sexism at job market評語文章學(xué)術(shù)詞匯使用熟練表達(dá)較為豐富復(fù)雜句采用很棒恰當(dāng)

SexismatJobNowadays,It'sapparentthatjobmarkethasgraduallybeenahottopicformillionsofjobseekersneverthelessthecollegestudents,theunemployeeortheemployer.AndamostseriousphenomenonoccuredinChinaisabouttheunemployment.Andoneofthehotproblemisrelatedtothesexism.RealityremainedintheJobMarketisthatthefemale'scompetenceabilityseemstobelowerthanthemale's,butit'snottheirfaultmoreoftenthannot,somephenomenoncanexplainthis.Manyofthebrandsgivetherefusaltothefemale,andcertainjobsonlygivethechancetothemale,andevensomecompanyofferthefemalelowersalarythanmale.Personally,itresultsfrom3aspects:Thefirstpartistheintrinsicideasandthoughtsremaininginsomeemployer'smind;thesecondpartisthelackofthejobbalanceforthejobrelatedtothefemale'sexistslittle;andthefinalpartisthelimitconditionbroughtbythefemalesthemselves.Inmyopinion,oneofthesolutiontothisproblemistoimprovethelevelandtheabilityofthewomenaswellastochangethemindandideaofdiscrimination,thentheJobMarketcanbe按句點(diǎn)評Nowadays,It'sapparentthatjobmarkethasgraduallybeenahottopicformillionsofjobseekersneverthelessthecollegestudents,theunemployeeortheemployer.[學(xué)習(xí)提示]易混詞匯apparentobviousevident,clearplaindistinct,definite,manifest均含“清楚的，明白的，明顯的”之意。:evidentclear:plain:普通用詞，含義與clear很接近，可通用，但plain:::AndamostseriousphenomenonoccuredinChinaisaboutthe[學(xué)習(xí)提示]易混詞匯marvelmiraclewonderphenomenon均含“奇跡”::::]Andoneofthehotproblemisrelatedtothe[低頻警示thehotproblem[低頻警示oneofthehotproblem[學(xué)習(xí)提示]易混詞匯problemquestionissuematter均含“問題”:question:通常指用口頭或書面提出來要求回答或有待討論解決的問題。issuematter:RealityremainedintheJobMarketisthatthefemale'scompetenceabilityseemstobelowerthanthemale's,butit'snottheirfaultmoreoftenthannot,somephenomenoncanexplain[句子錯誤[學(xué)習(xí)提示]易混詞匯abilitycapacitycapabilitygenius,talentcompetence,faculty,gift,aptitude均可表示人的“能力，才能”之意。:capacity:側(cè)重指人的潛在能力，通常不指體力，多指才智，尤指接受與領(lǐng)悟能力。capability多用于人，指勝任某項(xiàng)具體工作的能力，也指本身具有、尚未發(fā)揮的潛在能力。常與of或for連用。:talent:著重指人某方面具有可發(fā)展和倍養(yǎng)的突出天賦才能，但語意比genius弱。competence正式用詞，側(cè)重指令人滿意的業(yè)務(wù)能力與水平，達(dá)到勝任某項(xiàng)工作等的要求。faculty:指特殊的才能或智力。gift:著重個人的天賦的才能或在某方面的顯著本領(lǐng)，常暗含不能用一般規(guī)律作解釋的意味。aptitude多指先天或后天習(xí)得的運(yùn)用自如的能力，常暗示接受能力強(qiáng)，能迅速掌握一種學(xué)術(shù)訓(xùn)]Manyofthebrandsgivetherefusaltothefemale,andcertainjobsonlygivethechancetothemale,andevensomecompanyofferthefemalelowersalarythanmale.[低頻警示thefemalelowersalary[搭配統(tǒng)計]give...chance14618SeeAlso:affordchance156,open[學(xué)習(xí)提示]易混詞匯brandtrademark均含有“商標(biāo)”::]Personally,itresultsfrom3aspects:Thefirstpartistheintrinsicideasandthoughtsremaininginsomeemployer'smind;thesecondpartisthelackofthejobbalanceforthejobrelatedtothefemale'sexistslittle;andthefinalpartisthelimitconditionbroughtbythefemalesthemselves.][低頻警示thejobbalance:look普通用詞，多用復(fù)數(shù)，可與appearanceface::]名詞condition用作復(fù)數(shù)形式，表示“外界狀況”，“周圍情形”[circumstancesthataffectanactivityorsituation]；而用作單數(shù)形式卻表示(某人或某物所處)“狀態(tài)”，“狀況”[thestateinwhichapersonorthingis]。Inmyopinion,oneofthesolutiontothisproblemistoimprovethelevelandtheabilityofthewomenaswellastochangethemindandideaofdiscrimination,thentheJobMarketcanbe[低頻警示themindandidea[搭配統(tǒng)計]change...mind8446SeeAlso:changejudgment11,alter[學(xué)習(xí)提示]易混詞匯changealtervaryconvert,modifytransformturn均含有“變: