Unit 7 Films九年級英語上冊單元寫作深度指導（牛津譯林版）

Unit7Films單元寫作指導與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度介紹自己最喜歡的電影/明星電影/明星一、話題分析本單元的話題是“電影及電影明星”，這個話題貼近學生生活，學生比較感興趣。本單元寫作內(nèi)容主要涉及介紹自己喜愛的電影明星、電影等。教學目標要求學生能根據(jù)相關(guān)信息提示簡單地介紹自己或他人電影及演員。在撰寫對介紹自己喜歡的電影時，作文內(nèi)容應包括電影及其簡介、喜愛的理由、觀后感等內(nèi)容。作文內(nèi)容是描寫喜愛的明星的是狗，應描寫明星的簡介、演員自身性格、個人品質(zhì)、演藝事業(yè)、做出的貢獻以及對筆者的影響等內(nèi)容。二、教學目標1.能夠閱讀關(guān)于影星成龍的文章，了解有關(guān)成龍的個人信息、演藝生涯、慈善項目以及社會輿論等相關(guān)信息。2.通過討論分析，范文梳理和概括介紹影星的人物傳記的結(jié)構(gòu)。3.正確使用所學的結(jié)構(gòu)和表達來寫一篇自己最喜愛的影星的個人信息、演繹生涯、慈善項目以及社會輿論。4.學習自己偶像的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。（以思維導圖的形式呈現(xiàn)）Part1:(introduction)MyfilmPart1:(introduction)Myfilm/staris,...isfamousallovertheworld.Part2:(Mainbody)Part2:(Mainbody)development,charityprojects,andpublicopinionetc).MyfavoriteMyfavoritefilmorstarPart3:(Conclusion)ThefeelingafterwatchingthemoviePart3:(Conclusion)Thefeelingafterwatchingthemovie/yourviewsonthestars.【詞匯積累】詞匯Considern.認為考慮二、短語1.Personaldetails個人信息2.dateofbirth出生日期3.setup建立4.sofor到目前為止5.consideras把...看作...6.personaldetails個人細節(jié) 7.Chinesekungfusuperstar中國功夫超級巨星 8.actingcareer演藝生涯 9.thePoliceStoryseries警察故事系列（電影） 10.farmorethan...遠遠不止... 11.setup成立三、必備句型1.Sofarhehasactedinnearlyonehundredfilmsandhaswonmanyawards.sfilmsarespecialbecausetheyjoinhumorandexcitingactiontogether.3.JackieChenisconsideredbymanypeopleasasuperstarnotonlyforhissuccessinactionfilmsbutalsoforhiseffortsincharitywork.4....successfullyjoinhumourandexcitingactiontogether四、名人名言(一）足球明星名言1.It'sdisappointedtomeasyouknowwhatkindofWorldCupmeansinfootballworld.——FerdiNande,formercapitalofEnglandnationalteam.無緣世界杯讓我失望，世界杯在足壇有什么意義？你懂的?！M迪?南德,前英格蘭國家隊隊長2.Weneedtogoonfightheard,weneedtoworkhardforeachother.——ClintDempsey,capitalofUSAnationalteam.要繼續(xù)努力，戰(zhàn)斗要成為彼此。要為彼此而努力工作?！肆痔?鄧普西,美國國家隊首席It'snotaboutmakingtheamazingsaves,it'sthelittlethingsandsmallthingsthatmadegreatgatekeepersgreat.——TimHoward,goalkeeperofUSAnationalteam.北大門將并不是靠神奇的撲救成就，而是因為注重小事小細節(jié)才能成功?！倌?霍華德，美國國家隊國門。4.我希望有朝一日它也能成為NBA的一個標志，一段傳奇，這或許是一個遙不可及的夢想，但我堅信自己有為實現(xiàn)這個夢想而不懈奮斗的動力?！湹螴hopeonedayitcanalsobeeasymboloftheNBA,alegend.Thismaybeanunattainabledream,butIfirmlybelievethatIhavethemotivationtoworktirelesslytoachievethisdream——McGrady5.I'vemissedmorethanninethousandshotsinmycareer.I'velostalmostthreehundredGames.Twentysixtimes,I'vebeentrustedoftotakethegamewinningshotandmissed.I'vefailedoverandoverandoveragaininmylife.AndthatiswhyIsucceed.——MichaelJordan我的職業(yè)生涯中，我已經(jīng)錯過了9000次投籃的機會，300次輸?shù)袅吮荣?