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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStatecross-countryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimax(頂點)ofmyexistence.Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowd—tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormal—toohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.Para.1However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.
Para.2Iwhispered,“I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”主題:談及比賽,腦海中應(yīng)當(dāng)浮現(xiàn)以下幾個相關(guān)的主題升華1.永不言棄Nevergiveup2.友誼第一Friendlinesscomesfirst3.結(jié)果不重要,過程才是最重要的。Itistheprocessratherthantheresultthatcounts.4.Believeinyourself5.Persistenceandperseverance續(xù)寫情節(jié)分析:這篇文章中,小男孩花了很長時間做準備,而父親也一直堅持陪伴著他無論風(fēng)吹日曬。小男孩本來有望進入前15,也是全村的希望,結(jié)果因為比賽途中太熱了沒發(fā)揮好,中途已經(jīng)沒力氣了。所以接下來首先第一要寫永不言棄的體育精神,盡管很累盡管很難受還是堅持完成了比賽。學(xué)生寫作出現(xiàn)的問題:有同學(xué)寫孩子堅持不住了父親就在旁邊給他加油,這在越野跑中是不現(xiàn)實的,父親只可能在終點線等著他,而不可能在中途一直陪著他。有同學(xué)寫孩子堅持不住了在路邊坐著,直接放棄了,這種行為才是真的讓父親失望。同學(xué)還寫孩子直接在路邊昏迷過去,被救護車送往醫(yī)院。屬于自創(chuàng)絕境的寫法。這里要聯(lián)系原文依賴于原文的文本,孩子有望進入前15,結(jié)果讓父親失望的只能是沒能進入前15。父親安慰孩子的一定是,孩子你堅持下來了,雖然沒有進前15,但是過程比結(jié)果重要。這也體現(xiàn)了試卷服務(wù)于立德樹人的價值觀。優(yōu)秀習(xí)作采擷(語料積累):1)Sohotwastheweatherthatmyclothesweresoakedwithsweat.IgaspedforbreathasifIwouldpassoutasecondlater.2)Iwalkedtomyfatherwithaguiltyheart.3)Ashamedandguilty,Iloweredmyhead,bitmylipandavoidedeyecontactwithmyDad,wishingIhadliveduptohisexpectation.(語料遷徙)4)Aslongasyouputyourheartintoyourtaskandraceagainstyourself,youareawinner.5)WhatIhaddreamedofforthousandsoftimesturnedouttobeafailure.Icouldevenimaginethedisappointed5lookonmyfather'sface.Frustratedandupset,Iinchedtowardsmyfatherandstoodnexttohimguiltily.6)TryasImay,Istillfoundithardtocatchmybreathundertheburningsun.7)AsenseoffrustrationcreptovermyheartasIwitnessedthehonorwavinggoodbyetome.BuryingmyfaceinmyhandsIcouldn'tholdbackmytears.8)Withthescorchingsunbeatingonmyback,mylegsgaveawayandsoftened,beadsofsweatblurringmyvision.Exhaustedandhelpless,Idraggedmyconcrete-likelegswithallmystrength,strugglingandstaggeringforward,desperatetoseeotherathletespassingmeoneafteranother.9)Ifeltasifmyfeethadbeenpinnedtotheground.Desperateandhopeless,Iinchedforward,breathingheavily.10)Igrittedmyteeth,gatheredallmystrengthandstruggledtothefinishingline,bearingtheburningheat.11)HowhardItried,Istillfinditimpossibletokeepmyspeedandwitnessedothersrunningpastmeonebyonedesperately.Afterwhatseemedcenturies,Ieventuallycrossedthefinishinglinefelltothegroundheavily.12)WhatwastotallybeyondmasthatDadjustsmiledlovingly,“Mydeardaughter,youdidn'tletmedownaslongasyoudoyourbestresultisnotthemostimportantandyou'rethebestrunnerinmyheart.NosoonerhadIheardmyDad'swordsthanIthrewmyselfintohisarms,tearsofgratitudestreamingdownmycheeksunconsciously/uncontrollably.Theairwasfilledwithlove.Myfather'swordswouldalwaysstayinmyheartandsupportmethroughallthedifficultiesandchallengesoflife.范文示例:Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocementbricks.Neckandneckwithoneofmygreatestrivals.Icouldseethefinishline.Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledandmylegsgaveway.NothingIcoulddowouldmakethemholdmyweight.Theywereasweakasjelly.Eventhoughknewmydreamsofvictoryhadbeendestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.Withallofthestrengthleftinme,Igotonmyhandsandkneesandcrawled,inchbyinchacrossthefinishline.ShamepulsedthroughmyveinsasDadsquatteddownandpulledmeintohisarmsIwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."Hegavemeagentlesmileandsaid."Youcouldneverdisappointme.Sometimesthesethingsjusthappen.Allthatmattersisthatyoudidyourbest."Liftingmyface,sawmydad'seyes,inwhichIsawthesweat,thetime.andtheworkwehadputint
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