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BASICWRITINGPRACTICEAIDS高三英語(yǔ):92設(shè)計(jì)制作1.Chinglish(漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ))2.Simplesentences(句式單一平鋪直敘)3.Nolinkingwords(無(wú)過(guò)渡語(yǔ))Commonmistakesinbasicalwriting

如何在寫(xiě)作中避免句式單一方法一.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力方法三.嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式Rewritethesentences.1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.

2.Iwillbegivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.Hewantstoimprovehis

English.Hestudieshard.方法一.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔Whentheyarrivedattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.IfIamgivenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.InordertoimprovehisEnglish,hestudieshard.方法一.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng)._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò).__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默.

Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.Hearing

HavingbeentoldinvitedTranslatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞)1,面對(duì)困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。2，引入市場(chǎng)后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1.Hedidn’trealizehisfoolishnessuntilhereturnedhome.Notuntil2.Wecansavetheearthbychangingthewaywelive.

Only

3.Heiscleverbuthedoesnotworkhard.

as/though4.Theclocktowerstandsontheothersideofthestreet.

OntheothersideofthestreetCompletethesentenceshereturnedhomedidherealizehisfoolishness.bychangingthewaywelivecanwesavetheearth.Clever

heis,hedoesnotworkhard.standstheclocktower.方法二.巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力TranslatethesentencesbyusingInvertedSentences(倒裝句)1.他從不說(shuō)關(guān)于他家庭的事.2.只有我們每個(gè)人都意識(shí)到水的重要性,我們才能生活得更好.3.只有用這種方式,我們才能有足夠的精力好好學(xué)習(xí).Neverdidhespeakabouthisownfamily.Onlywheneachofusrealizestheimportanceofwater,canweliveabetterlife.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.方法