廣東基礎寫作主題呈現(xiàn)幾種方式

基礎寫作素材信息的呈現(xiàn)幾種方式主題的呈現(xiàn)方式介詞有:about,on,asto,concerning,regarding,withrespectto,withthetheme/topicof等。定語從句有:whosetopic/themeis...或thetopic/themeofwhichis...【例1】Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson/about/concerning/regarding“Whoisyouridol”.

【練習】Lastweekend,IhadaninterviewwithProfessorWang,aneye-doctor,（我國中小學生近視問題）________________________________________concerningtheissueofshort-sightednessoftheschoolchildreninChina.觀點的呈現(xiàn)方式短語有:accordingtosb.(根據(jù)某人的看法,較多用第三人稱),inone’sview/opinion(在某人看來),asforsb.(在某人看來)等。句型有:sb.believes/thinks...,sb.toldusthat...,sb.pointedoutthat...,Itisone’sbeliefthat...

等。【例1】Asformyself,ThomasEdisonismyidolbecausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.【例2】AccordingtoProfessorWang,slightlymorethanhalfoftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,rankingthefirstintheworld.比例的呈現(xiàn)方式1.百分比“百分之幾”可用以下方式表達,如70%ofthe...(注意:最易漏用of)2.分數(shù)分子是基數(shù)詞,分母是序數(shù)詞。如1/4:onefourth;2/3:two-thirds;7/8:seven-eighths3.其他比例形式1/2(50%)/halfofthe...

1/4(25%)/aquarterof3/4(75%)/threequartersof五分之三：threeoutoffive∕threeineveryfive排序的呈現(xiàn)方式短語有:rank/come/be+(the+)序數(shù)詞;bethe+形容詞最高級+范圍;be+in+序數(shù)詞+place【例1】Asthedatashows,“parents”ranksthesecondforthegirls,butthelastfortheboys.【練習】AccordingtoProfessorWang,slightlymorethan50%oftheschoolchildreninourcountryareshort-sighted,（排世界第一）__________________________________________.ranking/whichranksthefirstintheworld建議的呈現(xiàn)方式短語:advisesb.todosth.

從句:(1)sb.suggeststhat...(2)sb.givessb.asuggestionthat...

(3)Itissuggestedthat...(4)sb.givesb.someadviceon...(5)Itishighlyadvisablethat...

【例1】Hesuggestedthatschoolchildrenavoidoveruseoftheireyesanddomoreoutdooractivities.

【練習】上句改寫同義句1：

改寫同義句2

：

Hegaveusasuggestionthatschoolchildrenshouldavoidoverusingtheireyesandtakemoreoutdooractivities.Schoolchildrenareadvisednottooverusetheireyesbuttotakemoreoutdooractivities.

提示的呈現(xiàn)方式sb.reminds...that.../sb.reminds...ofsth.

某人提醒……(注意)某事sb.reminds...(not)todosth.某人提醒……做/不要做某事【例】Heparticularlyremindedusthathowtoholdapenisalsorelatedtoshort-sightedness.【練習】改寫同義句：

Heparticularlyremindedusoftherelationbetweenthewayofholdingpensandshort-sightedness.目的的呈現(xiàn)方式1.用謂語表達:aim/intendtodosth.,beaimedat2.用狀語表達:inorderto...

為了……;withthepurposeofdoingsth.帶著……的目的,為了……3.用從句表達:sothat.../inorderthat...

為了/以便;inthehopethat...懷著……的希望4.用不定式作表語表達:Thepurpose/aimofdoingsth.istodo...做某事的目的是……【例】Thisdecision,whichaimstomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-free,willcomeintoeffectfromthefirstdayof2011./【練習】改寫同義句：Thisdecision,aimingtomakeallindoorpublicplacessmoke-free,willbecarriedoutfromJanuary1,2011.原因的呈現(xiàn)方式短語:dueto,owingto,thanksto,becauseof,asaresultof,onaccountof,forthereasonthat+從句,with的復合結構從句:because...,as...,since...,so...that...

句式:Thereasonfor+名詞/Why+從句...isthat...

