Unit6Imgoingtostudyputerscience.八年級上冊英語單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（學(xué)生版）

Unit6I’mgoingtostudyputerscience.單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度愿望、理想談?wù)撐磥淼拇蛩闩c本單元話題相關(guān)的書面表達(dá)一般是談?wù)撐磥淼拇蛩?。能用begoingto，wantto，hopeto，expectto，bereadyto，planto談?wù)撐磥砩畹挠?jì)劃與愿望，內(nèi)容包括未來想要從事的職業(yè)或夢想及怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想。在寫作過程中，學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn)：1.能描述自己的夢想或目標(biāo)，并介紹為實(shí)現(xiàn)這一夢想或目標(biāo)而制定的計(jì)劃；2.能用begoingto，wantto，hopeto，expectto，bereadyto，planto談?wù)撐磥砩畹挠?jì)劃與愿望，內(nèi)容包括未來想要從事的職業(yè)或夢想及怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想；3.能對未來有所憧憬；4.敘述要有條理，先敘述未來的計(jì)劃和打算，再敘述打算采取的行動(dòng)，在談?wù)撔袆?dòng)時(shí)要分清主次且按先后順序進(jìn)行；總—分—總法寫計(jì)劃◆總：綜述自己的愿望；◆分：介紹為實(shí)現(xiàn)這一夢想或目標(biāo)而制定的計(jì)劃；◆總：對未來的憧憬?！驹~匯積累】1.cook廚師2.engineer工程師 3.violinist小提琴手4.pianist鋼琴家 5.pilot飛行員 6.puterprogrammer計(jì)算機(jī)程序設(shè)計(jì)員;編程人員7.takeup開始從事；占用8.growup成熟；長大9.makesure確保;查明10.besureabout確信;對……有把握11.beableto能夠做某事12.havetodowith關(guān)于；與……有關(guān)系13.makethesoccerteam組建足球隊(duì)14.getlotsofexercise多進(jìn)行體育鍛煉15.practicebasketballeveryday每天練習(xí)打籃球16.eathealthierfood吃更健康的食物17.learneducation/medicine/puterscience學(xué)習(xí)教/醫(yī)藥/電腦科學(xué)18.begoodatwritingstories擅長寫故事19.takesinging/actinglessons上唱歌/表演課20.learnanotherforeignlanguage學(xué)習(xí)另一種外語，學(xué)習(xí)第二外語三、句型積累1.Iamgoingtobeawriter,becauseIlikereadingstorybooks.我要成為一名作家，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g讀故事書。2.I’mgoingtoexercisemoreandeatlessjunkfood.我打算多多鍛煉并少吃垃圾食品。3.It’snoteasytobeeadoctor,soImakeaplanforit.4.IwilllimitthetimeIspendwatchingTVtoonehourperday.我打算限制我看電視的時(shí)間至每天一小時(shí)。5.Iplantogetmoreexercisetoimprovemyphysicalhealth.6.Togetintothebestmedicalschool,Ineedtogetgoodgrades.為了進(jìn)入最好的醫(yī)科大學(xué)，我需要取得好成績。7.Iamgoingtotrymybesttomakemydreametrue.8.Iwanttoheanengineer.我想當(dāng)一名工程師。9.I’mgoingtopracticebasketballeveryday.我打算每天練習(xí)籃球10.I’mgoingtokeeponwritingstories.我打算堅(jiān)持寫故事。11.Manyresolutionshavetodowithselfimprovement.許多決心和自身提高有關(guān)系。◆開頭句①I'mgladtoknowthatyouwanttobeadoctorwhenyougrowismyadvice.②HereIwanttosharemythreeresolutionswithyou.③I'mgoingtotakeupanewhobby.◆中間句①Youshouldkeepondoingexercise.②Youmustworkhardatschoolandgetgoodgradesifyouwanttobeadoctorinthefuture.③Youshouldreadmorebooksonmedicineinyoursparetimesothatyoucanlearnmoreaboutmedicine.④I'mgoingtocaremoreaboutmyfriendsandhelpthemmoretoimprovemyrelationshipswiththem.⑤I'mgoingtolistentoteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddomyhomeworkbettertogetbettergrades.◆結(jié)尾句①Ireallyhopeyourdreamwilletrue.②I'msureIcanachievemyresolutionsifItrymybest.③Justmakesureyoutryyourbest.Thenyoucanbeanyoneyouwant!【諺語積累】1.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開端是成功的一半。2.Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.有志者事竟成。假如你是林宏，昨天晚上你收到了你的美國朋友Sam的郵件，他告訴你將來他想成為一名醫(yī)生，但是他不知道該怎么做，所以想請你幫他出謀劃策。請你給他回一封80詞左右的英語郵件，提出你的建議。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題指導(dǎo)】1．文體：應(yīng)用文(郵件)；2．時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主；3．注意事項(xiàng)：注意段落布局并恰當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句或連接詞來增加得分點(diǎn)?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】【組句成篇】DearSam,I'mgladtoknowthatyouwanttobeadoctorwhenyougrowup.Hereismyadvice.Firstly,youmustworkhardatschoolandgetgoodgradesifyouwanttobeadoctorinthefuture.Youcanenteratopmedicalschoolifyougetaquitehighmarkintheexam.Secondly,youshouldreadmorebooksonmedicineinyoursparetimesothatyoucanlearnmoreaboutmedicine.Thirdly,youshouldkeepondoingexercisetokeepstrong.Beingagooddoctornotonlyneedsrichknowledge，butalsoastrongbody.Thenyoucandealwiththehardandtiringwork.Ireallyhopeyourdreamwilletrue.(一)與職業(yè)有關(guān)的詞匯1.電腦程序員_____________________________________________2.工程師_____________________________________________3.籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員_____________________________________________4.科學(xué)家_____________________________________________5.