，?6次我被寄希望于拿下比賽勝利的最后一球，但是我失敗了，我失敗了一次又一次，也一次又一次重新開始，這就是我為什么取得成功。——邁克?爾喬丹6.Winnersneverquitandquittersneverwin.勝利者從不中途放棄，而中途放棄的人從未取得勝利?！乃孤?巴迪杯7.Findinggoodplayersiseasy.Gettingthemtoplayasateamisanotherstory.找到一個好的球員很容易，但是讓他們擁有團隊意識卻很難?！ㄎ魇返じ駹?.Everystrikebringsmeclosertothenexthomerun.每一次撞擊都讓我離下一次本壘打更近一步?！捅?魯斯9.Sportsdonotbuildcharacter.theyrevealit.體育不能建立人格，但能展示出你的人格。——海伍德?布魯恩10.Fansdon'tboonobodies.粉絲不會像無名之輩喝彩?！准?杰克遜世界名人名言1.Theyareindeedstrongerthanmenow,butIbelievetheywillbedefeatedinthenearfuture——YaoMing現(xiàn)在他們確實比我強，但我相信在不久的將來會打敗他們。——姚明2.我們這支球隊就是為了要奪取總冠軍而存在的。——韋德Ourteamexiststowinthechampionship——Wade3.Don'tgiveupeasily.Onceyougiveup,thegameisover——CoachAnxi不要輕言放棄，一旦放棄了，比賽就結(jié)束了?！参鹘叹?.Iamnottall,evenveryshort,andIdonothavethebestathleticqualities,butIwillplayhardtojumpatbasketballbecauseIloveit——ChuckHayes我不高大，甚至很矮，也沒有最好的運動素質(zhì)，但我會玩命地撲向籃球，因為我愛籃球?！榭恕ずＲ?.Noonewillgiveyoueverything.Toachieveyourgoal,youmustgive,tears,blood,andsweat——Garnet沒有人會給你一切，你要達到目的，就得必須付出，淚、血、汗這三樣東西?！觾?nèi)特電影經(jīng)典名句1.Nomatterhowlongnight,thearrivalofdaylightassociation.黑夜無論怎樣悠長白晝，總會到來。ordscannotexpresstruelove,loyaltybehavioristhebestexplanation.真正的愛情是不能用言語表達的,行為才是忠心的最好說明。oucangetthewholeworldwithlove.,youcanalsousehatetolosethewholeworld.你可以用愛得到全世界，你也可以用恨失去全世界。nlytwothingsareinfinite:theuniverseandhumanstupidity,andIamnotsureabouttheformer.—Evereastern只有兩件事情是永恒的:宇宙和人類的愚蠢，對于前者我并不是太了解?！獝垡蛩固?.Evilisunspectacularandalwayshuman,andsharesourbed...andeatsourtable.惡魔通常只是凡人，并且毫不起眼，他們與我們同床，與我們同桌共餐。6.Thefartherbackwardyoucanlook,thefatherforwardYouwillsee.你回首看的越遠，你向前也會看的越遠。7.Indelaythereliesnoplenty,thencankissme,sweetandtwenty,youth'sastuffthatwearenotendure.千年蹉跎，來日無多。20隸書請來吻我，衰草枯，楊青春易過。8.Neverinterruptyourenemywhenheismakingamistake。當你的敵人犯錯的時候，千萬不要去打擾他，拿破侖。thewords"Iloveyou"weresaidbyyouforthefirsttime,myworlellmeyouaremine,I'llbeyoursthroughalltheyears,tilltheendofthetime.第一次聽到你對我說我愛你，我的世界一瞬間鮮花綻放。請告訴我，你是我的歲歲年年，我都屬于你，永遠永遠。10.Trueloveshouldbebeyondthelengthoflife,thesoulofwidthofthedeepofthesoul.真正的愛應該超越生命的長度，心靈的寬度，靈魂的深度。五、通用開頭1.JayChou,borninTaiwan,ismyfavoritesinger.Hehaswrittenmanypopularsongsandisdeeplylovedbyages.2.Therearemanyexcellentstarsinvariousfieldsathomeandabroad.MyfavoritestarisZhouXuheisanoutstandingactress.3.MyfavoriteOlympicstarLinDanlinisaverygoodsportsman.BeforeIlikehimverymuch.Ibegantopayattentiontohim.Heworksveryseriouslyandhaveagoodpersonality.4.Jackiechanisoneofthegreatestkungfusuperstarsintheworld.Heisalsofamousasasingerandadirector.5.MyfavouritefilmstarisJetLi.Heisanactor,akungfusuperstarandahumanitarian.