【例1】Asformyself,ThomasEdisonismyidolbecausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.【例2】Healsopointedoutthatthecausesforshort-sightedness（原因很復雜，沒有哪一種藥物能夠治愈近視）_______________________________________aresocomplicatedthatnomedicinecancureshort-sightedness.“與……有關”的呈現(xiàn)方式beconnectedwith,berelatedto,havesomethingtodowith,berelativeto,berelevantto,bein(with)relationto,beassociatedwith,belinkedto,beboundupwith【例】Heparticularlyremindedusthathowtoholdapenisalsorelatedtoshort-sightedness.【練習】改寫同義句：Heparticularlyremindedusoftherelationbetweenthewayofholdingpensandshort-sightedness.對比的呈現(xiàn)方式1.while2.in/bycomparisonwith3.comparedwith/to...【例】Comparedwithballgamesandotherpopularsports,joggingismoreeffectiveandlesstime-consuming.同位語的呈現(xiàn)方式一個名詞(或其他形式)對另一個名詞或代詞進行修飾、限定或說明,這個名詞(或其他形式)就是同位語。【例1】MrSmith,ournewteacher,isveryfriendlytous.(ournewteacher是主語MrSmith的同位語,指同一人。)【例2】Shooting,ameansofsurvivaloriginally,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.(ameansofsurvivaloriginally作shooting的同位語)總結：主題的呈現(xiàn)方式,觀點的呈現(xiàn)方式,同位語的呈現(xiàn)方式,對比的呈現(xiàn)方式“與……有關”的呈現(xiàn)方式,原因的呈現(xiàn)方式,目的的呈現(xiàn)方式,提示的呈現(xiàn)方式,建議的呈現(xiàn)方式,排序的呈現(xiàn)方式,比例的呈現(xiàn)方式練習：運用上面的呈現(xiàn)手段,根據(jù)中文提示,寫出完整的句子。1.演講者:王教授;演講時間:下周六;演講題目:如何好好生活。

2.依我看,合作需要有效的交流,沒有它人們會盲目地做事情。

NextSaturdayProfessorWangwillgiveusalectureonhowtolivewell.

Frommypointofview,cooperationcallsforeffectivecommunication,withoutwhichpeoplewilldothingsblindly.

3.我建議你制訂學習計劃,盡力把心思放在學習上。另外,多和同學交流以提高學習成績。

4.提醒大家不要輕易在網(wǎng)上透露個人信息和不要隨意打開不認識的人發(fā)來的文檔。

Ithinkitimportantforyoutomakeagoodplanforyourstudyandputyourheartintoit.Besides,Isuggestthatyoucommunicatewithyourclassmatessothatyoucanimproveyourstudy.

Youareremindedtokeepsecretyourpersonalinformationandnottoopenanyfilesfromstrangers.

課后練習：1.相關數(shù)據(jù):(1)中國吸煙人數(shù):約3.5億(2)分布:男性75%,女性25%。2.基本信息:中學生吸煙人數(shù)占七分之二,有些甚至偷錢買煙抽。3.“無車日”活動時間和參與者:每年9月22日,全國108個城市?；顒幽康?提高人們節(jié)約能源和保護環(huán)境的意識。4.隨著網(wǎng)絡電影的普及,很多人選擇不去電影院看電影了。5.食品安全是最令人擔憂的問題,因為它與我們的健康息息相關。6.調(diào)查顯示25%的同學上網(wǎng)查找資料,60%的同學上網(wǎng)聊天或打游戲。7.比如有些同學為自己胖而苦惱,有些同學因為自己不漂亮而沮喪。8.個人簡介:王平,女,18,高三(3)班;特點:酷愛閱讀英文報刊、雜志和原著。Thankyou！【參考答案】1.NextSaturdayProfessorWangwillgiveusalectureonhowtolivewell.2.Frommypointofview,cooperationcallsforeffectivecommunication,withoutwhichpeoplewilldothingsblindly.3.Chinahasabout350millionsmokers,amongwhom75percentaremenand25percentarewomen.4.Two-seventhsofthemiddleschoolstudentsaresmokers,someofwhomevenstealmoneytobuycigarettes.5.Ithinkitimportantforyoutomakeagoodplanforyourstudyandputyourheartintoit.Besides,Isuggestthatyoucommunicatewithyourclassmatessothatyoucanimproveyourstudy.6.Youareremindedtokeepsecretyourpersonalinformationandnottoopenanyfilesfromstrangers.7.Withthepurposeofraisingpublicawarenessofsavingenergyandenvironmentalprotection,Car