公交司機(jī)_____________________________________________6.飛行員_____________________________________________7.廚師_____________________________________________8.醫(yī)生_____________________________________________9.教師_____________________________________________10.小提琴家_____________________________________________11.鋼琴家_____________________________________________12.演員_____________________________________________13.作家_____________________________________________14.歌手_____________________________________________(二)與計(jì)劃有關(guān)的短語1.上表演課_____________________________________________2.學(xué)習(xí)另一種語言_____________________________________________3.每天練習(xí)打籃球_____________________________________________4.上烹飪學(xué)校_____________________________________________5.學(xué)習(xí)彈鋼琴_____________________________________________6.組建足球隊(duì)_____________________________________________7.取得好成績_____________________________________________8.吃更健康的食物_____________________________________________9.做大量的鍛煉_____________________________________________10.完成高中和大學(xué)學(xué)業(yè)_____________________________________________11.堅(jiān)持寫故事______________________________________________12.改善身體健康_____________________________________________13.學(xué)習(xí)教育/數(shù)學(xué)/醫(yī)藥/電腦科學(xué)_____________________________________________(三)其他重要短語1.長大；成熟_____________________________________________2.確信；對……有把握_____________________________________________3.確保；查明_____________________________________________4.能夠做某事_____________________________________________5.在……開始_____________________________________________6.寫下；記錄下_____________________________________________7.關(guān)于；與……有關(guān)系_____________________________________________8.開始從事；占用_____________________________________________9.同意；贊成_____________________________________________10.擅長(做)……_____________________________________________11.盡力_____________________________________________12.由于這個(gè)原因_____________________________________________二、句子積累寫作微技能：＂1＋n＂拓展寫作法例：Mikewantstobeawriterwhenhegrowsup.Heisgoodatwriting.Heisgoingtowritemorearticlesandsendhisarticlestomagazines.HeexpectstobeanotherMoYan.1.Tinawantstobeasinger.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Stephenwantstobeateacher.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.Marywantstobeadoctor.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.Davewantstobeareporter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、以讀促寫根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容、首字母或所給漢語提示，寫出空白處所缺單詞的正確形式。每空限填一詞。MyFriends’PlansfortheFutureI’manoutgoinggirlandIlikemakingfriends.AndIhavetwopenfriendsfrom1(外國的)countries.aftershefinishes(大學(xué)).Sheisgoodatwritingandstillkonwritingevenshehastospendtimeonher(功課)now.Shewrites(文章)and(郵寄；發(fā)送)themtomagazinesandnewspapers.SheexpectstobeanotherMoYan.Thoughshedoesn’tmakesifherdreamcanetrue,shehastotryherb.BobisfromPennsylvania,USA,astatebees(著名的)becauseofKobe,awonderfulNBAstar.Kobeishisidol.That’swhyhehopestobeeabasketballp.Bobisgoingtoeathealthierfoodsothathecanbetallerandstronger.Bobalsoplantogotobasketballcampto15(提高)hisskillwhereheisatopracticebasketballeveryday.Hebelieveshisdreamcanetrueaslasheworkshard.What’syourplanforthefuture?Andhowareyougoingtodothat?Pleasewritetoandtellmeaboutit.（一）1．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我們這一代人的想象力，不足以想象你們的未來！青春路上，你對未來職業(yè)的憧憬是什么？請你以“Iwanttobea/an...”為題寫一篇短文。須涵蓋以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容：1.Whatisyourdreamjob?2.Whereareyougoingtowork?3.Whichmotto(座右銘)encouragesyoumost?4.Whydoyoulikethisjob?5.Howwillyougetyourfuturedreamjob?6.....要點(diǎn)提示：1.80100詞。2.請你根據(jù)以上要求，結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況寫出你的觀點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。4.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰。Iwanttobea/an...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）2．假如學(xué)校本周要進(jìn)行英語演講比賽，主題為“MyDream”。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語演講稿向大家介紹你的夢想。提示：1.Whatdoyouwanttobe?2.Whydoyouwanttobea(n)...?3.Howareyougoingtobea(n)...?要求：80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。演講稿的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone!I’mhappyIcansharemydreamwithallofyouhere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）3．人人都有夢想，假設(shè)你是埃米，請以“MyDreamJob”為題寫一篇短文，暢想一下你的未來。內(nèi)容包括：1.你想做什么樣的工作？2.你喜歡這項(xiàng)工作的原因是什么？3.為這個(gè)工作你準(zhǔn)備了什么或應(yīng)該怎樣做好準(zhǔn)備？作文要求：1.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。MyDreamJob____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）4．夢想是一盞燈，給我們指引方向；夢想是一支筆，助我們描繪未來藍(lán)圖。假如你們學(xué)校英語俱樂部正在舉辦以“MyDream”為題的征文比賽，請根據(jù)以下提示，把你的夢想寫下來。寫作提示：1.What'syourdream?2.Whyisityourdream?3.Whatwillyoudotomakeyourdreametrue?寫作要求：1.語句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當(dāng)，書寫工整；詞左右，題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyDream____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）“有夢想，有機(jī)會(huì)，有奮斗，一切美好的東西都能夠創(chuàng)造出來?！边@是習(xí)主席對青年的青春寄語。夢想有大有小，每個(gè)人都有自己的夢想。假如你叫李平，最近和英國朋友John通過郵件談?wù)撊松鷫粝氲脑掝}，他想了解你的夢想是什么，你為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢想，你準(zhǔn)備怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想。請根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件。要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；2.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJohn,I’mgladtohearfromyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing1.（2023·湖北宜昌·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，你的英國好友Jack想了解你對未來人生的思考及行動(dòng)，請你給他寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：★你想成為什么樣的人；★你的理由；★你的具體行動(dòng)。郵件要求：★80詞經(jīng)右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；★文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。DearJack,Howiseverything?I’mwritingtotellyou________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua2.（2022·青?！そy(tǒng)考中考真題）當(dāng)今，中國正迅速發(fā)展，在各方面都取得了令人矚目的成就。請你以“ChinainTenYears”為題，暢想并描述十年后的祖國。要求：（1）內(nèi)容積極向上，完整連貫；（2）邏輯清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，書寫規(guī)范；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名和地名；（4）詞數(shù)：80—100（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。ChinainTenYearsNowadays,ourcountryisdevelopingfast.Ithasmadegreatachievementsinmanyfields.WhatwillChinabelikeintenyears?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2022·廣西百色·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李雷，是建華中學(xué)一名九年級學(xué)生。市里將舉行一年一度的中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，今年演講題目為“MyDream”。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語演講稿為此做準(zhǔn)備。提示：1.Whatdoyouwanttobe?2.Whydoyouwanttobea/an…?3.Howareyougoingtobea/an…?要求:1.需包含上述三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不能出現(xiàn)“李雷”和“建華中學(xué)”以外的人名，校名或地名。MyDreamHello,everyone!I’mgladtobeheretosharemydreamwithyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.（2022·江蘇淮安·統(tǒng)考中考真題）夢想引領(lǐng)人生，奮斗成就未來。“感動(dòng)中國”年度人物江夢南，幼年失聰，生活、求學(xué)之路充滿艱辛，但學(xué)醫(yī)救人一直是她的夢想，她通過讀唇語，學(xué)會(huì)“聽”和“說”，憑借刻苦學(xué)習(xí)、不懈努力，成為一名藥學(xué)博士。請以“夢想”為話題，寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容須包括以下所有要點(diǎn)：1.描述江夢南的成長經(jīng)歷（練習(xí)讀唇語，努力學(xué)習(xí)，克服困難，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想）；2.談?wù)勀愕膲粝耄ń處?志愿者……）、原因及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)。參考詞匯：讀唇語readlips注意：1.詞數(shù)80~100，已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。AmongirlJiangMengnanwaspresentedwithTouchingChinaAward.Shebecamedeafatanearlyage.However,shekeptfightingagainstthefate（命運(yùn)）.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.（2022·浙江臺(tái)州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）畢業(yè)之際，學(xué)校英文報(bào)將舉行以“Mydreamjob”為題的征文比賽。請你根據(jù)自己的理想，選擇下表中一個(gè)職業(yè)或自行確定另一個(gè)職業(yè)寫一篇英語短文，向校英文報(bào)投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)參考詞匯WhatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowupateacherascientistWhydoyouwanttobea(n)…?●begoodatmunicating●workwithchildren●beinterestedinscience●inventnewproductsHowareyougoingtodothat?●getagoodeducation●learnhowtoteachchildren●stu