,straightforward,cat-loving,Caring,kind-hearted

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.………IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.Readforconflicts1.MyfavoriteseemedtoabandonmeandsettleinMrs.Cleary’shouse.

2.IarguedagainstMrs.Clearyformycat.

Themes故事的主題：誤會(huì)化解，找回愛(ài)貓?jiān)姆治鲈姆治龉适赂乓嚎吹轿业男∝埮艿組rs.Cleary’s家，我很生氣也很傷心，有一種被拋棄的感覺(jué)。于是我怒氣沖沖去她家，準(zhǔn)備要回我的貓。

“Mom!”IscreamedasIlookedthroughthewindow,“WhyismyInkSpotsittinginMrs.Cleary’swindow?"Mompushedpastmetoconfirmit.Sureenough,acrossthestreetwasInkSpotcleaninghimselfinthewindowofMrs.Cleary’ssittingroom.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Hewasmycat,notMrs.Cleary’s.Shehadalreadyadoptedtencats.Whymustshekeepmycat?Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme.Meanwhile,InkSpot’sleavingwithoutanysignsupsetme.Asenseofbeingleftouthitmehard.………IfellinlovewithInkSpotthefirsttimeIsawthistinyblackandwhitekitten,forwhichIcalledhimInkSpot.Momanddaddybeamedwithpleasureasmyeyesdancedwithjoyagain.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadsmiledsincemylittlebabysistercameintothefamily.Asformehewasmorethanacat.Actually,hewasmylife.ButtodaywhenIcamehome,InkSpotwasinMrs.Cleary’swindow.Iwantedhimback.ButmominsistedthatifInkSpotstayedatMrs.Cleary’s,thatmeantitwaswherehewantedtobe.“No!Mom,InkSpotismycat!”IprotestedwildlybutIhadtoadmitthetruthofmom’swords.Standingonthesidewalk,Iwasatalossastowhattodo.StaringatInkSpotforawhile,Icouldn'tstandtheangeranylonger.Para1：IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.Analyzelanguage少量的對(duì)話描寫(xiě)部分心理描寫(xiě)根據(jù)語(yǔ)篇協(xié)同性原則：續(xù)寫(xiě)部分應(yīng)該有少量對(duì)話描寫(xiě)與適當(dāng)?shù)男睦砻鑼?xiě)03續(xù)寫(xiě)擴(kuò)展WhatdidIsaytoMrs.Cleary?P1:IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Para2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.WhatwasMrs.Cleary’sreactionwhensheheardwhatIsaid?AnalysethegivensentencesWhatdidIfeelandwhatdidIdoseeingmybelovedcat.WhatlessondidIlearnfromtheexperience?(THEME)Whatcanyouinferfromthetwosentences?P1:IwalkedtowardsMrs.Cleary’shousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Paragraph1IaskedMrs.Clearyangrilywhymycatwasinherhome?Mrs.Clearyledtothesittingroom.Mrs.Clearyexplainedandapologizedtome.P2:Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.Paragraph2Ifelthappyandhugmycat.IrealizedthatImisunderstoodMrs.Clearyandthankedher.(THEME)03表達(dá)積累reply,respond,answer,agree,promise,comfort,state(陳述),claim(聲稱(chēng))interrupt,guess,warn,beg(乞求)，doubt,……各種說(shuō)的表達(dá)---直接說(shuō)announce（宣布),suggest,……add,repeat,remark（評(píng)論說(shuō)),apologise,admit,complain,explain,ask,wonder,

各種說(shuō)的表達(dá)----間接說(shuō)yell,scream，……gasp（倒抽一口氣），frown（皺眉）,sigh（嘆氣）,glare,glance,stare,weep(流淚)，sob（嗚咽），cheer,grin（咧嘴笑），beam（眉開(kāi)眼笑）shout，cry,roar（咆哮）,murmur（吶吶地說(shuō)）,whisper（低聲說(shuō)），groan(哼哼呻吟)，mumble（咕噥）,sniff(嗤之以鼻)，stammer（結(jié)巴）例1：“Honey,”Momsaidweakly,“Ihaveaterriblecold.Youcanhavecereal(燕麥)forbreakfastandwatchcartoons.I’mgoingtostayinbed.”套路一:1.said+________：loudly/delightedly/surprisedly……練習(xí)："WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup？"Dad____________（困惑地問(wèn)）,“we'vetriedeverything.”askedconfusedly副詞帶著情緒“說(shuō)”套路一例2：Atthesoundofhismomcoughing,Jeremyknockedonherbedroomdoorandaskedwithgreatconcern,“Mom,areyouok?”套路二:2.said+__________________：

ina

pleasant愉悅的/firm堅(jiān)定的/rude粗魯?shù)?sad悲傷的

tone語(yǔ)氣;ina

high高/low低/sweet甜/loud響亮/soft軟/weak弱

voice聲音withconcern/wildjoy/abigsmilewitheyesfixedonme,withhisheadlowered練習(xí)：Thenmomheldthedressupbeforeherand____________________(贊同地說(shuō)),“Youknowwhat?Ithinkitlooksnice.”saidinanaprrovingtone介詞短語(yǔ)帶著情緒“說(shuō)”套路二帶著情緒“說(shuō)”套路3promised,hiseyestwinkling非謂語(yǔ)例3：“Wherediditcomefrom?”Jeremywondered,reachingintothewashertotakeoutmoreclothes.Theyhuggedherandshouted,“HappyMother’sDay,dearMummy!”Samanthagavemeabighug,saying,"Youaresobraveandclever!Iwouldn'tknowwhattodowithoutyou!“套路三:said，+______________：said,comfortingme……comfortedme,saying……h(huán)uggedmeandsaid,練習(xí):“Ibetyouaretoobusytofixyourcar,sojustleaveittous!”theoldman______________________________.(向我保證，眼睛閃閃發(fā)光）.例4：