六、通用中間段1.NowshehasbeeoneoftheiconicactressesinChina.Besides,sheadvocateherselfinphilanthropyandenvironmentalprotection.ZhouXuncallsoneveryonetolivealowcarbonlifetokeepagreenandbeautifulplanet.2.JackieChenwasborninHongKongin1954.Atthattime,hedreamedofenteringthefilmindustrywhenhewasyoung.ThefilmDrunkenMasterin1978markedthebeginningofhissuccessfulcareer.Inthefilm,hesuccessfullyJoinedhumourandexcitingactiontogether.Hisachievementarefarmorethanakungfusuperstar.Hehasdevotedmanyyearstocharitywork.3.ThisisthethirdtimethatZhanghaswonaprizeattheVeniceFilmFestival.HisRaisedtheredlanternwonthesilverLionPrizein1991.Oneyearlater,hewontheGoldenLionPriceforthefilmThestoryofQiujiu.4.Whenshewas24yearsold,shemadeherfirstappearancesinafilm.ThismarkedthebeginningofhersuccessfulCareer.By2012,shehadplayedtheleadrolesinovertenfilms.ShehadalsowhenaOscarforBestActress.5.JetLiwasborninBeijingon26April1963.Between1975and1979,hewonthenationalkungfunchampionship.Heenteredthefilmindustryin1980.In1982thefilmShaolinTemplemadehimfamous.Inthe1990s,heactedinmanyHongKongfilms,includingtheHuangFeihongseries,whichareverysuccessful.In1997hewenttoHollywoodandplayedmajorrolesinmanyfilms.Nowhehasbeenworldfamousandhaswonsomeawards.JetLi'sachievementswentbeyondthefilmindustry.HesetupOneFoundationin2007.HehasspentlotsoftimedoingcharityworkandhelpedpeoplenotonlyinChinabutalsoinmanyothercountries.七、通用結(jié)尾1.Ilikeherbecauseofherexcellentperformingaswellasherpersonalityandpersonality.2.Ithinkheissuchagreatpersonthathewillalwaysberemembered.3.IthinkSharonisnotonlyatalentedandexperiencedactressbutalsoagreathumanitarian.Ibelieveheractingskillswillbeevenbetterinthefuture.4.JackieChanisconsideredbymanypeopleasasuperstar,notonlyforhissuccessinactionfilmsbutalsoforhiseffortsincharitywork.5.JetLiisconsideredbymanypeopleasasuperstar,notonlyforhissuccessinactionfilmsbutalsoforhiseffortsincharitywork.【寫作模板】模板①IreallylikeBruceLee.Heisoneofmyfavoritemoviestars.BruceLeeisahighlycharismaticandtalentedmartialartsstar.HewasborninHongKongandisknownforhismartialartsandsuperbperformanceskills.BruceLee'sskillsandmartialartsareunparalleledintheworld.Hedemonstratedastonishingfightingskillsandunparalleledspeedinthefilm,whichisbreathtaking.Heisalsolovedforhismartialartsphilosophy,andhisadvocacyfortheconceptoffreebathasinfluencedtheentirefilmindustry.BruceLeenotonlyachievedgreatsuccessinthefilmindustry,butalsobecameaculturalidol.Hisspiritandvalueshavealwaysinspiredpeopletopursuetheirdreamsandchallengedifficulties.Histalentandpersistencehaveinspiredmetopursuemydreams.IwillalwayssupportandappreciateBruceLee'sworks,andhewillalwaysbemyfavoritemoviestarinmyheart.