2024屆高考英語：兩方觀點對比作文課件

高考英語作文－－正反觀點對比人們對于網(wǎng)上交友持不同的意見，請用英語寫一篇學生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們不同的觀點，并表達自己的觀點。贊成理由反對理由你的看法1.廣交朋友2.可自由表達思想3.利于外語學習1.浪費時間2.影響學習3.可能上當受騙注意：1、文章必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容

2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3、詞數(shù)為100左右參考詞匯：網(wǎng)絡(luò)朋友：onlinefriends

浪費時間:awasteoftime

上當受騙：becheatedDebatingsideAsideBDebatingSideA1.廣交朋友2.可自由表達思想3.利于外語學習

….SideB1.浪費時間2.影響學習3.可能上當受騙

……………..chairperson?????

連詞成句1.廣交朋友

Theycanmakemanyonlinefriends/friendsonline.2.可自由表達思想

Theycanexpresstheirfeelings/thoughtsfreely.3.利于外語學習

Itcandogoodtoforeignlanguagelearning.4.影響學習

Itcanhaveanegativeeffecton/affectyourstudy.5.浪費時間

It

isawasteoftime.6.可能上當受騙

Theycanbe/getcheated/takenin.Heading:

Recentlyourclassmateshaveaheateddicussionaboutwhether…/I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhether…/Shouldthehighschoolstudents…?(開篇引入議題）Thebody:

(總述）OpinionsaredividedbetweentheSs./Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions/hold

differentviews./

Onthewhole,therearetwodifferentopinionsonthequestion.(SideA）SomeSsbelievethat…/Someareinfavorof…(Firstly…Secondly…Atlast)/

(SideB)However/onthecontrary,othersarguethat…/otherspreferto…/holdtheviewthat(Firstly…Secondly…Atlast)/(中間分述觀點)Theending:Inmyopinion,/AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Ithink,/Personally,because…(結(jié)尾簡述個人看法)FirstofallFirstly,Tobeginwith,Inaddition,Besides,Moreover,What’smoreFinally,Inaword,Lastbutnotleast,SentencepatternsDemonstration

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Recentlyourclassmateshaveaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherstudentscanmakefriendsonline.

Differentpeopleholddifferentviews.somepeoplesayyes.Thereasonsareasfollows:Tobeginwith,theinternethelpsmakemanyfriends.Besides,chattingonline,studentscanexpresstheirfeelingsandopinionsmorefreely.Lastbutnotleast,theycangethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.However,Othersthinkstudentsshouldnot.

Theysaymakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.

It’smyopinionthatstudentsshouldplacetheirstudyandsafetyinthefirstplace.Asforfriendship,wecanreadily

finditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.[參考例文]

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Recentlyourclassmateshaveaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherstudentscanmakefriendsonline.

Somepeoplethinkitisofgreatusetomakeonlinefriends,whichwillgetyourlifemuchcolorful.Notonlycanitmakeachanceforyoutoexpressyourthoughtsfreely,butalsoitcandogoodtoyourforeignlanguagestudy.however,consideringstudents’surfingtheInternet,othersmaywasteprecioustimeandevenaffectthestudy.Theysayonlinefriendsoftencheatstudents.Inmyopinion,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesonmakingon-linefriends.IfwemakeonlinefriendsproperlythroughtheInternet,wecanbenefitfromit.Butwecan’tbeaddictedtoit,oritwilldoharmtous.

[例文評析]1.該文緊扣“網(wǎng)上交友”這個主題，主題突出、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹、三段分布簡明美觀。2.表達要點齊全,并合理的增加了細節(jié)。3.語言靈活多變，如陳述不同觀點時，分別用了不同的結(jié)構(gòu)。Somepeoplesayyes．Othersthinkstudentsshouldnot。4.語言有文采，正確運用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如beof+抽象n,定語從句，倒裝，固定短語，分詞作狀語。5.邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)詞語的運用，如notonly…,butalso…6.準確的副詞運用，如precious,even,properly1.使用較高級的詞匯2.使用較豐富的句式3.使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞書面表達技巧Tips一、審清題目，提煉要點；二、組詞造句，組句成篇；三、仔細檢查，認真修改;四書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。養(yǎng)成良好的習慣HomeworkWriteacompositionaboutsurfingtheInternet在最近的一次主題為中學生課余時間是否應(yīng)該上網(wǎng)的英語班會上，同學們