Tiredandhungry,Janefinallysaidtoherself,“Tom,Imissyou!Ishouldn’thavequarreledwithyou.”套路四:___________________，+said：練習(xí):_________________________________(越來(lái)越羞愧后悔)，hewenttoapologisetohismom,“I’msorryforcheatingintheexam.Ipromisenottodoitanymore.”帶著情緒“說(shuō)”套路四Increasinglyashamedandregretful形容詞作狀語(yǔ)例5:“Ididit!”shesaidtoherself,hereyesfilledwithpride.套路五:said,+____________________練習(xí):練習(xí)5:“AmI

wrong?”___________________(他問(wèn)道，眼里充滿疑慮).hequestioned,eyesfullofconfusion.獨(dú)立主格帶著情緒“說(shuō)”套路五04續(xù)寫(xiě)賞析優(yōu)秀學(xué)生習(xí)作情節(jié)合理豐富，銜接流暢自然語(yǔ)言豐富多樣，大量動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)優(yōu)秀學(xué)生習(xí)作情節(jié)合理豐富，銜接流暢自然語(yǔ)言豐富多樣，大量動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)及格版范文IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.

WhenMrs.Clearysopenedthedoor,Iaskedherimmediately,“Whyismycatinyourwindow?“Mrs.Clearyswassoconfusedthatsheanswered,”Ididn’tknowhewasyours.Ithoughthewasabandonedbyhishost.SoIjustwantedtogivehimahome.IamsosorryifwhatIdidhashurtyou.”ThensheledmedirectlytothesittingroomandIsawthecatswereplayinghappily.

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

Excitedandglad,Ipickedhimupquickly,heldhimtightlyinmyarms,andkissedhimsoftly.TherewasasenseofguiltfloodinginmyheartwhenIfoundIhadmisunderstoodmykindneighbor.Nowmyangerdisappeared,tearsofgratitudewelledupinmyeyes.IthankedheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpottomyhome.ThelostandfoundpartnermademefeelIwassomeoneagain.優(yōu)秀版范文

IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.Themomentsheopenedthedoor,IaskedMrs.Clearywithwateryeyes,“Whyismycatinyourwindow?”Withaconfusingexpression,Mrs.Clearyresponded,“HonestlyIhadnoideahewasyours.IhadjustthoughthewasanotherabandonedpatheticcatsoItookhiminjustlikeItookinalltherest.IfwhatIdidhashurtyou,Iamawfully

apologetic.“Withouttheslightesthesitation,sheledmedirectlytothesittingroom,wherecatswereplayinghappily.

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

Afloodofexcitementpassedthroughmybody.Iimmediatelyscoopedhimupinmyarmsandheldhimcloseasherubbedbeneathmychin,purringcontentedly.Seeingmycatwelltakencareof,itdawnedonmethatIhadmisunderstoodmycaringneighbor.Nowmyangergavewaytogratitude.IextendedmyappreciationtoheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpothome,whereIthoughtheshouldbelong.ThelostandfoundcompanionmademefeelIwassomeoneagain.及格版范文默寫(xiě)

IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.__________________(當(dāng)克利里斯太太打開(kāi)門(mén)時(shí)),Iaskedherimmediately,“Whyismycatinyourwindow?“Mrs.Clearyswas__________________(如此的困惑，以至于她回答說(shuō)),”Ididn’tknowhewasyours.Ithoughthe__________________(被他的主人拋棄了).SoIjustwantedto______________(給他一個(gè)家).Iamsosorryif__________________(如果我的行為傷害了你).”ThensheledmedirectlytothesittingroomandIsawthecats_______________(正在快樂(lè)地玩耍).

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash._______________(又興奮又高興),I_______________(趕緊把他抱起來(lái)),___________(緊緊地?fù)г趹牙?inmyarms,and_______________(輕輕地親吻了他).Therewas__________________(一種負(fù)罪感涌上心頭)whenIfoundIhadmisunderstoodmykindneighbor.Nowmyangerdisappeared,____________(感激的淚水)welledupinmyeyes.IthankedheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpottomyhome.Thelostandfoundpartner__________________(讓我覺(jué)得我又成了一個(gè)人).優(yōu)秀版范文默寫(xiě)

IwalkedtowardsMrs.Clearyshousehurriedlyandknockedatthedoorangrily.__________________(她一打開(kāi)門(mén)),IaskedMrs.Cleary__________________(淚眼汪汪地),“Whyismycatinyourwindow?”__________________(克利里太太帶著困惑的表情回答說(shuō)),“Ididn’tknowhewasyours.Ijustthoughthewas__________________(另一只被遺棄的可憐貓)soItookhiminjustlikeItookinalltherest.__________________(如果我的行為傷害了你),Iam_____(非常抱歉）."Thensheledmedirectlytothesittingroom,__________________(小貓們?cè)谀抢锟鞓?lè)地玩耍).

Uponseeingme,InkSpotjumpedoffthewindow,runningtowardsmeinaflash.

__________________(一股興奮的洪流)passedthroughmybody.Iimmediatelypickedhimupandheldhimclose__________________(它在我的下巴下摩擦著，滿足地地嗚嗚叫著).__________________(看到我的貓被照顧得很好),IrealizedIhadmisunderstoodmycaringneighbor.Now__________________(我的憤怒變成了感激).IthankedheragainandagainbeforeItookInkSpothome,whereIthoughtheshouldbelong.Thelostandfoundcompanion__________________(讓我覺(jué)得我又成了一個(gè)人).人與自然——人與動(dòng)物

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