模板②Whoisyourfavouriteperson?IlikeZhangYiningbest.Sheisafamouspingpongplayer.NowIwilltellyousomethingabouther.ZhangYiningwasbornonOctober5,1982inBeijing.Whenshewas6,shebegantoplaypingpong.In1991,shejoinedtheprovincialtabletennisteam.In1993,sheenteredthenationalteam.Shealwaysworkedhard,andshenevergaveup.Soatthe2004OlympicGamesinAthens,shewonthegoldmedalofWomen'sSingles.ItwasthehundredthgoldmedalthatChinagotattheOlympicGames.Beforethis,sheandWangNanwonagoldmedaltogether.ShewasthethirdplayerwhoobtainedtwogoldmedalsatthesameOlympicsinpingpong.Beforeher,onlyDengYapingandWangNancoulddothat.SoIthinksheisverygreat.Weareallproudofher.Weshouldlearnfromher.Don'tyouthinkso?寫作要求:你最喜歡哪個電影明星呢?寫一篇文章,介紹你最喜愛的影星?！緷M分作文】MyfavouritefilmstarisMaggieCheung.Sheisfamousallovertheworld.MaggieCheungwasborninHongKongon20September1964.ShestudiedatSt.Paul'sConventSchool.Atfirst,MaggieCheungworkedasamodelinHongKong.Latershebecameanactress.Her1984filmPrinceCharmingmadeherfamousinHongKong.ShewontheBestActressAwardatthe42ndBerlinInternationalFilmFestivalforher1992filmCentreStage.Thenher2004filmCleanmadehermorepopularallovertheworld.ShewontheBestActressAwardatthe57thCannesFilmFestivalforthisfilm.ShewasthefirstAsianactresstowinaprizeatthisfamousFrenchfilmfestival.Sofar,MaggieCheunghasactedinmorethan80filmsandhaswonmanyawards.MaggieCheungisconsideredinternationallyasabeautifulandtalentedactress.【解題思路】記敘文，注意文章的時態(tài)和人稱分別是過去式和第三人稱。作文從MaggieCheung的基本信息和職業(yè)生涯，包括她的出生日期、出生地點、教育背景、職業(yè)生涯等，以及她在電影界的成就和影響進行介紹，最后表明自己的觀點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，點名主題，我喜歡的明星是MaggieCheung，她在全世界都很出名。第二步，介紹MaggieCheung的出生日期、出生地點、教育背景、職業(yè)生涯等。進一步描寫她的電影作品和所獲獎項等，例如她是如何成為一名著名的女演員的等。第三步，總結(jié)自己的觀點。【亮點詞匯】1.prize：獎品，獎項2.talented：有才華的，有天賦的3.winaprize獲獎4.consider...as…認為......是......【高分句型】Atfirst，MaggieCheungworkedasamodelinHongKong.ShewasthefirstAsianactresstowinaprizeatthisfamousFrenchfilmfestival.MaggieCheungisconsideredinternationallyasabeautifulandtalentedactress.完成句子Choosetheproperwordsorexpressionsandfillintheblankswiththecorrectforms.stuntman,consider,setup,farmorethanthat,winanawardstuntman,consider,setup,farmorethanthat,winanaward(1)Themanjumpedintotheriverandsavedtwochildren,sohewas_________asahero.(2)Withhisgreatefforts,theman__________hisownpanyfinally.