英語(yǔ)周記寫(xiě)作

WritingaDiaryRevision如何寫(xiě)英文日記日記是用來(lái)敘述一天生活中發(fā)生的最有趣或感受最深的一些事情。寫(xiě)英文日記要注意格式、時(shí)態(tài)和和人稱(chēng)的正確使用。英文日記的格式為：日期(Date),星期(Day)天氣(Weather)正文(Body)：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)]1.通常是在左上角寫(xiě)出當(dāng)天的日期和星期，在靠右的部分寫(xiě)上當(dāng)天的天氣情況。正文可有標(biāo)題，也可不要。要注意正確書(shū)寫(xiě)月份和星期的名稱(chēng)；天氣多用形容詞表示。首字母通常要大寫(xiě)。Days:Monday星期一Tuesday星期二Wednesday星期三Thursday星期四Friday星期五Saturday星期六Sunday星期日Months:1月----January(Jan.)2月----February(Feb.)3月----March(Mar.)4月----April(Apr.)5月----May6月----June(Jun.)7月----July(Jul.)8月----August(Aug.)9月----September(Sep.)10月----October(Oct.)11月----November(Nov.)12月----December(Dec.)晴---Fine;Sunny;Shining；雨---Rainy;Raining;雪---Snowy陰---Overcast霧---foggy多風(fēng)---Windy多云---Cloudy暴風(fēng)雨---Stormy;Thundering陣雨---Shower

Weather:2.正文：日記一般用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。使用第一人稱(chēng)。

經(jīng)過(guò)：按事情發(fā)生的先后順序來(lái)記述。所以常用atfirst,then,lateron,soon,atlast等單詞或詞組使整篇文章通順貫。

結(jié)尾：發(fā)表自己的感想或評(píng)論，可根據(jù)具體情況使用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)或?qū)?lái)時(shí)態(tài)。常用的單詞或詞組使整篇文章通順貫：Beginningoftheevent:first,firstly,inthebeginning…Courseoftheevent:then,lateron,after,meanwhile,atthesametime,what'smore,moreover…Ending:atlast,intheend,finally,inshort,inaword,asaresult…10月20日星期天，你和同學(xué)們到紅星農(nóng)場(chǎng)旅游。根據(jù)下面的圖表用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記。6：30：起床、乘車(chē)出發(fā)去紅星農(nóng)場(chǎng)、一路欣賞風(fēng)景、唱歌8：30：到達(dá)農(nóng)場(chǎng)、受到歡迎，參觀、植樹(shù)、了解自然13：00：野炊、乘車(chē)回家有點(diǎn)累，但是很開(kāi)心要求：用first、next、then和finally等連詞使日記連貫,可適當(dāng)加一些感受。writing[寫(xiě)作過(guò)程]1.審題確定格式、體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)等寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。2.列出提綱，確定開(kāi)頭句、擴(kuò)展句和總結(jié)句，選擇好適宜的句型。3.利用一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞或者過(guò)渡句把句子有機(jī)地連接起來(lái)，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。4.仔細(xì)檢查，適當(dāng)修改，保證句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)主謂一致。5.認(rèn)真謄寫(xiě)，卷面整潔。Step1:Form_____________________正文________________________________________________________________________________________October,20th.SundaySunny時(shí)態(tài)：____________人稱(chēng)：____________體裁：____________一般過(guò)去時(shí)第一人稱(chēng)記敘文Step2:Writedownthenecessarysimplesentenceswithyourpartners.

Somenecessarywordsandphrases:setoff/haveagoodtime/enjoythescenerygivesb.awarmwelcomeshowsb.aroundgetclosetonature/beonthewaybackDiscusstogetherTodaymyclassmatesandIwenttoHongxinFarmfortravel.Igotupat6:30Wesetoffbybus.Wehadagoodtimesingingandenjoyingthebeautifulsceneryoutsidethewindow.Wearrivedatthegateofthefarm.Thefarmerswaitedtogiveusawarmwelcome.Wewereshownaroundthebigfarm.Webegantoplanttrees.Itwasreallyagoodwaytogetclosetonatureandprotecttheenvironment.Ihadadeliciouspicnicwithmyclassmates.Wewereonthewayback.Althoughwewereallverytired,ourtravelwasreallyunforgettable.Step3:connectthesentenceswithconjunctionwordsandmakethearticlebetterwithyourpartnerOct.l0st,Sunday,

sunnyTodayIaswellasmyclassmateswenttoHongxinFarmfortravel.First,Igotupat6:30andwesetoffbybus.Onthebus,

wehadagoodtimesingingandenjoyingthebeautifulsceneryoutsidethewindow.Thentwohourslater,wearrivedatthegateofthefarm,wherethefarmerswerewaitingtogiveusawarmwelcome.

After

wewereshownaroundthebigfarm,webegantoplanttrees,which

wasreallyagoodwaytogetclosetonatureandprotecttheenvironmentatthesametime.Next,wehadapicnicanditwasgreatfuntoeatintheopenair.Thetimewentveryfast.

Finally,Itwastimeforustogoback.Althoughwewereallverytired,ourtravelwasreallyunforgettable..行文要連貫流暢語(yǔ)句要嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)要簡(jiǎn)明、清楚句型結(jié)構(gòu)要有變化語(yǔ)言使用適當(dāng)?shù)皿w牢記書(shū)面表達(dá)概要總結(jié)常用句型：外出活動(dòng)、欣賞美景Wewentoutforapicnicwithmyfriendsyesterday.Earlyinthemorning,wesetoffforthefarmforavisit.Ontheway,wehadagoodtimesingingandbeautifulscenery.Weenjoyingthewereshownaroundthefarm,wherewesawmanybeautifulplants.Themomentwegottothetopofthehill,wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Itwastimeforustogobackwhenthesunstartedtogodown.事故發(fā)生Unfortunatelyanaccidenthappenedtohim=Unfortunatelyhehadanaccident.IwaswalkingwhenImetwithanoldfriendofmine.HewassofrightenedthatIcoulddonothingFeelings:Althoughweweretired,wefeltveryhappy.Weenjoyedourselves.=Wehadfun.=Wehadagoodtime.Onthewayback,wewerelaughingandtalkingallthetime.Whatawonderfulweekendwehad!ThoughIwaslateforschool,I’mproudofwhatIdid.Itwananunforgettableexperienceforme.[常用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)]“啟”first,firstofall,firstly,inthebeginning,generallyspeaking,now,recently“承”second,secondly,also,then,meanwhile,still,atthesametime,what'smore,moreover,afterawhile,afterafewdays,forexample,infact,inotherwords,indeed,ofcourse“轉(zhuǎn)”anyway,afterall,but,nevertheless