高中英語寫作基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練-My Friend

高中英語寫作基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練--MyFriendBasicTrainingForEnglishWriting

Warmingup:

GuessingGame三國(guó)勇將俏趙云長(zhǎng)坂坡上救阿斗定州百姓皆敬尊英雄美名世代傳Ihaveagoodfriend.Hewasbraveandkind.HewasanexcellentgeneralduringtheThreeKingdoms.Hewaseasygoingandgotonwellwithhisleaders.EveryoneinDingZhourespects（尊敬）

him.BasicTrainingForEnglishWritingStep1:brainstormingThequalitiesofagoodfriend

Thequalitiesofagoodfriend

（好朋友具有的品質(zhì)）Findtheadjectivesandwritefiveofthemonyourfinger.ThequalitiesofagoodfriendWordpuzzlehdgxffrjwlpatienteaelbmbshyurapnoodskjmsfquiettehyuqttbraveglaggdzvxaouhonesttritqiiltbntnkinddfjsegeiggulindeWordpuzzlehdgxffrjwlpatienteaelbmbshyurapnoodskjmsfquiettehyuqttbraveglaggdzvxaouhonesttritqiiltbntnkinddfjsegeiggulinde英語作文中描述人物品質(zhì)的詞匯1.害羞的shy2.樂于助人的helpful3.友好的friendly/kind4.安靜的quiet5.沉默的silent6.耐心的patient7.仔細(xì)的careful8.精力充沛的energetic9.外向的out-going10.勇敢的brave11.誠(chéng)實(shí)的honest12.熱心腸的warm-hearted13.容易相處的easy-going

BasicTrainingForEnglishWritingStep2:informationgap家庭住址幸福路308號(hào)張華就讀學(xué)校第一中學(xué)愛好廣泛，最愛足球和集郵學(xué)習(xí)各科都不錯(cuò)，尤善英語性格善良，誠(chéng)實(shí)，大家都喜歡他性別男出生1997年5月21日身高1米8liveinWheredoeshe/shelive?Getyouranswerbyaskingquestions:通過互相提問獲得缺失信息，為寫作準(zhǔn)備素材studyathobbiesDowellinCharacter性別wasbornontall/heightInformationgapIsZhangHuaaboyoragirl?Wheredoeshe/shestudy?Whenwashe/sheborn?What’rehis/herhobbies?Howtallishe?Whatdoeshe/shedowellin?Whatdoyouthinkofhim/her?liveinNo.308,XingfuRoadZhangHuastudyat

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HighSchoolhobbiesallkindsof，favourite，playfootballcollectstampsdowellinallthesubjects，esp.EnglishCharacterkind，honesteveryonelikeshimsexaboywasbornonMay21st,1997tall/height1.8metrestallwithaheightof1.8mBasicTrainingForEnglishWritingStep3:prewritingHowtodescribeaperson1.概況：age,birth,appearance2.性格：character/personality3.愛好：hobby4.評(píng)價(jià)：evaluation(whatyouthinkofher)Whataspectsshouldbeincluded?英語作文中描述人物外貌的常用詞語1長(zhǎng)/短頭發(fā)long/shorthair

2活潑的lively3可愛的lovely4強(qiáng)壯的strong

5.有大而明亮的眼睛的女孩agirlwithbrightbigeyes6．戴眼鏡的男孩aboywithglasses

Sentencepatterns1.概況：age,sex,birth,familybackground…was/werebornin/into(apoorfamily)on…Hespenthischildhoodin…他出生在1995年,現(xiàn)在16歲了.

Hewasbornin1995andissixteenyearsoldnow.我的歷史老師是個(gè)漂亮女人，她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā).Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.啟示：巧用with做定語2、外貌/性格/特長(zhǎng)非常喜歡Ilike…verymuch對(duì)……感興趣Heisinterestedin…對(duì)……極度喜歡Heiscrazyabout…喜歡enjoy/love/befondof擅長(zhǎng)begoodat最喜歡Hisfavourite…is…英語作文中描述人物愛好的詞匯

Howtocombinealltheseparatesentencesintoarealcomposition。如何將這些零散的句子變成一篇流暢的文章？

Linkingwords因果：because,as,forthisreason,asaresult,so…轉(zhuǎn)折：onthecontrary,while,but,however,otherwise…條件：so/aslongas,incase,if,unless…列舉：first,atlast,first(ly)…,second(ly)…,foronething…,遞進(jìn)：what’smore,besides,furthermore…目的：sothat,inorderthat,forthepurpose…總結(jié)：inaword,onthewhole,allinall,ingeneral…范文賞析：

用英語寫一篇短文,介紹你朋友李華的基本情況.短文應(yīng)該包括下表所列全部?jī)?nèi)容：姓名：李飛性別：男身高：1.75米出生年月：1997年7月就讀學(xué)校：晉州一中特