(3)HeisoneofthemostfamousactorsinChinawhooftenwinanaward___________.(4)The_________usuallyactatthedangerousscenes.Theirjobishard.(5)Itisreportedthat50peoplediedintheexplosion(爆炸)butinfact,thenumberis_________.(1)【答案】consider【詳解】句意:那個人跳進河里救了兩個孩子，所以他被認為是英雄。(2)【答案】setup【詳解】句意:在他的巨大努力下，這個人終于成立了自己的公司。setup建立;設立,故填setup。(3)【答案】winanaward【詳解】句意:他是中國最著名的演員之一，經(jīng)常獲獎。winanaward獲獎,故填winanaward。(4)【答案】stuntman【詳解】句意:特技演員通常在危險的場景中表演。他們的工作很辛苦。stuntman特技演員,故填stuntman。(5)【答案】farmorethanthat【詳解】句意:據(jù)報道，有50人在爆炸中死亡，但事實上，這個數(shù)字遠遠不止于此。farmorethanthat遠遠不止于此,故填farmorethanthat。二、翻譯PutthefollowingintoEnglish.(1)他不僅在香港有朋友，在美國也有朋友。Hehasfriends______________________________________________________________.(2)由于那部電視劇，他被一些人認為是最佳男演員。Heis_____________________________________________________________________.(3)Read一家正在考慮搬去歐洲。TheReads_________________________________________________________________.(4)《尖峰時刻》系列電影令成龍在好萊塢大受歡迎。TheRushHour_____________________________________________________________.(5)李連杰是一位中國功夫巨星，但是他的成就還遠遠不止這個。JetLi_____________________________________________________________________.(1)【答案】notonlyinHongKong,butalsointheUnitedStates.【詳解】notonly...butalso...不僅……而且【答案】consideredthebestactorbysomepeopleduetothatTVplay.【詳解】consideredby被認為.......?！敬鸢浮縏heReadfamilyisconsideringmovingtoEurope.【詳解】considervt.考慮considersth./doingsth.(4)【答案】seriesofmoviesmadeJackieChanverypopularinHollywood.【詳解】seriesof一系列；made...verypopular讓......很受歡迎(5)【答案】isaChinesekungfusuperstar,buthisachievementsfarmorethanthat.【詳解】Chinesekungfusuperstar中國功夫超級巨星farmorethan...遠遠不止...（一）以“Myfavouritedirector——ZhangYimou”為題。提示：1.Birthday:1951年11月14日;Birthplace:陜西西安。1978年進入北京電影學院學習。外貌。2.Films:《一個都不能少》（NotOneLess）(56屆威尼斯電影節(jié)“最佳影片金獅獎”)是一部令他自己最滿意的影片；《大紅燈籠高高掛》(RaisetheRedLantern)(1991年銀獅獎)；《秋菊打官司》（TheStoryofQiuju）(1992年金獅獎)；參考詞匯：theGoldenLionPrizeforBestMovie;VeniceFilmFestival;BerlinInternationalMovieFestival;satisfyingfilm(滿意的電影)；theSilverLionPrize;theGoldenBearPrize___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文】Myfavouritedirector——ZhangYimouAChinesefilmdirectedbyZhangYimouwhowasbornonNovember14,1951inXi’anShanxiProvince,wontheGoldenLionPrizeforthebestmovieatthe56thVeniceFilmFestival.Zhangsaiditwasthemostsatisfyingfilmhehaseverdirected.ThisisthethirdtimethatZhanghaswonaprizeattheVeniceFilmFestival.HisRaisedtheRedLanternwontheSilverLionPrizein1991.Oneyearlater,hewontheGoldenLionPrizeforthefilmTheStoryofQiuju.Zhanghaswonotherprizesatinternationalfilmfestival.Forexample,hewasawardedtheGoldenBearPrizeforhisfilmRedSorghumatthe38thBerlinInternationalMovieFestivalin1988.