Module6作文課件英語九年級上冊

M6Problems假如你是李華，你的筆友Anna給你發(fā)來一封電子郵件，信中安娜表示她目前的煩惱。她希望你可以給她一些建議。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，給安娜寫一封英文郵件。要點(diǎn)：注意：（1）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

（2）郵件中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;

（3）詞數(shù)80-100。問題

建議媽媽太啰嗦了1.學(xué)會傾聽...2.意見不一致時，不要爭吵...3.多交流...Step1：審主題2.審體裁人稱時態(tài)5.審要點(diǎn)6.審開頭結(jié)尾

Writingsteps主題：體裁：人稱：時態(tài)：要點(diǎn)：開頭結(jié)尾：problems應(yīng)用文第二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時一個問題，三個建議未給Step2：列框架Beginning:提出問題Ending:

提出希望Body:提出建議Step3：列要點(diǎn)Part1Beginning引出問題：媽媽太啰嗦了I’msorrytohearthatyourmotherisalwaystalkingalottoyou.感同身受Asateenager,Iusedtohavethesameproblemasyou.ButnowIgetalongwellwithmymother.轉(zhuǎn)折過渡句Hereissomeadviceforyou.I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveproblems/troublewithyourmother.1.shoulddosth.=besupposed

todosth=oughttodosth.2.Itisagoodidea/way/choice/...todosth3.Itisimportant/useful/necessary/effective/practical...todosth6.Itis

ofgreatimportance/need/significance

todosth.5.Itcan’tbebettertodosth.做某事再好不過了4.Iadvise/suggestthatsb.(should)dosth.Step3：列要點(diǎn)Part2BodyYoushouldlistentoher.＋原因Because+句子/Thereasonisthat+句子Thereasonisthatyourmotherhasmoreexperiencethanyou.＋結(jié)果Onlyinthiswaycanyou...Onlyinthiswaycanyouunderstandyourmotherbetter.Youaresupposedtolistentoher....換位思考Itcan’tbebettertostandinyourmother’sshoes./putyourselfinyourmother’sshoes.Step3：列要點(diǎn)Part2Body不要爭吵If如果你們有不同的觀點(diǎn)，你們可以交流而不是爭吵。Don’tquarrelwithher.Iadviseyounottoquarrelwithher.2.意見不一致時Whenyouropinionsaredifferentfromhers....冷靜You’dbettercalmdownfirst.原因良好的關(guān)系建立在良好的溝通之上Step3：列要點(diǎn)Part2Body3.

多交流＋目的inorderto/that...,soasto,sothat,forthepurposethat...Inordertosolveproblems,...＋建議學(xué)會換位思考。It’svitalforustolearnstandinothers’shoes.Tobeginwith,Besides,What’smore,InadditionMoreimportantly,Moreover,Lastbutnotleastfirst/firstofallsecond(ly)/then/nextthird(ly)finally/intheend過渡詞+提建議句式+要點(diǎn)連：過渡詞（首先、其次、然后、最后）Step3：列要點(diǎn)Part3Ending提出希望。Ihopeyoucangetalongwellwithyourmother.If我相信如果你遵循我的建議，你將于你媽媽相處融洽。Istronglybelieveyouwillgetalongwellwithyourmother,ifyoufollowtheadvice.基礎(chǔ)版拔高版（2018，廣州中考）你是英語校報編輯李華。校報收到初一新生Ben的來信，他提出了面臨的兩個問題。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封回信，說明Ben的問題，提出你的建議并陳述理由。

Ben'sproblemsYouradviceandreasons朋友少，感覺孤單1.參加學(xué)校社團(tuán)（club）----結(jié)識更多朋友2....（請你補(bǔ)充）英語單詞難記1.多閱讀英語故事、新聞----在運(yùn)用中學(xué)單詞2...（請你補(bǔ)充）DearBen,

Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavetrouble

gettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.Iknowthatyoualwaysfeellonelybecause

ofhavingfewfriends.Ithinkitisagoodchoicetojoinsomeclubsinyourschoolsothat

youcanmakemorefriends.Besides,

youshouldbefriendlytoothers.Smileatothers,andyouaresuretogetasmileinreturn.

Ontheotherhand,youfinditdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.YoucantrytoreadEnglishstoriesandnewsasmuchasyoucan.Andit'shelpfulforyoutolearnnewwordswhenyouuseEnglish.Inaddition,ifyoucandevelopahabitofkeepinganEnglishdiaryeveryday,itwillbeeasierforyoutoremembermorewords.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggest