新教材2023年高中英語Unit3DiverseCulturesSectionⅣ寫作指導學案新人教版必修第三冊

SectionⅣ寫作指導寫作方法指導地點介紹寫作指導1．仔細審題：明確說明對象，抓住要說明的事物或事物的主要特征。2．選擇合理的說明順序：比如時間順序、空間順序或邏輯順序，分層次進行說明，注意條理清晰。3．選擇恰當的說明方法：比如定義法、舉例法、比較法和細節(jié)描述法等，來增加文章的色彩。4．語言：既要確切無誤，又要通俗易懂。適當使用一些結構比較復雜的句式，如定語從句、名詞性從句、倒裝句、強調句及非謂語動詞等，以增加語言表達效果?！境Ｓ帽磉_】1．前門大街有600多年歷史，800米長，沿街有300多家店鋪。①QianmenStreetwith800meterslongisafamousstreetofover600yearsold,alongwhichtherearemorethan300shops.②QianmenStreetwithahistoryofover600yearsoldis800metersinlength,alongwhichtherearemorethan300shops.③The800-meter-longQianmenStreetwithmorethan300shopsalonghasahistoryofover600yearsold.2．坐落在山頂的寺廟經歷了這個地區(qū)的許多變化。①Thetemplestandsonthetopofthemountain,andhasexperiencedmanychangesinthisarea.②Standingonthetopofthemountain,thetemplehaswitnessedmanychangesinthisarea.3．它坐落在天安門廣場南面。①ItisjustlocatedtothesouthofTian’anmenSquare.②Tothenorthofit,thereisTian’anmenSquare.③ItliesinthesouthofTian’anmenSquare.4．加拿大，世界第二大國，占地998萬平方千米。①Canada,whichisthesecondlargestcountryintheworld,coversanareaof9.98millionsquarekilometres.②Canada,thesecondlargestcountryintheworld,coversanareaof9.98millionsquarekilometres.③Canada,coveringanareaof9.98millionsquarekilometres,isthesecondlargestcountryintheworld.5．乘車到達那兒很方便，可乘坐公共汽車17、69、59等線路，或者地鐵2號線。①It’sveryconvenienttogettherebytakingBusesNo.17,69or59besidesSubwayLine2.②WithBusesNo.17,69or59passingthere,itisveryconvenienttogettherebybus,andyoucanalsochoosetotakeSubwayLine2.【寫作模板】地理位置介紹：(某地點)____islocatedin(方位)____，coveringanareaof(面積)____．Ithasapopulationof(人口數量)____．Itgrows(農作物)____,__anditisrichin(自然資源礦物質)____．Inaword，(某地點)____isafascinatingplacewithfascinatingpeople.Welcometo(某地點)____．路線描寫：Wearegoingto(舉行活動)____(時間)____(at＋時間點/in＋月份/on＋具體某一天)at/in(地點)____．Itisnotverydifficulttofindyourwaytothisplace.Nowletmetellyouthewaytothisplace.Whenyougetoutof(某地一)_______，youcantakeBus(幾路公交車)_______to(某地二)_______，andgetoffatthesecond/thirdcrossing.Walkacrossthecrossingtotheeast/west/south/northuntilyousee(某地三)_______onyourleft/right.Turnleft/rightthere(atthecorner)andgostraighton/ahead.Thenyoucansee/find(某地四)_______isonyourleft/right.Theplaceisnextto/oppositeto(某地點)_______．Theplaceis(多遠)_______yards/kilometersdownthestreetontheleft/right.FindRoom(幾號房間)_______andwewillbemeetingyouthere.精品展示假如你是李華，請根據下面的提示給Mr.Smith回信，介紹適合他租用的一處房子。1．位于市中心商業(yè)區(qū)，交通便利，環(huán)境優(yōu)美；2．面積80平方米，寬敞明亮；3．房間天然氣、暖氣、家具、空調等必備設施齊全；4．房租價格合理，每月僅1000元；5．房子位置和戶型如圖所示：注意：詞數80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題謀篇】第一步明確要求1．確定體裁：本文為__說明文__2．確定人稱：以__第三人稱__為主3．確定時態(tài)：以__一般現在時__為主第二步確定段落第一段：總體簡介；第二段：展開描述——位置、面積、環(huán)境、交通、人口、歷史、名勝古跡及特色；第三段：結合寫作要求進行結尾。第三步提煉要點1．位置簡介2．設備設施3．租房價格和其他第四步句式升級1．它位于花園路和和平路的交叉路口，我們市最繁忙的兩個街道。(一般表達)ItislocatedinthecrossroadsmadebytheGardenAvenueandthePeaceAvenue.Theyaretwobusieststreetsinourcity.(高級表達)ItislocatedinthecrossroadsmadebytheGardenAvenueandthePeaceAvenue,__twobusieststreets__inourcity.2．在它的周圍有超市、醫(yī)院和公共汽車站。(一般表達)Aroundit,thereisasupermarket,ahospitalandabusstop.(高級表達)Aroundit__lie__asupermarket,ahospitalandabusstop.3．房子有一個客廳，兩個臥室，一個廚房和一個衛(wèi)生間。(一般表達)Thereisonelivingroom,twobedrooms,onekitchenandonetoiletinthehouse.(高級表達)Thehouse__contains__onelivingroom,twobedrooms,onekitchenandonetoilet.參考范文：DearSmith，Asfortheproblemyouputforwardinyourlastletter,I’dliketorecommendthefollowinghousetoyou.Itisonthefifthfloorofasix-storeybuilding,whichislocatedinthecrossroadsmadebytheGardenAvenueandthePeaceAvenue,twobusieststreetsinourcity.Arounditlieasupermarket,ahospitalandabusstop,soitisconvenientforyoutodoshopping,seeadoctorortravel.What’smore,thehousecontainsonelivingroom,twobedrooms,onekitchenandonetoilet.Besides,itisequippedwithallthehouseholdsandlivingfacilitiessuchasnaturalgas,heatingsystem,furniture,airconditionersandsoon.Therentisnomorethan1，000yuanpermonth,whichisarealbargain.Ithinkthehouseisquitesuitableforyou.Yours，LiHua亮點點評：本文語言流暢，敘事明了。表達準確，過渡自然。諸如asfor，putforward，recommend等高級詞匯運用豐富而自然；倒裝句式、定語從句等運用恰當。eq\o(\s\up0(),\s\do0(J))即學即練假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter打算今年暑假到西藏旅游，請寫一封電子郵件介紹西藏。要點如下：①位置：中國西南部，位于有“世界屋脊”之稱的青藏高原；②人口數量：300多萬；面積：120多萬平方千米；③基本情況：拉薩是西藏的首府；有許多旅游景點，比如布達拉宮(thePotalaPalace)；近年來，其在經濟、政治和文化等方面都取得了巨大進步。注意：①可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；②詞數80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文：DearPeter，Iamsogladtoknowthatyouwillcomet