【解題思路】本文屬于材料作文，介紹張藝謀以及他的電影。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【寫作步驟】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：第一步，張藝謀個人簡介和獲獎項目。第二步，獲獎紀錄。第三步，張還獲得了國際電影節(jié)的其他獎項?！玖咙c詞匯】1.directedby2.satisfying3.awarded...for...【高分句型】運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如itwasthemostsatisfiedfilmhehaseverdirected,thisisthethirdtimethat,later,award以及who引導的定語從句。（二）請你根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)在100個左右。要點:1.成龍(JackieChan)是世界上最偉大的功夫巨星之一。作為歌手和導演也很有名。2.1954年出生于香港，自小就夢想進入電影業(yè)。3.1978年的電影《醉拳》(DrunkenMaster)標志著他成功生涯的開始，片中他成功地將幽默和激動人心的動作結(jié)合在一起。4.他的成就遠不僅限于功夫巨星。他致力于慈善工作很多年。5.我認為……注意:1.第5點必須用1~2句話作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。2.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文】JackieChanisoneofthegreatestKungFusuperstarsintheworld.Heisalsofamousasasingerandadirector.JackieChanwasborninHongKongin1954.Atthattime,hedreamtofenteringthefilmindustrywhenhewasyoung.ThefilmDrunkenMasterin1978markedthebeginningofhissuccessfulcareer.Inthefilm,hesuccessfullyjoinedhumourandexcitingactiontogether.HisachievementsarefarmorethanaKungFusuperstar.Hehasdevotedmanyyearstocharitywork.Ithinkheissuchagreatpersonthathewillalwaysberemembered.【解題思路】這題是要點作文,所給材料比較詳細。我們可以根據(jù)要點內(nèi)容進行翻譯,適當發(fā)揮。結(jié)合所給材料可知本文主要為一般過去及現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配。主語為電影明星成龍，是第三人稱單數(shù)，注意主謂一致問題。表述時應注意全面,盡量將每個要點包括。對于不會用的句型應該注意變換說法,千萬不能翻譯成漢語式的英語?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步:介紹成龍是世界上最偉大的功夫巨星之一。第二步:介紹他的職業(yè)，出生年月，事業(yè)的開始的時間。事業(yè)發(fā)展等內(nèi)容。第三步:表達自己的觀點?！玖咙c詞匯】beborn、actor,thefilmindustry,markthebeginningofhissuccessfulcareer，devotedmanyyearstocharitywork等?！靖叻志湫汀縜ckieChanisoneofthegreatestKungFusuperstarsintheworld.2.Atthattime,hedreamtofenteringthefilmindustrywhenhewasyoung.3.ThefilmDrunkenMasterin1978markedthebeginningofhissuccessfulcareer.（三）假如你是張明，是個中學生，喜歡看電影，特別是動作片。請根據(jù)要點給你的筆友Steven寫一封信，開頭已給出，不少于80詞。1.你很喜歡看電影，特別是……2.你最喜歡的影星是李連杰(JetLi)，他1963年出生在北京，他是最著名的演員之一，他把他的很多時間奉獻給了慈善事業(yè)。3.你平時忙于功課，通常是在周末看電影。4.父母不允許你看太多的電影（原因自擬），但你有你自己的觀點（觀點自擬）。DearSteven,MynameisZhangMing,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,ZhangMing【滿分作文】DearSteven,MynameisZhangMing.Ilikeseeingfilms,especiallyactionfilms.MyfavouritefilmstarisJackieChan.Heisoneofthegreatestactors.Hedevotedmuchofhistimetocharity.Iambusywithmyschoolworkonweekdays.Iusuallyseefilmsatweekends.Butmyparentsdon’tallowmetoseefilms.Theythinkseeingfilmstoomuchisbadformyeyesandbody.TheythinkthatIamnotahardworkingboy.ButIdon’tagreewiththem.Ithinkweshouldseesomefilmstorelaxourselvesatweekends.Thenwecanstudybetter.Mydearfriend,what’syouropinion?Canyoutellme?BestwishesZhangMing【解題思路】這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，主語為第一人稱。要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！窘忸}步驟】第一步：打招呼，介紹自己姓名，喜歡看的電影，尤其是動作片。第二步：我最喜歡的電影明星是成龍。簡略介紹他的情況。第三步：我通常在周末看電影。但是我父母不允許我看電影的原因，我認為的理由。第四步：征求對方的意見?！靖叻衷~匯】bebusywith，toomuch【高分句型】1.Hedevotedmuchofhistimetocharity.2.Theythinkseeingfilmstoomuchisbadformyeyesandbody.3.Ithinkweshouldseesomefilmstorelaxourselvesatweekends.(四)電子郵件假如你是王紅，在今天的班會上，同學們討論了“我最喜愛的電影”，并針對在電影院里，如何做一個文明的(wellmannered)中學生交流了想法。你的班主任李老師對班會的內(nèi)容很感興趣，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給李老師寫一封電子郵件。寫作要點：所有同學都參加了今天的班會。同學們最喜愛的電影：（1）劉平：喜劇片（2）周雷：功夫片說一說在電影院里，如何做一個文明的(wellmannered)中學生。三、寫作要求：不得使用真實的姓名和校名；可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫；字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰；至少80詞。DearMr.Li,Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,WangHong【滿分作文】DearMr.Li,Howiseverythinggoing?Nowletmeintroducetheclassmeetingoftodaytoyou.Allthestudentstookpartintheclassmeeting.Thetopicwediscussedwas“Myfavoritemovie”.LiuPinglikeswatchingediesbecausetheymakehimfeelrelaxed.ZhouLeilikeskungfumoviesbecausehethinksthattheyareveryexciting.Wealsoexchangedtheideasabouthowtobeawellmanneredmiddleschoolstudentinthecinema.Ithinkweshouldfollowtherulesinthecinema.Peoplecan'ttalkloudlyortalkonthephonewhilewatchingamovie.Weshouldkeepthecinemacleanaswell.Theaboveareallabouttheclassmeeting.Bestwishes!Yours,WangHong【解題思路】①題材:本文是一封電子郵件;②時態(tài):以“一般過去時“和“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主;③提示:寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏要點中所提及的班會內(nèi)容一所有同學參加了班會、同學們喜歡的電影及如何在電影院里做一個文明的中學生,可適當添加細節(jié),完善郵件內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步,直接表明郵件主題。在簡單的問候后，直接表明郵件主題為“介紹今天班會內(nèi)容"。第二步,具體闡述班會內(nèi)容。就“參加班會的人員”，“班會的討論主題及結(jié)果"，“在電影院里,如何做一個文明的中學生的建議”作出詳細說明。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達美好祝愿。【亮點詞匯】①takepartin參加②makesb.feel+形容詞使某人感到....③aswell也【高分句型】①ZhouLeilikeskungfumoviesbecausehethinksthattheyareveryexciting.(because引導原因狀語從句，及that引導賓語從句)②Wealsoexchangedtheideasabouthowtobeawellmanneredmiddleschoolstudentinthecinema.(“疑問詞+todosth."作賓語)（五）第33屆中國電影金雞獎于11月25日在廈門舉行，為期三天，吸引了很多粉絲的注意力。假如你是一名初三學生，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文。1.周冬雨是你最喜歡的女演員之一，因在電影《少年的你》（BetterDays）中的角色而獲得最佳女演員獎。2.你打算在即將到來的寒假里再欣賞一些紀錄片，因為……（12點）3.擔心由于作業(yè)太多，沒有太多時間看電影，打算……（12點）要求：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：90左右；4.不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。The33rdChinaFilmGoldenRoosterAwardstookplaceonNovember25inXiamen.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分作文】The33rdChinaFilmGoldenRoosterAwardstookplaceonNovember25inXiamen.ZhouDongyu,oneofmyfavoriteactresses,wonthebestactressawardforherroleinthefilmBetterDays.Wintervacationising.I'mgoingtousemysparetimetowatchsomedocumentariestobroadenmyhorizonsandmakemywintervacationlifemoremeaningful.Butbecauseoftoomuchhomework,Idon'thaveenoughtimetowatchmovies.I'mgoingtousemytimereasonablytosolvethisproblem.Iwanttomakeascheduleandstrictlyimplementit.IhopeIcanhaveameaningfulholiday.【解題思路】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹周冬雨獲獎、自己的假期計劃以及擔心。注意要點要齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)綜合使用一般過去時、一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。在介紹周冬雨獲獎時用一般過去時，客觀事實時用一般現(xiàn)在時，在介紹假期計劃時用一般將來時。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。【寫作步驟】第一步:介紹:首先，需要簡單介紹下這個獎項以及獲獎者的情況。第二步:描述:描述一下你最喜歡的演員周冬雨獲得最佳女主角獎的情況，包括她在哪部電影中的表現(xiàn)贏得了獎項。第三步:計劃:表示在假期期間想要做的事情，比如看紀錄片來豐富自己的視野。問題：提出因為作業(yè)太多，沒有足夠的時間看電影的問題。解決：提出制定合理的時間安排表來解決這個問題，并嚴格執(zhí)行?？偨Y(jié)：希望自己能有一個有意義的假期?！玖咙c詞匯】1.broadenmyhorizons：開闊視野2.makemywintervacationlifemoremeaningful：讓我的寒假生活更有意義3.usemytimereasonably：合理利用時間4.strictlyimplementit：嚴格執(zhí)行5.ameaningfulholiday：一個有意義的假期【高分句型】1.ZhouDongyu,oneofmyfavoriteactresses,wonthebestactressawardforherroleinthefilm"BetterDays."2.I'mgoingtousemysparetimetowatchsomedocumentariestobroadenmyhorizonsandmakemywintervacationlifemoremeaningful.3.Butbecauseoftoomuchhomework,Idon'thaveenoughtimetowatchmovies.（一）（2023·山東濰坊·統(tǒng)考中考真題）TeensAroundtheWorld是一個國際青少年交流網(wǎng)站，近日有人發(fā)了一個關(guān)于電影的帖子。假設你是李華，請閱讀原帖后，結(jié)合自己的觀影經(jīng)歷、用英語跟帖。注意：1.電影名字可用漢語拼音；2.禁止抄襲本試卷中所有語篇內(nèi)容；3.不要出現(xiàn)考生本人信息；4.80詞左右。TeensAroundtheWorldSubject:moviesHey,guys!Wehaveseenmanymovies.Goodmoviescanteachussomethingandmakeuslaughorcry.Whichmoviedoyoulike?Whatisitabout?Andwhydoyoulikeit?Lookingforwardtoyourreplies.Eric,Canada____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua,China【滿分作文】TheLionKingismyfavoritemovie.IttellsthestoryofSimba,ayounglionprincewhooverescountlesschallengestoreclaimhisrightfulplaceaskingofthePrideLands.Themovieshowsthecircleoflife,friendshipandcourage.IamfondofTheLionKingbecauseitteachesthatonlyafriendinneedisafriendindeedandonlythroughp